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TheSPACE 9/04/2024

ELE (24-026) B Tr. Pan Thit


ELE (24-026) B Tr. Pan Thit

Khin Yadanar Kyaw


Unit-4 (Writing a receipe)
First, boil the potatoes in hot water for 5-10 minutes.

Next, peel the potatoes and


crumble it and add salt and pepper.

After that, mix with flours, carrots and


onions tops and make the small circle balls.

Then, fry it with hot oil in the pan for 8-15 minutes.

Finally, place the fry potatoes in


a plate and eat with chilli sauce.

A well-written recipe, Kyaw Kyaw.

Unit-6 ( The important years in events in my life)


In 2002, I was born in Yangon.
After 5 years later, I started school.
When I was 16, I passed the matriculation
exam. After 6months later, I went to university.
In 2018, I got my first mobile phone.
Then in 2022, I got my first job.

May Thu Kyaw


Unit-4( Vegetable Stir Fry Recipe)
First, in a large skillet or wok heat
the oil over medium-high heat.

Next, add the broccoli, bell pepper, snap


peas, and carrot. Stir-fry for 4-5 minutes
until vegetables are tender-crisp.

After that, add the minced garlic and cook


for an additional minute, stirring constantly.

Then, pour in the soy sauce and hoisin


sauce . Stir well to coat the vegetables.

Finally, sprinkle with sesame seeds if


desired. Serve over cooked rice or noodles.

The recipe is well-written, May Thu!

Phyo Pwint Phyu

Yamin Bo

Hnin Wut Yee


Unit-4(Writing a receipe)
Simple Chicken Curry

First, put/ mix the ingredients chicken,onions,


tomato,green chilli ,ginger and garlic.

Next, add in the pot, chopped oinon onions


in the pan and fry 12mins on medium heat.

After that, Fri Fry till brown add the crushed


ginger, crushed garlic, tomato and green
chilli. They are fried 2mins on medium heat.

Then, add chicken pieces and fry 3mins on high heat


and add masala , chilli powder,water and salt to taste.

Finally, place the chicken curry in a nice plate and serve to


your guest.

Su Su Hlaing

Lwin Htoo Aung


Unit-4 (Writing a recipe)
First, we need two or three raw potatoes and wash
them. After that, we need to carefully cut the potatoes
into sticks and wash them again to prepare for cooking.
Next, sprinkle a little salt on the potatoes and wait for
the oil to heat up. Then, once the oil is hot, you can start
frying the potatoes. If you want them to be crispy, you
will need to fry them a second or third time. Finally, we
will have crispy fried potato sticks as we want and they
will be really to eat deliciously.

The recipe is well-written!

Aye Su Yi
Unit -4(Writing a recipe )
First,i need to wash some pork
and cut it.I put it into the wok.
Next,I need to pound garlic, onion,red dry chili and
ginger into the mortar.I put all of them into the wok.
After that,i add salt ,a few oil , sugar,fish
paste and turmeric powder .I mix with
the hands and add some water.
Then,I put it on the gas stove. I switch on it . After
30 minutes, it is simmer. This time,i stir it with the
spoon and sprinkle masala. I taste it. It ready to eat.
Finally, place the pork curry in a
nice bowl and serve to you guests.

Use capital letter - "I". Be careful with that.

Hla Myo Nwe

May Moe Sitt Aung


Unit-4 (writing a recipe)
Potato chips

Firstly, you need to peel the


potatoes and slice them thinly.
Next, soak the potato slices in cold water for 30 minutes.
Then, drain and pat the slices dry with a paper towel.
After that, heat oil in a pan over medium heat and fry the
potato slices in batches until they are golden and crispy.
Finally, remove the chips from the oil, drain
on paper towels, and season with salt .

A well-written recipe!

Chuu Thet San

Mya Shwe Sin Chaw

Min Thant Ko Ko
Unit -4( Writing a Recipe )

First , boiled the noodle and barbecue in hot water.Next,


leave the noodle until they are warm.After That, boiling
the noodles for 10 minutes, put them on the pot and
drain them.Then, While draining the noodles, prepare to
add the fried eggs and barbecue . To make Korean
noodles, add the source and cheese to the soaked
noodles and mix everything together.Finally, When
everything is mixed, add it to the bowl and add delicious
Korean spicy noodles serve to you .

Your recipe is well-written!

Htun Htun
Unit-4 (Writing a recipe)
First„take a flour and mix with suitable
amount of watet water and knead until the
wheat to make a orbicular shape like a ball.
Secondly„ make the ball shape into slab shape like
cuircular circular sheet by using a bowl. During this step,
you can use oil or butter to prevent it from agglutination.
Thirdly turn on your stove to make the oil
hotter. After getting the sufficient heat by
stove you can put the circular sheet wheat into
the oil. After thirty or thirty five seconds„ you
can take them from the oil and put on a plate.
Finally, you can eat them with sugar or team or
sone currie some curries. Please try it in your
home and enjoy with your family in evening.

The recipe is well-written!

Thoon Ei Khaine
Unit-4 (Writing a Recipe)
Pork Salad

First, cook the pork in hot water


with a little salt for 20 minutes.
Next, if the pork color changes, cut it into small pieces.
After that, put lime, oil, chili, pieces of tomato
and cucumber on the pork - not too much.
Then, add salt and sugar and mix everything together.
Finally, place the pork salad in a beautiful
plate and put parsley and serve to you guests.

The dish seems delicious!

Unit-6 ( The important years in events in my life)


-I was born in November 2005 in Thaton, Mon State.
-When I was 11, my family moved to Thailand but
I stayed in Thaton and I went to school there.
-Then in 2020, I moved to
Thailand when Covid 19 happened.
-A year later, I went to Migrant School in
Thailand and studied the high school level.
-Then in April 2024, I finished the GED
exam and Grade 12 in that Migrant School.
-After that, in May 2024, I got a job as a volunteer
to teach the Myanmar subject in other another
Migrant School. I worked there because I
prepared for Scholarship to attend the University.

Unit -7 ( Homestay )

Dear Mrs Tang Tang,

My name is Naw Thoon Ei Khaine and I come from


Myanmar in Thaton Township, Mon State. Thank you for
offering to be my homestay family when I’m in Bangkok.

I am 18 years old and study GED at Hsa Thoo Lei Learning


Center. I live with my family in Maesot now. My father is
a factory manager and my mother is a teacher. I have two
sisters and they’re university students in Chaing Mai.

In my free time, I like playing guitar ( I love to play


Taylor Switch’s songs) and drawing pictures of nature. I
like watching different kinds of movies when I’m alone.

While I’m in Bangkok, I really want to study hard


and improve my English because I want to become
a brilliant architect after I finish university. I’d
really like to work in a famous country like the USA.

I’m looking forward to meeting you when I arrive.

Best wishes,
Naw Thoon

Well-written, Naw Thoon!

Chaw Woutyi Thin

Saw Horis

Phoo Pyae Thaw

Aye Myat Noe


Unit-4 (Writing a recipe)
First, peel and chop potatoes and boil them in hot water.

Next, mash the potatoes before adding cornstarch.

After that, cut potatoes into pieces and roll


potatoes or shape them however you want.

Then, boil them in water and cook for 5 minutes.

Finally, you add yummy ingredients and hot oil.


Mix it and enjoy with Korean potato noodles.

The dish seems to be delicious!

Kyaw Swar Hein


Unit - 4 (Writing a recipe)
Potato sticks

Firstly, You need to wash the potatoes and


boil 15min. After bring that, to take the
potatoes and drop them into the cool water.

Next, Peel and grind the potatoes.

Then, Need to put paper ,salt


,garlic powder and mix very well.

After that, put into the beaker bag and press.

Finally, Cut the like a stick and fried fry them.

Now, you can serve fried potatoes in a plate or bowl.

Section 21

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