Writing Sample Research
Writing Sample Research
By:
Bakhtyar Mustafa A.Qadir
Supervised by:
Assistant Professor Dr. Jamal Omar Ali
Acknowledgements
The research would never be successful without the help of many kind
people. I would like to express my greatest gratitude to Allah Who made
everything possible. Special thanks to my family and my supervisor Dr,
Jamal Ali Omar for their support throughout the research. I also want to
appreciate the support of those teachers and colleagues who gave me a hand
to complete this work with their knowledge and experience.
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Dedication
● Peshmerga
● Department of English
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Table of Contents
Acknowledgements ........................................................................................................... I
Dedication ........................................................................................................................ II
Table of Content ............................................................................................................ III
List of Abbriviations ........................................................................................................ II
List of Tables ................................................................................................................ VII
Abstract ....................................................................................................................... VIII
Chapter One ..................................................................................................................... 1
Introduction ...................................................................................................................... 1
1.2- Background ............................................................................................................... 2
1.3- The Problem of the Study ......................................................................................... 2
1.4- The Questions of the Study ...................................................................................... 3
1.5- The Sample of the Study .......................................................................................... 3
1.6- The Aim of the Study ............................................................................................... 4
1.7 The Significance of the Study.................................................................................... 4
1.8- Definition of Terms .................................................................................................. 5
Chapter Two..................................................................................................................... 6
2.1- Introduction .............................................................................................................. 6
2.3- Previous Studies ....................................................................................................... 7
2.4- Adaptation................................................................................................................. 9
2.5- Types of Adaptation ............................................................................................... 13
2.5.1 Addition ................................................................................................................ 13
2.5.1.1 Extending ........................................................................................................... 13
2.5.1.2 Expanding ......................................................................................................... .14
2.5.2 Deleting ................................................................................................................. 14
2.5.2.1 Subtracting ......................................................................................................... 14
2.5.2.2 Abridging ........................................................................................................... 14
2.5.3 Simplifying ........................................................................................................... 14
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2.5.4 Reordering............................................................................................................. 14
2.5.5 Replacing .............................................................................................................. 15
2.6- Reasons for Adaptation .......................................................................................... 15
2.7- Objectives for Adaptation ....................................................................................... 17
Chapter Three ................................................................................................................. 19
3.1 Introduction............................................................................................................ 19
3.2 Research Methods .................................................................................................. 19
3.3 Participants............................................................................................................. 20
3.4 The Pilot Study ...................................................................................................... 20
3.6 Data Collection Procedures...................................................................................... 21
Chapter Four................................................................................................................... 22
4.1 Introduction............................................................................................................ 22
4.2 Results and Discussions ......................................................................................... 23
4.2.1 Table (1) Results and Discussions of the Questionnaire....................................... 25
Figure 1: Results of the Questionnaire ........................................................................... 25
4.2.2 Discussion One: Item one and two ..................................................................... 25
4.2.3 Discussion Two: Item three ................................................................................ 26
4.2.4 Discussion Three: Item four ............................................................................... 27
4.2.5 Discussion Four: Item five .................................................................................. 28
4.2.6 Discussion Five: Item six and seven ................................................................... 29
4.2.7 Discussion Six: Item eight .................................................................................. 30
4.2.8 Discussion Seven: Item nine ............................................................................... 31
4.2.9 Discussion Eight: Item ten .................................................................................. 32
4.3 Table (2) Results and Discussions of the Observation ....................................... 33
4.3.1 Discussion 1: item one ........................................................................................ 34
4.3.2 Discussion 2: Item two ....................................................................................... 35
4.3.3 Discussion 3: Item Three .................................................................................... 36
4.3.4 Discussion 4: Item four and five ......................................................................... 37
4.3.5 Discussion 5: Item six ......................................................................................... 38
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4.3.6 Discussion 6: Item seven .................................................................................... 39
4.3.7 Discussion 7: Item eight ..................................................................................... 40
4.3.8 Discussion 8: Item nine....................................................................................... 41
4.3.9 Discussion 9: Item ten......................................................................................... 41
Chapter Five ................................................................................................................... 42
Conclusions, Suggestions, and Recommendations ........................................................ 42
4.3 Conclusion ............................................................................................................. 42
4.4 Suggestions ............................................................................................................ 43
4.5 Recommendations for Further Studies .................................................................. 44
References ...................................................................................................................... 45
Appendix A .................................................................................................................... 49
Teachers’ Questionnaire ................................................................................................ 49
Appendix B .................................................................................................................... 52
Observation of the Teachers .......................................................................................... 52
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List of Abbriviations
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List of Tables
Table 1. The Questionnaire Responses Given by the Participants ………………………………….. 24
Table 2. The Results of the Observed Classrooms…………………………………………………... 34
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Abstract
Adaptation is the process of modifying learning materials to meet the
students’ needs. Even though the process of adaptation includes several
techniques, this research studies theuse of addition technique specifically in
Ranya city. The purpose of the research is to investigate: if teachers adapt
materials or not. What technique of adaptation is more common and Which
type of addition they use during their classes, extension or expansion. For
this purpose, a mixed method of collecting related data has been used. The
questionnaire results have been collected from 25 primary English language
teachers, and 20 English language classes have been observed. Our analysis
showed that the teachers adapt the learning materials. Addition technique is
common to use, and most teachers use extension as a type of addition
technique. To conclude, adapting learning materials is necessary, and
addition technique provides advantageous results from the learning process.
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Chapter One
Introduction
Introduction
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1.2- Background
Since many centuries, the desire of learning other languages has been
increased numerously. This has become a main reason to produce several
language teaching methods and intensive amount of materials to facilitate
the process of acquiring languages. Language officials keenly seek to find
the most suitable and productive techniques or materials for learning other
languages. Beside the importance of learning approaches, teaching materials
play essential roles of transferring language knowledge due to the fact that
materials are the main objects that learners interact with while learning the
language. Within systematic language learning, not all the materials
involved in a curriculum or syllabus are useful for learning, so they need be
adjusted in order to achieve the goal of learning. Then, teaching materials
need to stimulate the intellectual, aesthetic and emotional involvement of the
student (Tomlinson, 2016).
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needs. The above mentioned reasons have motivated the teachers to adapt
the materials. However, the question of which technique of adaptation the
teachers should use in their teaching to fill this gap. The current study
attempts to answer the questions mentioned below and it strives to solve
teaching and learning problems in this EFL context.
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1.6- The Aim of the Study
The aim of this research is to find out whether adaptation, specifically
addition with both types extension and expansion are practically used and
implemented or not as well as to find out which type of adaptation technique
is commonly used. And within the research, the English Language teachers
can identify the positive influence of ELT materials on students in the
classroom.
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1.8- Definition of Terms
To facilitate the understanding of this research, different relevant terms are
defined below.
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Chapter Two
Literature Review
2.1- Introduction
This chapter shows various perspectives of many other researchers
toward the process of applying adaptation techniques on learning materials
in the classrooms. Many other researches have shown that using materials in
classrooms can change learning process and provide a better context for
students. Teaching materials are important parts to help students’ desired
learning outcomes. (Tonawanik & Donavanik, 2010). However, modern
classes cannot be taught as traditional ones in the past, with developing the
technology, using materials in different techniques, for different reasons is
necessary. The current phase of ELT is markedly different because of the
crucial role played by materials in teaching-learning process. (Nehal, 2016).
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2.3- Previous Studies
Course-books are fundamental source of learning materials that plays
important role of transferring language competence. While textbooks have
constructive role in the curriculum, many experienced teachers and
educators believe that current textbooks need to be adapted because the
existing materials do not cover the learning objectives sufficiently. Now we
take a look at some previous studies and expert speeches about learning
materials adaptation:
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Material adaptation is helpful to enable specific learners to be engaged
into the learning environment. “We understand the process of improving
materials with the aim of adjusting them for a target learner as materials
adaptation. To adapt authentic materials, we can reduce, modify or
supplement them”. (BIELOUSOVÁ, 2020)
Adaptation techniques cannot be applied unintentionally with no
purpose. As (Mede Şenel and Yalçın Enisa, 2019) Have mentioned
important points to make decisions on adapting materials. While teachers
attempt to start teaching the course book, they need to realize answers to
several questions: is the textbook at the right level? Is the content suitable
for the students? And is the sequence of the items logical? Based on these
questionsthe teachers decide on selection and adaptation of the materials.
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2.4- Adaptation
Since the time that English Language has been used in the education
field, the requirements of using superlative learning materials raised
intensively. The importance of materials is defined as “It is undeniable that
the use of ideal materials is significant and that it would, in return, give
positive outcomes to learners, especially in English as a Second Language
(ESL) context (Kalajahi and Mukundan , 2013). So in order to create ideal
materials, there need to be adaptation of the learning materials. In fact,
learning processes generally exist with the help of good materials, even with
bad or non-existing teaching (Ahmed, 2017). The term of adaptation refers
to the process of making adjustments to the existing learning materials. This
signifies to create a better match to the students’ needs, teachers, and
contexts in the light of offering affective and productive learning.
“Adaptation means reducing mismatches between materials, learners,
teachers and contexts or making fuller use of the potential value of existing
materials” (Tomlinson, 2018). This means when the materials are adapted
properly suitable to the proficiency language level of the students, there will
be more chance for them to benefit from the input, and the teachers will
achieve their learning goal effectively in the dynamic environment of the
classroom as well. Materials for language learning, according to
(Tomlinson, 2012), could appear in forms that can facilitate language
learning such as informative, instructional, experiential, eliciting, and
exploratory materials.
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Most teachers afford to create useful materials by selecting, evaluating,
and adapting strategies due to the fact that the learning materials are
considered to be a fundamental part of the most English teaching programs.
The reality of using course-books is defined as “Clearly, what actually
happens in classrooms using published materials is that there is a complex
trade-off between the three major elements in the equation: the materials, the
teacher and the learners.” (Maley, 2011). Meaning that adjustments need to
be made in the most published learning materials, however, they are
designed carefully. (Edge and Wharton, 1998) claimed that “experienced
teachers do not tend to follow the script of a course book inflexibly”. They
add, delete and change tasks at the planning stage, and they reshape their
plans during the lesson in response to the interaction that take place”.
(Maley, 2011) claimed that teachers have to adapt the course book items for
a suitable learning context to meet the students’ needs. So these adaptations
will be done through using the techniques of adaptation While the
curriculum provides a particular syllabus or course book suggested by
Ministry ofEducation, teachers will be restricted of using other materials and
be left with no choice. The use of text books are considered negatively.
(Shak, 2021) explained that reasons are: Imbalanced cultural content, high
lexical density, lack of supplementary materials, steep price, ambiguous
selection procedure, and fitness with the goals, and objective of English
curriculum. The idea of materials adaptation is based on several sound
principles that are underlined by learning theories. (McDonough, Shaw, and
Masuhara, 2013) Focused on three major principles of adaptation which are:
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- Personalizing which is creating relevance between the materials and
the interest of learners and their needs.
- Individualizing that provides the learning styles and the way of class-
work.
- Localizing which is being aware of the international geography of the
English language teaching and considering what works well in that
particular area in terms of learning the language.
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Addition is the process of adding more materials upon the existing
published one. Addition can be done through two ways:
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2.5- Types of Adaptation
Material adaptation means to modify the teaching materials to meet
learners’ needs and teachers’ demands. (Mendoza, 2016). In order to adapt
materials, there are five factors to be considered:
2.5.1.1 Extending is a type of addition in which the teacher utilizes more of the
same material to extend the subject and to make a qualitative change in the
materials. For example, a teacher may have ten sentences in present simple but
he/she might believe that these examples are not enough to help
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the students to get adapted to it, thus, he/she adds five more example about
the same lesson. (Islam & Mares, 2014).
2.5.1.2 Expanding is when teachers add different things to the lesson to make a quantitative
change. For instance, the teacher may think that his/her students need to be aware about
sounds of verb endings while using in past simple but the course book has not mentioned it.
Consequently, she providesthe information even it is out of the book. (Islam & Mares, 2014)
2.5.2.2 Abridging is leaving an activity because the teacher may think that
focusing on the activity may not benefit students due to the high level of it.
(Sonmez, 2017).
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2.5.5 Replacing: is using a better material instead of the existing one. In
thiscase, the teacher should be aware about learners’ competence, which
material works better for them and which one serves less should be
replaced. ( Busenurmaral, 2018)
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• Listening passages are inauthentic, because they sound too much like
written material being read out.
• Not enough guidance on pronunciation.
• Photographs and other illustrative material not culturally acceptable.
Surely there are more reasons for adapting materials in the classroom.
(Breen & N. Candlin, 1908) Discussed issues related to materials that are
designed for communicative language learning. Their list shows that
materials do not provide many opportunities for real communication but
they deeply focus on linguistic structures as:
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2.7- Objectives for Adaptation
The process of material adaptation shall be underlined by useful clear
objectives that are necessary to exist. Objectives can be an essential starting
point of the procedure that takes role of directing the decision of which
technique to use that works to consider what is fundamental to be adapted to
achieve the learning goals. (McDonough and Shaw, 2003) Drew the
objectives list regarding to materials adaptation which are:
- Personalize
- Individualize
- Localize
- Modernize
And the list has been developed and expanded by (Islam and Mares, 2003)
to:
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3. Provide for more learner autonomy
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Chapter Three
Methodology
3.1 Introduction
This chapter provides the description of the research methodology. It
provides information about various areas of the research such as the
selection of participants, who the participants are and how they were
sampled and the location of the study. It also explains the instruments that
have been used to collect data, and the method implemented to conduct the
investigation.
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3.3 Participants
The samples of this research were taken from ten different primary
schools among thirty-nine schools. They were taken from grades one to nine
in Ranya city. There are 197 EFL teachers in the area among which 25
teachers were participated as samples which amounts to 13% of the overall
population. The gender of the participants was 12 males and 13 females that
all hold bachelor degrees. All the participants voluntarily agreed to be part of
the study. In addition, to assemble more data about the study, we decided to
attend twenty English classes practically to observe the teachers closely.
Before observing their classes, the teachers and the students’ consent was
obtained.
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(It is easy for ELT teachers to apply addition technique on the textbook) to
(Most of Sunrise’s materials need to be adapted).
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Chapter Four
4.1 Introduction
In this chapter, the findings of the study would be shown that contain
the results, discussions and conclusion of the questionnaire and the
observations. For this purpose, we used questionnaire and observation to
collect data qualitatively and quantitatively to answer the three questions of
the study which are: Do teachers adapt materials? What technique of
adaptation is more common? And ‘What type of addition do they use:
Extension or expansion?
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4.2 Results and Discussions
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Figure 1: Results of the Questionnaire
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ITEM 1 ITEM 2 ITEM 3 ITEM 4 ITEM 5 ITEM 6 ITEM 7 ITEM 8 ITEM 9 ITEM 10
Items
A + SA N D + SD
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4.2.2 Discussion One: Item one and two
Though, these items are not fully related to our research questions but
as a start, we wanted to make sure by taking various teachers perspectives if
Sunrise truly needs adaptation and if it develops students’ proficiency or not.
According to the results of our research questionnaire that are shown in the
table and in the bar chart, we found that among 25 primary school teachers,
sixteen of them which is equal to %64 agreed that Sunrise needs to be
adapted to facilitate learning, four of them that is %16 were neutral and five
of them which means %20 disagreed.
For item number 2, 40% chose to agree and strongly agree that it does
not provide adequate input to students, six chose to be neutral that is 24%
and nine of them (36%) disagreed with it.
These results helped us to start our study as we felt that the majority
of the teachers admitted that adaptation is necessary to the course book.
After that we started collecting information about other aspects of adaptation
which is going to be discussed in the following steps to find the answers of
our research questions.
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4.2.3 Discussion Two: Item three
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4.2.4 Discussion Three: Item four
This item supports the first question of the study which is about
adapting materials by the teachers. We wanted to realize that if addition
technique can compensate for the gaps of the course book because most of
the teachers believed that the course book needs adaptation. The results of
the questionnaire were that %48 of the participants that is counted as the
biggest part, agreed that addition technique can pave their ways for teaching
and students' learning Because they have a wider range to explain the lesson
with real life examples not only those mentioned in the book. We need to
take the other sides of the survey into consideration in a way that %32 could
not decide because of the same reasons mentioned in the previous
discussion. On the other hand, %20 of the participants disagreed because
they did believe that they can achieve the lesson goal without any additions.
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4.2.5 Discussion Four: Item five
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4.2.6 Discussion Five: Item six and seven
Item number (6) and (7) are relevant to each other to some extent.
They both include statements that illustrate answers to one of the research
questions which is: What type of addition do they use: Extension or
expansion? The answers to those two specific items that are given by 25
teachers are agreeable in general. Meaning that most of the teachers agree
that the learning sections and activities within (Sunrise) need to be expanded
and extended. Item number (6) demonstrates that (52%) of teachers believe
that the subject matters and sections within (Sunrise) need to be expanded
qualitatively in order to achieve more crucial learning goals. On the other
hand, (24%) of the participants disagree on expanding the items qualitatively
within (Sunrise). And the rest (24%) of the participants have chosen neutral.
Next, Item number (7) which (56%) of the participants agree with, is related
to extending the subject matters within (Sunrise) quantitatively. Then,
(24%) of the participants disagree on extending the learning items
quantitatively, and the rest (20%) of the participants chose neutral.
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4.2.7 Discussion Six: Item eight
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4.2.8 Discussion Seven: Item nine
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4.2.9 Discussion Eight: Item ten
Item number (10) is related to the zone that addition technique provides
for teachers to insert authentic learning materials that increase students’
engagement to the lesson. (52%) of the participants agree that addition
technique provides chance for the teachers to involve authentic materials.
Nevertheless, (28%) of the participants have different opinion and believe
that using addition technique does not let teachers to involve authentic
materials. And the rest (20%) of the participants have chosen neutral.
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4.3 Results and Discussions of the Observation
ITEM Yes No
6. The teacher had reasons for using the addition technique 55% 45%
7. Using the addition technique seemed useful for the students 55% 45%
9. The use of addition technique made the materials understandable 55% 45%
10. Addition technique helped the teacher to insert engaging materials 55% 45%
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4.3.1 Discussion 1: item one
ITEM Yes No
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4.3.2 Discussion 2: Item two
ITEM Yes No
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4.3.3 Discussion 3: Item Three
ITEM Yes No
To answer the second question of the study, we attended many classes for
the purpose of observing the teachers to identify the most common type of
adaptation used during the lessons. The results of attending 20 classes
showed that %55 of the teachers used addition type properly and the most
common type of adaptation between all the attended teachers was addition.
On the other side, 45% of the teachers used other types of adaptation whose
results were as the followings:
• Deleting 20%
• Simplifying 10%
• Reordering 10%
• Replacing 5%
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4.3.4 Discussion 4: Item four and five
ITEM Yes No
After observing the twenty classes, we also found the answer of the
last question of our study which is about the two kinds of addition that are
Extension and Expansion. Our aim was to find out which of these two
techniques is mostly used during the English lessons. The outcome revealed
that the primary teachers are more likely to use expansion rather than
extension, 60% (12/20) of the participant teachers who were observed by us,
expanded their lessons qualitatively and 40% (8/20) extended quantitatively.
After these results, we did believe that the course book is not fully included
of everything, there for, teachers are eager to cover every aspect of the
lesson for example in past simple, verbs that end with a (consonant + y) is
not completely focused on but the teachers can accurately explain how these
verbs can change into past tense. Alternatively, to benefit the process of
learning the lessons need to be expanded not only concentrating on the
sections that are in the book.
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4.3.5 Discussion 5: Item six
ITEM Yes No
6. The teacher had reasons for using the addition technique 55% 45%
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4.3.6 Discussion 6: Item seven
ITEM Yes No
7. Using the addition technique seemed useful for the students 55% 45%
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4.3.7 Discussion 7: Item eight
ITEM Yes No
While observing the teachers to find out what type of addition technique
they apply, we were also focusing on whether the teachers had sufficient
proficiency to apply the addition technique in a correct manner. Even though
40% of the teachers were able to apply the addition technique in a correct
manner, most of usages of addition technique were still effective and
facilitating the subject matter. On the other hand, the rest 60% of the other
teachers were using addition technique, but there ways of applying the
technique were not effective to some extent, yet they still had benefits for
learning the students.
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4.3.8 Discussion 8: Item nine
ITEM Yes No
9. The use of addition technique made the materials understandable 55% 45%
10. Addition technique helped the teacher to insert engaging materials 55% 45%
4.3 Conclusion
The first result is that the majority of the teachers adapt learning materials,
the research found that the addition technique was the most common type
among all the other types of adaptation and the majority of the teachers
believed that the reason of using addition technique is that Sunrise does not
provide adequate objects. In addition, among the twenty classes we
observed, the study results declared that expansion which is a type of
addition is more used comparing to extension which is the second type of
addition. Also, one of the other findings of the study is that using the
addition technique engages the learners into the classroom environment.
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4.4 Suggestions
2. One of the crucial suggestions for the teachers is to adapt the text
book and use addition technique over the existing items especially
when the teachers expect that the items are not sufficient enough to
take place. Addition technique will be a suitable idea to be applied in
order to establisha useful learning to create an outstanding result and
performance of the language from the students.
Based on the results that we found in this research, we would like to give
some more suggestions to the future researchers who want to keep
researching on the same subject.
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Appendix A
Teachers’ Questionnaire
Dear teacher, this sheet is a survey designed to collect some data for
research entitled (Addition of ELT Materials in Primary Level Schools: English
Language Learning Classes). Which investigates whether teachers adapt learning
materials or not, which adaptation technique is the most used, and which type of
addition is more common (extension or expansion). Therefore, you have been
chosen as a teacher for answering this questionnaire. We appreciate your
participation and support for this research. Your responses will be kept
anonymous and confidential.
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Section 2: Teacher’s Questionnaire Items: Kurdish Version
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Section 3:Section 3: Questionnaire Items: English Version
Teacher’s
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Appendix B
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Section 1: Observation Items
ITEMS YES NO
3. The most common adaptation technique was addition among the other techniques
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