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2.1(B_7226877) Letter for the customer James.

__________________________
Dear James, Dear James,
(Thank you for confirming ________ in a timely manner.)
Thanks that you confirmed the delivery of the goods
right on time. We’ll have the available payment for it We will ____ the payment available ________
tomorrow. Thank you for the positive feedback, we
We always strive to meet our customers' expectations as
always try to satisfy customers, as our company
our company continues to grow and evolve.
continues to develope rapidly, we are interested in We prioritize quality in all our transactions.
the quality of deals.
According to your inquiry, we cannot give you a In response to your inquiry, we must decline to provide
positive answer, because we do not sell firearms, it ______ since ______
doesn’t matter whether it is broken or very old. We
Regardless of their condition, we are not licensed to engage
don't have a licence for such deals. in such transactions.
For all other questions, you can always contact us Should you have any other questions, please feel free
_________, assist _______________.
and we will be happy to help you on the same day.
Regards,
 2.2(B_68889234) Letter for the customer Michael
2.2(B_68889234) Letter for the customer Michael
__________________________ Hi Michael
Hello Michael,
Our congratulations on your purchase of our old chair. Thank you for purchasing our old chair.
We are very pleased to be able to fill your collection. _______ to add this item to your collection.
We hope to be useful for you later on. In the near
to be of further assistance moving forward.
future we expect the arrival of new interesting items
We are expecting ______ new eye-catching items pretty
that will also be put up for sale. We'll give you the
soon _______made available so you can take a sneak peek
items numbers at once.
along with every item number.
By the way our seller had some difficulties, because
there were limits on his account. Currently, he fixed
this and we expect receipt of money for the item. Please be advised that our seller encountered some
As soon as we get the payment, we will inform You difficulties due to account limitations. We are currently
about it. awaiting receipt of payment for the item.
Regards, We will notify you as soon as the payment is received.
Kind regards,

2.3(B_1790672) Letter to Admin.

__________________________
Hi again, Dear Manager.
Thank You for your reply. response.
We have learned all paragraphs that You have We have reviewed all the information you have provided.
presented.
We have been very surprised your ingenuity. You We are impressed by the ingenuity you have demonstrated.
have made excellent work for a short period of time. Given the limited time frame, you have produced excellent
We are interested in the following options from all
work. We would like to explore the following options
you have offered:
presented in your proposal:
1. We will buy cryptovalue directly from individuals. (It 1. purchase _________________ (as this is the only way
is how we can buy it with no limit)
to buy it without a limit.)
2. We will buy cryptovalue for 10% more expensively
2. _________higher than the market rate. (This is
than it costs. (In other words - we will buy crypto for
equivalent to buying crypto from the Exchanges at the
the same price then from the Exchanges +
current price plus an additional 10%, with no limits or
additional 10%, but without limit and without
several days of holds)
waiting periods.

3. We will involve the American sellers of cryptovalue 3. _____ engage_____________________________.

for full-time employment.
(they are more active and they have more They are more active in the market and have greater
opportunities to buy crypto for us.) purchasing power when it comes to crypto.
4. We will pay cash for cryptovalue. 4. _________in cash ______.
5. We are going to make deals with new sellers of 5. do business ___________, with a limit of $10,000 per
cryptovalue with the limit of $10000 per one deal.
transaction.
Following the _______have dowside_, we may discuss
After a first month of partnership and if we had no
lifting the limitation.
problems with a new seller we may discuss to lift the
limitation.
Please learn the list of our decision and develope the ______ familiarise yourself with our guidelines________

program for search and involve the American search program in order to engage American customers.
individuals.
We have tested the method with our current employees and it has proved successful.
and it had a success. Everyone is interested in the The interest in the additional profits are fairly high.
extra profits. Kind regards,
Regards,
 2.4(B_8766533) Letter for the customer Rodney.
2.4(B_8766533) Letter for the customer Rodney.
__________________________
Hi Rodney,
Dear Rodney
We have received the money from you for another This is to confirm receipt of your payment for another
collection coin that you bought. collection coin purchased from us.
Thank you for instant payment. That’s the pleasure Thank you for your prompt payment . It is a pleasure to
to work with you. serve you.
We have good relationship with many collectors around We have established a ________numerous______.
the world. We hope to surprise you with our offers in We look forward to offering you new and exciting
the future.
opportunities in the near future.
We will contact you again with our fotore offer.
Keep an eye out for our upcoming offers.
Regards,
Kind regards,

2.5(B_1568426) Letter for our manager Michael.

__________________________
Hello Michael, Dear Michael,

You’ve done a great job this month! As we can see,

We are amazed at your great performance this month,
you have completed for us 4 sales more than
completing four additional sales in a row.
usually. This is a very good indicator. You are moving
______ positive indicator that you are on the right track.
in the right way.
Please be advised that your salary will be deposited in your
We will send you your salary as usual to your card
$ 1500 + $ 300 bonus for your efforts. account your as usual, in the amount of $1,500 plus a
bonus of $300 in recognition of your efforts.
You asked us to consider the candidacy of your You requested that we consider _________ for the position
relative and hire him as our seller. of salesperson.
We guess we can give him a job for a start to sell We believe he would be suitable for a position selling
cheap items. Later, of course, everything will discounted items. His suitability for other roles will be
depend on him. Tomorrow we will contact you to
assessed in due course. We will contact you tomorrow to
discuss it.
discuss this further.
Regards,
Kind regards,
2.6(B_1780066) Letter for the customer Richard.
__________________________
Dear Richard,
We are sorry to disappoint you but the expensive
We regret to inform you that the high price violins are no
violins have run out. We sent you the numbers of
longer available. However, we have provided you with the
lots of cheaper violins anyway.
numbers of more affordable violins.

We are currently searching for expensive antiquar

violins, we are looking for them permanent, so as Currently, We are in search of high value antique violins
soon as we have violins that have not been bought on a permanent basis. As soon as we have violins available,
by anybody, we will let you know promptly. we will inform you promptly.
Check for our e-mails on time. Please make sure you check your emails regularly.
Regards, Kind regards,

2.7(B_19522174) Letter for our manager Robert.

Dear Robert,
__________________________
__________ has confirmed receipt of the _____and
Dear Robert,
expressed satisfaction ________. In the previous letter,
The buyer confirmed the receipt for table set and said
he was satisfied with the purchase. We sent you the delivery-tracking information was sent and is
delivery tracking in the previous letter, so confirm available upon request. Please confirm receipt of the
receipt and deposit the payment to our bitcoin payment and follow the instructions to deposit the payment
seller following the instructions. to our Bitcoin seller
If you have any questions, contact us or inform us __________________ please do not hesitate to reach out or
if we should give you a call. request a call from us.
Regards,
Kind regards,
2.8(B_10357866) Letter for the customer Ms.Jackson.
__________________________
Dear Ms Jackson,
Dear Ms.Jackson,
______________our jewelery. We pride ourselves on
Thank you for purchasing the jewelry. Our prices are
offering competitive pricing, so if you require any further
cheaper than other's prices, so if you will need
something else, please contact us any time.
items, please do not hesitate to contact us.

Today we put up for sale more than a hundred We are pleased to announce the addition of over a hundred
antique jewelry and you can view all the references new pieces of antique jewelry to our collection, which can
to them in the attached file. be viewed in the attached file.

Our managers can accept checks as payments. It Our managers accept checks as a form of payment. Both
should be written check and you may just send a
Handwritten checks and photos of both sides should be
photo of the check both sides.
sent.
They are able to do mobile check deposits on their
They are entitled to deposit checks into their accounts via
accounts because all american banks have this
mobile banking, as this is now a convenient option offered
convenient new option now.
Regards, by all American banks.
Kind regards,
2.9(B_188987) Letter for the customer John.
__________________________
Greetings, John
Dear John,
We are pleased to hear that you are satisfied with our
We are glad that you like our products. Thanks for
products.
the positive feedback. We received the payment from
you and we have left a positive feedback to you too.
We always welcome a good and adequate clients We always welcome new clients and will endeavor to
and will try harder to improve the quality of deals. improve the quality of our services.
Now we hire people to work as our sellers. We are now hiring people to work as our sellers.
And in the next 2-3 days, we will send all our partners, In the next 2-3 days, _____________________________
customers and other employees the job offer of a deals as a Deals Manager.
manager. To improve the quality more and big up To improve the quality and speed of our sales,
the speed of a larger number of sales, we rae
_____________________________ Document Reviewer.
temporarily closing the vacancy of our documents
All those who review our letters and texts will have the
reviewer. Everyone who is reviewing our letters and
opportunity to become our manager.
texts – can will receive the possibility to become
our manager.
The requirements are simple. Age - over 21 years,
the country - USA, conscientious attitude to work :Applicants must be over 21 years of age, reside in the
and adherence to our rules. All rules and details will USA, and demonstrate a conscientious attitude and
also be sent to new sellers. Each seller will be adherence to our rules. All relevant rules and details will be
interviewed by phone and tested for adequacy. provided to new sellers as well. Each seller will be
Regards, interviewed via phone and tested for suitability.
Kind regards,
2.10(B_183433) Letter for the customer Edwin.
__________________________
Hi Edwin,
Dear Edwin,
Thank you for purchasing the camera from us. The item
Thank you for buying the camera from us. It’s really in
is in excellent condition, as it was stored on a shelf at all
very good condition because layed on the shelf all
the time.
times.

We always carefully select our products for sale, so We take great care in selecting our products for sale, so
you always can hope on us. you can always trust the high quality of our products.
We have not received the payment for the camera We have not yet received payment for the device. Once
yet, as soon as we get it we’ll inform you. we do, we will notify you.

Contact us any time! We have only good products, Please do not hesitate to contact us at any time. We take
proven professionals, and the most responsive
great pride in offering only top-notch products,
operators.
supported by proven professionals and the most
Regards,
responsive operators in the industry.
Kind regards,

C.A.Z.M.