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1 (A_34589327) Letter for our users. All suggested corrections are indicated in bold type for
_____________________________________ easy visualization
Good day,
On xx.xx 2024 from 9:27 to 9:28 UTC time there
was a technical issue on our website due to the
planned works.
There were some problems with displaying of
pictures in some categories and in the searching
( omit "of" )
system. ( replace searching with search )
Due to a technical break, the auctions have been ( add article “a” and replace “break” with “issue” )
extended for 24 hours. ( postponed until a 24-hour period )
We apologize for any possible inconvenience
Sincerely yours,
Support Team

2 (A_132736563) Letter for the customer

Michael.
_____________________________________ (lower case friends! )
Dear Friends!
Our company announces the continuation of (objects! )
the contest for the most unusual items!
From xx.xx to xx.xx 2024 participate in the (Wonder-lot 2! / To participate )
contest called wonder-lot 2! To take part in
the contest you should find unusual or funny lot
(please consider the lot itself and its
description); (take into account )
Publish the Print Screen or a link to an item
on the wall in our group on Meta; ( screen print )
Collect more likes under your link.
Player with more likes is a winner and he ( The player with more llieks is the winner and gets the
gets the gift - APPLE MacBook Pro 16-inch. gift )
Winner of the campaign will be announced ( 16-inch APPLE MacBook Pro)
no later than xx.xx 2024, and we will
congratulate him on our website. ( The winner of the campaign will be
Thank you, announced not later than)
.
( Thank you very much,)
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3 (A_5673787) Letter for the customer Robert. easy visualization
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Dear Robert, ( Greetings, Robert )
We are glad that you like the tubes. It really (They really are worth more than you paid for them.
costs more than you paid for it. Enjoy it! We
Have fun with it! )
don’t have any lamps anymore. If you are (We do not have any more lamps.)
collecting lamps, we will inform you if we
(we will let you know if we have any more tubes for
have other tubes for selling. sale.)
About your question:
(Regarding the query you pose )
We are surprised that you want to work in
our company as a seller. Please write a (We find it surprising that you would like to be a seller
letter to us with a request to consider your for our business. Kindly send us a letter requesting that
we consider hiring you as a part our sales team.)
person and hire as a seller. And it is better (As a helpful suggestion. Please specify this the subject
to specify this in the subject head. heading.)
Regards,
With regards,

4 (A_546668401) Letter for the customer

4 (A_546668401) Letter for customer William
William______ _____________________________________
Dear William, Dear William,
We are pleased that you have contacted us and
We are glad that you contacted us and
purchased our water pump.
purchased our water pump. As the tracking
shows the product is delivered. We wanted to satisfied.
the product has been delivered already.
make sure that you are happy.
Unfortunately, the money for the product is We have not yet received the payment for the product
not available for us yet. If you do not intend
the delivery date so we can receive the funds on time
to return the good, please confirm the delivery Kind regards,
and we will get the funds available.
Regards,
5 (A_6434656) Letter for our customer.
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5 (A_6434656) Letter for our client.
Dear Michael, _____________________________________
We are glad that you like the violin. Dear Michael,
We would like to inform you that we still
Dear Michael,
have seven violins, one of which is rather We are so happy to hear that
expensive and costs almost $ 20,000. If you We just wanted to let you know that we still have seven
violins in stock, including one that's a bit more
want, we can send you the photos to your expensive at almost $20,000.
e-mail and if you like it, we will sell it to
If you wish , we would be more than happy to send you
you on the auction for $19,000. We will put
photos of this one to your email address.
“Buy It Now” on it and give you the If you like it, we would be honored to sell it to you at
number of the Item immediately, so you auction for $19,000. We will mark it as "Buy It Now"
on it and give you the item number right away, so you
can buy it. can take it home.
Let us know if you are interested to see
the photos.
Please let us know if you are interested in our offer and
receiving the photos of it
Regards,
Warm regards,
6 (A_74333954) Letter for the customer Claudia
Dear Claudia,
We are glad to see you as our customer
and hopefully we’ll make you happy in the Dear customer
future. You told us that you advised your
We are pleased to welcome you as a customer and look
friends to contact us. It is very nice. We will forward to serving you in the future.
be glad to help you and your friends.
At your request, we are searching for the
We appreciate your recommendation of us to your
friends
product you are interested in. Currently, there We will be happy to assist you and your friends.
are some interesting items. We think you'll
We have found some items that may be of interest to
like them. We will give you items numbers you
shortly. Meanwhile please see the attached provide you
photos of the products.
In the meantime, please feel to check out product
Regards, gallery attached to this message

Best regards,
7 (A_19582127) Letter for the customer Serena!
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Dear Serena, 7 (A_19582127) Letter for the customer Serena!
We are pleased to inform you that the
Dear Ms. Serena,
simulator that you purchased was shipped
to you. This is to inform you that the simulator you purchased
Looking forward to your feedback and the has been shipped to you.
payment for the product.
The shipping receipt is attached. We look forward to your feedback and to receiving the
payment for the product.
Regards,
Please find the shipping receipt attached.

Kind regards,
8 (A_2444636) Letter for customer.
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Hello Tasmia,
We have sent you the numbers of items in 8 (A_2444636) Letter for customer Tasmina.
the previous letter. Please confirm that you
have received the list and have read it.
Hi Tasmia,
Please find the item numbers from our previous
We would like you to be faster with your correspondence attached.

choice and purchasing, because these bags List

have a huge demand and can be quickly
bought by other buyers. As you already
We kindly request that you make your selection and
bought two things in our company, you proceed with the purchase as soon as possible, as these
always have a 5% discount for all other bags are in high demand and might be out of stock
quite soon . As a returning customer, you are entitled to
goods, except antiques. a 5% discount on all purchases, with the exception of
antiques.
Looking forward to your fast reply.
Regards,

_____________________________________ We look forward to your prompt reply.

Kind regards,
1.11 3) Terms for holding the campaign:
2.1. Competition for the most unusual item.
The participants find unusual and funny
items on our website and send (publish) 1.11 3) Terms for holding the campaign:
screenshots (Print Screen), and links to 2.1 We are offering a competition for the most unusual
those lots in our group on Meta.
item. Participants are encouraged to identify unusual
The Item itself, and its description will be
and humorous items on our website and share them
taken into consideration, that means, we
with us by sending screenshots and links to other users
consider the product or design (or both)
in our group on Meta.
that can surprise users of the trading area
The item itself and its description will be taken into
and the participants of our group.
The goods must not violate the right of lots consideration. In other words, we are looking for
nomination, description may not contain products or designs (or both) that will surprise users of
profanity. the trading area and participants in our group.

2.2. The winner of the competition will be All goods must adhere to established nomination rules
determined no later XX.XX. 2024. Winner's excluding all forms of profane language.
name will be published on our website no
later than XX.XX.2024.
2.3. The winner is determined by the number
2.2 The winner will be announced by XX.XX. The
of shared votes (Likes), left for the link to the lot
deadline for submissions is 2024. The winner's name
on our site
will be posted on our website no later than
2.3.1 The winner will receive a Gift given in
XX.XX.2024.
section 3.1
2.3.2 The organizer reserves the right to
2.3 will be determined

keep the prizes if they hit in the list of

participants in a fraudulent way and / or 2.3.1 a gift as outlined in section 3.1.
after violation of the competition terms
and / or by artificial marking up the votes
(Likes). 2.3.2 The organizer reserves the right to retain any
prizes awarded in the event that any participant have
been found fraudulent , violated the competition
terms, or artificially counterfeited
2.4. The organizer will contact the votes (likes).
participant that won a Gift, not later than
6PM hours UTC time on XX.XX.2024 by sending
messages with instructions to the email
address that was provided during registration
on our site. 2.4 The organizer will contact the winner no who will
receive instructions via email provided
2.5. Results of the competition will be final
and are not a subject to revision.

website.
9 (A_5346786525) Letter for our manager John.
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Dear John,
We would like to inform you that we have sent you a
2.5 The results of the competition will be considered
salary.
final and will not be subject to revision.
The sent amount - $2400.
We have raised your salary due to the fact that you
are working with a very good results.
Dear John,
This salary will be paid to you each month, plus 5%
This is to inform you that your salary has been
from transactions for a period of 6 months.
remitted.
Please be advised that the amount sent is $2,400.
In a half of a year, we will analyze your work and
Your salary has been increased in line with your
decide on how much we have to pay you in the
excellent performance.
future.
six months.
We cannot take hire your son, because he is still
under 21. But we do not ignore him and try to find
In six months, we will conduct a performance review
something suitable for him temporarily.
and determine your future compensation.
Thank you,

We regret to inform you that we are unable to offer you

a position for the time being, as your son is still under
the age of 21. However, we are not neglecting him and
are actively seeking a suitable temporary position for
10 (A_12443115) Letter for the customer Tasmia.
him.
_____________________________________
Thank you for your business.
Hi

Americans prefer to use checks as a payment method

for deals with our clients very often now. It gives us 10 (A_12443115) Letter for customer Tasmia.
some difficulties.
Because we don't use checks in Europe and can't
take the checks as payment. Hi there,
The difficulties is that our company can't deposit the We have noted a recent preference among American
checks to our accounts. clients for the use of checks as a payment method as it
The european banks are not good enough developed seems to bring about some challenges.
yet and different standards. We are unable to accept checks as a form of payment,
Please understand our difficulties and may You have as we do not utilize this method in Europe.
any ideas to solve it. The issue is that our company is unable to deposit the
checks into our accounts.
Please pay attention that we just need to optimize the European banks are not yet sufficiently developed to
profits that connect to our business somehow. accommodate the different standards.
We are waitig for your answer. We kindly request your understanding of these
Regards. difficulties and ask for any suggestions you may have to
resolve them.
Please note that our objective is to optimize profits that
are linked to our business operations.
We look forward to your reply.
Kind regards,