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No de série:
Faculty of Literatures and Human Sciences
Departement of English
MAGISTER
SPECIALITY: ENGLISH
Theme:
A Comparative Study
Finally, as a sign of gratitude, to all the people who loved and helped
me.
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Acknowledgement
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Summary
Some keywords:
Literary criticism, linguistic criticism, stylistics, nature, simile, imagery,
isolation, darkness.
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Résumé
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الملخص
تن اول ھ ذا البح ث التعري ف بتي ارين م ن تي ارات التحلي ل األدب ي ؛
أحدھما قديم وھو النقد األدبي ،والثاني حديث وھو النقد اللساني .
إن ظھور النقد اللساني جعلنا نتساءل عن دوره في الس احة األدبي ة ،
ومدى عالقته بالنقد األدبي :ھل ھو بديل له أو مجرد مكمل ؟ .
من أجل فھم ھذه العالقة قمنا بدراسة موض وع الطبيع ة ف ي رواي ة :
» قلب السواد « للكاتب » :جوزي ف ك ونراد « ؛ فوج دنا النق د األدب ي
يُظھ ر أن اس تعمال الكات ب للطبيع ة ك ان م ن أج ل بن اء روايت ه وتكمل ة
لألح داث فيھ ا ؛ مم ا يس اعد عل ى فھ م شخص ية البطل ين » م ارلو ،
وكورتز « ،وكذا التغيرات التي طرأت عليھما .
أم ا النق د اللس اني فق د ك ان تركي زه عل ى اللغ ة ،وكي ف أن الكات ب
وظفھا ألجل إيصال معانيه ؛ فوجدنا أن االستعمال المتكرر للتش بيه ف ي
وصف الطبيعة خلق صورا متع ددة ومختلف ة ف ي ذھ ن الق ارئ ،كش فت
عن مواضيع مھمة كانت أساسية في بناء الرواية ،والتي منھا :صورة
السواد الت ي تعك س وج ود الش ر داخ ل قل ب اإلنس ان ،وص ورة الوح دة
والت ي ك ان لھ ا الث ر الكبي ر عل ى إظھ ار الش ر وترجمت ه إل ى س لوكات
مدمرة ،وصورة الق وة الت ي عكس ت ق وة الطبيع ة أم ام ض عف اإلنس ان
وأثرھا على سلوكاته ،إلى غير ذلك من الصور .
وبالت الي خل ص البح ث إل ى ال دور المتكام ل ب ين النق د األدب ي والنق د
اللساني .
الكلمات المفتاحية
النقد االدبي -النقد اللساني -االسلوبية -الطبيعة -التشبيه -الصور -العزلة -السواد
Table of contents
Contents……………………………………………………….……….Page
Dedication…………………...………………………………………………i
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Acknowledgement………………………………….………………………ii
Avant- propos………………………………………..…………………….iii
Table of contents…………………………………………………..………iv
GENERAL INTRODUCTION
Topic ……………………………………………………02
Motivation…………………………………………………..03
Problematics…………………………………………….…..04
Research questions…………………………………...……..06
Hypotheses……………………………………….…………06
Methodology………………………………….…………….06
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3.2. Simile as a linguistic feature………………………..80
3.3 . Simile and nature…………………………………....81
3.4. Conclusion………………………………………….100
Notes of chapter three…………………………………..101
GENERAL CONCLUSION……………………………………103
BIBLIOGRAPHY……………………………………………….110
Index of authors…………………………………………………116
Index of linguistic terms………………………………………...117
Index of literary terms…………………………………………..118
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GENERAL INTRODUCTION
GENERAL INTRODUCTION
Interest in linguistic approaches to literature has grown rapidly over the last
fifteen years. As for Bally (1905), literary texts are “particular examples of
language use”. Thus, In this field, many papers were written by a great
number of linguists such as: Chatman(1971), Chatman and Levin (1967),
Fowler (1966), Freeman(1970), Kchru and Stahlke(1972) among others. The
Prague School of linguistics with the stylistics of Neo-Firthian or the London
school of linguistics enriched this field of research with their new insights and
theories to language study. Crystal and Davy (1969) contributed with their
notion of ‘dimensions of situational constraints’, and Halliday (1976, 1985)
with his systemic functional model of language. Indeed, Halliday (1971)
established a landmark paper on William Golding’s The Inheritors, in which
he described and contrasted two languages used as narrative voices.
In the present research, we are going to try to analyse the theme of nature
from both literary criticism and linguistic criticism.
Topic
Motivation
- First, the novel was written at the end of the 19.th.century, but it carries
some modernist traits. Conrad’s experiment in style and technique of writing
exerted a major influence on the development of the modern novel. For
example, a story within a story. Thus, this novel marks a turning point in
British literature from the nineteenth century to the twentieth century
modernist novel where all the previous conventions of writing were broken.
In addition, Conrad has influenced many writers.
- Second, the different themes attributed to this novel make it attractive and
worth studying. It might be open to a variety of themes: colonialist experience,
human greed for wealth and power, psychological matters among others.
-Third, the language in HD is full of some linguistic features like simile and
allusion which make it a good material to be used as a case study for applying
linguistic methods on it.
Problematics
Literature has shown to reflect many social, religious, cultural and economic
aspects in life. In parallel, many types of criticism have been developed to
interpret and evaluate works of art among them literary criticism.
To illustrate, Conrad’s HD, most of the literary critics have tried to interpret it
into different themes that are related to some aspects in man’s life. For
instance, it is said to be about colonialism, man’s self control or man’s ability
to choose between good and evil and the theme of nature. Indeed, nature takes
a considerable part in HD where the writer devotes many paragraphs
describing it. This led many critics to try to find out the implicit message
meant by the writer behind this theme. They discovered that it can have
various interpretations: it can be related to man’s weakness in front of his evil
instincts when put in isolation, or it can give some further insights into the
feelings and the personality of some characters.
Hypotheses
Methodology
On the one hand, we are going to gather information concerning the use of
nature in HD and organize it.
On the other hand, on the linguistic side, the research will be carried on
through descriptive quantitative study. Through the direct observation of the
data, which is here Conrad’s HD, we notice the frequent use of the linguistic
feature simile which will be considered our unit of analysis. It is going to be
counted and described according to Halliday’s approach in order to find out its
function in the narrative more precisely its use in describing nature.
Chapter two: It will be devoted to the analysis of the role of the theme of
nature in the narrative applying some literary approaches.
Chapter three: We shall attempt to apply the linguistic theory about simile
mentioned in chapter one for the analysis of this linguistic feature as far as
nature is concerned in the literary work chosen in order to find out its function
in understanding the theme of nature as meant by the writer.
General Conclusion: A synthesis about the results obtained from both the
linguistic and literary views is then made.
CHAPTER ONE
1.1.Introduction
(1)
What is meant by literary criticism ? . Burris summarizes three
purposes of literary criticism:
It sees the literary work as the reflection of an author’s life and time. To
try to understand the work and the writer’s intent, it is necessary to know about
the author and the political, economic and sociological context of his time.
This is because the work of art is viewed as an expression of the ideas and
world view of the author’s culture and era.
It believes that the larger purpose of literature is to teach morality and solve
philosophical issues. Thus, it recognizes that literature can affect readers
whether subtly or directly, as well as the message of a work- not just the
decorous vehicle for that message- is important.
It seeks to see how well a work accords with the real world.
The psychoanalytic approach
It originated in the work of the Austrian Sigmund Freud who pioneered the
technique of psychoanalysis. His theories are directly and indirectly concerned
with the nature of the unconscious mind. The psychoanalytic approach went
through different stages. At first, it focused on the artist’s mind who is urged
by instincts. Then, after the 1950’s, the focus shifted toward the psychology of
the reader. As concerns the literary text, it looks at the psychological
motivations of the characters.
With the diversity of the literary approaches under literary criticism, one
can obtain diverse explanations and interpretations for one text. What unifies
these approaches is only one thing: they do not give prominence to the way the
message of the writer is produced through language:
“ The most widespread and flourishing methods of
studying literature concern themselves with its setting, its
environment, its external causes…Though the ‘extrinsic’
study may merely attempt to interpret literature in the
light of its social context and its antecedents, in most
cases it becomes a ‘causal’ explanation professing to
account for literature to explain it , and finally to reduce
it to its origins.( the ‘fallacy of origins’)”.
From this quotation, we understand how the study of literature was undergone
through the focus on the external factors such as its setting, its environment,
and its social context.
For Short (1996) the essential core of criticism is divided into three main
parts: description, interpretation and evaluation. Each part is dependent on the
previous one. He states that in dealing with literary texts some critics focus on
the socio-cultural background that is behind the publication of such works,
while others concern themselves with the lives of the authors and how their
experiences affect their writings.
Thus, the main concern of literary criticism is: what does a work of art
mean on the light of external factors rather how such meaning is produced
through language. It has the assumption that the detailed study of the language
of literary texts would destroy its aesthetic value. Nevertheless, it is admitted
that too much light has been put on literary works through knowing the
conditions under which they have been produced because the literary text
transcends its origins.
The literary critic assumes that the artistic value of a work is available to
intuitive awareness, and he makes use of an impressionistic terminology to
communicate this awareness to others. The difficulty of this procedure is that it
makes appeal to intuitions, which the reader may not share with the critic.
On the whole, literary criticism takes artistic values as primary and refers
to language in so far as it serves as evidence for aesthetic assessments:
Therefore, the use of the word ‘hypotheses’ sums up the value of literary
criticism in general. In addition, according to what we have said before, we
can represent the general concept of literary criticism in the following
diagram:
Literary criticism
Literary
criticism
Interpretat
-ion
language context
By this change in focus, i.e., the close analysis of the language of literary
texts, there is a reference to a new branch within linguistics, it is stylistics.
What is stylistics then?:
linguistic description.”
Here, Short ( 1996) has introduced the concept of linguistic description for the
analysis of literary texts.
another.”
( Short, 1996:05)
From its name, literary stylistics is geared towards the study of literary
texts through the application of linguistic theories and methods in order to find
out how effects are achieved and interpretations constructed, and thus, provide
further insights into the meaning of the literary work.
Whereas for Leech, it is impossible to list all the linguistic features of one
text because this requires a completely exhaustive description of the language.
That is its lexicon, its syntax, its semantics and other characteristics. In
addition, it is preferable to detect the linguistic feature that has the following
characteristics:
Linguistic
criticism
Linguistic
feature
Linguistic interpretati
descriptio on
n
( Halliday,1985: introduction)
the text means what it does. In the process, there are likely
(.Halliday, 1985:introduction)
For Halliday (1985), the linguistic analysis would answer some important
questions on how and why does the author express himself in such a way to
convey a certain meaning, and in this process, we will identify multiple
meanings, alternatives and ambiguities.
In Halliday’s grammar, namely functional grammar, the relationship
between form and meaning is not arbitrary. The job of functional grammar is
to find out this relationship.
Since the focus of our study is about the linguistic feature ‘simile’ in HD,
through linguistic criticism, in the following, we are going present Halliday’s
theory about this feature.
1. 4 Simile:
(J.A.Cuddon,1990:830)
So simile is a comparison that shows how two things that are not alike in most
ways are similar in one important way. It is a way to describe something.
(
Raymond, 1994: 232)
*as if/ as though: are also used for comparison to say how somebody does
something. They are used in the same way to express a comparison with
something that may be true or imaginary. (Leech’s p: 53)
a- embedded clauses(12) :
Parataxis: is the relation between two like elements of equal status, one
initiating and the other continuing ( both are free and each could stand as a
functioning whole): for example, in taking the previous example, we see a
paratactic relationship between ‘I would if I could’ and ‘but I can’t’. Both
clauses can stand independently of each other. ( M. A. K. Halliday, 1985: 195)
Primary Secondary
Parataxis (1.)initiating. (2.)continuing
Hypotaxis (Α)dominant. (b.)dependent
“ Parataxis and hypotaxis are general relationships which
(.Halliday,1985 : 198)
These concepts are mentioned because they will be used in describing the
function of simile in the text.
Category Meaning
1-Temporal:
2-Spacial:
3- Manner:
-comparison. -N is like M.
4-Causal- conditional:
Since the focus of the study is about comparison, we shall take from the
table provided by Halliday ( 1985: 214) about the principle markers of
hypotactic enhancing clauses the relevant part in our research, i.e, the part of
manner where comparison is included in which he classified the different
markers of comparison:
Finite Non-finite.
Manner: Conjuncti conjuncti Prepositi
on on on
- means.
/ /
- comparison
-as, as if -like.
like, the way.
What is cohesion?
in the text”
Types of conjunction: Four categories are grouped and classified under the
heading of conjunction(16): additive, adversative, causal and temporal. Each of
them contains other sub-classifications.
On the light of the previous theory of simile mentioned earlier, the most
important sentences in the novel (of course those which deal with the
description of nature), will be described in order to find out what effect is
meant, and how we can build our interpretations. Therefore, we can say that
Halliday’s functional model has equipped us with some tools that may help us
analyse the function of simile in describing nature, and thus, we may
understand it better.
1. 5 .Conclusion:
In this chapter, we have tied to bring a broad image about the nature of
both literary and linguistic criticisms, thus, we have come up with the
following results:
literature”
sufficient and serves no other purpose than its own ends. In other words, art is
an end in itself and need not be didactic. It believes in art for art’s sake.
capable of defining all and only the grammatical sentences of that language. It
sentences.
which one clause forms part of a larger clause. Subordinate clauses are of
(9)- Nominal group: it is part of the noun phrase other than the determiner
(10)- Verbal group: It has the verb as head. It can contain one verb; peter came
extra information about the time, place and manner of the event described by
(12)- Clause: “The largest grammatical unit smaller than a sentence. The
have been extending the term clause to every unit containing a verb, including
(14)-non-finite clause: is a clause without a finite verb, so the first verb form
can be either an infinitive( the best thing is to leave your family at home), or a
gerund ( entering the room, I fell over the cat) or a past participle ( the man lay
English are as follows: Extent and Location in time and space including
(16)- Conjunction: is a joining word, its main function is to link together two
parts of a sentence.
CHAPTER TWO
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2.1. Introduction
When reading HD, one notices how the writer devotes many
paragraphs describing nature through out the narrative within the events of
the story. Critics agree that it is used not only for artistic and aesthetic ends
but also for its role it plays on the characters and the events of the narrative.
It is a very significant symbol. Aspects of nature such as: the river, the
landscape, the wilderness, the trees, the woods were depicted by the writer.
In the following, we try to reveal some of their implications under the light
of literary criticism approaches. In other word, we try to answer what is the
role of nature in the narrative?.
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Historical background Psychological
-18/ 19th. Centuries : background
European political, economic, -Sigmund Freud( 1856-
scientific interests fuel search 1939) : feeling, the
for new markets and – unconscious, inward journey
‘exploration’ of Africa. into the self, back to the
- 1870’s: European scramble past/childhood( keys to
for Africa. understanding human nature/
- 1876-1884: King Leopold II behaviour.
( of Belguim 1865-1909) used - Psychoanalytical method:
Stanly to explore, acquire, healing through story telling,
colonize “ Congo Free State” often involves journey into
as his personal possession the dream
Heart Of Darkness
Ideological background
Personal background - Social breakdown,
-In 1889-1890, Conrad went fragmentation : lose
to Congo and captained faith in progress,
river steamboat to retrieve science, religion,
Klein. morality and
-Conrad’s interest in the bourgeois.
human personality under -Alienation from urban
different conditions. bureaucratic society, a sterile
materialism
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The context wherein HD appeared
This is due to the writer’s thematic and stylistic complexities which lead the
critic Baines to be reserving as far as the writer’s message is concerned.
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“ Going up that river was like traveling back to the
earliest beginnings of the world when vegetation
rioted on the earth and the big trees were kings. An
empty stream, a great silence, an impenetrable forest.
The air was warm, thick, heavy, sluggish. There was
no joy in the brilliance of sunshine. The long stretches
of the waterway ran on, deserted into the gloom of
overshadowed distances. On the silvery sandbanks
hippos and alligators sunned themselves side by side
the broadening waters flowed through a mob of
wooded island” (HD: 92- 93).
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tall enough to hide his bones’. The critical meeting
with Kurtz occurs on a trial through the grass”.
In the following, the use of contrasts ( river with desert, past with present,
dream with reality, stillness with unrest) was also present in Marlow’s
description of the physical setting combined with psychological
speculations:
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greedy and callous explorers in search of raw material and new markets.
Therefore, the forest may serve as a figure for suggestiveness.
2.2.1Nature as a symbol
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effects on the character of Kurtz, for example, or through the different
interpretations it can suggest. In a letter, Conrad wrote:
From his experiences in the sea, Conrad managed to acquire and form
some kind of knowledge about human nature which he tried to transmit in
his writings as he said in his preface to The Nigger Of The Narcissus
( 1897):
Conrad wanted to say that through his writings, he wanted to make the
reader share with him his knowledge of the world. Thus, we can say that in
HD, the writer’s memories had been fictionalized, and for that he used
various techniques among them nature. Albert J. Guerard (1958) in his
article ‘The Journey Within’ said that heart of darkness is a record of things
seen and done, so he saw that the autobiograghical basis of the narrative
was well known:
According to critics, Conrad was a writer of value, he did not write just for
fun, but he was concerned with the human personality in all its states:
“On the one hand, he admires the human being who has
learned while young to hope, to love and to put its trust
in life; on the other, he records the incalculable damage
that occurs to the individual and to the fabric of human
relationships through unrealistic idealism and self
deceit” ( A. Pollard, 1973: 149)
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2.2.4 Nature and Marlow
Through the description of nature, Conrad had the power to project the
convergence between inner and physical landscape. This was illustrated
through the character of Marlow who when he was describing the natural
surrounding he was actually referring to his inner thoughts:
This extract means that the use of nature can imply various meanings; it
can suggest evil or it can suggest the state of the human being, that is when
we describe it we are referring to the condition of the human being:
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unreal in my life. And outside, the silent
wilderness surrounding this cleared speck on the
earth struck me as something great and
invincible, like evil or truth, waiting patiently for
the passing away of this fantastic invasion”
( HD: 33 )
In short, the white men were corrupt, they imprisoned the natives, stole
from them, and murdered any one they wanted to. Their activities
throughout all the book were viewed by Marlow as insane and pointless.
They spent their existence grubbing for ivory or plotting against each other
for position and status. In the above extract (HD:33), we see how the
narrator shifted from describing the white men to the description of nature
to imply his personal feelings and thoughts because every thing seemed to
him as unreal, that’s why most of his descriptions of nature were somewhat
a sort of enigma that needs to be answered. According to Clay Lee Daniel(
1980: 11), the last lines of the quotation that deal with the description of
the wilderness express the question Marlow must answer. Is this “great and
invincible” an evil or truth? Marlow must decide what it will be to him. He
wanted to find the relation between the wilderness and the pilgrims’ deeds.
If he rejects this savage land as a truth, it will become an evil- Marlow’s
evil. If on the other hand Marlow accepts the primitive savagery of the
jungle as an echo of his own soul, he will escape the merciless wratch of the
primordial’s asserting its dominion over him.
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Thus, Marlow was surprised because of the contradictions he saw. The
fact that he presented the wilderness as something mysterious, or as an
enigma, this reflected his bewilderment and uncertainty to understand why
the white men behaved in such a way:
( HD: 37)
Due to the use of such words as: spectrally, dim, faint, lamentable, this
extract expresses a negative tone which reflects not only the sad feeling of
Marlow but also his fear as if he was traveling to the unknown.
(HD:38)
First, through the use of such words as: shiny, moon, silver and
glittering, there is a connotation that Marlow was going to come up with a
new type of knowledge because it is always agreed on the association of
light with knowledge. Indeed, at the beginning of his narrative, he has
anticipated that this experience had made him a changed man. He was
getting a new knowledge about himself and about the human nature.
Therefore, Marlow’s voyage along the Congo river becomes ‘a figure of
man’s apprehensive return to his primeval origins, a voyage in which the
self is frightened bewitched, stripped of the ideological conventions it once
relied on to understand the world, and confronted by a malevolent reality
which shares back at the disoriented traveler with an unsettling gaze. The
voyage becomes a figure for the search for truth as Marlow said: “ a truth
stripped of its cloak of time” ( HD: 97), Edward Garnett ( 1902) in his
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article ‘On Heart of Darkness’ emphasized this idea, that this superficial
journey had deeper meanings:
It has become clear to the reader that Marlow as well as confronting the
immediate difficulties of his physical journey, was also engaged in an
extended spiritual pilgrimage or quest. ( R. Adams, 1991: 42).
( HD:11)
Second, the fact that Marlow, when describing the stillness, could
not decide whether it was “an appeal or a menace” ( HD: 38 ), this reflected
his fear and his inability to understand what was happening in the Outer
station because of the many contradictions he saw. For Marlow, nature was
corrupted by the white men’s deeds, that is why it may be asking for an aid,
or it may be as a menace to refer to its power and danger on the human soul
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who corrupted it. And here, we see the use of the technique of
foreshadowing by the writer to refer later to its impact on Kurtz.
In the Inner station, the final station, Marlow met with the harlequin
who talked to him too much about Kurtz. For the harlequin, Kurtz made
many things; he enlarged his mind, he invaded the country, he killed the
natives, he collected a lot of ivory and also made the natives adore him. At
this moment, Marlow was getting knowledge out of this tale “ending in
deep sights”( HD: 81). It was a knowledge about the existence of evil
within himself , and within all the human kind:
(HD:81)
According to James Guetti (1965: 76) in his article ‘The Failure of The
Imagination’, saw that Marlow discovered a new sort of reality . It was a
reality which existed in the realization that ‘surface’ and ‘heart’ are
inevitably separate matters, and that mind can have ordered awareness only
of the former. In addition, Marlow’s final reality is a state of suspension
between the disciplined world of mind and language and the world of
essences at the center of experience.
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For some critics, the fact that Marlow sailed along the Congo river
around the jungle and not actually into the jungle is also a symbol. Marlow
never walked the path that Kurtz did to self destruction. Thus, he avoided
getting captured by evil. In fact, Baines( 1960) posed as the theme of the
story the relationship of Kurtz, Marlow, and Africa and the presence of evil:
“ Could we handle that dumb thing, or would it handle us? I felt how big;
how confoundedly big, was that thing…” (HD: 43)
As they inch farther into the jungle, Marlow described the land’s:
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preliminary trifling before the more serious
onslaught” (D. Hewitt, 1952: 22)
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“ It is one of the greatest points of Conrad’s
story that Marlow speaks of the primitive life of
the jungle not as being noble or charming or
even free but as being base and sordid and for
that reason compelling: he himself feels quiet
overtly its dreadful attraction. It is to this
devilish baseness that Kurtz has yielded
himself,…”
Thus, knowing more about Conrad’s beliefs such as the idea of fidelity, one
can better understand the character of Kurtz in the novel.
For Marlow, what kept the white men away from the influence of the
jungle was due to the fact that they kept themselves with surface activities,
thus, they can not hear the whisperings of the silent jungle and the darkness
in their hearts becomes buried. For example, the Chief Accountant of the
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government station occupied himself by keeping an excellent appearance
among the chaos of the station. However, Kurtz was the exception.
So Marlow spoke of the primitive life of the jungle not as being noble or
charming but as being base and sordid and for that reason compelling.
Indeed, Through out the narrative, nature was not passive, Conrad has
dealt with it, in some moments, in a way to demonstrate its power and role
in the events of the story and more precisely on Kurtz’s soul. In many
extracts, Marlow showed the effect of the wilderness upon Kurtz:
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the inconceivable ceremonies of some devilish
initiation” (HD: 81)
( HD: 50)
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From an emissary of pity and science, Kurtz changed as Marlow described
him:
Marlow continued:
In spite of all Kurtz’s deed’s, and in spite of all Marlow’s thoughts, the
narrator seemed to sympathize with Kurtz and consequently, give an
explanation to what happened to him by describing his life in the jungle:
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(HD: 70)
(HD: 52)
As a result to what have been said, Kurtz who came from Europe to
civilize the natives, succumbed to the savagery of the wilderness. He gave
up his high aspirations and principles. As an alternative, he brought out the
dark side in his heart and all the evil desires were revealed. Therefore, the
full significance of the wilderness can be embodied in some way in the
character of Kurtz. Thus, Kurtz’s last words “The horror, the horror”
( HD:100) to Marlow were to form not only his judgment about himself but
also for all mankind about the existence of evil inside each man. At the
moment of his death, Kurtz was able to recognize the cruelty of his deeds;
so the wilderness had the power to show him the truth about himself.
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Ruthven (1968) sees that either in Europe or in Africa evil exists
everywhere, the only difference is that in Europe it is veiled with the
prevailing ideas that they are civilized and that they can bring light to the
African continent; however, deeply Europe was characterized by Marlow as
a place of dead values “ whited sepulcher” ( HD:55) due to the evil deeds of
the white man in the African Congo. In other words, darkness exists even in
Europe, that is inside the pretending civilization:
( K. K. Ruthven,1968: 78)
The fog can also be used as a symbol: before arriving to the inner
station, when there was only eight miles left, Marlow talked about a fog that
settled over the river which made them deaf and blind, and this was,
according to critics, symbolical to anticipate the moral situation in which
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Kurtz has placed himself in the Inner station. Thus, the fog was both used
as an adjunct to the action and to foreshadow the moral situation in which
Kurtz found himself: he was morally blind:
(HD: 56)
When Marlow arrived to the Inner station, where Kurtz was laying ill
and needed to be rescued, he first met with the harlequin who talked too
much about Kurtz who killed many of the natives, and put their heads on
the stakes around his house without any mercy. Within his conversation
with the harlequin, Marlow has shifted to talk about nature, and therefore he
expressed the nature’s toughness through such words as hopeless, dark,
impenetrable, pitiless in order to refer to evil, as far as Kurtz is concerned:
( HD: 79)
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presence of many institutions such as the butcher and the policeman which
a civilized society sets up to ensure order. In the absence of these
institutions, man’s brutal instincts are released and turned into harsh
actions. That’s why it was important, for Marlow, that man must keep
himself with matters of the surface to defend himself against the danger of
nature.
Therefore, the dark heart of Africa forces both of Marlow and Kurtz to
look at the darkness within themselves and generalize it for all human kind.
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2.3. Conclusion
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- Through describing nature we get hints about Marlow’s
thoughts and feelings.
- Nature allowed both Marlow and Kurtz to see the truth about
themselves and about man in general. This truth which they
would not arrive at if they stayed in the European societies.
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CHAPTER THREE
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CHAPTER THREE
3.1. Introduction
In HD, we notice that simile was a recurrent feature. Conrad used the
following conjunctions: ‘as, like, as though and as if’ in order to express it.
There was an unusual use of simile; it occurred 288 times through out the
novel, among them there were 33 used for the description of nature. These
statistics attract our attention to consider it as a characteristic use of
language and consider it a linguistic feature worth of studying. For in
overusing it, the writer has shown a linguistic choice. Thus, in order to find
out what did similes add to the theme of nature, we shall try to describe it
from a linguistic point of view and relate this description to the literary
interpretation and then, we shall try to find out its effect on the reader.
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3.3. Simile and nature
The main clause ‘the very mist on the Essex’ was modified by the
dependent clause ‘a gauzy and radiant fabric’. In this comparison of
similarity, the writer tries to bring out a nearer picture about the unknown
nature of the mist in the mind of the reader through attributing it to
something familiar. Thus, it enables the reader imagine the scene as if he
was in Essex and witnessing it with his own eyes.
Aristotle said that the aim of art is to present not the outward
appearance of things, but their inward significance. If that be the case, then
Conrad is a true artist regarding the pictures he paints with his work HD.
Conrad’s most effective literary tool for plot development and expressing
the theme is his use of imagery(1).
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Conrad’s choice of words craft an exceptional experience. He
effectively evoked a dreamlike image of the jungle by using language. In
addition, we come to understand the setting from Marlow’s point of view as
he experienced things.
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Images in HD suggest further meanings and associations in ways that
go beyond the fairly simple identifications of simile.
The clause “ an immense snake uncoiled with its head in the sea, its body at
rest curving over a vast country, and its tail lost in the depths of the land”
modified the main clause “ But there was in it one river especially a mighty
big river that you could see on the map”. This modification through the
conjunction of comparison ‘like’ evokes in the mind of the reader a picture
of nature as being a deceiver and a cheater. Through this modification of
the river, the writer wants to obscure the interpretation of the coming events
in the mind of the reader.
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signify a river that runs from the sea through the dark jungles into the heart
of the Congo. This is the very river that Marlow and his crew travel on in
search of Kurtz. Secondly, the snake itself can be interpreted as being an
evil creation. Thus, by combining these two, we may presume that the river
in the shape of a snake glides through the jungle into the open ocean,
leaving death, destruction and evil along its way. This interpretation is
confirmed by Marlow right at the beginning before he goes to the Congo ,
when he commented that “ the river was there, fascinating, deadly like a
snake” ( HD: 15). Therefore, the reader can predict that through Marlow’s
journey, he is going to witness various demonstrations and exhibitions of
destruction, death and deceit, that it will not be an enjoyable journey.
Indeed, the first critical incident in the story occurred when Marlow had to
wait several months in the station in order to repair his ship to continue his
quest, in addition to his encounter with the death of the black natives whom
many of them have walked into the shadows to die peacefully, and most
important the death of Kurtz. Thus, the connection between the serpent
imagery and the moral difficulties of Marlow is obvious.
For Short and Leech ( 1981) a simile serves to animate what is inanimate.
They give the following example:
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“Flames like red sores licking its ashy sides”(P:95)
In modifying the main clause ‘The reaches opened before us and closed
behind’ by the dependent clause ‘the forest had stepped leisurely across
the water to bar the way for out return’, we are in front of nature that has
the action of embracing the comers. This image contributes as a tool to
suggest to the reader an impression about the effect of nature like its power
in revealing the evil instincts of the pilgrims.
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“ …in his novel, Conrad is content to imply rather than to
define”(Allinghamm, 2000)
We notice in the use of simile for the description of nature another type of
imagery, i.e, the conceptual imagery. It is related to the way Marlow
conceived what he perceived. According to J. A. Cuddon (1998), a
perceptual imagery is the thing that can be visualized, whereas the
conceptual image is that which one has an idea of it. In the redescription of
a perceptual experience onto a conceptual structure, Marlow had an image
schema(2) about his journey experience reflected some times through the
description of nature. Marlow was generating mental images all the time.
Therefore, according to D. Guadagnino, his story could not be real
memories but perceptions of the memories, mutated with time, flourished
by the total experience.
Through the image schema, we get hints about Marlow’s anti imperialist
views:
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In fact, when a writer describes the physical surrounding of a character
such as his house, his clothes or the way he speaks, he is actually equipping
the reader with more clues about the personality and the state of that
character. Indeed, the setting played a critical role in describing how
Marlow felt about the entire adventure he endured. In the following extract,
we see how Marlow after his conversation with the ‘uneasy’ manager, who
reflected the nature of the white colonialism in Congo, he moved to the
description of nature:
Both the subordinate clauses ‘something great and invincible’ and ‘evil or
truth’ modify the main clause ‘And outside the silent wilderness
surrounding this cleared this cleared speck on the earth’. This modification
reinforces to the reader Marlow’s fear and shock and because the writer
employed the verb ‘struck’ and also his use of the subordinate clauses
which may mirror Marlow’s implicit opinions about the white man due to
the many contradictions he witnessed in the station that led to the
emergence of such feelings and judgements. In using the clause ‘waiting
patiently for the passing away of this fantastic invasion’ the reader infers
that Marlow was giving his judgement about the nature of the existence of
the white man in the African Congo as he witnessed the corruption of the
system and realized how easy it is to loose sight of reality and be taken by
the environment. In trying to interpret Marlow’s feelings as far as his
experience is concerned, D. Guadagnino, sees that the geographically
transplanted white men were so far removed from imposed structural laws,
that they were ill equipped to survive in nature, to respond to the innate
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laws of nature. Civilized man no longer saw himself as part of nature, he
was not just separate but superior and impious. In other words, Marlow was
implicitly attacking imperialism.
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Marlow’s tale in order to understand why did he describe the coast in such a
way to come up at the end of the story with Marlow’s findings about good
and evil in every man’s heart.
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The darkness imagery was intensely employed through out the
narrative. Everything in the book was cloaked with darkness. Africa,
England and Brussels were all described as gloomy and somehow dark.
Thus, darkness seemed to operate metaphorically. For the idea of darkness
was present right from the title of the novel and continued to play an
important role throughout the story. In the following, simile demonstrates
the theme of darkness:
Conrad felt that using ‘darkness’ as a reccuring theme through out the
story would be an effective tool because of the many connotations of
darkness. Darkness can, for example, represent evil, the unknown, mystery,
sadness or fear.
Thus, the reader may appreciate the deep darkness of the African jungle and
at the same time discovers the darkness inside the heart of man in general
through Marlow’s implicit wonders about his own darkness when he said:
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“ I assure you that never before did this land, this
river, this jungle, the very arch of this blazing sky
appear to me so hopeless and so dark” ( HD: 79)
Notice the use of adjectives which connote darkness, ‘lead’, smoke’, rigid’
which contribute in evoking in the mind of the reader a sinister atmosphere.
Out of this dark imagery, the reader is in a dark and lifeless environment
which predicts the death and failure of the Belgian mission in the Congo
portrayed through the death of Kurtz.
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or light about civilization is that it is, regardless of appearances, unreal,
absurd, and shrouded in darkness.
Marlow felt cut from his past and from civilization as he piolated the ship
upriver. The following extract, conveys this isolation image:
Being an important theme within the narration, the isolation which Marlow
felt was also behind Kurtz’s corruption. In the ‘great solitude’ and away
from the distractions of society, Kurtz was able to be completely alone with
his own mind and it was in this isolation that he lost his principles.
According to critics, Conrad proved that it is the Africans who are the fittest
to survive in their native land and that Darwin’s theory was in fact never
intended to be applied to races or nations.
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vivid element in the narrative which has its impact upon the events and the
lives of the characters:
In this extract, the main clause ‘ Trees, trees, millions of trees, massive,
immense, running up high; and at their foot, hugging the bank against the
stream, crept the little begrimed steamboat’ is modified by the dependent
clause ‘ a sluggish beetle crawling on the floor of a lofty portico’. This
modification which describes the way the trees creep the steamboat
illustrates this animation of nature as opposed to man as if he left it for
nature to decide about his destiny.
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Furthermore, if we consider the following extract where Marlow wanted to
convey an impression about man’s ignorance and unconsciousness about
his deeds in front of the effect of nature ( like Kurtz), we notice how he
used simile in the following image:
“It (the fog) did not shift or drive; it was just there,
standing all round you like something solid. At eight
or nine, perhaps, it lifted as a shutter lifts… and then
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the white shutter came down again, smoothly, as if
sliding in greased grooves” ( HD: 56).
So, being a corollary of darkness, the fog not only obscures the sight but
also distorts.
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comes as a reaction against the materialism and capitalism of later Victorian
period which was described as an age of ugliness, brutality and dreadful
inequalities. Thus, aestheticism came to have a relation with the criticism of
the beautiful.
In HD, similes helped the writer to convey the aesthetic image in the
description of nature. The beauty in Conrad’s HD comes in the way he
depicted nature which though it bore negative connotations, it was unique
in the way it was presented. The writer introduced an entirely new
significance of the landscape. While the writers of his time used the
landscape as a background to their narrative, Conrad told his story through
his description of the landscape. Nature becomes not only an omnipresent
force, but an alive and controlling one as well. The writer created in the
mind of the reader a different type of nature, it was an imaginary and
literary one. In the following example, though Conrad used a beautiful
contrast of colours in the description of the colossal jungle, he modified it
as ‘a blue sea whose glitter was blurred by a creeping mist’ to refer to the
reader about that contrast between white and darkness and consequently to
good and evil in man’s heart:
Therefore, we can say that simile helped the writer in the description
of evil in man’s heart, to convey death and to reveal Marlow’s attitudes. So
the first function of simile was to describe. Jill Fitzerald on his paper
‘Research On Stories’ defines the term description as follows:
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“discourse that attempts to embody in linguistic form
a stationary perceptual scene” (HD: 06).
It means that when confronted with any type of thing or situation, it can be
a person, an object, an animal, or an abstract notion or feeling, one attempts
to recreate it and transmit it through a linguistic medium out of his own
perception. So in HD, we see nature through Marlow’s point of view and
perception. Throughout the narrative, we see in Marlow’s description his
active and imaginary capacity in transferring his perceptions to the audience
For them this type of description makes the readers feel as if they are
strangers observing from a different culture, and sometimes the physical
description can invite an empathetic response from the reader. And when
the readers sympathize with the writer due to the images he conveys
through language , that may guide the reader’s opinion, we can say that he
achieved his aim in conveying the meanings of his narration.
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but an account of the relation between the visual world and its observer,
who strives to comprehend and interpret it:
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description of the woods without mentioning its surroundings. In this way
we can say that Conrad used a technique related more to fiction called ‘The
Descriptive Focus’.
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3.4. Conclusion
In this chapter, we have tried to depict the different functions of simile, and,
as a result, we have come up with a higher level of significance to nature.
Thus, the stylistic analysis of simile have brought the following results:
- Simile presented nature alive and as an actor in the events of the story.
- Through simile, nature was given negative traits in order to refer to evil,
hate and mystery that may exist in the human heart.
- Using simile in the description of nature, has shown the way how the
writer constructed his messages.
Finally, we can say that the use of simile in the description of nature evoked
images that suggest important underlying themes necessary for supporting
the meanings of the novel. The analysis of simile helped us to get an
objective interpretation of nature and revealed many ambiguities that were
attributed to it. It deepened the meaning of nature to come up with the
conclusion that Conrad used nature as a narrative tool among other
techniques to create his literary work.
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Notes of chapter three:
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GENERAL CONCLUSION
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GENERAL CONCLUSION
In this research paper, we have tried to define briefly two major trends
of analysis in order to oppose them and find out what relations may hold
them. They are literary criticism and linguistic criticism.
Literary criticism has been dealt with for a long time ago; moreover, it
has been of a tremendous importance in literary studies. Thanks to it one
can understand works of art better. It can be used by many people like the
researchers, the teachers of literature, the students or even ordinary people.
Literary criticism relies on context as a primary method to get hints about
the meaning of the literary work. In other words, it looks for outside
information and refers to the text. It can look for the historical time in
which the work was produced, or for the author’s life and his fields of
interest, or for the relation of the work with other works written by the same
author or any other criteria. Thus, various approaches appeared under the
heading of literary criticism. This is why, it is noted that in interpreting one
text or a piece of writing one may come up with different interpretations
depending on the position or the theory taken by the specialist. In addition,
it seems unfair to read one work of art in the same way when reading
another one because each literary work can be considered as a unique
experience. This may lead to defects in criticism because according to the
theory of literary criticism, each work of art should be viewed as being
different from other works. Therefore, literary criticism can not provide a
fixed framework to be dealt with in all the literary texts.
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them. In addition to that, using linguistic criticism would unify the
interpretations that are attributed to one text. Stylistics which is one of the
branches of linguistics focuses on the analysis of the most recurrent
linguistic features which seem to have a stylistic significance and tries to
find out what use is made of them , because it has the assumption that
stylistic choices reflect cognitive preferences. Therefore, with this new
trend of analysis, it leads one to question its position as regards literary
criticism whether it comes as an alternative or as a complementary.
In HD, Conrad has shown a great art in the use of language. It is a rich
language where one can easily remark the frequent occurrence of simile
through out the narration. What attracts one’s attention, is the writer’ use of
simile when describing nature. Nature comes to be considered as one of the
important themes in the novel.
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In analyzing similes from a literary angle, we saw that we get meanings
only without relying on evidence. This meaning can be more subjective
than objective.
At the same time, in trying to analyse simile using the linguistic theory
one sees its focus on the structure of the language rather than meaning.
Thus, we come up with the idea how Conrad made use of this linguistic
feature to reinforce his ideas in order to transmit his message. The linguistic
analysis of simile has only explained and provided evidence about the
writer’s implicit message through the use of language.
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It has provided an objective evaluation to the theme of nature. In this
way it is better understood and the message becomes clearer especially if
both results from the literary and the linguistic analyses are combined. In
addition, in considering the linguistic analysis, there was more light put on
the way the writer manipulated his language to achieve his artistic effect.
When comparing the results obtained from these two ways of analysis,
we come up with an important remark; when applying both of them in one
text, the image of the literary work will be in away more satisfactory. This
is due to the fact that one relies more on theme and the other relies more on
language structure. Although they do not operate on the same field, they are
complementary in certain respects. Adding linguistic criticism would enrich
the literary field and provide objective interpretations. We may represent
the relation between literary criticism and linguistic criticism as far as the
literary work is concerned in the following diagram:
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The relation between literary criticism and linguistic criticism
Literary criticism
This diagram shows the circular relationship between its three components.
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The use of nature in HD, has shown how Conrad is a great and a
successful writer. This means that every element the writer mentioned in
the novel is of an important value. Furthermore, the frequency of simile in
describing this theme has reflected the writer’s power in manipulating his
language to contribute in the building up of his narration.
At the end of this research, many questions come to one’s mind as far as
stylistics is concerned:
- How and where can the literary critic and the linguist meet to
cooperate in dealing with one literary text, especially when they are from
different parts in the world?.
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Index of authors:
Bateson. F. W, 17.
Clysenaar, 21.
Derrida, 17.
Enkvist, 24.
D. Hewitt, 65,66.
Newton, 18.
R. H. Robins, 20.
Additive, 35
Cohesion, 34.
Conjunction, 35
Enhancement, 31.
General stylistics, 23
Hypotaxis, 30
Parataxis, 30
Simile, 28
Index of literary terms
Feminist approach, 12
Historical approach, 10
Intertextual approach, 11
Literary criticism, 06
Modernism, 03.
New criticism, 12
New historicism, 15
Psychological approach, 12
Rhetorical approach, 14
Structuralist approach, 13