Las G9
Las G9
Department of Education
Region V-Bicol
Schools Division of Masbate Province
I. LEARNING SKILLS
A. Most Essential Learning Competency
Judge the relevance and worth of ideas, soundness of author’s reasoning, and the
effectiveness of the presentation.
B. Objectives
Identify relevant and irrelevant ideas.
Rewrite paragraph applying the general mechanics in revision and logical
arrangement of ideas.
III. ACTIVITIES
A. Practice Tasks 1
TASK 1
Read and analyze the paragraph. On a separate sheet, identify the sentence that is
irrelevant to the given topic.
1. The longest-lived creature in the insect world is the queen termite (ant). She has been
known to live for over 50 years. During that time, the queen can lay over 30,000 eggs
each day. So, in her 50 years of life, it is possible for her to give birth to half a billion
children. Some termite hills can be over six meters high.
2. For many years, all books were written by hand. Since it took so long to write one book,
there were only a few of them. Most people could never own a book. Then sometime
between 1450 and 1460, Johannes Gutenberg got the idea of carving separate letters
and moving them to make new words. Gutenberg died at the age of 68. This was the
invention of moveable type. From then on, the numbers of books printed grew quickly.
3. The solar system is believed to have formed, perhaps 5 billion years ago, from a
spinning cloud of gas called a nebula. As this nebula contracted it began to spin faster
and faster. Probably it spun off rings of planetary matter as it became more disk-like.
These rings later contracted into planets. Earth is the third planet from the Sun.
4. Some people do not know that the whale is a mammal just like a human.
Humpback whales will sometimes leap clear up out of the water, an act known as
breaching. A humpback whale can weigh thirty tons and measure 15 meters in length.
So, it takes an enormous amount of energy for a whale to breach.
5. The largest organ in the human body is the skin. One of the skin's functions is to help
regulate the amount of body heat that flows in and out of the body. Heavy smoking ages
skin very quickly. When it is cold, we cover the skin with extra layers of clothing to
slow down the outward flow of heat. When it is hot, evaporation of sweat cools us
down.
TASK 2
Read and analyze the paragraphs below. Applying the general mechanics in
revision and logical arrangement of ideas, find the words or phrases that make
the paragraph incorrect, then rewrite them to have an effective composition.
Use a separate sheet of paper for your answers.
1. The Daragang Magayon Festival was a month-long annual festival celebrating Mt.
Mayon. It was held in April. In the entire province of Albay with most of the activities
held in Legazpi City. The Fistival features agricultural products Display and trade fairs,
culinary shows, cultural events, street parades, photo/arts exhibits and sports events.
TASK 3
On a separate sheet, arrange and rewrite the sentences to form a well-developed
paragraph applying the pointers in logical arrangement of ideas.
Of all the different types, black teas usually contain the most caffeine.
There are many different varieties of tea.
So, if you’re drinking tea late at night, you might want to choose the red or herbal
tea instead of black tea if you don’t want to be kept awake by caffeine.
Teas can be grouped into a few major categories: black, green, white red and
herbal teas.
On the other hand, red teas and herbal teas can be almost entirely caffeine-free.
IV. ASSESSMENT
Below is a paragraph with errors in spelling, punctuation, capitalization, or grammar.
Rewrite the paragraph applying the general mechanics in revision and logical
arrangement of ideas. Use separate sheet of paper for your answers.
At the start of school Dora was afrid of her new Teacher. Mrs. Davis seamed nice, but she had
so many rules for the class to follow. She scare someone to pieces. As the school year continued, Dora
begun to understan how the Teacher come up with the rules The rules were their so students would be
respecful of theyselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora though Mrs. Davis was the best
Teacher she evere had!
V. REFERENCE
MELC 1, Quarter 4
Prepared by:
MYRA R. BARTOLATA
T-III/English Teacher
Checked/Reviewed by:
MYRA R. BARTOLATA
English Coordinator
Approved by:
ANSWER KEY:
Task 1
1. Some termite hills can be over six meters high.
2. Gutenberg died at the age of 68.
3. Earth is the third planet from the Sun.
4. Some people do not know that the whale is a mammal just like a human.
5. Heavy smoking ages skin very quickly.
Task 2 1.
1. The Daragang Magayon Festival was a month-long annual festival celebrating Mt. Mayon. It was held
in April __. in the entire province of Albay with most of the activities held in Legazpi City. The Fistival
features agricultural products Display and trade fairs, culinary shows, cultural events, street parades,
photo/arts exhibits and sports events.
The Daragang Magayon Festival is a month-long annual festival celebrating Mt. Mayon. It is held in
April in the entire province of Albay with most of the activities held in Legazpi City. The festival features
agricultural products display and trade fairs, culinary shows, cultural events, street parades, photo/arts
exhibits and sports events.
2. Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata are an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks or in
the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can
(the ‘’It”) while the others stayed behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The Objective of the Game
is for the players to hitted and knocked down the milk can with the pamato, and for its to be put
back inside a small circle a few meters away from the toe line. When a player Was tagged while
recovering their pamato, they become the “it”.
Tumbang Preso or Tumba Lata is an indigenous game. It is usually played in backyards, parks or in
the streets where there is little vehicular traffic. It is a game wherein one player guards the milk can (the
‘’It”) while the other stay behind the toe-line with their pamatos. The objective of the game is for the players
to hit and knock down the milk can with the pamato, and for it to be put back inside a small circle a few
meters away from the toe line. When a player is tagged while recovering their pamato, they become the “it”.
Task 3:
There are many different varieties of tea. Teas can be grouped into a few major categories: black,
green, white red and herbal teas. Of all the different types, black teas usually contain the most caffeine. On
the other hand, red teas and herbal teas can be almost entirely caffeine-free. So, if you’re drinking tea late at
night, you might want to choose the red or herbal tea instead of black tea if you don’t want to be kept
awake by caffeine.
ANECDOTAL RECORD
SY: 2022-2023
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