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Basic tips:
1) Try to write 4 paragraphs. An introduction, advantages,
disadvantages, and a conclusion.
2) Try to point out an equal number of advantages and disadvantages.
3) Link sentences with linking words (In the first place, …. - To begin
with, … - In addition, ….. - What is more, … - Furthermore, … –
Then, there is …. – Finally, …. – Last but not least, …)
4) Use indentation (Leave a space in the beginning of each paragraph)
5) You can use contrasting expressions to compare one point to
another like:
Although / In spite of the fact that / While “It is expensive” , “it is
very low in quality”
Or
“It is very expensive”. However / Nevertheless / On the other hand
/ In spite of this, “it is very low in quality”
Examples:
A. Keeping animals in zoos
B. Owning a television
Many people like watching television and spend hours sitting
watching that small screen. However this has both advantages and
disadvantages.
C. Studying abroad
When you want to be different in your family you should do
something different also. So when you also want to be the best one of
them you should look after your study.
One of the most important things that you must take care of is your
future. So you should try to build a good one by studying in good places.
I hope that my brothers and I study in the best places. People always
think that studying abroad is a good way to start our lives. However, it
has some advantages and disadvantages.
Let’s look at the dark side first. When you are in a different
country you might be affected by the culture there. Also, you will find
yourself in a place that you can’t get along with at first. This means that
you will have to hold a lot of responsibilities. Furthermore, you will be
far away from your family and you will feel lonely.
F. Owning a car
Every family has one or two cars or two nowadays. But, owning a
car has both advantages and disadvantages.
On the other hand, having a big family has its disadvantages. In the
first place, it may be difficult for the parents to control them and provide
them with sufficient food, clothing and education expenses. Moreover,
they won’t be able to go out a lot, because it will cost too much. For
instance, if you decided to go to the cinema, it will cost at least BD 2 for
each one. Added to that, having a big family means a lot of fighting.
Everyone wants to watch a different program and eat a different meal
…etc. That means their needs will increase.
Basic tips:
1) Start a new section for each topic.
2) Start the section by writing its’ heading underlined
3) Write in a formal style.
4) Use connecting words (Therefore – so – because – although –
however – in spite of – nevertheless – despite – as – but – beside –
apart from)
5) Write both positive and negative sides.
6) Use the present simple form (They are – it is ……etc.)
Examples
A. (By Ali Shubbar)
REPORT
To: Mr. Gary Rees
From: Ali Shubbar
Subject: Cape Side High School
I visited Cape side high School and was quite impressed by the school
and by the environment.
Staff: Those we met seemed very friendly and efficient. All are well
qualified, and the examination results are semi-excellent.
Environment: This is a busy housing and school area, but with the
policemen everything is going just the way it should be to stop the crowd.
Report
To: Mrs. Money
From: Anna Springfield
Subject: Hot Dollar Country Club
I visited the Hot Dollar country club last might and was quite impressed
by what I saw, although with certain reservations.
The building: This is a large country house with tasteful decorations and
fittings. Downstairs, there is a large lounge with an open log fire, a café,
restaurant and games room. Upstairs, there are bedrooms and a well
stocked library.
The restaurant: The food is of a high standard although prices are very
high. The choice of vegetarian dishes is rather limited.
The café and the games room: Excellent, the music in the café is varied
up-to-date. As for the staff, they are patient and efficient.
The gardens: I found the lawns and gardens beautiful. Some of the paths
are rather steep, however, especially for older club members.
Nov 2, 2002
Dear Sir/Madam,
I saw your advertisement in the paper and am very interested in
helping for the camps.
I’m a student and like to have fun. I enjoy being with young
people. Working with you would be an ideal chance (opportunity) to
spend some time outdoors (abroad).
I’m 16 years old and very fit. Although I’ve never helped in
camping before, I have helped in a Fête and I’m used to working hard. I
can organize sports and entertainments.
Could you please let me know how many hours I’m going to work
and how modest the accommodation is? I would also like to know what
kind of sports I’m going to organize, and if it is necessary to know how to
cook.
Here I enclose a photo as requested. My last employer will be
happy to write me a reference if you so wish.
I look forward to hearing from you.
SONY, Ashraf
P.O. Box ….
Manama,
Bahrain
Ali Shubbar
ZARA,
Seef Mall,
Seef,
Bahrain
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m writing to ask if anybody has handed in a car key, which I think I lost
in your store last Wednesday evening. I put it on the cashier counter to
pay the money, and then probably left it there.
It is a BMW car key, with a rectangle shape and the BMW’s slogan. I am
desperate to find it because I can’t start my car without it, and it is the
only spare one with remote control.
Please could you let me know if anybody has handed in a car key of this
description, and if it would be possible to call me on 222222 so I can
come and pick it up.
Yours faithfully,
Ali Shubbar
Tenses Used:
Past continuous( was …ing): to describe what was happening at the
same time as the main event began.
Past Perfect (had done / had been doing): to show one action was
finished before another began.
Past Simple: to describe what happened after the main event began OR
to list a sequence of separate events.
Examples:
a. Frightening story (From Noor Altawheed)
Last night while I was sleeping in my room, all my family was
sleeping also, and the house was quiet. Suddenly, I woke up when I heard
a loud noise coming from the kitchen.
After minutes, my mother woke up and asked what was going on.
When she knew that he was just my brother, she became extremely angry
and punished him.
Examples:
Preparations being a few days earlier, new clothes are bought and special
Arabic coffee is prepared. Delicious traditional sweets such as halwa and
rahash are bought. Streets are decorated with beautiful and shining lights.
Eid-ul-Adha is surely one of the most enjoyable festivals of the year and
everybody, especially the children, looks forward to its return.
Preparations begin weeks before hand. The streets are decorated with
multi color lamps, big colorful posters with the pictures of H.M. The
King. Costumes and masks are carefully designed and vehicles are
decorated with Bahrain’s flags. Flags and streamers are hung and placed
all over Bahrain. Buildings are decorated. Drum bands rehearse. Students
at school rehearse as well for the big day.
The event lasts for 2 days and is a glorious feast of music and color. The
procession of the day followed by dancers and bands in original Arab
costumes parades, and the spectators’ cheers fill the cold air. At night,
people rush to Isa Town stadium to watch the firework displays. They are
watched in many areas, too. They add to the beauty of the celebration.
Several channels transmit the celebration live to enable people at home to
watch the festival as well.
The celebrations last for three days. It is a wonderful feast of joy and
happiness. On the first day H.H the emir addresses the nation. Later on,
many people head for the emirs palace to congratulate him on this
occasion.
In the afternoon people start gathering near the nation stadium in Isa town
On the second and third day the celebration continues. There are
fireworks and traditional singing and dancing. Thousand of people take
part in the celebration – Bahraini’s and none Bahraini’s – the whole
festival is a carefree holiday. And a great time to remember.
Every year my family and I watch this festival. We always have a great
time. The national day is the happiest time in Bahrain
Preparations for the wedding start well beforehand. Relatives and friends
of the couple take part in the preparations. If the wedding party is held in
the groom’s house, the house is decorated with colorful lights. Sometimes
a tent is put up near the house so that women can celebrate away from
men. A special meal is prepared for the guests. Sometimes wedding
parties are held in hotels, matams or special halls. Generally a lot of
preparations are made before the wedding.
On the wedding day the guests don’t arrive before evenings. However,
the day starts early for the couple and their close friends. The bride either
goes to the hairdresser or summons a lady hairdresser to come to her. Her
best friends help her to get dressed and get ready for the wedding. The
bright groom does the same. He has to wear a special cloak called
“Beshet”. He goes to the place where the wedding is to be held early and
waits for the guests to arrive. Guests congratulate the groom and his
family then they are invited to have a meal. There are no dancing or
singing in the groom’s party. However women and girls sing to the bride
and may even dance. The atmosphere in the party is that of happiness and
enjoyment.
In the end the bride goes to live with her groom in his place, with little of
tears because of leaving her family and home. However, with time she
gets on with this situation and both of them, the groom and the bride, go
on their honeymoon.
Preparations for the wedding usually take place two weeks beforehand.
The bridegrooms and the bride’s families decorate their houses and invite
relatives and friends to this special occasion. Relatives and friends of the
couple often take part in the preparations. Some take care of decorating
the place where the wedding will be held. Others prepare a special meal
on the wedding day. Sometimes, the meal is ordered from restaurants and
bakeries.
On the wedding day, the brides close friends help her get ready by putting
Henna and make up and wearing special wedding clothes for this special
occasion. Sometimes, a women hairdresser is called to help the bride with
make up. The same happens to the bridegroom. There are two separate
parties for men and women. The bridegroom puts on a traditional
((Bisht)) and receives the guests who come to congratulate him and his
family. The guests are offered sweets and coffee before they are invited
to have the meal. In the brides’ party, women and girls sing and dance to
the bride. However, men cannot see this because it is held in a closed
place or in a special tent.
When the party is over, the couples go to their new house or go to the
hotel. On the following day, special meal called ((Halwa)) is served in the
morning for the guests who come to congratulate the bridegroom, the
bride and their families. The honeymoon usually starts the next day.