A Story

My favourite story was Cinderella, it was the very first story
that I’ve heard and read since my childhood. The character that
I want to put in the Cinderella story is...
Prince Ivan Dellies, Prince of the kingdom of Menterona. Prince

Ivan was a son of commoners, his father was a Knight of the
kingdom and his mother was a mage of the kingdom. Their life
was full of happiness and memories, until one day it all
shattered into million pieces, a war had just begun his mother
and father prepared their swords, armor, robe, and wand.
“Mommy, Daddy what’s going on?” Ivan asked... His mother
answered “Sweety everything is fine, just stay here and never
ever leave, OK?” Ivan nodded, his mother and father went to
the battle field and that’s the last moment Ivan saw his
parents, Ivan was only 4 year old that day couldn’t understand
what’s going; what’s going to happen. July 14 th Ivan was
declared as the Crown Prince of Menterona. 10 years have pass
Ivan is now a strong, a great leader, smart, and of course
charming.
And that is just the beginning of the story, Cinderella.
Once upon a time, there was a kind girl named Cinderella. All of
the animals loved her, especially two mice named Gus and Jaq.
They’d do anything for the girl they called Cinderelly. Cinderella
lived with her stepmother and two stepsisters, Anastasia and
Drizella. They were mean to Cinderella, making her work all day
cleaning, sewing, and cooking. Cinderella’s stepmother, Lady
Tremaine, was cold, cruel, and jealous of Cinderella’s charm
and beauty. One day, a messenger arrived with a special
invitation. There was going to be a royal ball at the palace!
Everyone was invited--- including Cinderella.
Cinderella was very exited about the ball. In the attic, she
found a dress that belonged to her mother. It was a bit old-
fashioned, but Cinderella could make it beautiful. But her
stepmother didn’t want Cinderella to go to the ball. She wanted
the Prince to meet Anastasia and Drizella. Maybe he would
marry one of them.
Lady Tremaine kept Cinderella busy with chores that would
take her all night. While Cinderella was working, tbe mice and
birds fixed her dress. Working together, the animals turned a
simple dress into a fabulous gown. Cinderella was overjoyed
when she saw the dress. Now she could go to the ball. “Oh,
thank you so much!” Cinderella said to Gus, Jaq, and the birds.
When the stepsisters saw the dress, they flew into rage. They
ripped the dress and pulled off the beads. Lady Tremaine didn’t
stop them. Cinderella ran away to the garden to cry. Suddenly
her fairy godmother appeared. With a wave of her wand, she
turned a pumpkin into an elegant coach. Cinderella could go
now to the ball, but her dress was still ruined. “Bibbidi-bobbidi-
boo!” Said the fairy Godmother, waving her wand again.
Cinderella was now wearing a beautiful gown and sparkling
glass slippers. But all this came with a warning: When the clock
struck midnight, the spell would wear off. At the ball, Prince
Charming couldn’t take his eyes off Cinderella. Suddenly a
charming man arrived, it was Prince Ivan Dellies of Menterona!
All of the women couldn’t help but stare and fall to Prince Ivan,
including Cinderella. Cinderella felt something weird on her
stomach and couldn’t help but stare to Prince Ivan and blush,
suddenly their eyes met and look to each other and Prince Ivan
was mesmerised by Cinderella’s charm and beauty. Prince Ivan
walk slowly to greet Cinderella, before he can say something
the clock began to strike midnight, Cinderella excuse herself
and run as fast as she could Prince Ivan and Prince Charming
“Wait!” Prince Charming said. “I don’t even know your name!”
Prince Ivan said. As Cinderella fled, one of her glass slippers
came off. Prince Charming and Prince Ivan held the glass
slippers and wondered who might that beautiful lady be. One
morning the two Prince searched for that mysterious beautiful
lady and find nothing “There is only one house that we haven’t
go to” Prince Charming said. As they were riding the horse,
they talked to each other “Do you like that lady?” asked by
Prince Charming. Prince Ivan answered “Yes!, of course she is
the very first woman that I fell in love with.” “I see” Prince
Charming said with sadness. They have reached the house of
Lady Tremaine and the two girls are over the sun when they
saw that the two charming Prince are coming, Prince Ivan and
Prince Charming tried their best to make the glass slippers to fit
to Anastasia and Drizella but couldn’t, but then Cinderella
appeared and Lady Tremaine was shocked and too stunned to
speak. As Prince Ivan held Cinderella’s feet. . . And it fit! Prince
Ivan was overjoyed but Prince Charming was worried because
Cinderella can only choose one of them “Who are you going be
with, Cinderella?” Prince Charming asked. As Cinderella
thinking who to choose, she answered with a questionable and
shocking answer “Both of you.” The Princes was shocked to
hear the answer but also very happy to choose both of them, as
they walked into the door holding each others arms the two
girls were jealous and Lady Tremaine was furious. Cinderella
and the two Prince were soon married and lived happily ever
after.

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My favourite story was Cinderella, it was the very first story

Prince Ivan Dellies, Prince of the kingdom of Menterona. Prince

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