Task 1 cam 19 writing
The line chart illustrates the number of people who participated in multiple activities at a specific
Australian social center in Melbourne over a 20 year period.
Overall, it can be seen that the highest number was for those who prefer film club activities, whereas
the least one went for those who = represented those who enjoy performing musical performances.
Additionally, the figures for participating in amateur dramatics and table tennis activities were identical
and equal.
In 2002, focusing on the numbers of participants in film club and martial arts activities both of them
showed almost no change starting at approximately 65 and 35 respectively and finishing almost at the
same numbers.
Turning to musical performances and table tennis activities both of them witnessed upward trends. The
number of people who participated in musical was zero in 2000 and 2005, following this the number
increased significantly, reaching almost 18 in 2010, while table tennis started around 18, this figure rose
slightly in 2005n and remained the same in 2010(stagnant growth) , to surge and reach its peak around
55, this number was which account for 55 was doubled compared to its starting point. On the other
hand, the only downward trend went for those who took part in amateur dramatics, starting at about 28
and finishing at 8.
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Vocabulary 60/100 repeating words ------ redundant