Our Place Oa5 Digital Script
Our Place Oa5 Digital Script
By
TERRY GABBARD
For performance of any songs, music and recordings mentioned in this play which are
in copyright, the permission of the copyright owners must be obtained or other songs and
recordings in the public domain substituted.
©MMXV by
TERRY WAYNE GABBARD
ISBN: 978-1-61959-048-9
Original Cast:
JAKE...................................................................Parker Stone
HOLLY.......................................................... Maddie Coggin
ANNE............................................................ Devon Mandell
LYLE....................................................................James Clark
BETH............................................................. Kayla Rutledge
JONATHAN......................................................Clay Harrison
AL................................................................... Will Strickland
BRENDA.............................................................Haley Stone
NICKY.............................................................Jared DeChant
SHERRY....................................................... Alex Woodcook
COREY..............................................................Devon Bucey
LIBERTY............................................Mary Grace McKusick
STANLEY....................................................... Jacob Bollacke
SIDNEY............................................................Jamie Roberts
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CHARACTERS
(7m., 7w. Roles can be doubled.)
JAKE: 17 years old.
HOLLY: 17 years old.
ANNE: 17 years old.
LYLE: 17 years old.
BETH: 52 years old.
JONATHAN: 80 years old.
AL: 40s.
BRENDA: 40s.
NICKY: 13 years old.
SHERRY: 8 years old.
COREY: 20 years old.
LIBERTY: 20 years old.
STANLEY: 16 years old.
SIDNEY: 6 years old.
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SCENES
Our Place is written in five scenes and an epilogue. All of the
scenes take place on a wooden dock that extends out onto a lake.
Our Place:
Jake, Holly, Lyle and Anne
Famtime:
Al and Brenda
Nicky
Sherry
Tuna Fish:
Liberty and Corey
Epilogue:
Entire cast
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AT RISE: There is a dock. The dock starts UC and extends
downstage forming a T shape. There is one bench on the R
side of the dock and a ladder on the downstage side leading
to the water. There is an old canoe on the L side of the dock.
It is nighttime. Other than the song of crickets and frogs, it
is very still and quiet.
Our Place
(After a moment, the stillness is broken by JAKE and HOL-
LY entering. They are a young couple on a date. JAKE is
leading HOLLY, who seems nervous and excited. She stum-
bles a few times as they make their way to the end of the
dock. JAKE is carrying a backpack.)
JAKE. Woah there, watch your step. This is it. Nice, right?
HOLLY. Yeah it’s nice.
JAKE. No one knows it’s here.
HOLLY. Really?
JAKE. As far as I know. I’ve never seen anyone else out here.
HOLLY. We aren’t trespassing?
JAKE. No, I heard an investor built it like 50 years ago when
they were going to develop all of this land. I guess they
never got around to developing it.
HOLLY. It’s nice. (She looks at him.) It’s in good shape.
JAKE. Well I repaired it.
HOLLY. Really?
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JAKE. Yeah. Well I come out here a lot. Swing the hammer
around. It’s no big deal. I love to fix things. It helps me
clear my head. I come here to think.
HOLLY. What about?
JAKE. Really? You care what I think about?
HOLLY. Yeah.
JAKE. You want to know what I think about when I’m out here?
HOLLY. Uh huh.
JAKE. Do you ever feel like no one gets what you’re about?
Like, no one can even really see you.
HOLLY. Yeah.
JAKE. Like, what we are all doing. What is the point?
HOLLY. Yeah.
JAKE. Like at school. Mr. Forrester … who needs it? You know?
HOLLY. Yeah.
JAKE. I don’t need that.
HOLLY. You don’t.
JAKE. I guess maybe I’m just lonely or something.
HOLLY. Really? Lonely?
JAKE. It’s hard. It’s like … is anyone out there for me?
Where’s my Romeo and Juliet?
HOLLY. Jake? I can be the one who gets what you are about.
JAKE. Really?
HOLLY. Yeah, like Mr. Forrester at school. You don’t need that.
JAKE. You do get me.
HOLLY. I do. I see you.
JAKE. You can see me?
HOLLY. I totally see you.
JAKE. I feel like this place … this old dock that I repaired
myself, is for us, you know … put here for us … for this
moment. This can be our place.
(They sit on the edge of the dock. JAKE pulls out a blanket
from his backpack.)
LYLE. Oh wow.
LYLE. Woah.
HOLLY. Yeah.
LYLE. Woah.
HOLLY. Yeah.
LYLE. This is a really nice place.
HOLLY. Yeah it is.
Daddy? Of course you do. You used to tell me this was our
place. (She casts. The lure doesn’t go far.) All right, don’t
laugh. It has been a while. I used to be really good at this.
Remember you used to pick a spot out there, a lily pad, a
stick, or a water bug or something and we took turns trying
to cast right to it. It’s all in the flick of the wrist, right Dad?
Do you remember the first time we came out here? It was
a disaster. I went to cast and hooked my leg. It hurt like
crazy. I tore my favorite stockings too. You had to bribe
me with a Barbie just to get me to come back here. Brib-
ery, the best way to a little girl’s heart. After that second
trip, coming here with you to our place became the bribe.
We’d get here early, fish all morning and swim all after-
noon. We’d always eat turkey sandwiches and Lays potato
chips for lunch and you let me drink Coke right out of the
glass bottles. Mom never let me drink Coke. On the way
home, we’d always stop and get ice cream for dinner. That
ice cream place is still open I think. Remember the one we
used to always go to? We can stop by there if you promise
to eat something. I won’t tell Nurse Jill. Oh, Dad look. Do
you see that? Oh he is beautiful. Is that an egret or a heron?
You were always so good with birds. How many people
these days know the names of all the birds on the lake? (She
casts again. The lure again doesn’t go far. She tries again
and fails.) What am I doing wrong? Well? Don’t just sit
there. Show me? I know you can get up. Jill said you were
walking around last week. She found you at the end of the
hall on the fourth floor. She said you were trying to pick me
up from preschool.
BETH (cont’d). Don’t give me that look. She also says she
hears you talking in your sleep. She says you call out some-
times. What are you dreaming about? Come on, Daddy, it’s
me. Elizabeth. I’m right here. This is our place. We spent so
many summer days out here. You taught me to swim in this
lake. You made me leap off this dock. You would wait right
out here in the water and say, “Here, fishy, fishy.” I would
shout, “Geronimo.” Where are you? (She is now more de-
termined and pulls out some photographs she had stored in
the tackle box.) Your name is Jonathan Baker. You were a
firefighter for 42 years. You were the captain of Ladder 53.
The guys threw you the biggest retirement party. Bobby
from the station came by last week to say hello. You were
married to Gene Baker. You built the house that the two
of you lived in for 47 years. She died six years ago right
before you started getting sick.
Famtime
(It is now the middle of the day. The sun is bright, it is hot,
and the mosquitos are swarming. AL and BRENDA enter
with their children, NICKY and SHERRY. AL is carrying
life vests and paddles and is very enthusiastic. BRENDA is
trying to be supportive of AL’s attempt at family bonding.
NICKY is an angry teenager. SHERRY is a dark little girl.)
(AL hands out the life vests, which are old, mildewed and
too small.)
AL. Hey champ. Let’s cheer up, buttercup. Turn that frown
upside down. Come on! This is going to be fun! Think of
all the cool wildlife we might see and we can sing some
songs and stuff.
NICKY. Songs?
BRENDA. Al, I think this life vest is suffocating me.
AL. No problemo. I will loosen it for you.
AL (cont’d). Better?
BRENDA. No
AL. Great. I think maybe we should stretch.
NICKY. Stretch?
AL. Get limbered up so we can paddle. We had a long car
ride. Let’s do it.
Tuna Fish
(It is a pleasant afternoon. COREY and LIBERTY are sit-
ting down having a picnic. LIBERTY is off somewhere else.)
LIBERTY. No, I like it, but maybe in the future I will hate it.
I may even develop an allergic reaction to the fish or the
mayo. Sometimes people, without any warning, develop
food allergies they’ve never had before. It’s weird to think
that this tuna fish could actually kill me one day.
COREY. But, maybe you will like it even better.
LIBERTY. What do you mean?
COREY. Maybe in the future you will like the thing you like
now even more.
LIBERTY. Maybe.
(Beat.)
COREY. Or someone?
LIBERTY. Or someone … more.
COREY. What if after all this soul searching, after trying So-
malian food and Korean food and whatever else you decide
you need to taste, what if you decide that what you really
like the best, the thing that fills you up is … me?
LIBERTY. If that’s the case, then hopefully it won’t be too late.
COREY. It will be.
(STANLEY jumps in the water and pulls her back onto the
dock. Both are soaked.)
Epilogue
(Music plays under the dialogue. STANLEY and BETH
stand C on the dock, and the rest of the ensemble surrounds
them. BETH is holding the fishing rod.)
SHERRY & NICKY. Where you try a little bit harder to connect.
ANNE. Where the air feels just right.
JAKE. The isolated places.
ALL. That no one else knows about.
BETH. It is those places that get the most traffic.
HOLLY. In those places … you can feel it.
ANNE. From those who have staked their claim.
SHERRY. Their memories coalesce here, become concentrat-
ed here.
NICKY. Memories becoming part of this place. Part of …
ALL. Our place.
BRENDA. Saturated into the soil …
AL. Infused into the water …
BETH. These memories are a part of the wind …
LYLE. Leaping through the sky …
COREY. Memories, and hopes, and dreams …
BRENDA. Seeping into the wood of an old dock …
LIBERTY. Clinging to its rusty nails …
ALL. This our place.
HOLLY. Where our hearts are.
COREY. Where we learn to live …
SHERRY & NICKY. Learn to laugh …
ALL. And sometimes, our place …
STANLEY & BETH. Is where we learn to say goodbye.
The End.