HKII The Summary Page 155
HKII The Summary Page 155
HKII The Summary Page 155
According to Mina Alonso, the author of the magazine article “From Student to
Employee: A Difficult Transition," purpose of writing (thíu cái này)
In the magazine article “From Student to Employee: A Difficult Transition", the
author Mina Alonso analyzed problems that newly graduates tend to have when
transiting into real-life work environment and suggest ways to deal with them.
Many graduates are unprepared for the challenges of the modern workplace. They find
it hard to adjust to life on the job (thesis statement) and beyond the classroom. The
author also (cũng-phải đc nhắc đến phía trc) discusses how this issue arises from the
distinctions between school experiences and life in the workplace. First, ambiguity is a
problem* for the majority of them. Alonso indicates that adjusting to ambiguity is
the first challenge that college students must overcome
Ambiguity is the frist challenge* that most of the fresh graduates have to
overcome because modern work life demands constant flexibility and
adaptability in response to continuing developments.
Second-> another, a significant number of graduates join the workforce without
analytical skills, making them unable to provide optimal solutions in their professional
roles.
Last, these new employees experience numerous difficulties dealing with problems due
to a lack of teamwork skills. In addition, Alonso emphasizes that personal achievement
is dependent not only on individual efforts but also on collaborative team performance.
These new employees often lack teamwork skills(LACK danh từ thì thêm OF,
động từ thì KO DÙNG), causing them difficulties in problem solving. Alonso
emphasizes that personal achievement is dependent not only on individual efforts
but also on collaborative team performance.
In conclusion (Này là dùng trong đoạn văn của mình nè)-> In THE conclusion (này là
dùng để nói lại kết trong bài của tác giả mới đúng), the author suggests ways of solving
these problems in order to lessen the stress of transitioning from education to the
careeducatio.....(solutions). By addressing these obstacles, graduates can better negotiate
meet/satisfy/fulfil the demands of the modern workplace, resulting in a more seamless
and effective transfer.
The purpose for writing is absent (thêm mục đích viết của tác giả)
In the magazine article “From Student to Employee: A Difficult Transition”, the
author Mina Alonso analyzes problems that newly graduates tend to have when
transiting into real-life work environment and suggest ways to deal with them. Many
graduates are unprepared for the challenges of the modern workplace and find it hard to
adjust to career life. Ambiguity is the first challenge that most of the fresh graduates
have to overcome because modern work life demands constant flexibility and
adaptability in response to continuing developments. Plus, a significant number of
graduates join the workforce without analytical skills, making them unable to provide
optimal solutions in their professional roles. These new employees often lack teamwork
skills, causing them difficulties in problem solving. Alonso also emphasizes that
personal achievement is dependent not only on individual efforts but also on
collaborative team performance. In the conclusion, the author suggests ways of solving
these problems in order to lessen the stress of transitioning from education to the career
world……. (solutions). By addressing these obstacles, graduates can better meet the
demands of the modern workplace, resulting in a more seamless and effective transition.