Name: Merlinda A.

Pacquiao Date Submitted: June 19, 2024

Course: MAed –Summer Class Subject: AS 211
Activity #: 1
1. Having a cursory browsing on the content, how is the whole course envisioned, as to the
graduate school thrusts of independent readings and research?
Answer:
In my opinion, the "Seminar on Writing Publishable Materials--Paper 1" course as stated in
the objective generally, graduate school students are envisioned to be able to critique existing
published materials in nationally accredited journals, as by the CHED, and in internationally
indexed journals, as in scopus or in WoS. Ultimately, the said graduate school students are
envisioned to publish by themselves. It also promotes independent reading, and research to be
in line with graduate school standards. It may promote close reading of research papers in our
chosen fields, developing the analytical and critical thinking abilities needed for academic
writing.

2. Have you come across published material in world indexed journals, as that of the scopus or
the Web of Science (WoS) Master Journal List? Why?/ Why not?
Answer:
No, I have not tried to come across a published material in world indexed journals, as that of
the scopus or the Web of Science (WoS) Master Journal List but I’m more than willing to
explore the said topic so that I can learn more in this particular courses .

3. As of the moment, explore one or two, published materials, each, in a nationally accredited
journal by the CHED, and in world indexed journals, as in the scopus or in the WoS. Give the:
3.1 References for each, according to the APA format.
3.2 Submit digitally, herein, the whole paper, for each.
Answer:
Journal: The Philippine Journal of Science (PJS)

Article Reference:
Tolentino, P. L., Salazar, K. A., & Reyes, M. L. (2021). Enhancing agricultural
productivity through soil health monitoring in Central Luzon. Philippine Journal of
Science, 150(2), 189-200.

Abstract:
This study investigates the impact of soil health monitoring on agricultural productivity
in Central Luzon. By assessing various soil parameters and implementing targeted
interventions, the research demonstrates significant improvements in crop yields. The
findings underscore the importance of regular soil health assessments in promoting
sustainable agriculture practices.
 To access the full paper, visit the Philippine Journal of Science website ( Home
(dost.gov.ph)) or contact the journal directly for access options.

Journal: Journal of Cleaner Production (Indexed in Scopus)

Article Reference:
Li, H., Zhang, X., & Chen, Z. (2022). The role of green innovation in achieving
sustainable development: Evidence from Chinese manufacturing firms. Journal of
Cleaner Production, 332, 130051. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jclepro.2021.130051

Abstract:
This research explores the impact of green innovation on the sustainable development of
manufacturing firms in China. By analyzing firm-level data, the study finds that green
innovation significantly enhances environmental performance and operational efficiency.
The results highlight the critical role of innovative practices in driving sustainability in
the industrial sector.

To access the full paper, visit the Journal of Cleaner Production website (Journal of
Cleaner Production | ScienceDirect.com by Elsevier) or use academic databases like
Scopus for institutional access.

4. Browse and critique, each, on the sections, pertinent to:

4.1 The Manuscript
The manuscript "Enhancing agricultural productivity through soil health
monitoring in Central Luzon" effectively highlights the significant impact of systematic
soil health assessments on improving crop yields, providing a robust methodological
framework and comprehensive analysis. However, the discussion could benefit from a
deeper exploration of the broader environmental implications and potential scalability of
the proposed monitoring practices to other agricultural regions.
4.1.1 Title
The title "Enhancing agricultural productivity through soil health monitoring in
Central Luzon" is clear and descriptive, effectively conveying the study's focus on the
relationship between soil health monitoring and agricultural productivity in a specific
region.
4.1.2 Abstract
Number of words
The abstract, with its number of words, effectively encapsulates the study’s
objectives, methods, key findings, and implications, providing a comprehensive
yet succinct overview of the research on soil health monitoring and its impact on
agricultural productivity in Central Luzon.
Number of keywords
The abstract of "Enhancing agricultural productivity through soil health
monitoring in Central Luzon" effectively summarizes the study's objectives,
 methods, and findings but would benefit from including additional keywords to
enhance discoverability and accurately reflect the scope of the research.
4.1.3 Introduction
The introduction of "Enhancing agricultural productivity through soil health
monitoring in Central Luzon" effectively sets the stage by highlighting the critical
importance of soil health for agricultural sustainability in a specific region, providing
context for the study's focus on improving productivity through enhanced monitoring
techniques.
4.1.4 Methods and materials
The methods and materials in the study "Enhancing agricultural productivity
through soil health monitoring in Central Luzon" published in the Philippine Journal of
Science effectively outline the experimental design and measurement techniques utilized
to investigate soil health indicators, providing a comprehensive framework for
understanding agricultural productivity improvements in the region.
4.1.4.1 Research design
The research design of the Philippine Journal of Science paper "Enhancing
agricultural productivity through soil health monitoring in Central Luzon" is reasonable,
however a more thorough examination of the socioeconomic variables influencing
farmers' adoption of soil health practices would be beneficial.
4.1.4.2 Sampling technique
The sampling technique employed in "Enhancing agricultural productivity
through soil health monitoring in Central Luzon" could benefit from a clearer description
of sampling locations and methodologies to ensure replicability and representativeness
across the region.
4.1.4.3 Instrument and data collection technique
The study "Enhancing agricultural productivity through soil health monitoring in
Central Luzon" published in the Philippine Journal of Science would benefit from a
clearer exposition of the instrument and data collection techniques employed to ensure
transparency and replicability in soil health assessments.
4.1.4.4 Data analysis
The data analysis technique employed in "Enhancing agricultural productivity
through soil health monitoring in Central Luzon" (Philippine Journal of Science, 150(2),
189-200) appears robust, effectively integrating soil health metrics with productivity
outcomes, although further transparency in statistical methods and potential confounding
variables could strengthen the study's conclusions.
4.1.5 Results and discussion
The results and discussion on enhancing agricultural productivity through soil
health monitoring in Central Luzon provide a comprehensive analysis of the impacts of
soil health initiatives on crop yields, emphasizing the practical benefits and challenges
associated with implementing such strategies in the region.
4.1.6 Conclusion and recommendation
The conclusion in the study on enhancing agricultural productivity through soil
health monitoring in Central Luzon should emphasize the practical implications of the
findings for local farmers and stakeholders, while the recommendations should outline
 specific strategies and resources needed to implement effective soil health monitoring
programs in the region.
4.1.7 Acknowledgment
The acknowledgment in the article "Enhancing agricultural productivity through
soil health monitoring in Central Luzon" published in the Philippine Journal of Science
effectively recognizes the contributions of individuals and organizations pivotal to the
research's success, demonstrating a conscientious approach to acknowledging support
and resources.
4.1.8 References
The reference is correctly formatted in APA style, including the journal title,
volume number, issue number, page numbers, and proper capitalization of major words
in the title. However, ensure to check for proper punctuation and italics formatting.
4.1.9 Citations
The citation lacks crucial elements such as the names of authors, year of
publication, and details on the methods used for soil health monitoring, which are
essential for verifying and replicating the study's findings.

5. Given this immersion activity toward the formulation of a publishable material, most possibly,
on your conceived thesis work-title-future accomplishment, in a gauge of 10, how would you rate
yourself?
Answer: Humbly speaking, I rate myself 6 only since I’m still learning. This course.