IELTS Writing Task 2: genetic engineering essay

Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think

that it will improve people’s lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a
threat to life on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is true that genetic engineering is a key area of modern scientific research, with
broad implications for all human societies. While I accept that this field of technology
may have its dangers, I believe that the benefits of genetic engineering outweigh the
drawbacks.
The negative implications of genetic engineering are often discussed in terms of two
key areas, which are food production and the cloning of humans. Genetically
modified crops are already being grown, and people are concerned that they may
damage whole ecosystems as foods become resistant to diseases and natural
predators. But perhaps even more worrying is the possibility that humans could be
modified or cloned. Some people imagine a world in which cloned humans are used
to fight wars or to provide body part replacements. Although perhaps not a threat to
life on earth, the implications of such practices would be unprecedented.
A more optimistic prediction, and one that I favor, is that humans will find ways to
mitigate the risks and use genetic technologies in a responsible way. From the food
production perspective, genetic engineering could be the solution to famine in
developing countries, if, for instance, crops can be grown more reliably in harsh
conditions. From a medical perspective, scientists may use genetic engineering to
produce vaccines, to cure diseases, or to correct a genetic defect before a child is
born. If properly regulated, even cloning can be done in a way that improves lives.
For example, the cloning of individual organs, such as a heart or kidney, could be
permitted for transplant purposes.
In conclusion, I am convinced that genetic engineering will have a positive impact on
our lives, and that people's fears will be unwarranted.
(283 words, band 9)

IELTS Writing Task 2: 'help' essay

We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be
concerned with our own communities and countries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
to some extent I agree…..
Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as
there are problems in our own society. I disagree with this view because I believe
that we should try to help as many people as possible.
On the one hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbors and fellow
citizens. In most communities there are people who are impoverished or
disadvantaged in some way. It is possible to find homeless people, for example, in
even the wealthiest of cities, and for those who are concerned about this problem,
there are usually opportunities to volunteer time or give money to support these
people. In the UK, people can help in a variety of ways, from donating clothing to
serving free food in a soup kitchen. As the problems are on our doorstep, and there
are obvious ways to help, I can understand why some people feel that we should
prioritize local charity.

At the same time, I believe that we have an obligation to help those who live beyond
our national borders. In some countries the problems that people face are much
more serious than those in our own communities, and it is often even easier to help.
For example, when children are dying from curable diseases in African countries,
governments and individuals in richer countries can save lives simply by paying for
vaccines that already exist. A small donation to an international charity might have a
much greater impact than helping in our local area.
In spite of the above arguments…..
In conclusion, it is true that we cannot help everyone, but in my opinion national
boundaries should not stop us from helping those who are in need.
Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as
there are problems in our own society. I disagree with this view because I believe
that we should try to help as many people as possible.

(280 words, band 9)

IELTS Writing Task 2: 'small families' essay
Here's my band 9 sample answer for the task below. We'll analyse it next week.
In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family
units, rather than in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or
negative trend?
It is true that cities are seeing a rise in smaller families and one-person households,
while the extended family is becoming a rarity. In my opinion, this is a negative
development.
As families become smaller, the traditional family support network is disappearing,
and this can have a negative impact on children as they grow up. In a nuclear family
or single-parent household, childcare becomes an expensive and stressful part of
daily life. Without the help of grandparents or aunts and uncles, busy parents must
rely on babysitters, nannies and after-school clubs to take care of younger children,
while older children may be left alone after school and during holidays. The absence
of adult family members can mean that friends, television and the Internet become
the primary influences on children’s behaviour. It is no surprise that the decline of the
extended family has been linked to a rise in psychological and behavioural problems
amongst young people.
The trend towards people living alone is perhaps even more damaging because of
the psychological effects of reduced human interaction. Individuals who live on their
own have nobody to talk to in person, so they cannot share problems or discuss the
highs and lows of daily life. They forgot the constant stimulation and hustle and
bustle of a large family, and are left to their own devices for extended periods of time.
The lack of human contact in the home is necessarily replaced by passive
distractions, such as television, video games, online chat rooms or Internet surfing.
This type of existence is associated with boredom, loneliness, and feelings of
isolation or even alienation, all of which are factors that are known to increase the
risk of mental illness.

In conclusion, I believe that individuals thrive when they are part of larger family
groups, and so it is worrying that many people are choosing to live alone or in such
small family units.
IELTS Writing Task 2: 'choices' essay
Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent
do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is often said that modern life presents us with an overwhelming number of choices.
I completely agree with this, and I believe that the Internet and globalisation are the
two major factors involved.
It is undeniable that the Internet has led to a dramatic expansion in the number of
choices that are available to us. The number of online media options, for instance, is
now almost endless. There are countless websites offering entertainment, news,
videos, on-demand TV and music streaming, many of which are free. I would argue
that this abundance of media leads to confusion on the part of the average user, as
we have to make so many decisions about the content that we consume. A personal
example of this trend would be the fact that I had a choice of just four TV channels
when I was a child, whereas I now have access to thousands of films and series
through services like Netflix.
Alongside the influence of the Internet, globalisation is making the world smaller and
compounding this problem of too much choice. Cheap international flights have made
overseas travel possible for millions of people, but this also means that we are faced
with a world of options when deciding where to go on holiday or even where to live.
We no longer have the limited but simple travel choices of our grandparents’
generation. The same is true if we look at the increasing tendency for young people
to study abroad. While the opportunity for overseas study seems appealing, many
students are confused about where to go and which path to take.
In conclusion, we are faced with a huge number of options in most areas of life
nowadays, and this is often more bewildering than beneficial.
(293 words)
IELTS Writing Task 2: 'power of advertising' essay
Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of
advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that we are increasingly surrounded by advertising by companies that want
to sell us their products. To some extent I agree that advertising has an impact on
sales, but I would also argue that we do need most of the goods that we buy.
Advertisements can certainly tempt people to buy products that they might not
otherwise want. A good example could be the mobile phone. Every year people can
be seen queuing to buy the latest models, even when they already have a perfectly
good phone that does not need replacing. Perhaps it is the influence of marketing
that leads us to make these kinds of decisions; we want to stay up to date with the
latest fashions or own the newest high-status device. The high sales of the iPhone
seem to support this idea.
On the other hand, I believe that most people do not buy products because of the
advertising alone. There are other good reasons why we make these choices, and
there must be some kind of need before a person makes a purchase. New versions
of products almost always have improved features that buyers may want. A new car,
for example, may have greatly improved safety features, or it may be more
economical to run, or it may pollute less. A new phone may allow the user to
communicate more quickly or effectively, thus enhancing their quality of life.
In conclusion, while advertising obviously influences our buying behavior, I do not
agree that people make decisions that go against their real needs.
(261 words)
IELTS Writing Task 2: 'literature and history' essay
Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature and history of
their own country, rather than the literature and history of other countries. To what extent
do you agree or disagree?
People have different views about the teaching of national versus global literature and history
in schools. Personally, I support the idea that children should study first and foremost the
great books and historical events of their own countries.
There are several reasons why I believe that schools should focus on teaching national
literature and history. Firstly, children enjoy learning about where they live, and by studying
the ideas, culture and history of their own countries they begin to develop a sense of identity.
At the same time, this approach is appealing to parents, who studied the same books and
historical events and can therefore help their children with school work. English children, for
example, read Shakespeare and learn about the Battle of Hastings just as their parents did, and
there is educational continuity across the generations. Finally, an emphasis on national
literature and history gives educators a narrower teaching scope, making curriculum design an
easier task.
By contrast, the study of global events and foreign novels could cause unnecessary difficulty
and confusion for school pupils. For example, I do not see the point in presenting Russian or
Chinese history to a British child who has not yet studied the history of his or her own country
in detail. Surely the child would be more able to comprehend historical events that took place
in London than those that happened in Moscow or Beijing. Similarly, any exposure to
international literature is likely to require the teaching of a foreign language or the use of
translations. Young people at primary or secondary school age are simply not ready for such
complications.
In conclusion, I would argue that it is undesirable for schools to cover aspects of foreign
history and literature; they should ground their pupils in the local culture instead.
(297 words, band 9)
IELTS Writing Task 2: 'parenting course' essay
Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because
of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that
prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree
with this view?
It is true that parents shoulder a huge responsibility and that raising children is by no
means an easy task. However, I completely disagree with the idea that we should
therefore force all mothers and fathers to attend parenting courses.
In my opinion, the idea that all future parents should take a parenthood preparation
course is completely impractical. Many prospective parents have jobs and busy
schedules, and they may not be willing or able to attend regular parenting classes.
This raises the question of whether those who missed the classes, or perhaps
refused to attend, would be punished. I believe that it would be wrong to do this, and
it would therefore be impossible to enforce the idea of compulsory training for
parents. Besides, even if parents could be forced to attend, I doubt that people would
agree on what good parenting entails, and so it would be difficult to create a
parenting course to suit everyone.
As well as being impractical, I would argue that training courses for parents are
unnecessary. Mothers and fathers have been raising children without any formal help
or official interference for thousands of years. Parenting skills are learnt from family
members, friends, neighbours and the surrounding culture. Perhaps more
importantly, adults learn to be good parents by instinct, by trial and error, and by
getting to know their own children; for example, a good parent will try different
strategies when faced with a badly-behaved child, and will gradually develop an
understanding of what works to correct the behaviour. None of this requires the
intervention of a taught course.
In conclusion, while compulsory parenting lessons might seem like a good idea, I
believe that such a scheme would be unworkable and largely pointless.
(289 words, band 9)
IELTS Writing Task 2: 'dress code' essay
Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress,
because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern workplace, dress codes are changing as employers focus more on results than
on the rules that employees must follow. While I agree that the way people dress should be
seen as irrelevant in many work contexts, I believe that dress codes still exist for good reason
in certain professions.
On the one hand, many employers have stopped telling their staff how to dress, and I see this
as a positive trend. Some of the most successful companies in the world, including technology
giants like Google and Facebook, are famous for the relaxed office environments that they try
to create. Employees are encouraged to dress casually, and even the company executives and
leaders are rarely seen wearing anything other than T-shirts and jeans. However, while
managers and programmers are free to dress how they like, they are expected to produce work
of outstanding quality. It is clear from the performance and global dominance of such
companies that strict dress codes are completely unnecessary in the technology sector.
However, I would also argue that rules regarding employees' clothing are still relevant in
other work situations. We expect certain professionals, such as nurses, police officers and
airline pilots, to wear uniforms. These uniforms may have a practical or safety function, but
perhaps more importantly they identify the person’s position or role in society. Similarly, a
lawyer, politician or school principal may choose to wear formal clothing in order to portray
an image of authority, trustworthiness and diligence. I believe that most of us prefer to see
these professionals in smart, formal attire, even if it is not strictly necessary.
In conclusion, I support the trend towards relaxed dress codes for workers, but I do not see it
as applicable to all occupations or sectors of the economy.
(298 words, band 9)
IELTS Writing Task 2: recycling essay
Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They
say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a
legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of
their waste?
It is true that we do not recycle enough of our household waste. Although I accept
that new legislation to force people to recycle could help this situation, I do not agree
that a recycling law is the only measure that governments should take.
In my view, a new recycling law would be just one possible way to tackle the waste
problem. Governments could make it a legal obligation for householders to separate
all waste into different bins. There could be punishments for people who fail to
adhere to this law, ranging from a small fine to community service, or even perhaps
prison sentences for repeat offenders. These measures would act as a deterrent and
encourage people to obey the recycling law. As a result, the improved behaviour of
homeowners could lead to a clean, waste-free environment for everyone.
However, I believe that governments should do more than simply introduce a
recycling law. It might be more effective if politicians put education, rather than
punishment, at the centre of a recycling campaign. For example, children could be
taught about recycling in schools, and homeowners could be informed about the
environmental impact of household waste. Another tactic that governments could use
would be to create stricter regulations for the companies that produce the packaging
for household products. Finally, money could also be spent to improve recycling
facilities and systems, so that waste is processed more effectively, regardless of
whether or not people separate it correctly in the home.
In conclusion, perhaps we do need to make recycling a legal requirement, but this
would certainly not be the only way to encourage people to dispose of their waste
more responsibly.

(279 words, band 9)

IELTS Writing Task 2: CCTV essay
In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in
order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict
our individual freedom.
Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
It is true that video surveillance has become commonplace in many cities in recent
years. While I understand that critics may see this as an invasion of privacy, I believe
that the benefits do outweigh the drawbacks.
There are two main reasons why people might disapprove of the use of video
cameras in public places. The first objection is that these cameras invade our
privacy, in the sense that we are constantly being watched by the authorities or by
private security firms. Many people find this intrusive and feel that the recording of
their movements is a form of state control that curtails their individual freedom. The
second argument against the proliferation of CCTV cameras is that they are being
used as an alternative to police officers patrolling the streets. If this is indeed
happening, then it is unlikely that members of the public will feel safer.
In spite of the drawbacks mentioned above, I believe that the use of video cameras
to monitor public areas is a positive measure. The key objective of video surveillance
is to deter criminals and to prevent crime. For example, petty criminals like shoplifters
and pickpockets are less likely to operate in parts of cities where they know that they
are being watched. At the same time, when crimes are committed, the police can use
video evidence to catch and prosecute offenders. Therefore, in my view, video
cameras offer valuable support to police officers, and they make cities safer for
inhabitants, workers and visitors alike.
In conclusion, it seems to me that we gain more than we lose from the enhanced
security that CCTV cameras bring to our cities.
(275 words)
IELTS Writing Task 2: 'permissive parenting' answer
Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children
to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What
consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get
older?
It is true that some parents are overly permissive and tend to spoil their children. In
my opinion, this is not a good parenting style, and it can have a range of negative
long-term consequences.
If parents want to raise respectful and well-behaved children, I believe that a certain
amount of discipline is necessary. Having worked with children myself, I have learnt
that clear expectations and boundaries are necessary, and it is important to be able
to say ‘no’ to children when they misbehave or try to push against these boundaries.
This is the only way to help young people to regulate their desires and develop self-
control. In my view, parents who do the opposite and constantly give in to their
children’s demands, are actually doing more harm than good. They are failing their
children rather than being kind to them.
The children of indulgent or lenient parents are likely to grow up with several negative
personality traits. The first and most obvious danger is that these children will
become self-centred adults who show little consideration for the feelings or needs of
others. One consequence of such an attitude could be that these adults are unable to
work successfully in teams with other colleagues. A second negative trait in such
people could be impulsiveness. A person who has never lived with any boundaries is
likely to lack the patience to carefully consider options before making decisions. This
may lead, for example, to compulsive shopping, unwise financial decisions, or even
criminal activity.
In conclusion, parents should help their children to develop self-control and respect
for others, and I do not believe that the permissive parenting style supports this
objective.
(283 words, band 9)
IELTS Writing Task 2: 'homework' essay
Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers,
whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
People’s opinions differ as to whether or not school children should be given homework.
While there are some strong arguments against the setting of homework, I still believe that it
is a necessary aspect of education.
There are several reasons why people might argue that homework is an unnecessary burden
on children. Firstly, there is evidence to support the idea that homework does nothing to
improve educational outcomes. Countries such as Finland, where school children are not
given homework, regularly top international educational league tables and outperform nations
where setting homework is the norm. Secondly, many parents would agree that the school day
is already long enough, and leaves their children too tired to do further study when they return
home. Finally, it is recognised that play time is just as beneficial as study time from the
perspective of brain development.
In spite of the above arguments, I support the view that homework has an important role to
play in the schooling of children. The main benefit of homework is that it encourages
independent learning and problem solving, as children are challenged to work through tasks
alone and at their own pace. In doing so, students must apply the knowledge that they have
learnt in the classroom. For example, by doing mathematics exercises at home, students
consolidate their understanding of the concepts taught by their teacher at school. In my view,
it is important for children to develop an independent study habit because this prepares them
to work alone as adults.
In conclusion, homework certainly has its drawbacks, but I believe that the benefits outweigh
them in the long term.
(270 words, band 9)
IELTS Writing Task 2: 'positive or negative' essay
Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can
study online. Is this a positive or negative development?
It is true that online courses are becoming a common feature of university education.
Although there are some drawbacks of Internet-based learning, I would argue that
there are far more benefits.
The main drawback of the trend towards online university courses is that there is less
direct interaction. Students may not have the opportunity to engage face-to-face with
their teachers, and will instead have to rely on written forms of communication.
Similarly, students who study online do not come into direct contact with each other,
and this could have a negative impact on peer support, discussion and exchange of
ideas. For example, whereas students on traditional courses can attend seminars
and even discuss their subjects over coffee after lessons, online learners are
restricted to chatting through website forum areas. These learners may also lack the
motivation and element of competition that face-to-face group work brings.
Despite the negatives mentioned above, I believe that online university courses are a
positive development for various reasons. Firstly, they allow learners to study in a
flexible way, meaning that they can work whenever and wherever is convenient, and
they can cover the material at their own pace. Secondly, the cost of a university
education can be greatly reduced, while revenues for institutions may increase as
more students can be taught. Finally, online learning offers open access to anybody
who is willing to study, regardless of age, location, ability and background. For
example, my uncle, who is 65 years old, has recently enrolled on an online MBA
course in a different country, which would have been impossible in the days before
Internet-based education.
In conclusion, while I recognise the possible disadvantages of online learning, I
consider it to be a positive development overall.
IELTS Writing Task 2: 'traditions and technology' essay
It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops.
Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you
agree or disagree with this view?
Some people believe that technological developments lead to the loss of traditional
cultures. I partly agree with this assertion; while it may be true in the case of some
societies, others seem to be unaffected by technology and the modern world.
On the one hand, the advances in technology that have driven industrialisation in
developed countries have certainly contributed to the disappearance of traditional
ways of life. For example, in pre-industrial Britain, generations of families grew up in
the same small village communities. These communities had a strong sense of
identity, due to their shared customs and beliefs. However, developments in
transport, communications and manufacturing led to the dispersal of families and
village communities as people moved to the cities in search of work. Nowadays most
British villages are inhabited by commuters, many of whom do not know their closest
neighbours.
On the other hand, in some parts of the world traditional cultures still thrive. There
are tribes in the Amazon Rainforest, for example, that have been completely
untouched by the technological developments of the developed world. These tribal
communities continue to hunt and gather food from the forest, and traditional skills
are passed on to children by parents and elders. Other traditional cultures, such as
farming communities in parts of Africa, are embracing communications technologies.
Mobile phones give farmers access to information, from weather predictions to
market prices, which helps them to prosper and therefore supports their culture.
In conclusion, many traditional ways of life have been lost as a result of advances in
technology, but other traditional communities have survived and even flourished.
(266 words, band 9)
IELTS Writing Task 2: festivals essay
Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious
festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy
themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some people argue that we no longer remember the original meaning of festivals,
and that most of us treat them as opportunities to have fun. While I agree that
enjoyment seems to be the priority during festival times, I do not agree that people
have forgotten what these festivals mean.
On the one hand, religious and traditional festivals have certainly become times for
celebration. In the UK, Christmas is a good example of a festival period when people
are most concerned with shopping, giving and receiving presents, decorating their
homes and enjoying traditional meals with their families. Most people look forward to
Christmas as a holiday period, rather than a time to practise religion. Similar
behaviour can be seen during non-religious festivals, such as Bonfire Night. People
associate this occasion with making fires, watching firework displays, and perhaps
going to large events in local parks; in other words, enjoyment is people’s primary
goal.
However, I disagree with the idea that the underlying meaning of such festivals has
been forgotten. In UK primary schools, children learn in detail about the religious
reasons for celebrating Christmas, Easter and a variety of festivals in other religions.
For example, in late December, children sing Christmas songs which have a religious
content, and they may even perform nativity plays telling the story of Jesus’ birth.
Families also play a role in passing knowledge of religious festivals’ deeper
significance on to the next generation. The same is true for festivals that have a
historical background, such as Bonfire Night or Halloween, in the sense that people
generally learn the stories behind these occasions at an early age.
In conclusion, although people mainly want to enjoy themselves during festivals, I
believe that they are still aware of the reasons for these celebrations.
(296 words, band 9)
IELTS Writing Task 2: 'high salaries' essay
In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people
believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow
salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether governments should introduce a maximum wage.
While in some ways it may seem reasonable to allow people to earn as much as companies are
willing to pay, I personally believe that employee remuneration should be capped at a certain
level.
There are various reasons why it might be considered beneficial to allow people to be paid
extremely high salaries. If companies offer excellent pay packages, they can attract the most
talented people in their fields to work for them. For example, technology companies like
Google are able to employ the best programmers because of the huge sums that they are
willing to pay. Furthermore, these well-paid employees are likely to be highly motivated to
work hard and therefore drive their businesses successfully. In theory, this should result in a
thriving economy and increased tax revenues, which means that paying high salaries benefits
everyone.
However, I agree with those who argue that there should be a maximum wage. By introducing
a limit on earnings, the pay-gap between bosses and employees can be reduced. Currently, the
difference between normal and top salaries is huge, and this can demotivate workers who feel
that the situation is unfair. With lower executive salaries, it might become feasible to
introduce higher minimum wages, and everybody would be better off. One possible
consequence of greater equality could be that poverty and crime rates fall because the general
population will experience an improved standard of living.
In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be better, on balance, for governments to set a limit
on the wages of the highest earners in society.
(274 words, band 9)
IELTS Writing Task 2: climate change essay
Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a
way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Climate change represents a major threat to life on Earth, but some people argue
that we need to accept it rather than try to stop it. I completely disagree with this
opinion, because I believe that we still have time to tackle this issue and reduce the
human impact on the Earth's climate.
There are various measures that governments and individuals could take to prevent,
or at least mitigate, climate change. Governments could introduce laws to limit the
carbon dioxide emissions that lead to global warming. They could impose “green
taxes” on drivers, airline companies and other polluters, and they could invest in
renewable energy production from solar, wind or water power. As individuals, we
should also try to limit our contribution to climate change, by becoming more energy
efficient, by flying less, and by using bicycles and public transport. Furthermore, the
public can affect the actions of governments by voting for politicians who propose to
tackle climate change, rather than for those who would prefer to ignore it.
If instead of taking the above measures we simply try to live with climate change, I
believe that the consequences will be disastrous. To give just one example, I am not
optimistic that we would be able to cope with even a small rise in sea levels. Millions
of people would be displaced by flooding, particularly in countries that do not have
the means to safeguard low-lying areas. These people would lose their homes and
their jobs, and they would be forced to migrate to nearby cities or perhaps to other
countries. The potential for human suffering would be huge, and it is likely that we
would see outbreaks of disease and famine, as well as increased homelessness and
poverty.
In conclusion, it is clear to me that we must address the problem of climate change,
and I disagree with those who argue that we can find ways to live with it.
(322 words, band 9)
IELTS Writing Task 2: 'economic progress' essay
Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal.
Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally
important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about how governments should measure their countries’
progress. While economic progress is of course essential, I agree with those who
believe that other measures of progress are just as important.
There are three key reasons why economic growth is seen as a fundamental goal for
countries. Firstly, a healthy economy results in job creation, a high level of
employment, and better salaries for all citizens. Secondly, economic progress
ensures that more money is available for governments to spend on infrastructure and
public services. For example, a government with higher revenues can invest in the
country's transport network, its education system and its hospitals. Finally, a strong
economy can help a country’s standing on the global stage, in terms of its political
influence and trading power.
However, I would argue that various other forms of progress are just as significant as
the economic factors mentioned above. In particular, we should consider the area of
social justice, human rights, equality and democracy itself. For example, the
treatment of minority groups is often seen as a reflection of the moral standards and
level of development of a society. Perhaps another key consideration when judging
the progress of a modern country should be how well that country protects the
natural environment, and whether it is moving towards environmental sustainability.
Alternatively, the success of a nation could be measured by looking at the health,
well-being and happiness of its residents.
In conclusion, the economy is obviously a key marker of a country’s success, but
social, environmental and health criteria are equally significant.
(262 words, band 9)
IELTS Writing Task 2: 'business responsibilities' essay
Here's my full essay for the question below.
As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To
what extent do you agree or disagree?
Businesses have always sought to make a profit, but it is becoming increasingly
common to hear people talk about the social obligations that companies have. I
completely agree with the idea that businesses should do more for society than
simply make money.
On the one hand, I accept that businesses must make money in order to survive in a
competitive world. It seems logical that the priority of any company should be to
cover its running costs, such as employees’ wages and payments for buildings and
utilities. On top of these costs, companies also need to invest in improvements and
innovations if they wish to remain successful. If a company is unable to pay its bills or
meet the changing needs of customers, any concerns about social responsibilities
become irrelevant. In other words, a company can only make a positive contribution
to society if it is in good financial health.
On the other hand, companies should not be run with the sole aim of maximising
profit; they have a wider role to play in society. One social obligation that owners and
managers have is to treat their employees well, rather than exploiting them. For
example, they could pay a “living wage” to ensure that workers have a good quality of
life. I also like the idea that businesses could use a proportion of their profits to
support local charities, environmental projects or education initiatives. Finally, instead
of trying to minimise their tax payments by using accounting loopholes, I believe that
company bosses should be happy to contribute to society through the tax system.
In conclusion, I believe that companies should place as much importance on their
social responsibilities as they do on their financial objectives.
(285 words, band 9)
IELTS Writing Task 2: problem and solution essay
More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city
life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city.
How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Cities are often seen as places of opportunity, but there are also some major
drawbacks of living in a large metropolis. In my opinion, governments could do much
more to improve city life for the average inhabitant.
The main problem for anyone who hopes to migrate to a large city is that the cost of
living is likely to be much higher than it is in a small town or village. Inhabitants of
cities have to pay higher prices for housing, transport, and even food. Another issue
is that urban areas tend to suffer from social problems such as high crime and
poverty rates in comparison with rural areas. Furthermore, the air quality in cities is
often poor, due to pollution from traffic, and the streets and public transport systems
are usually overcrowded. As a result, city life can be unhealthy and stressful.
However, there are various steps that governments could take to tackle these
problems. Firstly, they could invest money in the building of affordable or social
housing to reduce the cost of living. Secondly, politicians have the power to ban
vehicles from city centres and promote the use of cleaner public transport, which
would help to reduce both air pollution and traffic congestion. In London, for example,
the introduction of a congestion charge for drivers has helped to curb the traffic
problem. A third option would be to develop provincial towns and rural areas, by
moving industry and jobs to those regions, in order to reduce the pressure on major
cities.
In conclusion, governments could certainly implement a range of measures to
enhance the quality of life for all city residents.
(273 words, band 9)
IELTS Writing Task 2: 'positive or negative' essay
In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays
than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone, particularly in
large cities in the developed world. In my opinion, this trend could have both positive
and negative consequences in equal measure.
The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and
broader economic reasons. On an individual level, people who choose to live alone
may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family
members. A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook,
clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills; an
increase in the number of such individuals can certainly be seen as a positive
development. From an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone will
result in greater demand for housing. This is likely to benefit the construction
industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on
homeowners to buy their products or services.
However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered
from the opposite angle. Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased
independence, people who live alone may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation
and worry. They miss out on the emotional support and daily conversation that family
or flatmates can provide, and they must bear the weight of all household bills and
responsibilities; in this sense, perhaps the trend towards living alone is a negative
one. Secondly, from the financial point of view, a rise in demand for housing is likely
to push up property prices and rents. While this may benefit some businesses, the
general population, including those who live alone, will be faced with rising living
costs.
In conclusion, the increase in one-person households will have both beneficial and
detrimental effects on individuals and on the economy.
(band 9)

IELTS Writing Task 2: 'university subjects' essay

Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like.
Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be
useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about how much choice students should have with
regard to what they can study at university. While some argue that it would be better
for students to be forced into certain key subject areas, I believe that everyone
should be able to study the course of their choice.
There are various reasons why people believe that universities should only offer
subjects that will be useful in the future. They may assert that university courses like
medicine, engineering and information technology are more likely to be beneficial
than certain art degrees. From a personal perspective, it can be argued that these
courses provide more job opportunities, career progression, better salaries, and
therefore an improved quality of life for students who take them. On the societal level,
by forcing people to choose particular university subjects, governments can ensure
that any knowledge and skill gaps in the economy are covered. Finally, a focus on
technology in higher education could lead to new inventions, economic growth, and
greater future prosperity.
In spite of these arguments, I believe that university students should be free to
choose their preferred areas of study. In my opinion, society will benefit more if our
students are passionate about what they are learning. Besides, nobody can really
predict which areas of knowledge will be most useful to society in the future, and it
may be that employers begin to value creative thinking skills above practical or
technical skills. If this were the case, perhaps we would need more students of art,
history and philosophy than of science or technology.
In conclusion, although it might seem sensible for universities to focus only on the
most useful subjects, I personally prefer the current system in which people have the
right to study whatever they like.
(297 words, band 9)

IELTS Writing Task 2: 'strong opinion' essay

Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that
these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that ex-prisoners can become normal, productive members of society. I completely
agree with the idea that allowing such people to speak to teenagers about their experiences is
the best way to discourage them from breaking the law.
In my opinion, teenagers are more likely to accept advice from someone who can speak from
experience. Reformed offenders can tell young people about how they became involved in
crime, the dangers of a criminal lifestyle, and what life in prison is really like. They can also
dispel any ideas that teenagers may have about criminals leading glamorous lives. While
adolescents are often indifferent to the guidance given by older people, I imagine that most of
them would be extremely keen to hear the stories of an ex-offender. The vivid and perhaps
shocking nature of these stories is likely to have a powerful impact.
The alternatives to using reformed criminals to educate teenagers about crime would be much
less effective. One option would be for police officers to visit schools and talk to young
people. This could be useful in terms of informing teens about what happens to lawbreakers
when they are caught, but young people are often reluctant to take advice from figures of
authority. A second option would be for school teachers to speak to their students about
crime, but I doubt that students would see teachers as credible sources of information about
this topic. Finally, educational films might be informative, but there would be no opportunity
for young people to interact and ask questions.
In conclusion, I fully support the view that people who have turned their lives around after
serving a prison sentence could help to deter teenagers from committing crimes.
(287 words, band 9)