Cambridge IGCSE™ (9–1)

FIRST LANGUAGE ARABIC 7184/02

Paper 2 Writing May/June 2023
MARK SCHEME
Maximum Mark: 50

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This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of the
examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not indicate the
details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners’ meeting before marking began, which would have
considered the acceptability of alternative answers.

Mark schemes should be read in conjunction with the question paper and the Principal Examiner Report for
Teachers.

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Cambridge International is publishing the mark schemes for the May/June 2023 series for most
Cambridge IGCSE, Cambridge International A and AS Level and Cambridge Pre-U components, and some
Cambridge O Level components.

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Generic Marking Principles

These general marking principles must be applied by all examiners when marking candidate answers.
They should be applied alongside the specific content of the mark scheme or generic level descriptors
for a question. Each question paper and mark scheme will also comply with these marking principles.

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 1:

Marks must be awarded in line with:

 the specific content of the mark scheme or the generic level descriptors for the question
 the specific skills defined in the mark scheme or in the generic level descriptors for the question
 the standard of response required by a candidate as exemplified by the standardisation scripts.

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 2:

Marks awarded are always whole marks (not half marks, or other fractions).

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 3:

Marks must be awarded positively:

 marks are awarded for correct/valid answers, as defined in the mark scheme. However, credit
is given for valid answers which go beyond the scope of the syllabus and mark scheme,
referring to your Team Leader as appropriate
 marks are awarded when candidates clearly demonstrate what they know and can do
 marks are not deducted for errors
 marks are not deducted for omissions
 answers should only be judged on the quality of spelling, punctuation and grammar when these
features are specifically assessed by the question as indicated by the mark scheme. The
meaning, however, should be unambiguous.

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 4:

Rules must be applied consistently, e.g. in situations where candidates have not followed
instructions or in the application of generic level descriptors.

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 5:

Marks should be awarded using the full range of marks defined in the mark scheme for the question
(however; the use of the full mark range may be limited according to the quality of the candidate
responses seen).

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 6:

Marks awarded are based solely on the requirements as defined in the mark scheme. Marks should
not be awarded with grade thresholds or grade descriptors in mind.

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1 General Marking Notes

1.1 Annotations in RM Assessor

Annotation Meaning

 Good content point.

? Unclear meaning or illegible

^ Omission

Highlight

CON Contradiction

DET Relevant detail

DEV Development

EVAL Evaluation

IL Inaccurate language

IR Irrelevant

L Good language

SEEN Use on all blank pages to show you have checked them for content.

X Incorrect point

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TABLE A – STYLE AND ACCURACY

Band 1 11–12  Fluent; variety of well-made sentences, including sophisticated complex

sentences where appropriate, used to achieve particular effects.
 Wide, consistently effective range of vocabulary with appropriately used
ambitious words.
 Assured use of grammar and punctuation, spelling accurate.

Band 2 9–10  Mostly fluent; sentences correctly constructed, including a variety of

complex sentences.
 Vocabulary often effective, sometimes complex, mostly varied.
 Grammatically correct; punctuation mostly correct between and within
sentences; very occasional spelling mistakes.

Band 3 7–8  Occasional fluency; sentences of some variety and complexity, correctly
constructed.
 Appropriate and accurate vocabulary with occasional examples of choice
made to communicate precise meaning or to give interest.
 Simple grammatical terms correct; sentence separation mostly correct but
other forms of punctuation sometimes inconsistently used; occasional
spelling mistakes – but no error of any sort impedes communication.

Band 4 5–6  Sentences tend to be simple and patterns repetitive. Where more
complicated structures are attempted there is lack of clarity and
inaccuracy.
 Vocabulary communicates general meaning accurately.
 Some errors of punctuation including sentence separation; several spelling
and grammatical errors, rarely serious.

Band 5 3–4  There may be the occasional grammatically complex sentence but mostly
these are simple and repetitively joined by ‘and’, ‘but’ and ‘so’, with other
conjunctions being used ineffectively, if at all.
 Vocabulary communicates simple details/facts accurately.
 Many errors of punctuation, grammar and spelling, but the overall meaning
is never in doubt.

Band 6 1–2  Sentences are simple and sometimes faulty and/or rambling sentences
obscure meaning.
 Vocabulary is limited and may be inaccurate.
 Errors of punctuation, grammar and spelling may be serious enough to
impede meaning.

0  Meaning of the writing is often lost because of poor control of language;

errors of punctuation, grammar and spelling too intrusive to award a mark
in Band 6.

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TABLE B1 – ARGUMENTATIVE/DISCURSIVE TASKS

Band 1 11–13  There is a consistent quality of well developed, logical stages in an overall,
at times complex argument.
 Each stage is linked to and follows the preceding one. Sentences within
paragraphs are soundly sequenced.

Band 2 9–10  Each stage of the argument is defined and developed, although the quality of
the explanation may not be consistent.
 The stages follow in a generally cohesive progression. Paragraphs are
mostly well sequenced, although some may finish less strongly than they
begin.

Band 3 7–8  There is a series of relevant points and a clear attempt is made to develop
some of them. These points are relevant, straightforward and
logical/coherent.
 Repetition is avoided, but the order of the stages in the overall argument
can be changed without adverse effect. The sequence of the sentences
within paragraphs is satisfactory, although opportunities to link ideas may
not be taken.

Band 4 5–6  Mainly relevant points are made and they are developed partially with
some effectiveness.
 The overall argument shows signs of structure but may be sounder at the
beginning than at the end. There may be some repetition. It is normally
possible to follow sequences of ideas, but there may be intrusive ideas or
misleading sentences.

Band 5 3–4  A few relevant points are made and although they are expanded into
paragraphs, development is very simple and not always logical.
 Overall structure lacks a sense of sequencing. Paragraphs used only for
obvious divisions. It is sometimes possible to follow sequencing of
sentences within paragraphs.

Band 6 1–2  A few points are discernible but any attempt to develop them is very
limited.
 Overall argument only progresses here and there and the sequence of
sentences is poor.

0  Rarely relevant, little material, and presented in a disorderly structure.

 Not sufficient to be placed in Band 6.

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TABLE B2 – DESCRIPTIVE TASKS

Band 1 11–13  There are many well defined, well developed ideas and images, describing
complex atmospheres with a range of details.
 Overall structure is provided through devices such as the movements of
the writer, the creation of a short time span, or the creation of atmosphere or
tension. Focus is description (not storytelling). Repetition is avoided and
the sequence of sentences makes the picture clear to the reader.

Band 2 9–10  There is a good selection of interesting ideas and images, with a range of
details.
 These are formed into an overall picture of some clarity, largely consistent.
There may be occasional repetition and opportunities for development or
the provision of detail may be missed. Sentences are often well sequenced
and the description is often effective.

Band 3 7–8  There is a selection of effective ideas and images that are relevant to the
topic and which satisfactorily address the task. An attempt is made to
create atmosphere and to provide some details.
 The description provides a series of points rather than a sense of their
being combined to make an overall picture, but some of the ideas are
developed successfully, albeit straightforwardly. Some sentences are well
sequenced.

Band 4 5–6  Some relevant and effective ideas are provided and occasionally
developed a little, perhaps as a narrative. There is some feeling of
atmosphere, but most of the writing is about events or description of
objects or people.
 There is some overall structure, but the writing may lack direction and
intent. There may be interruptions in the sequence of sentences and/or
some lack of clarity.

Band 5 3–4  Content is relevant but lacking in scope or variety. Opportunities to provide
development and detail are frequently missed.
 Overall structure, though readily discernible, lacks form and dimension.
 The reliance on identifying events, objects and/or people sometimes leads to
a sequence of sentences without progression.

Band 6 1–2  Some relevant facts are identified, but the overall picture is unclear and
lacks development.
 There are examples of sequenced sentences, but there is also repetition
and muddled ordering.

0  Rarely relevant, little material and presented in a disorderly structure. Not

sufficient to be placed in Band 6.

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TABLE B3 – NARRATIVE TASKS

Band 1 11–13  The narrative is complex and sophisticated and may contain devices such as
sub-texts, flashbacks and time lapses. Cogent details are provided where
necessary or appropriate.
 The different sections of the story are carefully balanced and the climax
carefully managed. Sentence sequences are sometimes arranged to
produce effects such as the building up of tension or providing a sudden
turn of events.

Band 2 9–10  The writing develops some features that are of interest to a reader,
although not consistently so. Expect the use of detail and some build-up of
character or setting.
 The writing is orderly and the beginning and ending (where required) are
satisfactorily managed. The reader is aware of the climax even if it is not
managed completely effectively. The sequencing of sentences provides
clarity and engages the reader in events or atmosphere.

Band 3 7–8  A straightforward story (or part of story) with satisfactory identification of
features such as character and setting.
 While opportunities for appropriate development of ideas are sometimes
missed, the overall structure is competent, and features of a developed
narrative are evident. Sentences are usually sequenced to narrate events.

Band 4 5–6  A relevant response to the topic, but largely a series of events with
occasional details of character and setting.
 The overall structure is sound although there are examples where a
particular section is too long or too short. A climax is identified but is not
effectively described or led up to. Sentence sequences narrate events and
occasionally contain intrusive facts or misleading ideas.

Band 5 3–4  A simple narrative with a beginning, middle and end (where appropriate). It
may consist of simple, everyday happenings or unlikely, un-engaging
events.
 Unequal or inappropriate importance is given to the sections of the story.
Dialogue that has no function may be used or over-used. There is no real
climax. Sentence sequences are used only to link simple series of events.

Band 6 1–2  Stories are very simple and narrate events indiscriminately. Endings are
simple and lack effect.
 The shape of the narrative is unclear; some of the content has no
relevance to the plot. Sequences of sentences are sometimes poor,
leading to a lack of clarity.

0  Rarely relevant, little material, and presented in a disorderly structure.

 Not sufficient to be placed in Band 6.

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