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YOUR NOTES
Driverdodged road blocks. - /
Decided to observe more closely ifmy suspicions were justified,
Registration number read ADA 155 with part of one chipped off.
- Decided to inform police for investigation.
- Onleaving the Vanette looked to see Registration (Number) No,
- Vanette was packed outside Chiwempala Bar.
- _Driverhad large scar on his head and wearing large black jacket.
- Remembered last night's police message on the radio.
- Driver's front teeth rotten and mouth smel ling.
' - Offered lit in a blue Vanette on way to Kitwe.
S a justified because the driver connected wires to start vehicle. (ECZ
04)
Answer 1: Prose Without Sub-Headings
REPORT ON THE BLUE TOYOTA. VANETTE - REGISTRATION
NUMBER ADA 155 - REPORTED STOLEN BY POLICE ON 22ND
JANUARY, 2018
This morning, while waiting for a bus to Kitwe, I saw a blue
Toyota Vanette of registration number ADA 155 packed outside
Chiwempala Bar. The driver walked towards me and asked if I was
travelling to Kitwe, probably because he noticed that I was carrying 4
bag. I responded in the affirmative. He then offered me a lift. Since 1was
ina hurry, I entered the Vanette before I even accepted the offer.
Upon entering the Vanette, I noticed a couple of other
eres Mt took what felt like forever to start offin the midst of which
a wi a “ppearance of the driver was mysterious
wearing an coo é aghelto wicard or crooked witchdoctor. He w#
foreheud, proband inary big, black, jacket and had a large scar on his
activities. His — ly because of his over-indulgence in erimina’
Satis smelly mouth had rotten front teeth, which were not onl
repulsive but also indie ative f exposure to drug-a
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Suddenly, I remembered last night's police message over the radi
er the radio
about the stolen Toyota Vanette. My fears were justified when, i
ignition key to start the vehicle, the driver connected a : u
Realising that it was too late to get out, and not wanting to draw —— '
attention to myself, I decided to observe further the suspicious behaviour a
the woefully unkempt man at the steering wheel.
using the
While he fiddled with the wires, trying to persuade the engine to wake
up, the driver tried unsuccessfully to disguise the fact that he was stealing
nervous glances at us and the passers-by, most of whom were drunken
patrons. Several sparks and puffs ofsmoke later, the engine purred into life.
s rough and
causing a triumphant grin to break and spread on the man's
weather-beaten face.
When we finally starte
roadblock, claiming to be using
passengers seemed unbothered. At this point,
discomfort.
The driver's “shortcuts
eight and a half hours 0 arrive ir
public buses. When we arrived,
untoward had happened to me. Twante
was afraid that they could be accomplices. When the car i
I could not get out and walk away quickly enough. At the same time, 10
notto look too uneasy.
voided nearly every
d off, the driver a
the other
“shortcuts”. To my surprise,
Twas at the apex of my
ag but short. In fact, i 100k us
1 Kitwe, much longer than it takes the
7 was very relieved because nothing
ed to alert the other passengers butl
eventually St)
» were anythin
1 looked back verify its
marched the one
ber I’ had been
for further
Once I had reached a safe distance,
55, an iden
registration number. It read ADA 15
that was mentioned on radio last In, though th
obscured. It was at that point that 1 de ded to inform |
sity which
nun
he police.
investigation.
Marimba Simwansa ( Mr)
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