Levels of Stylistic Analysis
Levels of Stylistic Analysis
9.3.1.1 Alliteration
Into that silent sea. ( Samuel Taylor Coleridge , The Rime of the Ancient
Mariner)
9.3.1.2 Assonance
9.3.1.3 Consonance
Waited, sang, and vanishing, was still. (John Swan, In Her Song She Is
Alone)
9.3.1.4 Onomatopoeia
The first is by Tennyson to mime the noise made by the bees. The second
was used by Keats when he wrote of wine.
9.3.1.5 Rhyme
(13) For I have known them all already, known them all—
Here, afternoons and spoons not only rhyme with each other, but the two
words are logically relevant in that people spend their afternoons drinking
coffee, hence coffee spoons.
v / v/ v / v /
v v / vv/ v v / v v /
(16) There are man|y who say | that a dog | has his day. (Dylan
Thomas)
Dactyl or dactylic foot alternates one stressed syllable and two unstressed
syllables, beginning with a stressed syllable, e. g.
/ v v / v v / v v/
Star
If you are A love compassionate,You will walk with us this year,We face a
glacial distance, who are here
Huddled
At your feet
(W. S. Burford)
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fa
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s)
one
iness
(e. e. cummings)
A common view of style is that it concerns the careful choice of the right
word. As the famous British author Jonathan Swift ( 1667 — 1745 ) put it ,
“ proper words in proper places make the true definition of a style.” Toolan
(1996: 162) made a similar comment: word-choice (or lexis, or what used
to be called “ diction” is central to whatever is distinctive about a particular
literary text. Not for nothing did Coleridge talk about prose as words in their
best order and poetry as “the best words in the best order”. He then
reformulated this observation as “the best words in the best order relative to
particular purposes at a particular sociocultural moment”. In a sense, we may
say that the study of style is the study of the choice of words or expressions.
Many figures of speech are actually a matter of word choice. One example
is pun which is generally known as play on words for humorous effects. It
depends on the sameness or similarity of sound and a disparity of meaning and
in many cases it makes use of a homonym. The title of Hemmingway’s A
Farewell to Arms involves punning on the word arms , because it is a
homograph , meaning “ weapon ” or “ upper limbs of a person ” or
“ embrace ” . Other types of figure of speech like metaphor, metonymy and
synecdoche also involve word choice. As such figures of speech have more to
do with meaning , they are often treated at the semantic level of stylistic
analysis.
A lot of factors are involved in the choice of words. Choices can be made
among synonymous words, because synonyms are not always equivalent. They
usually differ in their fine shades of meaning within a general framework. They
may differ in emotional coloring. A small village is different from a little one in
that the former presents an objective description of the size of the village while
the latter contains an extra meaning of fondness. Synonyms may also differ in
degree of formality. Words derived from Old English are usually informal
whereas those of Greek , Latin , or French origins are formal. For example ,
you say rodent operative instead of rat catcher in a formal situation. A relevant
difference lies in length. Those informal words are mostly monosyllabic while
those formal ones are polysyllabic, including three or more syllables, e. g. ask/
interrogate. Then synonyms may differ in terms of reflected meaning, in which
case , people turn to euphemisms to avoid taboo meanings or undesirable
associations. For example , you say excrement to avoid a taboo word.
Synonyms may differ in emphasis, as when you answer right when you might
have said yes. Apart from differences between synonyms, words also differ in
terms of specificity of meaning. Choices can be made between words with
generic and specific meanings, or between hyponyms and superordinates. For
instance, you may refer to the same vehicle as a car or a Benz; the former is
more general and the latter, more specific.
(20) I was born in the year 1632, in the city of York, of a good family,
my father being a foreigner. (loose)
(22) Crafty men condemn studies, simple men admire them, and wise
men use them. (balanced)
( 23) Owing to the inability of the newly arrived student to make himself
understood in any language but his own , he decided not to venture far from
home during the first few days of his stay in the country. (mixed)
At the syntactic level , stylistic effects are not only achieved through the
choice of sentence types, but also through the use of sentence-related figures
of speech, or overregular patterns at the syntactic level.
9.3.5.1 Transference
(30) He has the microwave smile that warms another person without
heat.
(31) A policeman waved me out of the snake of traffic and flagged me out
to a stop.
9.3.5.2 Contradiction
(40) My only love sprung from my only hate. (Shakespeare, Romeo and
Juliet)
adj + adj: cold pleasant manner, poor rich guys adv+adj: dully bright,
mercifully fatal verb+adv: hasten slowly, shine darkly noun+noun: a love-
hate relationship
9.3.5.3 Deception
( 44 ) Belinda smiled , and all the world was gay. ( 45 ) For she was
beautiful—her beauty made
(48) The face wasn’t a bad one ; it had what they called charm.
(51) My daughter got a passing grade for History. But her score could be
better.
Irony is a figure of speech which takes the form of saying the contrary of
what one means, or saying one thing but meaning the opposite. For example:
(53) Blessed are the young, for they shall inherit the national debt.
replied that I was very well, and that I hoped that she was the same,with
such an indifferent grace that Miss Murdstone disposed of me in two words,
“ Wants manner!” ( Charles Dickens, David
Copperfield)
The study of language in use has been prosperous in the past four decades
or so , offering fresh insights into linguistic studies. Our pragmatic analysis
here is based on three important topics of pragmatics: speech act, turn-taking
and conversational implicature.
As has been mentioned in Chapter 6, the basic idea of Speech Act Theory
is that speech, or language use in general, is a way of doing things; that is,
to say something is to do something. As Searle (1969) puts it, the unit of
linguistic communication is not the symbol, word or sentence, but rather the
production of the symbol or word or sentence in the performance of the speech
act.
10) Richard How chance the prophet could not, at that time,Have
told me-I being by-that I should kill him?
20) Richard Because that like a jack thou keep’st the stroke Betwixt
thy begging and my mediation. I am not in the giving vein today.
9.3.6.2 Turn‐taking
● The way in which topics are introduced, maintained and changed: Topic
management is related to power distribution, as well as to attitudes,degrees
of involvement in the interaction, and so on.
Who responds? X
Who controls the conversation topic? X
Who is interrupted? X
Who uses terms of address not marked for
In this example, according to Leech and Short (2001: 297), when Nelly
Dean calls Heathcliff a “ human being ” she flouts the maxim of quantity by
stating what is self-evidently true and therefore redundant. The implicature is
that he deserves to be treated with the sympathy and consideration that human
beings usually afford to each other. Isabella flouts the maxim of quality by
uttering that Heathcliff is not a human being , and that he has torn out her
heart and killed it. The implicature is that she has been seriously ill-treated by
her husband and that her resentment towards him is really deep.
4. Name three major views on style and make a comment on each. 5. How
do you conduct stylistic analysis from a linguistic point of view ? 6. Discuss the
stylistic effects of phonological devices in the following:
a. I’m parked two blocks away in an illegal parking zone. (Clue: what is
parked?)
e. “How you shot the goat and frightened the tiger to death,” said Miss
Mebbin,with her disagreeably pleasant laugh.
f. It is a crime to stay inside on such a beautiful day. g. She cried her eyes out.
k. This hard-working boy seldom reads more than an hour per week. 8.
Comment on the following jokes according to your knowledge of style. 1) A:
You know what my father always calls me?
B: No. What?
B: Why’s that?
A. Where the wind blew free and there was nothing to break the light of the
sun,I was born. Where there were no enclosures and where everything drew a
free breath,I was born.
B. I was born where there were no enclosures and there was nothing to
break the light of the sun. I was born upon the prairie , where the wind blew
free and where everything drew a free breath.
C. I was born upon the prairie; I was born where the wind blew free; and I
was born where there was nothing to break the light of the sun. I was born where
there were no enclosures; and I was born where everything drew a free breath.
10. Analyze the stylistic effect of the four lines of Tennyson ’ s The Brook
from a phonological perspective.
The rain is over and gone!12. Find a dramatic discourse and make a stylistic
comment on it with reference to the speech acts and turn-takings in it.