Screenwriting Guide
Screenwriting Guide
Sluglines
Every scene in a script begins with a slugline — also
known as a scene heading — a short description of
where the scene takes place. Sluglines always
indicate whether or not a scene is interior or exterior,
where it is exactly and time of day. A scene that takes
place on Tatooine, for instance, would begin with a
slugline like:
And so on.
Action lines
Action lines are simple and declarative and after you
get them out of the way you can start describing the
setting with action lines, which might sound like:
“Fade in on a desolate desert planet. We see R2-D2
and C3PO walking across the seemingly endless
dunes.”
Dialogue
Dialogue usually takes up most of a film script.
Dialogue has the character’s name above it and is
usually written without quotation marks. It’s also
written with large margins or is centred to set it apart
on the page from action lines and other copy. For
example, Han Solo bragging about the speed of his
ship would be:
HAN
You’ve never heard of the Millennium Falcon? It’s
the ship that made the Kessel Run in less than
twelve parsecs!
Sometimes dialogue contains special instructions or
notes in parentheses, like if a character is offscreen
or doing a voiceover. Obi-Wan telling Luke to turn off
his targeting computer could look like:
KENOBI (v.o.)
Use the Force, Luke.
Beat
Important events or moments in a screenplay are
known as beats. “A story beat is some significant
moment,” says Bernstein. “It’s when things can turn
in some different direction.” Examples are a
detective finding an important clue, an action hero
getting injured or the leads in a romantic comedy
having a conflict or misunderstanding that drives
them apart.
Loglines
“The logline is the summation of the story in one
sentence,” says Bernstein. A logline is often the first
thing studio decision-makers hear about a film and
screenwriters often start their screenwriting process
with a logline and go from there. However, it’s always
possible to change a logline after you’ve written a
final draught.
Elevator pitches
Elevator pitches are a bit longer than loglines, but
still short. An elevator pitch is a short description or
synopsis of a project that usually takes up about 30
seconds, the length of an lift ride. The elevator pitch
for Hamlet would sound something like:
Shooting script
Once a film is in production, a shooting script is
created. This version of the screenplay numbers the
scenes to help all departments co-ordinate their
work — especially helpful as most films are shot out
of order (not chronologically based on the events of
the screenplay).