Lesson 8
Lesson 8
Now, as we are nearing the end of the semester, you still need to
continue working hard in order to improve your writing skills. These skills will
help you meet the demands of workplace communication. If you persevere and
focus, this lesson will teach you ways of improving your writing skills as well as
the manner in which workplace communication takes place. But first, you have
to have this mindset: That writing is a process of constantly thinking and
putting into paper your ideas and as such, your first written output is NOT
your FINAL OUTPUT. It is just your initial DRAFT and it will undergo revisions.
If you have this mindset, you will have the patience to deal with the rigors of
writing.
As you go through this lesson then, I need you to keep this in mind: To
become gainfully employed, you need to have good communication skills, both
written and oral. And once you are employed, your writing skills could advance
your career.
Speaking of which, how many of you are working students? Those who
are already immersed in the world of work know that writing is a very
important skill for survival. From application to resignation (and anything in
between) most, if not all, are done through written communication.
Now, read the objectives so you will know what you are supposed to
achieve for lesson 8.
OBJECTIVES
At the end of the lesson, you are expected to:
1. create clear, coherent, and effective workplace communication materials;
2. observe protocol in the flow of communication in the workplace; and,
2. show competence in using web-based apps or computer software in
creating coherent workplace communication materials.
A. BASICS OF WRITING
The world of work requires a lot of writing; thus, if your writing skills are
sorely lacking, now is the time to remedy that. Writing may not be easy, but it
is a skill that can be acquired and polished. And just to show you that this is
possible and that at this point you already possess the basics of writing, let’s
review some of the things you did when you made your outputs for the last two
lessons. This question will help jog your memory (unless you’re a goldfish
whose memory resets every 3 seconds, LOL). (Seriously though, goldfish’s
memory spans up to 5 months.)
• Before you started writing your digital multimodal text as well as your
informative speech, persuasive speech, etc. what did you consider first?
Correct! You considered who your audience was going to be and what
your purpose was. And given these two, including the communication context,
you also considered the language register (choice of words) you would use. Did
you know at that time that your choice of words would set the “tone” of your
output?
In written works, the tone does not refer to the sound that you literally
hear when someone talks. Tone, in written outputs, refer to your stand on the
topic which is revealed through your choice of words.
The good thing about workplace communication is that you won’t always
have to write a letter as most companies use standard forms to simplify
things. For instance, leave forms are available at the HR office. You can
fill out this form when requesting for a leave of absence. For example:
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In the sample request for leave form above, who do you think would be
your target reader/audience should you file for one in the future?
In the workplace, this is not necessarily a bad thing. As long as you have
evidence to back-up your preference (or bias) for a specific product or
services (and as long as your communication sounds formal or
impersonal or professional), your manager or immediate supervisor will
acknowledge your idea especially if what you are saying could result to
better services and increased income for the company.
1. Upward
The communication is sent by a low rank employee to his/her
immediate supervisor or anyone above his immediate supervisor.
Request for leave of absence is a very good example of a communication
which flows from an employee to someone in the hierarchy, usually the
HR.
2. Lateral or horizontal
The communication is sent by an employee to another employee
who is of equal level or rank as hers/his. You had a taste of this when
you did Task 5 in the previous lesson. Why? Because the group members
for the task are of equal rank though you played different roles.
In the workplace, when branch managers exchange
communication with each other to facilitate business transactions, the
flow of communication is lateral or horizontal. These could be report of
sales, transfer of an employee, project undertaking, etc.
3. Downward
The communication originates from the management and is sent to
the employees. These communications usually take the form of office
orders, memoranda, and important announcements.
4. Outward
The communication is sent to anyone outside of the company. It
could be a response to a client’s letter or a demand letter (in the case of
default loans) or a product brochure or official statements or press
releases.
Filing a request for leave is one example of this protocol. Let’s take a look
at the sample Leave Request Form again. Now, study the form closely.
Before submitting this form to the HR, you must fill-out the form
properly and affix your signature. The HR will then forward this form to the
manager for approval. Or you can obtain the signature of your
supervisor/manager before submitting it the HR. As to which of these two
courses of action will take place, it all depends on what the employee handbook
says.
Done reading these unfinished statements? You may now click this link.
Complete the sentences as you scan the document.
Did you find it informative? Great! This is a sample of an actual employee
guidebook. Now that you have scanned its contents, skim through it this time
to be able to answer these questions.
1. Pretend that you are an employee of the DOLE. Give the protocol that
you should observe for the following circumstances.
a. You been absent for work for more than 5 days due to sickness.
What should you do upon your return to work?
__________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
b. You want to file a vacation leave. How should you go about it?
__________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
2. What is likely to happen when the protocol for the filing of the sick leave
form is violated or breached? What sanctions can an employee expect?
________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
1. FORMS
To standardize workplace communication as well as to make the flow
of communication effective, companies and even government agencies have
opted to utilize forms in the offices. Forms refer to documents where the
employee inputs information being asked in the form. These information can
come in words, phrases, sentences or symbols (x and ). As there are many
forms in use by companies, like job order form, purchase request form,
maintenance request form, etc., it will be impractical to include all of them
here due to time constraints. But what you will learn about here are the
most commonly used ones. Hopefully, learning this will contribute to your
resiliency as an employee or a business owner in the future.
a. Leave Form
You have seen in the previous page what a generic Leave Request
Form looks like. Let me put it here again. Now, please fill-out this
form.
Are you done? Your filled-out form should look like this.
3 22 21
vacation
3 29 21 3 31 21
Taylor Swift
Note that Ms. Taylor did not write anything on the
Notes/Comments box. Like her, you too, should not have written
anything on that box. Would you like to know who is supposed to write
there? Correct! It’s your manager or supervisor.
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In our college, the OB form is called Locator
Slip. A common thing among these forms is the
fact they give instructions as to the number of
copies you need to accomplish and when you are
supposed to submit the form.
For example:
Project Coordinator: Alex Corona
Team members: LA Construction Firm
TASK 1
Directions: Read each scenario carefully then accomplish the forms that should
be submitted. Your prof will either send these to your email or upload the
forms in your Google classroom or in your class group chat.
1. You were able to snag a piso-fare promo flight from Air Asia last February
2021. Your scheduled departure flight for Boracay is on May 20, 2022 while
your return flight is on May 24, 2122. Suppose you are an employee of
DOLE, specifically at the Records sections of the Bureau of Labor Relations.
When should you file your Leave Request Form? Show this by
accomplishing the Leave Request Form correctly.
2. Gina’s legally adopted daughter died in her sleep on March 15, 2021. She
returned to work after a week of being absent. What is the first thing Gina
should do? Show what she should do by accomplishing the appropriate
form correctly and filing the same. (Pretend you are Gina Marquez, also an
employee of DOLE, specifically at the Bureau of Working Conditions. You
returned to work on March 22, 2021.)
a. Memorandum
A memo or memorandum is an inter-office communication used to
formally deliver information to people in the company from one office to
another. Memos are used to make announcements, give instructions,
clarify or change a policy (or a procedure or an issue), alert a staff to a
problem, give a notice for meeting, give disciplinary action, etc. Once
issued, memos become official documents and sometimes, legal records
since they can be used as evidence.
Now, let’s see if you understood the sample memo. Answer these
questions.
1. Who sent the memo? _______________________________________
2. Who is the recipient of the memo? __________________________
3. Why was the memo issued? ________________________________
4. When is the effectivity of the memo? _________________________
5. Who else received a copy of the memo? ______________________
Once you have this initial memo on your computer, save it under
the file name Memo Template. So, the next time you need to encode a
memorandum, you can readily access this file. After encoding the new
memo, save it using another file name.
TASK 2
Directions: Read the memo below. Pretend you are the recipient and write a
response memo. Since you will be responding to a memo issued by a person of
a higher position than you, use “For:” in place of “To:” in the header.
MEMORANDUM
As per report from the HR office, the biometrics generated Daily Time Record under
your name shows no log in and log out during lunch break on March 2, 2021 and March
3, 2021.
Since it is the company policy to log in and log out during lunch break, you are hereby
directed to submit a written explanation, 48 hours upon receipt of this memo.
Failure to comply would mean waiving your right to be heard and concurring to
possible disciplinary action as stated in the employee handbook.
Cc: HR
For this task, observe the following mechanics:
1. Use the default font, Calibri, size 11, for the title, header and body of the
memo.
2. Use one font size smaller (Calibri, size 10) for the position of both the
sender and the recipient in the header.
3. Use all caps for the names of the sender and the content of the subject
line. (Observe the sample memo.)
4. Observe the line spacing in the header as well as between the paragraphs
in the body of the memo.
5. Cc the HR, too.
6. Put in the subject line: written explanation re: failure to log in and out
during lunch break.
7. Run the grammar and spelling check to capture basic errors in grammar
and spelling.
8. Affix your signature, the shortened version, (also called initial) near your
name. Do not affix your REAL SIGNATURE. Remember, you are
responding in the memo as LIRA QUEZON. The boys can respond as LIRO
QUEZON.
Rubrics:
Have you seen one? No? Here is sample template of the minutes.
Please pay careful attention to the notes inside the parenthesis for it does
not only tell you what to write in each part but also the flow of the
business meeting.
Example
ORGANIZATION NAME (Letterhead)
I. ATTENDANCE
A. Attendees (Indicate the names of those who are present in the meeting.)
1.
B. Absentees (Indicate the names of those who are absent in the meeting.)
1.
B. CALL TO ORDER
(As soon as the quorum is declared, the presiding officer calls the meeting to order. In
layman’s term, calling the meeting to order is declaring “We can now start the
meeting.” So, what do write here? Indicate here the presiding officer has called the
meeting to order after quorum has been declared. Approval of “Other Matters” items
should also be mentioned here.)
IV. ADJOURNMENT
(Write here the time the meeting was declared adjourned or finished. Indicate, too, that
the motion to adjourned has been duly seconded.)
ATTESTED BY:
*This should only be signed after the minutes was presented, corrected, if necessary, and approved by
the body.
The sample template you see here is just one of the many that you will
encounter someday. So, which template should you use when you’re already
working? Simple! You should use the one that your company is using. For
now, it is enough that you know what the minutes is, its content, and how it is
written.
Now, here is the general guidelines (Padilla, et.al., 2018) you should keep
in mind when preparing the minutes of the meeting.
TASK 3
Directions: With a partner, watch a role play of a business meeting at
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gMsOw2urOQU then prepare the
Minutes of the Meeting following the template given here.
Rubrics
Wow! Congrats! You’ve made it this far. Now that you’re finished with all
the tasks, take a 20-minute nap to recharge your energy. Sweet dreams!
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ASSESSMENT
A. Directions: Match column A with B to identify the appropriate type of
communication to be used in the given situation. Write the letter of your
answer.
Column A Column B
____ 1. One of the staff members met an a. Progress Report
accident while operating a machine. b. Leave Form
____ 2. A new company policy has to be c. Memorandum
cascaded to all workers. d. Official Business Form
____ 3. The monthly board meeting shall be e. Incident Report
held in a week’s time and the f. Minutes of the Meeting
secretary has to prepare this
document for appreciation in the said
meeting.
____ 4. An employee has been absent from
work for 2 days due to illness.
____ 5. An employee in-charge of a project has
to update his supervisor on the its
status.
B. Directions: Fill in the blanks with the words that best complete the meaning
of each sentence.
Situation 1: A new Sous Chef is hired and as the Head Chef, it is your
task to inform the Kitchen Staff about it. Include in the memo the duties
and responsibilities of a Sous Chef.
Rubrics
Criteria Description Points
Content The memo appropriately addressed the
task. Message is concise. Tone is
professional. 10
Organization Memo has complete parts and correct
format. 10
Mechanics Required mechanics were complied
with; no punctuation, grammar and
spelling errors. 10
TOTAL 30
ANSWER KEY
Assessment
A.
1. e 4. b
2. c 5. a
3. f
B.
1. past
2. Minutes of the Meeting
3. CC
4. Lateral
5. Summarized
6. Progress Report, outward
7. upward