Final Draft The Illusion of Education-Unmasking The American School System
Final Draft The Illusion of Education-Unmasking The American School System
Final Draft The Illusion of Education-Unmasking The American School System
Sera Casas
Professor Alanis
English 1
12 April 2024
They call it education, but many are waking up to realize the lie. This American school
system isn’t about making us smarter; it's about making us obedient. These articles, "The High
School/College Writing Classroom Disconnect,” “Don't Blame Students for Using ChatGPT to
Cheat", and "America Ruined My Name for Me", show the truth about the American Education
System – empty lessons, broken dreams, and souls chained to someone else's purpose.
In “Don’t Blame Students for Using ChatGPT to Cheat,” Warner discusses the symptoms
of a bigger issue within the education system. This issue is students depending on AI to complete
their assignments. This fairly new reliance on technology reflects the disconnection and lack of
meaningful learning that had plagued our classrooms for so long. Carroll argues that the use of
education, where students are conditioned to optimize outcomes rather than engage in genuine
learning. “ChatGPT did not cause our plagiarism problem: It has only automated or deskilled the
essay-mill industry already churning out papers for pay,” Carroll suggests that the problem lies
not with the technology but with the educational environment that drives students towards such
measures. (Carroll)
In the article “The High School/College Writing Classroom Disconnect,” Warner talks
about the gap between high school and college writing expectations and emphasizes the need for
a shift from rigid, rule-based writing to more analytical and argumentative skills that drive
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critical thinking in college. As Warner puts it, “Many students come armed with a series of
writing ‘rules’ that are meant to be followed, or else.” This expectation of obedience is a clear
example of how the system is not designed to make us smarter but instead is meant to keep us in
line. (Warner)
In Bich Nguyen’s paper titled “America Ruined My Name for Me,” she reflects on the
personal impact of cultural assimilation within the American education system. She primarily
focuses on the loss of identity she experienced through the mispronunciation and alteration of her
name stating, “The education system can strip away individual identity, particularly through the
misrepresentation and alteration of cultural names.” This loss of individuality is another way the
Rockefeller the founder of the American education system, flat-out told us before
founding it, "I don't want a nation of thinkers, I want a nation of workers" and so it is. This
notion is the very foundation this entire system is built on – keeping us down and keeping us in
line. They preach about us reaching for the stars, then hand us a shovel to dig our own graves.
This thing they call learning, frankly, is no different than being in prison. " The Teacher
talks, you shut up and swallow" – is and always has been the anthem in American classrooms.
They feed us facts and figures but starve us of the truth about ourselves, about the world, and
about how we're just expected to trust them, go figure? This is the very thing that breaks us from
the inside out. Then, college rolls around, and they expect independent and original thoughts on
our papers, but how the hell are we supposed to do that? For years, they have beaten the
questions out of us and made us doubt our own voices. This isn’t just about failing tests, it's
about our souls going numb. They tell us to dream, and they tell us to change the world, but they
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stole the tools we need to make it happen. This machine they built – it spits out copies, not
individuals. "America Ruined My Name for Me" shows that pain, as clear as day. They try to
label us, to fit us into their boxes. But what about the fire inside, the dreams that can't and won't
be tamed? A system that crushes the spirit isn’t just wrong, it's dangerous. We become easy to
control and easy targets to lie to. They keep us divided, fighting over scraps while they feast on
our potential. Eventually, we end up lost, disconnected, pawns in a game we haven't chosen to
play, and given expectations to succeed in a game we’ve never even been given the rules to or
All these articles point to the same sickness. Carroll talks about standardized tests turning
knowledge into nothing but points – that is the poison. They make us chase grades instead of
chasing our own brilliance. This is not about learning, it is about jumping through hoops so they
can decide who deserves a future, and who gets thrown away. For, the real education isn’t in a
classroom. It's in the streets, in the struggle. It is asking questions nobody wants to answer, even
when your voice shakes. It is finding strength in your own story like Nguyen did in “America
Ruined My Name For Me” and refusing to let them erase it. This ChatGPT mumbo jumbo is not
the enemy. It's a symptom of the root cause, what we should really be afraid of. If lessons are so
boring that a machine can do better, isn’t that enough of a wake-up call?
We have to break this system like the system broke us, and not just keep complaining
about it. We learn by doing, by creating, by messing up, and by starting over to fix past mistakes.
Rich kids, poor kids, all of us deserve a place where our differences make us stronger, not
weaker. Where the real history gets taught, and not the whitewashed lies that keep us hating each
other instead of focusing that hate on the ones holding all the power. We require a complete
understanding of the laws in place, and everyone should be well-versed and educated on how to
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go about proposing a change or revision to any part of our government if need be. The
perpetuation of this false notion, that our education system encourages and cultivates thinking
and learning in the students who attend these schools, could not be further from the truth.
The startling reality is, that the founder who created our beloved education system has
been quoted saying, “I don’t want a nation of thinkers, I want a nation of workers” and what
better way of reducing the likelihood of their opposition fighting back, you ask? Well, by
controlling our present state of consciousness- our children. Children are the embodiment and
representation of the present, we adults are the representation of the past, and their experiences,
their knowledge, and what they learn and how they learn and choose to solve problems and
engage and interact with each other will soon become our future. Their agenda up to this point
has been to divide and conquer us, the people that are not them, those that makeup 99% percent
of America. Mandating attendance at these institutions that don’t even provide any incentives or
benefits for us to attend them perpetuates the current state of demise this nation is currently
under. Profiting off us while programming us to assimilate into their system, a system where we
are not ever going to equally experience opportunities that cultivate growth, as those born in
wealth or born white do is the definition of corruption if you ask me. Secretly and unannounced
to us, schools have taken on a role that is equivalent to the plantations of our past, discreetly
disguised. The chains that bind us to them are camouflaged with distractions. Irrelevant are the
things we are required to learn, and are of no importance to us, but are of great interest to them –
Convincing us that the laws are made for the people by the people, but those people who
created those laws were not your normal everyday people who exist in society, no, those people
writing up these laws are the same people that are in power today. They speak about knowing
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what’s best for all of us, but what about us who are coming from the bottom and experience the
struggle every day and are conditioned to this being our normal, just getting by to live another
day and repeat it all over again? A life that those in power pretend to understand in order to
convince us they should be granted the authority to offer advice or direction for how people of
our upbringing can progress in today's world. Unfortunately, the current state of our nation
proves that these “paid actors” haven’t ever even seen a roach in real life, or skipped a meal so
that their kids could eat instead and haven’t ever experienced the plague of injustices we have
and therefore cannot offer us advice or the false acclamation that they can.
They try to tell us this disconnect is our fault – that we’re not studying hard enough and
are not grateful enough. Can you believe they have even gone as far as calling my generation, us
millennials lazy?! But that's just more of their poison, they instigate negativity by triggering us to
react the way any normal human being would; by getting angry, defending our points, and
validating our struggles while unaware of the brainwashing my generation was subjected to.
Raping us of our God-given capacity to connect, contemplate, wonder, problem solve, integrate
and transform thru the original technology we have built inside of us, our brains. This fight is
bigger than any one of us. But it starts with us waking up, refusing to be just another brick in
their wall. This isn’t just about fixing schools; it's about fixing the whole damn world. And it
starts with finding that fire inside, knowing our worth, and demanding an education that sets us
Work Cited
1. Nguyen, Bich. "America Ruined My Name for Me." The New Yorker, 1 Apr. 2021,
www.newyorker.com/culture/personal-history/america-ruined-my-name-for-me.
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2. Carroll, Jordan S. “Don’t Blame Students for Using ChatGPT to Cheat.’” The Nation, 20
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3. Warner, John. “The High School/College Writing Classroom Disconnect.” Inside Higher
www.insidehighered.com/blogs/just-visiting/high-schoolcollege-writing-classroom-
disconnect.