GED109 - ADVOCACY - PAPER - Resoso
GED109 - ADVOCACY - PAPER - Resoso
GED109 - ADVOCACY - PAPER - Resoso
GED109_Advocacy paper
PART I.
This paper talks about the problems of gender inequality in our society. We know
that this is a common issue that occurred way before and is still progressing in the
present.To effectively advocate for gender equality, one must take into account these
consider the numerous forms of discrimination that women and individuals with
marginalized gender identities face while promoting human rights in respect to gender-
related issues. It is crucial to realize that discrimination against people based on their
gender frequently exists alongside discrimination against people based on their color,
gender issues depend on cooperation and partnership among various parties, including
PART II.
- This article talks all about the requirements in attaining inclusive growth for
in the labor industry. The difficulties and problems with gender equality in the
Philippine job market are the main topics of this article. It emphasizes that
despite the nation's economic growth, women's employment has not increased
enough, and the work options that have been available have not been inclusive.
including labor force participation, human capital, the burden of unpaid domestic
and care work, vulnerable employment, wage employment, decent work, and
social protection.
- This article focuses on the difficulties and discrimination that women experience
their professional and personal life but overcome these obstacles with tenacity,
Forum's Global Gender Report 2021, which rates the Philippines as the top-
performing nation in Asia for bridging the gender gap, is also cited in the article.
In general, the text stresses the value of empowering women, eliminating gender
- This article focuses on the problem of gender inequality and how it affects all
facets of society. It draws attention to the differences between men and women
difficulties faced by those who identify as gender varied and who encounter
- This article acknowledges that women play important roles in many facets of life
and society. It draws attention to the major difficulties that women still encounter
in the workplace despite their wide range of duties. The sentence implies that
there is a lack of gender equality and fairness because women are frequently
considered as "less than" in the workplace. The following parts are likely to cover
the five main issues that women in the workforce must deal with. Issues with the
discrimination, and the need for more equal workplace rules may be among
these difficulties.
- The study's goal is to discover how gender equality and economic development
should result in a more effective use of female labor, which should benefit
inequality has been a pervasive problem for a long time and continues to persist in
contemporary society. By shedding light on this issue, the paper draws attention to the
ongoing need for addressing and rectifying these disparities. Other than that, it also
perspective. This means recognizing that individuals may face multiple forms of
equality.
related issues within the broader context of human rights. Gender discrimination is a
violation of human rights, and it is crucial to advocate for gender equality as an integral
part of the larger human rights framework. Lastly, it emphasizes the need for
initiatives aimed at addressing gender issues require the involvement of a diverse range
issues within the context of human rights, and highlights the need for collective efforts to
WHAT
homosexual sex experience on a daily basis. Instances that include discrimination and
sexism occur in this kind of problem. This could greatly affect the mental health of many
people and might even result in suicide. This persistent problem is present in every
place because of those people who persecute others for their differences or any
unusual concept that the society is not normally seeing. This should be stopped
WHO
● Men & Women - men and women should learn to respect the other sex. They
should not be fighting for their own rights but for the rights of everyone.
● Lgbtqi+ society - the lgbtqi+ society should learn to be cooperative and learn to
compromise from different situations, because not everyone is like that. There
are times that they feel attacked and tend to be violent in some cases.
for the people around me to correct them whenever they do inappropriate things
Every place in the world is the right place to act. Not only in school, workplace, or
parks because this problem does not only occur in one specific place, there is a
WHEN
There is also no specific time when it comes to solving this problem because we
should be alert and mindful to always act when an issue related to this problem occurs.
WHY
HOW
We could help in this fight by doing basic activities like the following:
- We can use this to help wake others up from ignorance. Seminars serve
as a good way to learn and help others understand or know that we are all
this by accepting them in the society for who they are. We can teach one
another the do’s and don’ts so that we can live orderly in this world.
PART IV.
In my opinion here are the strengths of my activity: This essay is well-written, and
it makes its points in an understandable and direct way. It effectively conveys the
community and gender bias. In addition to highlighting the problems, it offers concrete
recommendations for how people and society as a whole can help solve the issue. It
suggests conferences, talks, and aiding the LGBTQI+ community as effective ways to
change things. It also acknowledges that people of various genders and sexual
orientations are affected by the issue. It emphasizes how important it is for different
societal groups to work together and understand one another. The essay underscores
the connection between gender inequality and human rights, emphasizing the violation
of human rights that occurs due to discrimination. In summary, the essay effectively
steps for addressing it, and demonstrates a comprehensive understanding of the issue.
Despite the strengths of my essay it also has its downsides such as redundancy,
responsibility, clarity, and structure. My writing frequently uses the same words and
concepts, which can make it appear cliche. The sentences "This problem is significant
and needs to be solved because of the following" and "We can teach one another the
do's and don'ts so that we can live orderly in this world" are two examples of phrases
that could be expressed more succinctly. Although there are general discussions of the
issue of gender inequality and discrimination, there are no case studies or specific
examples to highlight the problems. Giving specific examples or real-life examples could
increase the essay's relatability and impact. Intersectionality is briefly mentioned in the
be gained by looking more closely at how different types of discrimination interact and
amplify each other's effects. Although the essay makes reference to personal
and society as a whole in addressing gender inequality and discrimination. To help the
reader follow the arguments, the essay's structure could be better organized with clear
and focused examples, a deeper examination of intersectionality, the use of data and
persuasiveness.
PART V.
There are a lot of probable topics that are related to gender issues in the
1. Learn more about the gender pay gap in the Philippines by looking into its size
and root causes. Analyze the contributions that factors like occupation,
education, and industry make to this gap. Analyze how pay inequalities affect
in the Philippines. Look into the frequency, types, and effects of gender-based
current legal and support systems are working to address these problems.
how few women are in leadership and decision-making roles in a variety of fields,
such as business, politics, and civil society. Examine the obstacles and
fields.