Article Analysis
Article Analysis
Jessica L. Villacorta-Molles
One of the best teaching strategies that an educator can provide to any student is
getting to know them and their background. In the excerpt titled “With Different Eyes,”
one learns how much of an impact a culture has on a person and their learning. In the
reading, one learns about how English, Vietnamese, Arabian, Mexican, and Chinese
students as well as different families during the time of desegregation differ in their
writing and thought processes. While some cultures are similar in their processing of
information and writing structures, some cultures are very different from one another. It
is for this reason that it is important that educators know this and work to help
Contrastive rhetoric is the process of a student writing in the their second language
(Gadda & Peitzman, 1994). For example, a student who speaks Spanish as their first
language is asked by their teacher to write a paper in their second language, which in this
case would be English. However, one’s culture will influence the way one writes their
paper. For example, students who are English speakers are known for writing in a linear
progression compared to that of a Vietnamese student who will write more about the
relationships of the characters, or an Arabian students who will write more about the
setting of the story (Gadda & Peitzman, 1994). The reason they do this is because they
feel as though they need to entertain or inform using a specific aspect of the story that
most aligns with their culture. For instance, an American writer might use more casual
language to help relate to the audience versus a Thai writer who will use formal speech to
tell a story because that is the cultural norm in their reading (Gadda & Peitzman, 1994).
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While one’s culture influences the way one writes, it also influences the way one
learns. This is due to the fact that each culture learns differently. An example of this was
during the time of desegregation amongst the Townspeople, Roadville families, and
Trackston families. During this time period, it was an eye opening experience to
educators about the different ways these students learn and write. Roadville students
learned through conversating with adults compared to that of the Trackton families that
learned from the adults’ actions (Gadda & Peitzman, 1994). Townspeople, on the other
hand, learned from the adults modeling and conversating with the children (Gadda &
Peitzman, 1994). A similar scenario occurs now amongst the Hispanic culture and the
Chinese culture. In the Hispanic culture, one learns from watching the adults compared to
that of the Chinese culture that learns from the adults asking the children questions about
what they are doing to ensure the children understand what is being done (Gadda &
Peitzman, 1994). Having known this information, it was discovered that the best way to
teach writing to students from various cultures is to slowly give them background
knowledge of the culture of the school (Gadda & Peitzman, 1994). Once this is known,
the teacher can begin teaching the writing expectations in the student’s writing. It is
important that this is done, so that the students have a foundation to draw from, but are
still able to write using the information they have from both cultures to gradually make it
their own. Educators want to help teach them how to write, the ELD standards ensure
they can do this while still being able to make their writing their own.
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References
Peitzman, Faye; Gadda, George (1994). With Different Eyes, Addison Wesley Publishing