4.06 Crafting A Winning Argument Assessment

Crafting a Winning Argument Assessment
Step 1: Following the lesson, write the first draft of your argumentative essay using the outline
you finessed. Edit and revise your paper in order to develop a final draft.
Step 2: Copy and paste these questions on their own page at the end of your paper to answer in
2-3 sentences each.
What steps did you follow to While writing my argument, I reviewed my essay multiple
revise and edit your times. This allowed me to correct any grammatical
argument? mistakes I may have made, and any points I may have
forgotten to put.
Whom did you consult for I consulted advice from my sister on my essay. She helped
help in the process? me on clarifying my ideas and scrutinized it for any errors.
What type of errors did you Most of my corrections were focused on improving the
correct more than others? structure of sentences. It is really hard for me to type,
Spelling? Punctuation? since I have my nails done. It takes me twenty years to
Sentence Structure? type a single sentence, and since I’m trying to type fast-ish
I accidentally click other letters.
What makes your final draft My final draft outshines my first one as it is cohesive and
better than your first draft? polished, if that makes any sense? I corrected all of the
errors, making sure to check over it many, many, many
times.
Step 3: Submit your final draft and reflection questions.
Patrick Henry's impassioned plea for independence and Abraham Lincoln's stern warning against
a nation split are both timeless speeches that echo the sentiments of liberty, solidarity, and the
fate of a nation. Though they were spoken in distinct historical moments, they both offer deep
reflections on the struggles and aspirations that defined their eras. On March 23, 1775, amidst the
tense prelude to the Revolutionary War, Patrick Henry stood before the Second Virginia
Convention and delivered a stirring oration. He fervently advocated for armed resistance against
the oppressive rule of Britain, highlighting the critical value of liberty and self-determination.
His emphatic declaration, "Give me liberty or give me death," became a rallying cry that ignited
revolutionary zeal and underscored the profound readiness to fight for freedom at all costs.
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Henry's words not only spurred on the revolution but also continue to resonate as a testament to
the power of bold, persuasive speech in championing liberty. On June 16, 1858, Abraham
Lincoln gave a powerful speech while campaigning for the Illinois Senate seat, where he tackled
the contentious issue of slavery. He used the biblical analogy that a "house divided against itself
cannot stand" to highlight the critical need for the United States to be unified, emphasizing that it
could not continue to exist as a nation split between slave and free states. Lincoln's words were a
stark warning of the escalating strife that could lead to all states either allowing or abolishing
slavery, and his speech is often seen as a precursor to the Civil War, showcasing his dedication to
the Union and the abolition of slavery. Abraham Lincoln's "House Divided" speech is renowned
for its powerful impact, largely because it tackled the contentious subject of slavery and
emphasized the need for the nation to unite. It went beyond Patrick Henry's immediate rallying
cry against British rule, touching on the larger vision of America's future and the critical need to
bridge divides to safeguard the nation's integrity. Lincoln's address stands out for its insightful
planning and leadership qualities. He highlighted the potential repercussions of persisting
disagreements on slavery, thereby establishing himself as a forward-thinking leader who grasps
the serious issues facing the country and promotes a future built on values and togetherness.
Lincoln's address stands out for its eloquent rhetoric and compelling force. The "house divided"
metaphor, drawn from the Bible, struck a chord with his listeners, imparting a profound sense of
ethical imperative. More than just a mirror of its era, Lincoln's words rise above their historical
moment, offering enduring insights into democratic principles and the essential unity of the
nation. To sum it up, both Patrick Henry's impassioned cry for freedom and Abraham Lincoln's
insightful "House Divided" speech are iconic in American speechmaking. However, Lincoln's
address shines brighter for its deep grasp of the importance of unity, its visionary outlook, and its
lasting ethical impact. His eloquent call for reconciliation amidst deep national rifts underlines
the reason his words continue to echo powerfully in the halls of American political history.
Crafting a Winning Argument Rubric
On Target Almost There Needs Improvement

90-72 points 71-55 points 54-0 points
● The essay has a clear ● The essay has a clear ● The essay has a clear
introduction paragraph introduction paragraph introduction paragraph
with all three with two of the three with only one
components (hook, components. component and does
bridging statement, ● The reasons are not have a thesis
thesis statement). somewhat clearly statement.
● The reasons are stated and partially ● The reasons are not
clearly stated and supported with supported with
supported with evidence. sufficient evidence.

Final Copy
evidence. ● Each paragraph ● The counterclaims are
of Essay
(90 points)
● Each paragraph contains a counterclaim confusing or missing
contains a with a somewhat and have no rebuttal.
counterclaim with a sufficient rebuttal. ● The conclusion
sufficient rebuttal. ● The conclusion paragraph does not
● The conclusion paragraph synthesizes synthesize information
paragraph synthesizes information for the for the reader and
information for the reader somewhat and restates the thesis
reader and does not does not restate the statement.
restate the thesis thesis statement.
statement.
● Questions are ● Questions are ● Questions are

Reflection
answered in 2-3 answered in 2-3 answered in fewer than
Questions
(15 points)
complete sentences. complete sentences. 2 complete sentences.
● There are a few

Grammar, ● There are virtually ● There are several
Usage, and spelling, punctuation,
Mechanics no spelling, spelling, punctuation,
(10 points) or grammatical errors.
punctuation, or or grammatical errors.
grammatical errors.

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Step 3: Submit your final draft and reflection questions.

planning and leadership qualities. He highlighted the potential repercussions of persisting

disagreements on slavery, thereby establishing himself as a forward-thinking leader who grasps

On Target Almost There Needs Improvement

introduction paragraph introduction paragraph introduction paragraph

components (hook, components. component and does

bridging statement, ● The reasons are not have a thesis

thesis statement). somewhat clearly statement.

clearly stated and supported with supported with

supported with evidence. sufficient evidence.

contains a with a somewhat and have no rebuttal.

counterclaim with a sufficient rebuttal. ● The conclusion

sufficient rebuttal. ● The conclusion paragraph does not

● The conclusion paragraph synthesizes synthesize information

paragraph synthesizes information for the for the reader and

information for the reader somewhat and restates the thesis

reader and does not does not restate the statement.

restate the thesis thesis statement.

● Questions are ● Questions are ● Questions are

10-8 points 7-6 points 5-0 points

● There are a few

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