How Can I Improve My Report
How Can I Improve My Report
Getting it right
The first aspect of analysis starts with the title. In this case it is clearly a piece about the
marketing of an organization plus recommendations related to three areas of marketing. So
we’d expect an introduction and background to the organization, a section on their current
marketing, but there needs to be detail on the recommendations.
Also a marking scheme is provided. Students are always advised to follow the marking
scheme in order to ensure they have the right content in the right proportions to score the
highest marks from the specified 4000 words.
You must consider the marking scheme when generating reports. With a weighting of 10%
we’d expect about 350-400 words. You need to provide a strong, succinct introduction:
What is the organization? What market(s) are they in? What do they actually do?
NOW – not historically. The company’s history is only important in terms of the
knowledge and resources it has created relevant to the business NOW.
What is their mission? Are their current activities congruent to this?
It is too easy to offer a generic, descriptive element about companies. You do not
score marks for describing a company.
Step 3 – Critical analysis of the chosen organisation’s macro and micro environment
(15%)
it will be easy to see who has understood the core subject matter and those who clearly
have not put the time or effort into their studies.
Step 4 - Critical analysis of your organisation’s STP strategy and value proposition
(40%)
At least 1500 words. If your Organisation has a range of products and services chose just
one area to allow you to focus
What is their STP approach?
Is it working? Are they clearly positioned in the minds of the customers?
Are they competitive?
What role is its’ marketing communications and branding strategy playing in this?
Is its’ approach to sustainability relevant here?
Again, use appropriate theory to underpin your analysis and external secondary information
as required.
A SWOT and a TOWS might help you to understand a way forward for your organisation, but
(if used) only put this in the appendices and refer to the key points in the report.
You must use appropriate theory (correctly referenced) to help you show your answers.
Don’t try ‘guessing’ at the answers, the use of core knowledge/theory and demonstrating
application, is now required.
It is all too easy to offer lightweight, generic recommendations often being half a page long
and in the worst cases only a line of two. This is not sufficient for 30% of the marks!
As a reader we’re not interested in what you ‘feel’ about a product, marketing activity or the
organisation. At university students are asked to become much more analytical with
subject/theoretical content and application, and sound basic skills are required to
demonstrate this effectively.