FixingRunOnSentences 1
FixingRunOnSentences 1
A run-on sentence happens when you have two or more complete thoughts (“independent clauses”)
joined without something to connect them. An example of a run-on sentence is:
“I love tacos” and “I’m going to have some for dinner tonight” are each complete thoughts. We need
to separate them in order for our sentence to be correct.
Method #1: Use a period to turn the run-on into two sentences
Example: I love tacos. I’m going to have some for dinner tonight.
1) When I grow up I want to be a doctor I love that doctors get to help people.
3) It was wonderful weather on Monday the boy went outside to fly his kite.
Rewrite the following sentences using a comma and a conjunction to correct the run-on.
1) Tonight we’re going to order pizza and watch a movie I’m excited!
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2) After school I’m going to go home and have dinner then I’m going to go out and
play.
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Read the paragraph below and correct the run-ons you find using any of the three
methods you’d learned.
I had a great day yesterday! First I woke up early then I made a delicious breakfast of
pancakes and orange juice. After that I went to visit my friend he lives around the corner
from me we played video games and went to the park. We ran into our other friend at the
park we decided to all go to the beach. The weather at the beach was great! We got ice
cream and hot dogs after that we went swimming. Finally, it was time to go home. I was
happy to have such a fun day with my friends I hope they thought so too!