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Cambridge International AS & A Level

Mock Examination 2024
ENGLISH LANGUAGE 9093/12
Paper 1 Reading
MARK SCHEME
Maximum Mark: 50

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This mark scheme is published as an aid to teachers and candidates, to indicate the requirements of the
examination. It shows the basis on which Examiners were instructed to award marks. It does not indicate the
details of the discussions that took place at an Examiners’ meeting before marking began, which would have
considered the acceptability of alternative answers.

Mark schemes should be read in conjunction with the question paper and the Principal Examiner Report for
Teachers.

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Cambridge International is publishing the mark schemes for the October/November 2023 series for most
Cambridge IGCSE, Cambridge International A and AS Level components, and some Cambridge O Level
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Generic Marking Principles

These general marking principles must be applied by all examiners when marking candidate answers. They should be applied alongside the
specific content of the mark scheme or generic level descriptors for a question. Each question paper and mark scheme will also comply with these
marking principles.

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 1:

Marks must be awarded in line with:

 the specific content of the mark scheme or the generic level descriptors for the question
 the specific skills defined in the mark scheme or in the generic level descriptors for the question
 the standard of response required by a candidate as exemplified by the standardisation scripts.

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 2:

Marks awarded are always whole marks (not half marks, or other fractions).

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 3:

Marks must be awarded positively:

 marks are awarded for correct/valid answers, as defined in the mark scheme. However, credit is given for valid answers which go beyond
the scope of the syllabus and mark scheme, referring to your Team Leader as appropriate
 marks are awarded when candidates clearly demonstrate what they know and can do
 marks are not deducted for errors
 marks are not deducted for omissions
 answers should only be judged on the quality of spelling, punctuation and grammar when these features are specifically assessed by the
question as indicated by the mark scheme. The meaning, however, should be unambiguous.

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 4:

Rules must be applied consistently, e.g. in situations where candidates have not followed instructions or in the application of generic level
descriptors.
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GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 5:

Marks should be awarded using the full range of marks defined in the mark scheme for the question (however; the use of the full mark range may
be limited according to the quality of the candidate responses seen).

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 6:

Marks awarded are based solely on the requirements as defined in the mark scheme. Marks should not be awarded with grade thresholds or
grade descriptors in mind.

English & Media subject specific general marking principles

(To be read in conjunction with the Generic Marking Principles (and requiring further guidance on how to place marks within levels))

Components using level descriptors:

 We use level descriptors as a guide to broad understanding of the qualities normally expected of, or typical of, work in a level.
 Level descriptors are a means of general guidance, and should not be interpreted as hurdle statements.
 Where indicative content notes are supplied for a question, these are not a prescription of required content, and must not be treated as such.
Alternative correct points and unexpected answers in candidates’ scripts must be given marks that fairly reflect the knowledge and skills
demonstrated.
 While we may have legitimate expectations as to the ground most answers may occupy, we must at all times be prepared to meet
candidates on their chosen ground, provided it is relevant ground (e.g. clearly related to and derived from a relevant passage/text and
meeting the mark scheme requirements for the question).
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English Language specific marking instructions:

AO1 Read and demonstrate understanding of a wide variety of texts. (Understanding)

 Marks should be awarded for the accuracy of the candidate’s understanding of the text and its features, not for any analysis of them which is
recognised under AO3.
 Where comparison is required, marks should be awarded for the candidate’s recognition of similarities and differences between the texts and
their features, not for any consequent analysis.
 When awarding a ‘best-fit’ mark within a Level for each AO, consider each bullet point equally.

AO2 Write effectively, creatively, accurately and appropriately, for a range of audiences and purposes. (Writing)

 Marks should be awarded equally on the basis of the level of the candidate’s written expression (range of features used and accuracy) and the
development of their writing (its organisation and relevance to task and audience).
 When awarding a ‘best-fit’ mark within a Level for each AO, consider each bullet point equally.

AO3: Analyse the ways in which writers’ and speakers’ choices of form, structure and language produce meaning and style. (Analysis)

 Marks should be awarded equally on the basis of the level of the candidate’s analysis of the text’s elements (form, structure and language) and
of the writer’s stylistic choices (including how style relates to audience and shapes meaning).
 When awarding a ‘best-fit’ mark within a Level for each AO, consider each bullet point equally.

In response to Question 1(a), candidates are required to write between 150 and 200 words. While there is no direct penalty for failing to adhere to
this requirement, examiners should consider this an aspect of the response’s ‘relevance to purpose’. As such, adherence to the word limit is
assessed as part of the second bullet point of AO2.
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Section A: Directed response

Question Answer Marks

1(a) Read the following text, which is an extract from the book titled Paradise Gardens. 10

In response to the text, you decide to write a letter to your local authority suggesting the benefits of creating of a
public garden in your local area. Use 150–200 words.

Mark according to the levels of response marking criteria in Table A.

Additional guidance:

The comments below are illustrative and are not intended to be exhaustive. Candidates may make other valid comments
that should be credited.

Responses might feature the following:

 form, audience, purpose, style, conventions, language and structure will be appropriately adapted to suit task
 content may include personal opinion, anecdote, argument, as well as other relevant ideas
 tone will be used to have an impact on the reader and to create an effect.
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Question Answer Marks

1(b) Compare your letter with the extract, analysing form, structure and language. 15

Mark according to the levels of response marking criteria in Table B.

Additional guidance:

The comments below are illustrative and are not intended to be exhaustive. Candidates may make other valid comments
that should be credited.

Candidates may organise their response in any appropriate way. They are not required to focus on form, structure and
language in separate sections.

Responses might compare and analyse the following:

Form

 the typical text conventions used in the original extract and the letter
 the ways in which the different purposes affect the content and style of the two texts
 the ways in which the article and the letter appeal to the respective intended audiences, e.g. through the tone
 and register used in each text
 any other relevant aspect of the form of the two texts

Structure

 the ways in which short/long paragraphs are used in each text

 the way the extract moves between historical facts and appreciation of gardens
 the way the extract references different places and people over time
 the way that the extract ends
 the use of salutation and valediction in a letter
 any other relevant structural features in the texts
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Question Answer Marks

1(b) Language

 references to people and gardens e.g nomadic desert Arabs, Muhammad, the Persian pairidaeza, the four-part chahar
bagh
 factual information about the gardens e.g. an enclosed garden filled with trees – and especially fruit trees.
 lexical fields of nature/water/deserts/gardens e.g. sophisticated water channels and pools, central fountain with flowing
water, deeply sunken beds so the tops of the trees were at head height, olive and fig, date and pomegranate
 negative language e.g. remorseless, harshest, least fertile, barren vastness, daunting
 contrast between the desert landscape and gardens; intolerable, heaven on earth
 vocabulary associated with heaven or paradise and the key constituents required to achieve it e.g. water, shade, fruits,
safety and harmony, just about perfect
 repeated references to water to indicate its significance – from contemplation to irrigation, water channels and pools,
moving water is the key, the one great essential – water
 the ultimate iteration of what paradise comprises – green repose, sensual refinement, safety and harmony
 any other relevant language features used in the texts
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Section B: Text analysis

Question Answer Marks

2 Read the following text, which is an extract from the introduction to a cookery book. 25

Analyse the text, focusing on form, structure and language.

Mark according to the levels of response marking criteria in Table C.

Additional guidance:

The analysis should address the style, form, genre, structure and language of the text (including specific and relevant
references), explaining how they create meaning in relation to audience and purpose.

The comments below are illustrative and are not intended to be exhaustive. Candidates may make other valid comments
that should be credited.

Candidates may organise their response in any appropriate way. They are not required to focus on form, structure and
language in separate sections.

Responses might analyse the following:

Form

 the typical text conventions used in the text

 the ways in which the purpose affects the content and style of the text
 the ways in which the speech appeals to its intended audience, e.g. through the tone and register used in the text
 any other relevant aspects of the text’s form

Structure

 the ways in which the heading and short/long paragraphs or sections are used in the text
 the way in which the passage develops almost like a journey from India to England, diner to cook and back
 the way the passage ends with the childhood memories
 any other relevant structural features in the text
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Question Answer Marks

2 Language

 the vivid and positive descriptions of food, and the narrator's passion for the dishes described e.g. loved, passion,
sacred, most tantalising odours
 lists of food items indicating plenty and excess e.g. steaming basmati rice, roasting cumin seeds, cinnamon sticks in
hot oil
 the triad used to describe in detail the family's bearer – turbaned, sashed and barefooted – indicating differences in
class and wealth, and contrasting with London
 the contrast between dining at home in Delhi and digs in London e.g. a pleasant room and ... use of the kitchen which
is very flat and simple – no bearers, no excess
 the narrator's love of food even from early childhood e.g. smacking my lips is contrasted with her lack of culinary skills
– I could not cook
 names of recipes are Persian/Kashmiri and exotic-sounding e.g. Phool gobi aur aloo ki bhaji, and the Sanskrit om both
exotic and associated with being sung as a mantra
 the cuisine is described in very positive terms e.g. so very satisfying, titillate our palates, wholesome food and endless
flavours and dishes
 evocative descriptions of the Delhi schooldays feature humour and contrasts e.g. tiffin-carrier, ribboned pigtails,
exhaust-spewing buses, mind-numbing algebra, and the ultimate pleasure of taking lunch with her friends suggesting,
by their differences, that interest in food crosses cultures and other barriers
 eating is presented as adventure and discovery
 any other relevant language features used in the text.

Marking criteria for Section A Question 1 (a)

Table A
Level AO1: Read and demonstrate understanding of a wide variety AO2: Write effectively, creatively, accurately and
of texts. appropriately, for a range of audiences and purposes.
5 marks 5 marks

5  Sophisticated understanding of text  Sophisticated expression, with a high level of accuracy

(meaning/context/audience)  Content is fully relevant to audience and purpose; ideas are
 Insightful reference to characteristic features developed throughout in a sophisticated manner
5 marks 5 marks
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4  Detailed understanding of text (meaning/context/audience)  Effective expression, with a few minor errors which do not
 Effective reference to characteristic features impede communication
 Content is relevant to audience and purpose; ideas are
developed in an effective manner
4 marks 4 marks

3  Clear understanding of text (meaning/context/audience)  Clear expression, with occasional errors which do not
 Clear reference to characteristic features impede communication
 Content is relevant to audience and purpose; ideas are
developed clearly
3 marks 3 marks

2  Limited understanding of text (meaning/context/audience)  Expression is clear but may not flow easily, with frequent
 Limited reference to characteristic features errors which generally do not impede communication
 Content is mostly relevant to audience and purpose; ideas
are developed in a limited manner
2 marks 2 marks

1  Basic understanding of text (meaning/context/audience)  Basic expression, with frequent errors which impede
 Minimal reference to characteristic features communication
 Content may lack relevance to audience and purpose;
minimal development of ideas
1 mark 1 mark

0  No creditable response  No creditable response

0 marks 0 marks
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Marking criteria for Section A Question 1 (b)

Table B

Level AO1: Read and demonstrate understanding of a wide variety AO3: Analyse the ways in which writers’ and speakers’
of texts. choices of form, structure and language produce meaning
and style.
5 marks 10 marks

5  Sophisticated comparative understanding of texts  Sophisticated comparative analysis of elements of form,

(meaning/context/audience) structure and language
 Insightful reference to characteristic features  Sophisticated analysis of how the writers’ stylistic choices
relate to audience and shape meaning
5 marks 9–10 marks

4  Detailed comparative understanding of texts  Detailed comparative analysis of elements of form, structure
(meaning/context/audience) and language
 Effective reference to characteristic features  Detailed analysis of how the writers’ stylistic choices relate
to audience and shape meaning
4 marks 7–8 marks

3  Clear comparative understanding of texts  Clear comparative analysis of elements of form, structure
(meaning/context/audience) and/or language
 Clear reference to characteristic features  Clear analysis of how the writers’ stylistic choices relate to
audience and shape meaning
3 marks 5–6 marks

2  Limited understanding of texts (meaning/context/audience),  Limited analysis of form, structure and/or language, with
with limited comparison limited comparison
 Limited reference to characteristic features  Limited analysis of how the writers’ stylistic choices relate to
audience and shape meaning
2 marks 3–4 marks
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Level AO1: Read and demonstrate understanding of a wide variety AO3: Analyse the ways in which writers’ and speakers’
of texts. choices of form, structure and language produce meaning
and style.
5 marks 10 marks

1  Basic understanding of texts (meaning/context/audience),  Minimal analysis of form, structure and/or language, with
with minimal comparison minimal comparison
 Minimal reference to characteristic features  Minimal analysis of how the writers’ stylistic choices relate to
audience and shape meaning
1 mark 1–2 marks

0  No creditable response  No creditable response

0 marks 0 marks
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Level AO1: Read and demonstrate AO3: Analyse the ways in which writers’ and speakers’ choices of form, structure
understanding of a wide variety of and language produce meaning and style.
texts.
5 marks 20 marks

1  Basic understanding of text  Basic analysis, with minimal structure or coherence

(meaning/context/audience)  Minimal selection of elements of form, structure and language for analysis
 Minimal reference to characteristic  Minimal awareness of writer’s stylistic choices
features  Minimal use of appropriate language to link evidence with explanatory comments
1 mark 1–4 marks

0  No creditable response  No creditable response

0 marks 0 marks