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CEL2106 SDL WORKSHEET 6

A. Identify the sentences below as reader-centred (Yes) or not (No).

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1. Thank you for taking your time to read my application and also for the
opportunity that you are giving me.

Yes

No

2. Since you are reading this, I want to thank you for the opportunity to
introduce myself and see how well I fit the position.

Yes

No

Correct answer

No

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3. I thrive in a fast paced, results driven environment.

Yes

No

4. You can be assured that I can cope well in your company’s fast paced and
result-driven environment.

Yes

No

5. I appreciate the time you will take to review my resume, and hope you find,
as I do, that I have excellent skills and background.

Yes

No

CEL2106 SDL WORKSHEET 6

This is an individual activity for you to carry out. The activities should be completed and
submitted on PutraBlast by the due date.

B. Revise the sentences below by using reader centred writing and persuasive language.

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1. I have considerable experience working within environments where customer

The writer has experience in working environment. i have broad experience and information
about the important of customer service.

Feedback

I believe that your company would appreciate a candidate who has considerable
experience working in environments where customer service is important.

2. I understand how important customer service is to the continued success of any

I know very well on the important customer service which is making the business
becomes success and I am very committed to give outstanding service

Feedback

Without doubt customer service is very important to the continued success of any
business, and you can expect me to be committed in delivering outstanding customer
service.

3. I feel that the combination of my engineering expertise and people skills could
be valuable within the corporate environment as I understand both the technical
challenges of the energy sector and the business impact of these skills.

The writer believes that the combination of expertise and people skills are important and
have their own impact.

Feedback

Certainly, you would benefit from an employee who possesses both engineering expertise
and people skills to tackle the technical challenges and the business side of this job.

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4. Throughout my life I have demonstrated strong leadership abilities and a

The writer has the proficiencies and readiness to create or produce something by working.

Feedback

You can be sure that you are getting a leader who is not afraid to get involved and make
things happen.

5. I am committed and tenacious, not only in the sporting arena where I have
regularly represented both my university first team and my country at tennis, but
also in my academic work where I have consistently performed in the top quarter
of my course.

In university , he excelled both academically and athletically.

Feedback

You are getting a person whose commitment and tenaciousness will not be an issue since
this has been proven from my university years.

This form was created inside of Universiti Putra Malaysia.

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