CONCEIT
CONCEIT
CONCEIT
Definition of Conceit
As a literary device, a conceit uses an extended metaphor that compares
two very dissimilar things. A conceit is often elaborate and controls a large
section of a poem or the entire poem. Conceits are often quite unique and
ingenuous, and can present striking juxtaposition and comparison of the
unlike things. At times this can mean that the reader is strongly aware of
the dissimilarities between the two things being compared in metaphor, yet
the conceit broadens the reader’s awareness of the complexity of the
things in question. A conceit therefore often contributes to a greater
sophistication of understanding about the things being compared due to the
surprise factor of the unusual comparison.
Example #2
Busy old fool, unruly sun,
Why dost thou thus,
Through windows, and through curtains call on us?
Must to thy motions lovers’ seasons run?
Saucy pedantic wretch, go chide
Late school boys and sour prentices,
Go tell court huntsmen that the king will ride,
Call country ants to harvest offices,
Love, all alike, no season knows nor clime,
Nor hours, days, months, which are the rags of time.
(“The Sun Rising” by John Donne)
John Donne, the most famous of the metaphysical poets, wrote many
examples of conceit. In his poem “The Sun Rising,” Donne personifies the
sun to be an intruder in his bedroom that he shares with his lover. Donne
does not want to start the day and instead stay there with his beloved; the
fear he has is not of a person cutting their time short together, but instead
the unstoppable sun. Later in the poem, Donne reverses the conceit and
gives himself the power of the sun, saying that he could eclipse the sun’s
beams and “cloud them with a wink.” This conceit shows both his own
feelings for the woman he’s with and the power he feels when with her.
Example #3
I wanted to be sure to reach you;
though my ship was on the way it got caught
in some moorings. I am always tying up
and then deciding to depart. In storms and
at sunset, with the metallic coils of the tide
around my fathomless arms, I am unable
to understand the forms of my vanity
or I am hard alee with my Polish rudder
in my hand and the sun sinking. To
you I offer my hull and the tattered cordage
of my will. The terrible channels where
the wind drives me against the brown lips
of the reeds are not all behind me. Yet
I trust the sanity of my vessel; and
if it sinks, it may well be in answer
to the reasoning of the eternal voices,
the waves which have kept me from reaching you.
(“To the Harbormaster” by Frank O’Hara)
Frank O’Hara’s poem “To the Harbormaster” is a much more recent
example of conceit. In it, he imagines his lover as a harbormaster and
transforms himself into something like a metaphysical sailor. The conceit is
not completely straightforward, as at times the “I” voice seems to be human
while at other times seems superhuman (“my fathomless arms”). Similar to
Shakespeare, O’Hara uses nature imagery and extended metaphor to
describe the distance between himself and his lover.
Example #4
First having read the book of myths,
and loaded the camera,
and checked the edge of the knife-blade,
I put on
the body-armor of black rubber
the absurd flippers
the grave and awkward mask.
I am having to do this
not like Cousteau with his
assiduous team
aboard the sun-flooded schooner
but here alone.
….
I came to explore the wreck.
The words are purposes.
The words are maps.
I came to see the damage that was done
and the treasures that prevail.
(“Diving Into the Wreck” by Adrienne Rich)
Adrienne Rich’s poem “Diving Into the Wreck” is another contemporary
conceit example. The poem has many stanzas in which Rich develops the
comparison between looking back at a love affair that has ended and diving
into a shipwreck. Similar to the other poets, Rich creates this extended
metaphor with imagery of nature and a complex comparison between her
emotional state and the physical state of diving.