TOEIC Writing A Sentence Based On Picture
TOEIC Writing A Sentence Based On Picture
TOEIC Writing A Sentence Based On Picture
The Writing Test consists of a total of eight questions in which you are presented with
different types of writing tasks. In response to various prompts, you will compose
sentences using the words provided, respond to written requests, and write an essay.
Targeted Skills In order to do well on the Writing Test, you must be able to:
• write simple, compound, and complex sentences.
• use appropriate vocabulary.
• use correct grammar.
• respond to requests in writing.
• explain problems and ask questions in writing.
• express and explain your opinion in writing.
• organize and write an essay.
Parts of the Questions 1-5: You will write sentences about photos.
Writing Test Questions 6-7: You will respond to e-mails.
Question 8: You will write about your opinion on a particular topic.
(See below for more thorough descriptions of each part of the Writing Test.)
In Questions 4-5 , one word or phrase of the pair will always be a subordinating
conjunction. Therefore, to respond to these questions, you will have to write a sentence
with a subordinate clause. Types of subordinating conjunctions you may see in Questions
4 -5 include:
• Time: when, while, after, before, until
• Location: where
• Cause and effect: because, as, since, so, so that
• Contrast: although, even though, though, in spite of the fact
• Condition: if, even if, unless
For Questions 1-5, you will be evaluated on:
• Grammar • Relevancy of the sentence to the picture
• Appropriate use of both provided words or phrases
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WRITING TEST CHALLENGES AND SOLUTIONS
» CHALLENGE 2: “My grammar and spelling are weak, so I’m afraid I’ll make a lot of mistakes.”
SOLUTION: Review and practice useful grammatical structures. Pay attention to the grammar used in
this book. What you see on the test will be very similar. Make a note of any grammatical structures that
are difficult for you. Find a good English grammar book, and practice the things you find most problematic.
SOLUTION: Do practice activities to keep your grammar and spelling skills sharp. Check online
sources for free grammar and spelling practice activities. There are dozens of tests online that have
answer keys. Some also offer explanations about grammar or spelling. This will help you become
familiar with correct grammar forms and spelling.
SOLUTION: Learn about different types of sentences, and practice writing different sentence types
as often as possible. This will help you use correct sentence structure when you write during the test.
It will also help you become more comfortable with a variety of sentence types— something that can
improve your score on the test.
Sentence Types: Sentences are made up of clauses. A clause is a part of a sentence that contains
a subject and a verb. An independent clause can stand alone. A dependent clause must be part of a
sentence with an independent clause.
A simple sentence consists of one independent clause.
The clerk answered the phone.
A compound sentence consists of two independent clauses joined by a coordinating conjunction,
such as and, but, or, or so.
The man dropped the box, and the computer broke.
(independent clause) (independent clause)
A complex sentence consists of an independent clause and one or more dependent clauses. A
dependent clause is one that begins with a subordinating conjunction, such as because, after, before,
although, if, while, or when.
If we get the contract, we will need to hire some people.
(dependent clause) (independent clause)
A compound-complex sentence consists of three or more clauses. At least two are independent
clauses, and one is a dependent clause.
The conference was interesting, but not many people attended because it was so expensive,
(independent clause) (independent clause) (dependent clause)
» CHALLENGE 3: “I can handle the short sentences, but I have a hard time writing a long essay.”
SOLUTION: A long essay is basically just a lot of well-written sentences organized in a logical way.
If you can write good sentences, you just need to learn to become comfortable combining them in
interesting ways to produce paragraphs and longer essays.
SOLUTION: Learn how essays are developed by studying basic organizational structures used in
the essays and templates in this book. Look on university websites for examples of student essays
and study how the essays are organized. Looking at a lot of sample essays will help you understand
different ways to organize your ideas in writing.
SOLUTION: Practice writing essays. The more you practice essay writing, the easier it will be for you.
You can use the sample essay questions in this book. Write about each topic twice. Take a different
point of view each time.
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SOLUTION: Study other written pieces to see how other writers do it. Look online for editorials and
other opinion pieces to see how writers present opinions. After you read an editorial, think about your
own opinion on the topic, then write an essay expressing your opinion.
» CHALLENGE 4: “I just can’t think of anything to say when I have to answer a written request.”
SOLUTION: Begin by focusing on just one thing. Practice writing e-mails about a single topic. For
example, write an e-mail apologizing for missing a meeting, an e-mail requesting a day off, an e-mail
offering advice to a co-worker about a raise, or an e-mail explaining a problem.
SOLUTION: Practice brainstorming. This will help you come up with a lot of different ideas. When you
come up with a lot of ideas, you can choose the best ones. This will make your writing much easier.
Think about any topic, and brainstorm ideas. You can do this while riding on the bus, waiting for a
doctor’s appointment, or eating lunch by yourself. You can start with the e-mails in the exercises in this
book. For each task, brainstorm a list of at least ten possible ways you could address the task. Some
of the ideas you come up with may be silly, but it doesn’t matter. The point is to loosen up your mind.
If you have trouble coming up with ideas, think about different people you know and how they might
respond to the situation presented in the e-mail. Practicing in this way will help you get used to coming
up with ideas when you need them on the test.
» CHALLENGE 5: “I never have a chance to write to native English speakers.”
SOLUTION: Join an online forum. Post your thoughts on different subjects that interest you. This will
give you a chance to practice writing English in a situation of real communication.
SOLUTION: Take advantage of free online resources and read native speaker texts. Even if you
don’t have the chance to write to someone in English, you can learn a lot by reading correspondence
in English. Look at how the responses are structured. Look at some of the words and phrases used.
The more you read, the more examples you will see and the more accustomed you will become to the
ways the language is used.
» CHALLENGE 6: “By the time I think about what to write and then write it, I’m out of time.”
SOLUTION: For the Writing Test, you will need to be comfortable using a computer for writing. Practice
typing on a computer using a word-processing program. Also, be sure to practice editing what you write
because you will be able to change what you write during the test. You should be comfortable cutting
and pasting text.
SOLUTION: You will also need to be very comfortable using an English keyboard. It is extremely
important that you know where all of the letters are on the keyboard, how to make capital letters, and
where the punctuation marks are. You do not want to waste time figuring these things out during the
test. See page vii for more about typing practice needs.
SOLUTION: Practice working within a time limit. Use the timing suggestions in this book, and practice
writing to meet time limits. Do this frequently. This will help you learn to use your time more efficiently.
SOLUTION: Write simply. Don’t make things overly complex. A good simple piece will get a better
grade than a poorly written complex one. It will also take less time.
SOLUTION: Don’t spend a lot of time trying to figure out what your opinion really is or what the most
interesting response to a task might be. Just think of something that you can write about and that is
relevant to the given task. When you answer the questions, you must respond to the tasks, but other
than that, the content is not as important as your ability to demonstrate good writing skills.
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Questions 1-5: Write a Sentence Based on a Picture
The photos will depict common everyday scenes in places such as:
» Offices » Stores » Parks
» Banks » Restaurants » Airports
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Writing Test
Directions: You will write one sentence about a photo. You wall be given two words or phrases. You
must use them in your sentence. You can change the word forms, and you can use the words in a
different order.
Your sentence will be scored on
• appropriate use of grammar.
• relevance of the sentence to the photo.
In this part, you can move to the next question by clicking on “Next.” If you want to return to
a previous question, click on “Back.”
You will have eight minutes to complete this part of the test.
newspaper: a
publication consisting read/newspaper
of a number of large
sheets of folded
paper, on which news,
advertisements, and
other information is
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WRITING QUESTIONS 1-5: WRITE A SENTENCE BASED ON A PICTURE
B What You’ll Do
For Questions 1-5, you will write a sentence about a photo using the pair of words provided.
Now, write a sentence for the photo in Part A using the word pairs given. Then look at the
sample response. Notice that the grammar is correct, the response is relevant to the photo,
and it uses both of the words provided.
TIP 2 Use correct capitalization and punctuation. To write a good sentence that is easy to
understand, you need to use capitalization and punctuation correctly.
Capitalization refers to the use of capital letters. These large letters are also called uppercase letters.
All sentences in English begin with a capital letter. The English language also uses capital letters to
begin all proper nouns. Proper nouns include the names of people, companies, languages, and places.
The English language also uses capital letters on months, days, and titles. Look at these examples.
QUICK TIP The verb tense that you use depends on the photo. Other than the two tenses shown in the chart, you
Be careful not to use
will not usually have to use other verb tenses for Questions 1-5. This chart will help you choose the
capitals on general
correct tense for your response.
words. A word like
Grammar for Basic Descriptions of Photos
theater does not have a
Photo Types Verb Tenses Sentence Examples
capital letter unless it is
Constructions
part of the name of the
Photos with Present Subject + verb + • The men are eating pancakes.
theater or is the first
people in them continuous object • The woman is talking to the clerk.
word of a sentence.
Photos with no Simple present There is/are + • There is som e m ilk in the glass.
people in them subject • There are several books on the table.
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» TIP 2 Use modifiers to describe other words and give details. Modifiers are words, phrases, or
clauses that provide more information about words in a sentence. Adjectives modify nouns and
pronouns, while adverbs modify verbs, adjectives, and other adverbs.
For Questions 1-5, you may want to use participles as adjectives in your responses. Participles are
verb forms that serve as adjectives in sentences. This chart has more information on participles.
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TASK Place a check mark ( / ) where the modifier in parentheses should be added to the sentence.
1. (homemade) The □ cookies □ were □ .
2. (interesting) The □ film □ starts □ at □ 8:00.
3. (bored) The □ man □ looks □ at □ his □ watch □ .
By familiarizing yourself with types of word pairs you may see, you will be able to figure out what you
need to do in order to write the sentence. Study the chart below for a review of the parts of speech and
how they are typically used in sentences.
TASK Write the part of speech for each of the words in the pairs.
1. umbrella/hold____________________________ /____
2. helmet/on____________________________ /_______
3. hair/scissors_____________________________ /____
4. take/camera_____________________________ /____
5. refrigerator/empty____________________________ /.
» TIP 2 Identify the connection between the words provided and the photo. When you first see the
photograph, scan it quickly for its connection to the pair of words provided. For example, if one of the
words is a verb, look for this action in the photo. By doing this, you will understand the relationship
between the words in the pair. For example, you will know if a word is an adjective describing a noun or
a verb showing what is happening.
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TASK 1 Look at the photo. Then read the word pairs. Write what the subject, verb, and object for each
pair might be. There may be more than one possible answer.
TASK 2 Complete each sentence using the correct form of the word in parentheses.
is setting
1. The server______________________________ (set) the plate on the table.
2. The______________________________ (chair) are stacked on top of each other.
3. He______________________________ (look) at the menu.
TIP 3 Look for function words. If the word pair includes a function word, be sure to consider the
possible role of the function word in the sentence first. Look at this photo and explanation.
barefoot/although
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Explanation: First, consider the function word although. It is a subordinating conjunction used
to express contrast. Next, scan the photo for the other word in the pair (barefoot), and use it
to make a sentence: This person is barefoot. Finally, complete the sentence using the function
word, making sure that you express the meaning of the function word: This person is barefoot
although there is snow on the ground. The words can be used in any order, so you can also
write: Although there is snow on the ground, this person is barefoot Notice the comma when
the clause is used first.
TASK Look at the photo in TIP 2 TASK 1 on page 102. Then read the word pairs. Look back at the chart
of function word types on page 100. Decide the meaning of each function word below and write a
possible first and second clause. There may be more than one possible answer.
pen/and
whereas/stand
point/as
Two-Clause Responses
» TIP Look for conjunctions. Word pairs that include conjunctions (typically Questions 4 and 5) will often
require you to write one sentence with two clauses. A clause is a group of words that includes a subject
and a verb. An independent clause can stand on its own as a complete sentence, while a dependent
clause is not a complete sentence and must be combined with another sentence. Look at these
examples; pay special attention to the negative verbs.
Independent clauses: They are waiting, but they are not talking.
Dependent clause: They are not talking while they are waiting.
In some cases, both words in the word pair can go in the same clause or in separate clauses. Look at
these examples.
read/while
While the woman reads the newspaper, she drinks her coffee.
While the woman drinks her coffee, she reads the newspaper.
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Relevancy
» TIP Be sure your response is relevant to the photo. In addition to your use of correct grammar, raters
will be grading you based on whether your sentence accurately describes the photo. Be sure to only
mention objects that are obvious from the photo. Also, don’t guess about how people in the photo feel or
what they think.
TASK Look at the photo and word pair. Then answer the questions.
cart/aisle
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Photo 2
Photo 3
B Look at the photos and word pairs in Part A. Read the possible responses. Check ( /)
the best response for each photo. For each incorrect response, write the letter of the
reason it is wrong. Use the reasons in the box.
1 . ___Are flowers on the table. ___ The flowers are on the table.
2. ___The man is in the stadium. ___ The man is kicking the ball.
3. ___ The woman is standing by the door. ___ There is a woman by her house.
C Write your own sentences for the photos in Part A. Use the word pairs given.
1 . vase/on
2. play/stadium
3. carry/tray
D Now, evaluate your responses in Part C using the checklist below. How well did your
responses meet the scoring criteria? Check ( / ) Yes or No. Keep practicing until all of
your answers are Yes.
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Photo 2
Photo 3
B Write a response for each photo by answering the questions with complete sentences.
Don’t forget to use both key words in your response.
1. Is the box very heavy or very light?________________________________________________
2. Where is the man sitting?________________________________________________________
3. What is the woman doing even though it is raining?___________________________________
C Now create your own responses for the photos using these new word pairs.
1. carry/back_____________________________________________________________________
2. sit/while______________________________________________________________________
3. woman/cold___________________________________________________________________
D Now, evaluate your responses using the checklist below. How well did your responses
meet the scoring criteria? Check ( / ) Yes or No. Keep practicing until all of your
answers are Yes.
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Directions: You will write one sentence about a photo. You will be given two words or phrases. You
must use them in your sentence. You can change the word forms, and you can use the words in a
different order. Your sentences will be scored on
• appropriate use of grammar.
• relevance of the sentence to the photo.
Give yourself eight minutes to complete this part of the test.
wind/hard
2.
4.
5.