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    The document describes changes to the layout of West Park Secondary School from 1950 to 2010. [1] In 1950, the school was located near residential houses and farmland, with only a school building and playground. [2] By 1980, the houses had been converted into a car park and science block, while the farmland became a sports field. [3] From 1980 to 2010, the car park expanded, reducing the size of the sports field and playground, while the school building and science block remained the same.

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    The document describes changes to the layout of West Park Secondary School from 1950 to 2010. [1] In 1950, the school was located near residential houses and farmland, with only a school building and playground. [2] By 1980, the houses had been converted into a car park and science block, while the farmland became a sports field. [3] From 1980 to 2010, the car park expanded, reducing the size of the sports field and playground, while the school building and science block remained the same.

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    The document describes changes to the layout of West Park Secondary School from 1950 to 2010. [1] In 1950, the school was located near residential houses and farmland, with only a school building and playground. [2] By 1980, the houses had been converted into a car park and science block, while the farmland became a sports field. [3] From 1980 to 2010, the car park expanded, reducing the size of the sports field and playground, while the school building and science block remained the same.

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    The document describes changes to the layout of West Park Secondary School from 1950 to 2010. [1] In 1950, the school was located near residential houses and farmland, with only a school building and playground. [2] By 1980, the houses had been converted into a car park and science block, while the farmland became a sports field. [3] From 1980 to 2010, the car park expanded, reducing the size of the sports field and playground, while the school building and science block remained the same.

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    - Body 1: viết trong giai đoạn 1950 đến 1980

    + houses -> car park và science block

    + farmland -> sports field

    + playground giữ nguyên

    - Body 2: viết trong giai đoạn 1980 đến 2010

    + car park mở rộng, ngược lại sports field bị thu hẹp

    + science block giữ nguyên

    + playground bị thu hẹp, school giữ nguyên xuyên suốt giai đoạn từ 1950 tới

    2010

    Bài làm : ( 153 words )


    The pictures demonstrate several renovations which were carried out at West Park Secondary

    School from 1950 to 2010.

    Overall, it is clear that the school complex has undergone great development with more

    amenities. It is just school and playground that remained unchanged.

    Looking first at the period between 1950 and 2010, it is true that some changes occurred.

    What were originally house buildings were divided into a car park and science block. In

    addition, farmland transformed into a sports field, whereas the playground stayed the same.

    With regard to the 1980-2010 period, it can be seen that the science block stayed unchanged,

    while the sports field was reduced in size to give space for a car park. This change resulted in

    the alteration of the playground's size, in particular, being narrowed. Meanwhile, the school

    which was considered as the main building of this complex did not show any development

    over the whole period.

    ⇒ Viết như này ok hoặc chia thành 3 đoạn tương ứng với 3 map cũng đc nhé

    IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

    ○ Overall:

    ■ West Park Secondary School contained fewer buildings in 1950 and

    was located nearer residential and agricultural land >> IELTS

    TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân biệt CONTAIN / INCLUDE CONSIST/

    INVOLVE

    ■ By 2010, several facilities had been added for students and there was

    the notable addition of a large car park.

    ○ Body 1: Viết về map 1 (Năm 1950)

    ■ In 1950, 3 rows of houses were located to the left of the school


    ■ Just above a large section of farmland and a playground attached to the

    school. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "attach"

    tiếng anh

    ○ Body 2: Viết về map 2 (Năm 1980)

    ■ By 1980, there were significant alterations related to housing.

    ■ The former houses were replaced by a car park and science block and

    the farmland was removed in favor of a sports field.

    ■ The playground remained unchanged. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng

    dẫn Cách dùng động từ"form"tiếng anh

    ○ Body 3: Viết về map 3 (Năm 2010)

    ■ Over the next 30 years, the car park was expanded towards the south

    and occupied the sports field.

    ■ The sports field was moved to the east and took a third of the original

    playground area. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ

    "loose" tiếng anh

    ■ The science block and school building remained unchanged between

    1980 and 2010.

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