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1EN0 - 02 - Rms - 20230824 2
1EN0 - 02 - Rms - 20230824 2
Summer 2023
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General Marking Guidance
• All candidates must receive the same treatment. Examiners must mark
the last candidate in exactly the same way as they mark the first.
• Mark schemes should be applied positively. Candidates must be
rewarded for what they have shown they can do rather than penalised
for omissions.
• Examiners should mark according to the mark scheme – not according
to their perception of where the grade boundaries may lie.
• All the marks on the mark scheme are designed to be awarded.
Examiners should always award full marks if deserved, i.e. if the answer
matches the mark scheme. Examiners should also be prepared to award
zero marks if the candidate’s response is not worthy of credit
according to the mark scheme.
• Where some judgement is required, mark schemes will provide the
principles by which marks will be awarded and
exemplification/indicative content will not be exhaustive.
• When examiners are in doubt regarding the application of the
mark scheme to a candidate’s response, a senior examiner must be
consulted before a mark is given.
• Crossed out work should be marked unless the candidate has replaced it
with an alternative response.
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the question. It is the examiner’s responsibility to apply their
professional judgement to the candidate’s response in determining
if the answer fulfils the requirements of the question.
• Examiners should first decide which descriptor most closely matches the
answer and place it in that level. The mark awarded within the level will
be decided based on the quality of the answer and will be modified
according to how securely all bullet points are displayed at that
level.
• In cases of uneven performance, the points above will still apply.
Candidates will be placed in the level that best describes their
answer according to the descriptors in that level. Marks will be
awarded towards the top or bottom of that level depending on
how they have evidenced each of the descriptor bullet points.
• If the candidate’s answer meets the requirements fully, markers
should be prepared to award full marks within the level. The top mark
in the level is used for work that is as good as can realistically be
expected within that level.
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Paper 2 Mark Scheme
The table below shows the number of raw marks allocated for each question in this mark
scheme.
Component 2 –
Non-fiction and
Transactional
Writing
Question 1 2 2
Question 2 2 2
Question 3 15 15
Question 4 1 1
Question 5 1 1
Question 6 15 15
Question 7a 6 6
Question 7b 14 14
Question 8 or 9 24 16 40
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Section A: Reading
Question AO1: Identify and interpret explicit and implicit information Mark
Number and ideas
1 Accept any two of the following answers, based on the given lines: (2)
The call came on Friday night, his sister’s voice on the phone: “Can
you come to Achim’s parents’ place tomorrow?” To anyone
listening in, there would have been nothing suspicious about the
call, but Hans-Joachim Tillemann knew it was the signal he had
been waiting for.
Question AO1: Identify and interpret explicit and implicit information Mark
Number and ideas
2 Accept any reasonable answer, based on the given lines. (2)
Quotations and candidate's own words are acceptable.
For example:
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In responses to the question, examiners should be aware of the different ways
candidates may structure their responses. There should be sufficient evidence analysing
both language and structure to reward responses. Responses that are unbalanced
cannot access Level 3 or above, where analysis of both language and structure
is required.
Question Indicative content
Number
3 Reward responses that analyse how the text uses language and structure to
interest and engage the reader.
Responses may include the following points about the language of the text:
• the writer begins the extract with the possessive pronoun ‘his’, with no
name mentioned, creating a sense of secrecy from the start
• the contrast between the content of the message and the secret meaning
also builds a sense of tension and excitement: ‘“Can you come to Achim’s
parents’ place tomorrow?”’, ‘Hans-Joachim Tillemann knew it was the
signal he had been waiting for’
• the phrase ‘most daring mass escape’ heightens the danger by reference
to the scale and suggesting others were less important, daring or exciting
• language is used to emphasise that there are restrictions in place in East
Germany: ‘listening in’, ‘suspicious’, ‘The border guards probably noticed
nothing out of the ordinary’, ‘not allowed’, ‘cutting East Germany off from
the outside world’
• this is further emphasised by the use of negatives to underpin the idea
that the escape is dangerous and tense: ‘nothing suspicious’, ‘nothing out
of the ordinary’, ‘not unusual’, ‘no light’, ‘not allowed’, ‘‘‘don’t know’’’, ‘‘‘no
sense’’’
• emotive language heightens the sense of tension in the escape: ‘daring’,
‘risking’, ‘nervous’, ‘orders to shoot’
• references to danger show the risk that people are taking in trying to leave
East Germany: ‘risking their lives’, ‘orders to shoot’, ‘The space was so
narrow one woman became stuck’
• references to final opportunities emphasise the significance of the escape:
‘last chance’, ‘last opportunity’, ‘running out of time’
• the writer uses literary language to create a sense of narrative, almost as
if it is a spy novel: ‘The call came on Friday night’, ‘He glanced over the
wall, at the building opposite’, ‘Mr Tillemann whispered the password:
“Tokyo”’, ‘Tillemann stepped in’
• language connected with espionage is used to create tension and
excitement: ‘suspicious’, ‘daring mass escape’, ‘the escape team’,
‘whispered the password’, ‘third conspirator’, ‘undercover couriers’
• this is further emphasised by language used to show the need to be quiet:
‘whispered the password’, ‘motioned them… to make as little noise as
possible’, ‘padded through the hallway in their socks’
• those helping the escape and others escaping are not named, which
demonstrates the need for secrecy and the danger involved in trying to
escape: ‘the escape team’, ‘someone was waiting’, ‘A second man’, ‘A third
conspirator’, ‘one woman’
• the writer’s descriptions of the scale of the tunnel create a sense of fear
and danger: ‘a narrow tunnel, two feet high and three feet wide, and
started crawling’, ‘loose dirt’, ‘The space was so narrow’; this contrasts
with the number of people in it: ‘There were several people in the tunnel’
• the writer’s vivid descriptions of Tillemann’s physical state before the
escape demonstrate the further risk to him: ‘emergency operation’, ‘acute
appendicitis’, ‘stitches were fresh in his side’
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• the writer shows the risks that Tillemann has already taken in trying to
leave East Germany, which creates emphasis on why this is his last chance
to escape: ‘he had already spent eight months in a Communist prison for
trying to cross the Berlin Wall’, ‘his call-up papers for compulsory military
service had arrived’.
Responses may include the following points about the structure of the text:
(15 marks)
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Level Mark AO2: Explain, comment on and analyse how writers use
language and structure to achieve effects and influence
readers, using relevant subject terminology to support their
views
0 No rewardable material.
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Question AO1: Identify and interpret explicit and implicit information Mark
Number and ideas
4 Accept any reasonable answer based on the given lines. (1)
Quotations and candidate's own words are acceptable.
That’s all I lived for – escape, escape, by myself or with others: but
in any case to escape, to have it away, to make a break. It was an
obsession: I never talked about it, but it haunted me. And I’d
accomplish my ideal without weakening: I’d break out and away.
For example:
• it is everything he lived for / he is determined (1)
• he does not mind whether he escapes ‘by myself or with others’
(1)
• ‘It was an obsession’ (1)
• he keeps his feelings about it to himself / ‘never talked about it’
(1)
• ‘it haunted me’ (1)
• he feels confident he can do it / ‘I’d accomplish my ideal’ (1)
• it is his ultimate aim / ‘my ideal’ (1)
Question AO1: Identify and interpret explicit and implicit information Mark
Number and ideas
5 Accept any reasonable answer based on the given lines. (1)
Quotations and candidate's own words are acceptable.
‘I’ll hollow out a place in a retaining wall – I’ll take out a big stone
and make a kind of little cave. That way, when a section comes
along, I’ll only have to lift the stone, hide the wood, and put it back
again.’
For example:
• he will ‘hollow out a place (in a retaining wall)’ (1)
• he plans to remove a large stone (1)
• he is going to ‘make a kind of little cave’ (1)
• when he receives a section he will ‘lift the stone’ (1)
• he will hide the wood (in the cave) (1)
• he will place the stone back in place after the sections are
hidden (1)
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Question Indicative content
Number
6 Reward responses that evaluate how successfully the attempt to show the
importance of planning is shown.
(15 marks)
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Level Mark AO4: Evaluate texts critically and support this with appropriate
textual reference
0 No rewardable material.
12
Question Indicative content
Number
7(a) Candidates must draw on BOTH texts to access marks.
• both men plan an escape: in Text 1 it is from East Germany, and in Text 2 it is
from an island prison
• both men have thought about escape before trying to make it: in Text 1
Tillemann waits for ‘the signal’ and in Text 2 Papillon says escape is ‘all I lived
for’
• both men attempt to escape via hidden means: in Text 1 there is a tunnel
accessed through a hole in the floor of a disused lavatory, and in Text 2
Papillon’s raft pieces are being hidden as they are being built
• both men are taking a risk in trying to escape: in Text 1 those escaping are
‘risking their lives’ and in Text 2 Papillon risks being caught and his
conspirators being ‘tortured’ and sentenced to more time in prison
• both men have to try to avoid being caught by guards: in Text 1 the border
guards and Text 2 the prison guards, ‘screws’
• both men know that something could go wrong: in Text 1 there is an ‘escape
team’ to alert them if something goes wrong, and in Text 2 Papillon comes up
with a ‘defence’ in case the prisoner helping him is caught
• in both texts the men rely on others to help them escape: in Text 1 there is an
escape team who will signal if anything goes wrong, and in Text 2 Papillon
cannot escape without the help of the man who is making the raft and also
Carbonieri
• both men are trying to escape via small means: in Text 1 escape is via a
‘narrow tunnel’ and in Text 2 it is on a ‘raft big enough for two’
• in both texts the men have health considerations: in Text 1 Tillemann has
stitches following an emergency operation and in Text 2 Papillon is trying to
make himself fit and healthy for the escape
• in both texts the men are reflecting on their experience: in Text 1 Tillemann
says ‘‘‘I don’t know how long I was in the tunnel’’’, and in Text 2 Papillon says
‘That’s all I lived for’.
(6 marks)
Level Mark AO1: Select and synthesise evidence from different texts
0 No rewardable material.
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In responses to the following question, examiners should be aware of the different ways
candidates may structure their responses. There should be sufficient evidence in the
response analysing each text, and comparing the texts to reward responses.
Responses that are unbalanced will not be able to access Level 3 or above,
where explanation of writers’ ideas and perspectives is required alongside a
range of comparisons between texts.
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under the wall’, whereas in Text 2 the plan is that only Papillon and Carbonieri will
escape
• in both texts there are health issues that affect the escapes. In Text 1, Tillemann’s
health may be a hindrance to escape as ‘he had needed an emergency operation for
acute appendicitis a few days before, and the stitches were still fresh in his side’,
whereas in Text 2 Papillon prepares for his health to be at its best for the escape: ‘I
was eating better than I’d ever eaten before, and fishing kept me wonderfully fit.’
(14 marks)
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Level Mark AO3: Compare writers’ ideas and perspectives, as well as how
these are conveyed, across two or more texts
0 No rewardable material.
Level 2 3–5 • The response considers obvious comparisons between the texts.
• Comment on writers’ ideas and perspectives, including theme,
language and/or structure.
• The selection of references is valid, but not developed.
NB: The mark awarded cannot progress beyond the top of
Level 2 if only ONE text has been considered in detail.
Level 4 9–11 • The response considers a wide range of comparisons between the
texts.
• Exploration of writers’ ideas and perspectives including how the
theme, language and/or structure are used across the texts.
• References are balanced across both texts and fully support the
points being made.
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Section B: Transactional Writing
Refer to the writing assessment grids at the end of this section when marking
Question 8 and Question 9.
Responses may:
• offer ideas about types of personal freedom, for example: freedom of
speech, freedom of movement around the country or internationally,
freedom of religion, gender, political view or sexuality, freedom of thought,
freedom of expression through looks, art, music or writing
• suggest reasons why personal freedom is important, for example:
differences can be celebrated, freedom to be the way you want to be
enhances and challenges society, people who have personal freedom are
happy and creative
• offer comments on the positives and negatives of personal freedom, for
example: positives such as enhancing the variety within society, pride as
individuals, creativity and challenge, protecting people who are different,
and negatives such as potential law-breaking, protests that can become
violent or dangerous, people being encouraged to be involved in risky or
dangerous behaviour, people being discriminated against.
(40 marks)
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Question Indicative content
Number
*9 Purpose: to write an article for a newspaper to inform or advise.
Responses may:
• give views about working with other people to achieve something, for
example: it can help to achieve the task more efficiently, it means that
people get to know one another’s strengths and areas for improvement,
it helps people to cooperate and be supportive, it means more ideas are
generated as more people share their views
• give views about working alone to achieve a goal, for example: it means
you can be more productive as there are fewer distractions, it avoids
conflict, it means that only one person is responsible for meeting a
deadline and avoids this being missed, there is more flexibility if you
work alone as you are not reliant on others
• offer examples of successful and/or unsuccessful teams and what they
have or have not achieved, for example: sporting teams such as football,
rugby or cricket teams that have won leagues or been relegated,
Government groups that have advised on policy or changed history,
groups working together on reality television shows such as The
Apprentice that were or were not successful.
(40 marks)
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Writing assessment grids for Question 8 and Question 9
AO5:
• Communicate clearly, effectively and imaginatively, selecting and adapting
tone, style and register for different forms, purposes and audiences
• Organise information and ideas, using structural and grammatical features to
support coherence and cohesion of texts
Level 1 1–4 • offers a basic response, with audience and/or purpose not fully
established
• expresses information and ideas, with limited use of structural
and grammatical features
Level 3 10–14 • selects material and stylistic or rhetorical devices to suit audience
and purpose, with appropriate use of tone, style and register
• develops and connects appropriate information and ideas;
structural and grammatical features and paragraphing make
meaning clear
Level 4 15–19 • organises material for particular effect, with effective use of tone,
style and register
• manages information and ideas, with structural and grammatical
features used cohesively and deliberately across the text
Level 5 20–24 • shapes audience response with subtlety, with sophisticated and
sustained use of tone, style and register
• manipulates complex ideas, utilising a range of structural and
grammatical features to support coherence and cohesion.
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AO6: Candidates must use a range of vocabulary and sentence structures for
clarity, purpose and effect, with accurate spelling and punctuation
Level 2 4-6 • writes with a range of correctly spelt vocabulary, e.g. words with
regular patterns such as prefixes, suffixes, double consonants
• uses punctuation with control, creating a range of sentence
structures, including coordination and subordination
Level 3 7-9 • uses a varied vocabulary and spells words containing irregular
patterns correctly
• uses accurate and varied punctuation, adapting sentence
structure to contribute positively to purpose and effect
Level 4 10-12 • uses a wide, selective vocabulary with only occasional spelling
errors
• positions a range of punctuation for clarity, managing sentence
structures for deliberate effect
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