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ENGLISH 1119/2
PAPER 2 : PART 2
GUIDED WRITING: A SCAFFOLD
Ms. Yasmin Safruddin
MRSM Serting
 TODAY'S CHECKLIST

Technical aspects of Types & Cohesive Devices &

Guided Writing Sample Essays Vocabulary
 Technical
Aspects
Candidates
Need To Know
PART 2 : GUIDED WRITING

ONE question
A response to an input text (± 125 - 150
words)
Guided essay with 3 BULLET POINTS GIVEN
CEFR Level: B1
Marks: 20
Recommended time: 20 - 25 minutes
 CEFR LEVEL 101
PROFICIENT
INDEPENDENT USERS
BASIC USERS USERS

level B1 levels C1 and C2

level A1 (Intermediate/
(Elementary/ Beginner) (Advanced)
Pre-Intermediate)
level A2
level B2 (Upper
(Pre-Intermediate/
Elementary)
Intermediate
/Intermediate)
 Part 2 Proficiency Range
B2
B1 Can write an essay that develops
an argument systematically with
Can write short, simple essays appropriate highlighting of
on topics of interest. significant points and relevant
supporting details.
 Part 2 Proficiency Range
B2
B1 Can write an essay which develops
an argument, giving reasons in
Can write a text on a topical
support of or against a particular
subject or personal interest, using
point of view and explaining the
simple language to list advantages
advantages and disadvantages of
and disadvantages, give and
various options.
justify his/her opinion.
 Tell me some WORDS
that come to your
mind when you see
these letters!

C CA O L
 You might have got some!
relevant reader's elaboration
attention errors
omissions coherent
misinterpretation vocabulary
connectors
register
tone grammar
WHAT ARE WE LOOKING AT WHEN
MARKING YOUR ESSAYS?
4 categories:
1- Content (C)
2- Communicative
Achievement (CA)
3- Organisation (O)
4- Language (L)
The separation of
assessment focus
LET'S TAKE A LOOK AT THE SCALE
You're doing great!

Let's look at each criteria a bit closer!

Key: When you know the expectations,

you'll stay on the right track
 PART 2 : CONTENT

fulfilment of task requirements

content elements are addressed
appropriately
you're asked to write about three main
aspects of a topic AND to provide a rationale
for your point(s) of view
if you failed to provide reasons, considered
contains 'minor omissions'; score 4 or 3
PART 2 : COMMUNICATIVE ACHIEVEMENT
correct genre, register
correct tone : semi-formal
Does your response hold the target reader's
attention?
Do you do it effectively, flexibly, or
convincingly?
Are your ides being communicated in a
simple, straightforward or complex
manner?
 PART 2 : ORGANISATION

COHERENCE - how your ideas are linked;

linking words, cohesive devices

PARAGRAPHING

PUNCTUATION
 PART 2 : LANGUAGE
Varieties of English with some degree of
consistency; spelling (British English)

BASIC vocabulary, EVERYDAY vocabulary,

LESS COMMON LEXIS

SLIPS : non-systematic performance errors

ERRORS: systematic
What do you need to
do in Part 2?

Step-by-step
 Part 2: B2 Level

Can write an essay which

1. develops an argument,
2. gives reasons in support of or against a particular P.O.V,
3. explains the advantages and disadvantages of various
options,
4. highlights significant points and relevant supporting detail,
5. includes detailed descripton of a complex process,
6. evaluate different ideas or solutions to a problem.
Types &
Sample
Essays
PART 2: TYPES OF QUESTIONS

1. ESSAYS TO EXPRESS
OPINION
2. FOR/AGAINTS ESSAYS
3. ESSAYS ON ADVANTAGES
AND DISADVANTAGES
 STEP 1 : ANALYSE
READ & UNDERSTAND THE INSTRUCTION &
STIMULUS
IDENTIFY & HIGHLIGHT KEY WORDS
BE SURE TO UNDERSTAND THE TASK
GUIDED STEP 2 : PLAN
RESPON TO ALL THE BULLET POINTS
ESSAY QUICKLY JOT DOWN YOUR IDEAS
ELABORATE YOUR IDEAS

DO THESE, AND STEP 3 : WRITE

YOU SHALL NOT USE APPROPRIATE STYLE
ORGANISE YOUR PARAGRAPH BY BULLETS
BE MISLED USE SUITABLE COHESIVE DEVICES
USE CORRECT TENSE
 SAMPLE
QUESTIONS
 Essay to
Express Opinion
 READ & ANALYSE
Part 2
You must answer this question. Write your answer in 125 - 150 words
in appropriate style.

Question 2
Your class has been discussing about TV programmes and your
teacher has asked you to write about your favourite TV programme.
In our essay your should write about:
your favourite programme
reasons for your choice
when do you normally watch it
Write your essay using all the notes giving reasons for your point of
view.
 LET'S PLAN !

PARAGRAPH CONTENT
SUGGESTION
FOR PARA 1
INTRO: YOUR FAVOURITE PROGRAMME +
DESCRIPTION
PARAGRAPH
ORGANISATION PARA 2 REASON 1 + EXPLANATION
REASON 2 + EXPLANATION
Make sure to keep your response WHEN DO YOU USUALLY WATCH IT +
accurate and elaborate the PARA 3 ELABORATION
content. CONCLUSION
PARA 1

> Intro: general information about TV programmes

> Your favourite programme + description

As a food lover, I love to watch any TV programmes that

bring me into different cultures around the world showing their
unique cuisines. My favourite however, has to be Diners, Drive-
ins and Drive. It is an American food reality television series
that premiered in April, 2007 on Food Network. The show is
hosted by Guy Fieri featuring a road trip concept. In every
episode, Fieri travels around the United States, Canada, and
Mexico looking at various diners, drive-in restaurants, and dive
bars.
PARA 2

> Reason 1 + explanation

> Reason 2 + explanation
The first reason why I was hooked on the show the first time I
watched it a few years ago is because of the road trip concept where
the host brings the viewers along on his drive before arriving at the
selected eateries. The journey along the beautiful landscapes of
foreign countries heighten my interest and curiosity to learn about
their food. On top of that, the eateries they chose mainly specialise in
my favourite fried and grilled food which are mostly unique burgers,
mouth-watering ribs and fresh seafood dishes. Just watching the
proses of the cooks preparing the food makes me feels the
satisfaction as they really put their heart and soul into each step from
preparing the ingredients to finally plating the dishes.
PARA 3

> when do you usually watch it + elaboration

> conclusion
I always watch this show during the weekend in the
afternoon. Sometimes, I had to attend extra classes on the
weekend so I would ask my mom to record any new episodes
for me to watch later. Other than teaching me about how
different cultures serve and enjoy my favourite food, this
reality show also has gotten me into cooking and trying
different recipes for my family. It is like killing two birds with
one stone. All in all, Diners, Drive-Ins and Drive is one
creatively presented TV show and I am sure I would continue
watching it for as long as it is aired.
 WHAT DO YOU THINK?

Is the task fulfilled?

Is the tone and register okay?
Do you like the paragraphing?
How about the Cohesive Devices? Did you see any?
Does the essay sound smooth to you?
Is the language easy to understand and mature enough?
 P.E.E.R
to better organise P. State your POINTS clearly.

your paragraph.
E . Support it with
EXPLANATIONS.
E . Give EXAMPLES to make your
points clear.
R . REPHRASE your opinion or
make general statement.
FOR-AGAINST Essay
GUIDED WRITING: 'FOR AND AGAINST'

WHAT DO YOU NEED TO KNOW?

similar to 'pros and cons'
requires to present both sides of a topic in a fair way
(discuss objectively and equally)
candidate can state his/her opinion on the issue
directly or indirectly
candidate should avoid any strong or emotional
language to express opinion
SAMPLE QUESTION
Brainstorming &
Planning Time!
 "For" Reality TV "Against" Reality TV
Show Show

offers varieties of content

easy way to become
platforms to discover new
famous
talents
involves difficult and
[learn about life
dangerous tasks
experiences & interesting
[follows same format]
places]
 PARA 1 PARA 2

Intro Content points FOR reality

general opinion / the trend shows
of reality shows Paragraphs (use P.E.E.R)
examples of reality shows
thesis statement
Planning

PARA 3 PARA 4

Content points AGAINST Conclusion

reality shows your opinion of reality
TV shows
(use P.E.E.R)
 PARA 1
Intro
general ideas on reality shows
examples of reality shows
thesis statement

The entertainment industry, like anything else, evolves through time. What is
produced and becomes popular is heavily influenced with the people's taste as
well as the advancement of technology. Reality TV shows have been rising in
popularity as a form of daily entertainment nowadays. There are countless
reality shows being broadcasted on television every day such as singing
competitions, cooking shows and survival contests. As a teenager, I think these
shows come with their own benefits and downsides.
 PARA 2

Content points FOR reality shows

offers varieties of content
platforms to discover new talents
P.E.E.R
Firstly, I think people love watching reality shows as they offers myriads of exciting content. Given the varieties
of options, people can choose the types of programme they want to watch depending on what they are
interested in. Some people enjoy watching singing or cooking competitions while others prefer watching their
favourite hosts virtually bringing them travelling around the world. In addition, reality TV programmes serve as
a great platform to discover new talents such as singers, actors and chefs. The American TV series, MasterChef
for example, has opened a career path for hundreds of its contestants since being premiered in 2010. Hence,
based on the creative content and the promising talents they produced, it is no wonder that reality TV shows
are the people's choice during their leisure time.
 PARA 3
Content points AGAINST reality shows
easy way to become famous
involves difficult and dangerous tasks P.E.E.R
On the other hand, some people think that reality TV shows are the easy platforms to gain popularity for the
contestants. This lead to them being compared to those successful singers, actors or chefs who have worked hard
all their lives and are good at their jobs because of years of hard work. As an example, a young celebrity chef
who rose to popularity just in a year because of one grand win and a senior chef who cooked in the kitchen for
decades before being well-known. Additionally, some reality TV programmes require the participants to perform
burdensome and embarrassing tasks. Some are even dangerous and life-threatening such as American Ninja
Warrior and Survivor. To make things worse, there is usually only one winner after all the adversities. Despite
being entertaining, some reality TV shows lead to the questionable shortcut to fame while some are risking the
safety of the participants. Thus, they are not everyone's cup of tea.
 PARA 4

Conclusion
your opinion of reality TV shows

To sum up, I think that reality TV shows are good entertainment and
definitely worthy to binge-watch during free time. The entertaining
nature of the programmes could serve as a stress-reliever for most
people after a long exhausting day. As the shows come in a plethora of
variations, I am sure there is something for everyone to enjoy and take
away from them.
 Advantages /
Disadvantages Essay
 GUIDED WRITING:
'ADVANTAGES/DISADVANTAGES'

WHAT DO YOU NEED TO KNOW?

Begin with an introduction
State the topic but do not give a personal opinion
Use only facts
2nd para - 2 advantages, then elaborate
3rd para - 2 disadvantages, then elaborate
Conclusion : give your opinion about the topic
SAMPLE QUESTION
Brainstorming &
Planning Time!
 Should I move out and
rent with my friends?
Advantages Disadvantages

increases social skills lack of privacy

being more responsible ignore boundaries
[motivates each other] [unreliable roomates]
 PARA 1 PARA 2

Intro Content points on the

general opinion on studying in ADVANTAGES of renting
local institutions Paragraphs with friends
the options students have when (use P.E.E.R)
choosing accommodations Planning
thesis statement

PARA 3 PARA 4

Content points AGAINST Conclusion

Content points on the
reality shows your preference
DISADVANTAGES of renting
with friends
(use P.E.E.S)
(use P.E.E.R)
 PARA 1

Intro
general opinion on studying in local institutions
the options students have when choosing accommodations
thesis statement

The SPM results are out. Applying for colleges comes next. Once a place in your
chosen institution is secured, the question that follows might be "Where is the
best place to stay? At home? At the dorm? A rental house? The latter is probably
the option that needs to be thought thoroughly as it is a huge step in a student's
life which comes with advantages and disadvantages.
 PARA 2

The advantages
increases social skills
being more responsible

To begin with, renting with friends when you are at a college or a university will help
you make new acquaintances especially if you are new to the area. Having roommates is
one way to get to know new people and expand networking that would come handy
throughout your study. For example, an introvert student could slowly break out of his
shell and become more confident when living with others. On top of that, renting with
friends could be the time for a student to nurture his responsibility through the shared
duties as they try to meet each other's expectations under the same roof. As an
example, when someone lives alone, they tend to be gross by leaving dirty dishes
stacking in the sink but having roommates might make them be more responsible
thinking that it is a shared space. Hence, renting with friends could make you a more
sociable person as well as improving your sense of responsibility.
 PARA 3
Disadvantages
lack of privacy
ignore boundaries

On the other hands, living with friends might not be all sunshine and rainbows as
compared to when only meeting them to hang out. The first issue might be the lack of
privacy. Renting with friends means having a shared space you call home. If you are
used to having your own private bedroom and bathroom at home, that might not be
the case anymore when you decide to live with your friends. Some even have to have
shared beds to save money. In addition, having roommates could get messy if one of
them started to ignore the boundaries. Although you may set the house rules and
some boundaries for each person, sometimes they may choose to ignore the rules and
do what they want. Some roommates go to an extent of neglecting all the house
chores leaving them all completely to the other roommates. Therefore, having to give
up your privacy and facing the risk of having an ignorant roommate are some of the
downsides of renting with friends.
 PARA 4

Conclusion
your preference (opinion)

In a nutshell, I personally prefer the idea of renting with my friends once I enter
college. It is undeniable that living with people you don't actually know comes with
a lot of surprises and probably disappointments too. Nevertheless, on the brighter
side, I am sure I could learn a lot from the experience and become a more
responsible person which will prepare me for the next stage in my life.
 Cohesive
Devices &
Vocabulary
 The Use of CDs (Organisation)
1 MARK
3 MARKS
5 MARKS
Text is connected using high
Use simple connectors and a
Text is generally well-organised frequency connectors.
limited number of cohesive
and coherent, using a variety of
devices appropriately. i.e) "and" , "but"
cohesive devices.
i.e) "because" , "first of all" ,
i.e) "moreover" , "on top of "finally"
that" , "as a result"
Use a variety of sentence
Language &
structures - simple, compound, Vocabulary
complex.
Use a variety of vocabulary -
everyday vocabulary and less
common lexis related to the
topic.
Instead of using the word
"very _____", find a better word
to replace it.
Use ADJECTIVES & ADVERBS
where appropriate.
 Let's drop the
‘very’ and write
effectively!
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