TUGAS 2

BAHASA INGGRIS

OLEH :

NAMA : ENGGI ERLANDA

NIM : 050064049
PROGRAM S TUDI : ILMU HUKUM S 1
UPBJJ : JAMBI

KEMENTERIAN PENDIDIKAN DAN KEBUDAYAAN

UNIVERSITAS TERBUKA
1. Please look at the letter below.

Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project Manager

555-555-5555 |[email protected] | Seattle, Washington98128

July 1, 2023

Vincent Prasad, Sr. Data Analyst

123-456-7890 | [email protected] | New Orleans, Louisiana

70122

1 Dear Vincent Prasad,

It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data
Analyst role with Clouddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project
manager at Asomtech Solutions. I have 12 years of experience working in
the tech industry and have seen many young people come and go. Ashley
Singer is one individual I have worked with who has always distinguished
herself as a team member.

During our time together, Ashley displayed great talents in data analytics.
When we first met, I felt immediately impressed with Ashley. During the
time we worked together, her understanding of analyzing data to achieve
results for our company grew far more than that of her peers.

2 It's not just her technical skills that impress me. Ashley was a joy to work
with because of her amazingly positive attitude and ability to communicate
across teams. Her focus and attention to detail were also necessary and
valued not just by me, but also by her peers, who often relied on her to get
the job done. I'm absolutely confident that Ashley would be a great fit at
Clouddatanow Tech. She can bring the skills and experiences you're

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 looking for in a candidate, and she can quickly become an asset and help
your company grow.

If you need more information or specific examples, please don't hesitate to

contact me. As a recommendation letter likely only provides a snapshot of
her talents and achievements, I'd be happy to further elaborate on my time
working with her.

Sincerely,

3 Rachel Gomez

Sr. Project Manager

Questions
identify the part of the letter numbered 1-3

Answer
1. Number 1 : This part contains the salutation and introduction. It begins with
"Dear Vincent Prasad" and provides the initial context for the
recommendation.
2. Number 2 : This part constitutes the main body of the letter. It contains the
detailed recommendation for Ashley Singer, including her qualifications,
skills, and attributes, as well as an offer to provide further information if
needed.
3. Number 3 : This part is the closing of the letter, which includes Rachel
Gomez's signature and her job title: "Sincerely, Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project
Manager."
These three parts together make up the structure of the letter: the introduction,
main content, and closing.

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2. Please look at the letter below.

Bridgestone International Co.

1660 Maple Court
Kennett, MO 63857

July 21, 2021

William Reed
Purchase Manager
The Cooking Store
2175 Rivendell Drive
Mineral City, OH 44656

Dear Mr. Reed,

Thank u for your letter of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalog, price list,
and terms of payment?

We are pleased to enclose our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment
together with samples of our promotional gifts. We hope you will find our
prices n terms satisfactory.

I look forward to receive your order.

Yours sincerely,

Robert Brown

Robert Brown
Sales Manage

Questions
Please identify 5 (five) errors in the letter above.

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Answer
Here are five errors in the letter you provided :
1. The use of "u" instead of "you" in the sentence "Thank u for your letter of 4
july."
2. The incorrect date format "4 july" should be "July 4."
3. The title "Sales Manage" is incorrect; it should be "Sales Manager."
4. There is a missing period at the end of the sentence "Thank u for your letter
of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms of
payment?"
5. The closing sentence should be "I look forward to receiving your order"
instead of "I look forward to receive your order."

These errors include typos, grammatical issues, and formatting issues.

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3. You are chairman of the committee for an international seminar and invite
experts in the field. One of the experts who attended as a guest speaker was Prof.
Allen Smith. Write a thank-you email for Prof. Allen Smith who is willing to be a
guest speaker at your international seminar. Your email should be 100-150 words
long.
Answer

Subject: Heartfelt Gratitude for Your Seminar Keynote

Dear Professor Allen Smith,

I trust this message finds you well. On behalf of the organizing committee, I wish
to extend our sincere appreciation for your outstanding contribution as a keynote
speaker at our international seminar.

Your presentation on [topic] was not only enlightening but also left a lasting
impact on our diverse audience. Your expertise and insights were invaluable, and
your ability to convey complex ideas in an accessible manner was truly
commendable.

Your presence enhanced the quality of our seminar, and we are grateful for your
willingness to share your knowledge. The feedback from attendees has been
overwhelmingly positive, and your session received accolades.

We look forward to the possibility of future collaborations and hope to welcome

you again as a speaker. Thank you once more for your valuable participation in
our seminar.

Warm regards,
Enggi Erlanda

Chair of the Organizing Committee

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