TUGAS TUTORIAL 2

BAHASA INGGRIS

TUTOR: OKTARIYANI, S.PD, M.PD.

DISUSUN OLEH :

BAMBANG RENALDY
NIM : 050046491

PROGRAM S1 ILMU HUKUM

UNIT PROGRAM BELAJAR JARAK JAUH (UPBJJ) PEKANBARU
FAKULTAS HUKUM ILMU SOSIAL DAN ILMU POLITIK
UNIVERSITAS TERBUKA
2023

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 1. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Rachel Gomez, Sr. Project Manager

555-555-5555 |[email protected] | Seattle, Washington98128

July 1, 2023

Vincent Prasad, Sr. Data Analyst

123-456-7890 | [email protected] | New Orleans, Louisiana 70122

1 Dear Vincent Prasad,

It's my pleasure to strongly recommend Ashley Singer for the Jr. Data Analyst role
with Clouddatanow Tech. I'm Rachel Gomez, a project manager at Asomtech
Solutions. I have 12 years of experience working in the tech industry and have seen
many young people come and go. Ashley Singer is one individual I have worked
with who has always distinguished herself as a team member.

During our time together, Ashley displayed great talents in data analytics. When we
first met, I felt immediately impressed with Ashley. During the time we worked
together, her understanding of analyzing data to achieve results for our company
grew far more than that of her peers.
2
It's not just her technical skills that impress me. Ashley was a joy to work with
because of her amazingly positive attitude and ability to communicate across teams.
Her focus and attention to detail were also necessary and valued not just by me, but
also by her peers, who often relied on her to get the job done. I'm absolutely
confident that Ashley would be a great fit at Clouddatanow Tech. She can bring the
skills and experiences you're looking for in a candidate, and she can quickly become
an asset and help your company grow.

If you need more information or specific examples, please don't hesitate to contact
me. As a recommendation letter likely only provides a snapshot of her talents and
achievements, I'd be happy to further elaborate on my time working with her.

Sincerely,

3 Rachel Gomez

Sr. Project Manager

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi bagian surat yang ditandai oleh nomor 1-3. / Please identify the part of the
letter numbered 1-3.(@5 pts)
Answer:
1. Dear Vincent Prasad, this section is the opening part of the letter which shows greetings
to the recipient of the letter, so it is clear that this letter was written to Vincent Prasad.

2. In the second part, which is the body of a recommendation letter, in the body of this letter,
it is explained that Rachel Gomez introduces herself as a project manager at Asomtech
Solutions. Additionally he recommended Ashley for the role of Jr. Data Analyst at
Clouddatanow Tech. Rachel explained that Ashley was a former employee and worked very
well in her place, therefore she recommended Ashley Singer to help Vincent Prasad's
company grow.

3. Rachel Gomez, this section is a series of closing parts of the letter which shows that Rachel
Gomez is the sender of the letter.
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2. Perhatikan surat di bawah ini. / Please look at the letter below.

Bridgestone International Co.

1660 Maple Court
Kennett, MO 63857
July 21, 2021
William Reed
Purchase Manager
The Cooking Store
2175 Rivendell Drive
Mineral City, OH 44656
Dear Mr. Reed,
Thank u for your letter of 4 july inquiring about our latest catalog, price list, and terms
of payment?

We are pleased to enclose our latest catalog, price list, and terms of payment together
with samples of our promotional gifts. We hope you will find our prices n terms
satisfactory.

I look forward to receive your order.

Yours sincerely,

Robert Brown
Robert Brown
Sales Manage

Pertanyaan / Questions
Identifikasi 5 (lima) kesalahan pada surat di atas. / Please identify 5 (five) errors in the
letter above. (@5 pts)

Answer:
1. seharusnya pada bagian informasi pengirim yaitu:

Bridgestone International Co.

1660 Maple Court
Kennett, MO 63857

Seharusnya

Bridgestone International Co.

1660 Maple Court
Kennett, MO 63857

Diletakkan pada bagian sisi kanan atas surat sesuai dengan struktur surat yang berlaku
2. penulisan tanggal posisi seharusnya juga berada pada bagian kanan atas surat,
penulisannya juga salah, yaitu:
July 21, 2021
Seharusnya
July 21st, 2021
Karna jika menulis tanggal harus diikuti ordinal numbers.
3. terdapat kata kamu yang dipersingkat menjadi “u”, dimana surat formal seharusnya dibuat
dengan tanpa mempersingkat kata, yaitu:
Thank u for your
Seharusnya
Thank you for your
4. terdapat penulisan tanggal yang salah pada isi surat yaitu:
letter of 4 july
seharusnya
letter of july 4th, 2021
5. terdapat tanda baca yang tidak tepat pada isi surat, yaitu menyertakan tanda baca Tanya
pada suatu pernyataan, seharusnya tanda Tanya diletakkan pada kalimat Tanya.
6. terdapat kata dan yang dipersingkat menjadi “n”, dimana surat formal seharusnya dibuat
dengan tanpa mempersingkat kata, yaitu:
our prices n terms satisfactory
seharusnya
our prices and terms satisfactory.

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 3. Anda adalah ketua panitia sebuah seminar internasional dan mengundang pakar di
bidangnya. Salah satu pakar yang hadir menjadi narasumber adalah Prof. Allen Smith.
Tulislah email ucapan terima kasih untuk Prpf. Allen Smith yang bersedia menjadi
narasumber di seminar internasional Anda. Email Anda harus berisi 100-150 kata.
(60 pts)

You are chairman of the committee for an international seminar and invite experts in the
field. One of the experts who attended as a guest speaker was Prof. Allen Smith. Write a
thank-you email for Prof. Allen Smith who is willing to be a guest speaker at your
international seminar. Your email should be 100-150 words long.

Answer:
Dear Mr Prof Allen Smith

Hello, my name is Bambang Renaldy, I am the chairman of the international seminar

committee with the theme "Teenagers Driving the Nation".

I am very grateful because you were willing to be a resource to give your opinion and share
knowledge with all of us at the seminar. Because your seminar also went very well as
expected by all members of the organization. We hope that you will also bring a good
impression to the organizations and international seminars that we organize.

Thank you and hopefully we can meet another day

Best Regards,

Bambang Renaldy