Two Truths and A Lie 2
Two Truths and A Lie 2
The idea is that you share three things about yourself – two are true, one is false. The weirder the
better. And the other players need to guess which is the flat-out fabrication.
Maybe you played back in college, or maybe as a corporate get-to-know you icebreaker when
you joined a new team. (Who knew Gary from Finance once came in first place in an ostrich
racing competition?) (And who knew ostrich racing was actually a thing…?)
The goal of Two Truths and a Lie is always to put a fun spin on an otherwise straightforward
exchange – and to help you get to know others better, too.
Today, here in this ebook, we’re going to play a version of Two Truths and a Lie, Email Marketing
Edition! (I promise not to make you think up a “fun fact” about yourself on the fly.)
Our goal is to put a fun spin on email marketing tips, tricks, and ideas. And to help you get to know
what inspired email writing looks like.
Let’s talk all about email writing truths and lies, do’s and don’ts.
After all, good writing is the backbone of a successful email. (I’d even argue it’s the backbone of a
good marketing strategy.) And with a 44:1 ROI, email is a powerful channel where every word counts.
This guide is packed with tried-and-true tips on creating effective email content, plus it busts
some common myths that we’re all tired of hearing. *Cough* Email isn’t dead. *Cough*
Thanks for being here. Thanks for reading. Stay healthy. And write on.
Ann Handley
PART II
Creativity converts. Give life to your CTAs. 8
What’s the purpose of your email? Does it tell that story? 9
“Spam” is its own trigger word for email geeks. 10
PART III
Write as if you’re talking to one person. 12
Test. QA. And test some more. 13
Robots don’t personalize. Humans do. 13
PART IV
Email is dead 15
10 bonus writing tips from Ann Handley. 16
Eminem probably wasn’t talking about email subject lines here – but he could have been.
The first goal of any email is to get into the inbox. (We’ll touch more on that later.) The second goal is for
your reader to actually open it. A good subject line and brand recognition in the inbox are your first chances
to impress them enough to engage, so you need to incite enough curiosity to get the click – without being
clickbaity. (Which means no trickery or bait-and-switching.) It’s important to remember that email marketing
is all about delivering on your that’s knowledge, a discount, or something else of value to your subscribers.
Unfortunately, there’s no one-size-fits-all way to approach subject lines. What works for your brand can vary
widely from what works best for others. Testing out different lengths, tones, and even emojis in your subject
lines is a great first step if you’re unsure about what your audience reacts best to. We love a good A/B test.
A B
With a little testing, you can create some additional subject line best practices that work well for your brand.
And don’t forget a best practice that’s easily forgotten: Always write intentional preheader text that correlates
with your subject line and email content. A preheader is the little sentence that shows up next to or below the
subject line before an email is opened. By relating your preheader copy to your subject line, you gain a few
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of segmentation, subject lines, and creative.
Email newsletters are having a day right now. Morning Brew, The Hustle, The Daily Carnage… These are
newsletters that have essentially turned into an entire business because of their following. Then there are
influencers who successfully use newsletters to connect with and grow their fanbase, like Total Annarchy. And
of course there are more industry-specific newsletters with almost cult-like audiences, like Really Good Emails,
Litmus, and SparkPost.
What do these email newsletters all have in common? They are long and jam-packed with content – and value.
It’s important to remember that long-form doesn’t necessarily mean a novel. Skimmable copy is crucial to a
successful, lengthy email. This means thought-out sections, strategic titles, intentional body copy, clear copy
hierarchy, clear CTAs, and plenty of white space. Plus a good design, of course.
Email design is far more than what you see when you
open an email. The visual aspects are a large part
of it, but it’s also the strategy that goes into creating
your emails before you build them. And there are
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– from writers to designers to coders and more.
As always, test what works best for your brand. Send the same email with an A/B split using direct vs. quirky
CTAs, and see what your audience responds to. If actual button CTAs need to be more basic, you can still have
some fun with your in-line hyperlinks.
Example: Instead of "See the ebook here" try "Grab your copy" or "Get your mitts on your own copy."
Depending on the sophistication of your ESP, you can also test dynamic CTAs. This could mean a different CTA
for customers vs. prospects, or even something a bit more advanced, like persona-based actions and verbiage.
Ultimately, you want to get your brand personality across in your emails – and CTAs are no exception.
Sometimes a simple change like saying, “See it here” vs. “Click here” can boost your conversion rate by an
impactful amount. (Plus, “Click here” is boring, amirite?)
It might sound silly, but we’ve found it helpful to pause when creating an email and literally ask ourselves: What
is the purpose of this? What are we trying to accomplish? This simple exercise should help guide your writing
as you build an email.
There’s nothing worse than an email that rambles… or an email without a point… or an email your subscribers
aren’t expecting/don’t want. Inboxes are far too crowded to miss the mark.
And this concept goes beyond the content of individual emails. It’s important to string together emails with a
common theme/goal to create strategic workflows with cohesive messaging. Your audience is on a journey
with your brand, and that journey should follow a defined path where each step makes sense.
Lastly – and probably most importantly – set expectations with your subscribers. When will you mail? What will
you promise to deliver? What will the content be like? Then deliver that.
For starters, you can test your emails through Spam Assassin to view how “spammy” they are. SpamAssassin
scans elements such as subject lines, headers, attachments, punctuation, spam-related text, and messaging
to give a “spam score.” Generally, emails with a score above five are considered spam. (E.g. saying “Money
back guarantee” is a whammy and automatically adds more than two points to your spam score.)
Here are a few examples of what to avoid and what you can do instead to keep your spam score low:
Avoid generic, enticing phases like, “Click Use actionable CTAs like, “Check out our
here!” or “Buy now!” new arrivals” or “Download the guide”
Avoid using multiple special characters in a Try using, “A new SparkPost feature is here.
subject line like, “We have a new feature! Come check it out!” as it will be scored
Come check it out!!” lower.
Avoid using all caps – it will give a higher Show excitement through high-quality
spam score and can seem aggressive. imagery instead.
Avoid sending image-only emails as these Add copy around images for the reader.
can be marked as spam and are also bad Emails should be a mix of imagery and
for accessibility. text.
Avoid adding links that look like phishing Use hyperlinked URLs instead of part of
attempts. the email copy.
Don’t just trust your code. Always check it for Make sure your HTML is valid – this will be
rendering and other issues. reviewed by the spam filter.
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Personalization and proper segmentation are required for a successful email strategy. Bottom line.
• Merge variables: Use them, but make it feel authentic. Readers know you used a merge variable, so don’t
use someone’s name or company in places where you wouldn’t naturally say that.
• Segmentation: As much as possible, write different versions of your emails by product, persona, etc. Your
tone, CTA, and more can (and ultimately should) change based on who you’re talking to.
• Dynamic content: To help support you on the above point, build one email that includes alternate copy
for technical personas vs. marketing personas, for example, so you can have them in the same workflow
but speak to multiple audiences. Dynamic content can help you do things like linking out to more relevant
content per audience, so you can further segment the next step in their journey with your brand.
• Generously use “You”: Don’t be afraid to talk directly to the customer as you would in conversation. It
sounds much better than lumping people into a segment. i.e. “Fits you love” vs. “Fits our customers love.”
The former resonates so much better!
Write your audience into your story. Who do you sell to? Think 1-1-1:
One idea to one person at one time. What will resonate the most with
your ideal customer? What signals to your prospect/customer: ‘I get
you. You belong in here’?
- Ann Handley
Beyond catching typos, a good editor can also help you take out the parts of your email that readers will skip.
Kick to the curb vague descriptions of people, places, things, ideas. Use
action verbs (verbs you can visualize in your head) more than thinking
verbs (verbs you can't see) like ‘considered, theorized, thought.’
- Ann Handley
You should also have someone check every link in your emails. There’s nothing worse than an incorrect or
missing link. A 404 can really ruin an email geek’s day.
In addition to simple copy editing, render testing is another impactful QA method when it comes to email
marketing. Ensuring your emails work well across all email clients and devices – from Gmail to Outlook to
iPhone and beyond – can make a huge difference in maximizing (and keeping) your subscriber base.
All that said… We love a good “oops” email. And we’ve seen from experience that a genuine “oops” email can
have really good conversions. So while testing is extremely helpful in executing email well, mistakes happen.
And it’s OK. We’re all human.
Because let's pause for a sec here and think about that word "personalization." The root of the word is
"personal" – something made or designed to be used by one person.
We know personalization is a scalable ability to use technology and data to tailor messages and experiences
to people in our audience. That's all well and good. Love ya, Big Tech and Data.
If you DO have a tech stack and internal resources that allows you to segment and create lovely and specific
messages to the very best companies/people at the very most optimal time based on when they indicate
through their actions and behavior and choices that they are perfectly primed to hear your human voice…
And yikes is this still one sentence...?
But if your marketing team is small and overworked (or maybe you’re even an email team of one), then
rise up! In 2022, personalization is a tech solution.
But personalization is also a human concoction. A potion of creativity and care optimized with empathy
and only THEN infused with technology.
"Personalization" means "I care." (Not we. You – the person putting together this email campaign or writing
that ebook or publishing this newsletter.) Stop sounding like a marketer. Sound like a person.
We’ve been hearing “email is dead” for at least… 15 years now? But email continues to drive engagement,
demand, and ultimately revenue year after year. It’s the workhorse of marketing.
Email is a money-making channel in its own right, and it also supports several other channels. E.g. Let's say
you have amazing SEO and someone organically hits your site and makes a purchase. You likely follow up with
them via email – whether that’s a simple receipt, or a nurture campaign, or a more aggressive upsell/cross-
sell campaign. Those touchpoints matter. And every one requires good copy. Continuing the conversation with
your buyers – past, present, and future – matters. And you can’t do it all without email.
Email is far from dead. It’s a revenue engine. In fact, if you haven’t heard, retention is the new acquisition.
And email is a first-party tool at your disposal in the era of privacy crack downs. So we might as well all learn to
do it right and write good emails.
Check out the trends, behaviors, and benchmarks driving email forward.
For the annual SparkPost email report, we sift through mountains of data from the largest data
network of any email solutions provider, not just in terms of overall data points, but in the depth
and diversity of the sources we pull from. We also survey 2,000+ marketers and email practitioners
globally to gain insight from the people who own email at their respective organizations.
Curl up, dive in, and geek out with us over how email marketing has evolved, and
enjoy our recommendations on fortifying your email strategy moving forward.
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About SparkPost, A MessageBird Company
SparkPost is the industry's most trusted email optimization platform.
SparkPost helps senders reliably reach the inbox with powerful solutions
to plan, execute, and optimize email. The SparkPost platform is powered
by the industry's largest data network, a team of email experts to help
brands elevate every aspect of their email program, and a security and
compliance posture to support even the most regulated industries.
SparkPost is the world's largest sender, delivering 40% of all commercial
email – 4-5 trillion sends annually – and also boasts the world's largest
data footprint to help enterprise-level brands make data-driven
decisions to improve email performance. The world's most sophisticated
senders, including The New York Times, Zillow, Adobe and Booking.com
trust SparkPost to elevate their email.