Personal Assignment 4

Week 8

A. Listening (40 Points)

Comparison Table
Assessment Units Video 01 Video 02 Video 03
General
Organization:
Opening The introduction is The introduction The introduction
talking about the speaks directly to the talking about tesla
desire to live life to main point which is energy. Elon musk
the fullest and how the confusion also emphasized the
illness can strike regarding anti-aging need for a
when we least expect nutritional fundamental
it. so there is AIA supplements transformation in
health protector that energy supply
can protect health worldwide.
Middle/Body The body paragraphs The body paragraphs The body paragraph
are very informative are very informative are very informative
because they explain because they provide because He give an
the benefits of using reasons to consider example about the
AIA Health Protector using nutritional problem and solution
and information supplements and give regarding fossil fuels.
about inflation which a recommendation With technology
causes health costs to also explain the developed by Tesla.
increase benefits of the
ingredients used in
anti-aging
supplements.
Closing/Ending The conclusion is This paragraph The conclusion was

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 good, they convince discusses the very good, he
people to plan their supplement product emphasized the
health services based offerings sold by Dr. importance of
on the benefits they Yoon switching to
receive through AIA renewable energy
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Voice:
Tempo: speed Slow but not too Normal, It’s really Not consistent, some
slow, so it's easy to easy to understand time he speak slowly
understand but some time he
speak fast. But still
good
Volume: loudness Normal Normal Normal
Expressiveness Expressive Very expressive, he He really expressive
depending on the delivered the when giving a
topic she is material with full presentation.
explaining expression Sometimes he also
jokes and responds to
the audience's jokes
Pitch/Intonation Her intonation is His intonation is very His Intonation is
Variety good, She can put good and clear. Not good.
intonation according to high and not to
to the discussion low.

Language:
Clarity: Articulation Her articulation is His articulation is His articulation is
good, but I still feel really good, it’s clear good. But sometimes
her original accent and easy to he repeats the words
understand he wants to convey
Delivery: Fluency Even though she is He is very fluent He is fluent, but
not a native speaker, when delivered the maybe because he’s a

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 she speaks fluently topic like a native little bit nervous, he
speaker with often repeated words
American accent
Accuracy: Structure, The structure and The vocabulary used The structure and the
Vocabulary vocabulary used are is arranged neatly vocabulary is good
good, also the according to
grammar is good grammar

Manner:
Audience contact She always looks at He always looks at He always tries to
the camera when the camera when look at the audience
giving explanations, giving explanation when giving a
that making us feel presentation
connected
Interest Quite interesting, It was very It was very
look professional interesting because interesting because
he delivered the Elon Musk delivered
material in a relaxed his material by
manner but was responding to
interesting to listen it audience comments
while joking
Assurance/confidence She has good self- looks confidence and He look a little bit
confidence known the material nervous but he
really well delivered the topic
really well

Body Language:
Stance and posture Her posture is good, His posture is very His posture is very
there are not many good, he explains the good, he always
distracting material calmly and faces the audience
movements relaxed so the when explaining the
information can be material and faces

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 understood easily the screen when
showing something
Hands She used hand He used hand He used hand
movements but is not movements to make movements when
distracting but gives the explanation more explaining the
a more attractive attractive product
impression
Facial expression It’s good, her facial It's good, he always I’s good, he always
expressions always smiles when doing smiles when doing
change depending on presentation. presentation also
the discussion being when he response the
discussed audience

Visual aids:
Number Used several times Used to explain the Used to describe the
for information that amount of money magnitude of electric
must be explained and year voltage
using numbers such
as the amount of
money and the
number of hospitals
Design Showed several Used to provide an used to give the
times when overview of audience an idea of
discussing different materials or objects the topic being
topics during a presentation discussed
Relevance with the It's relevant to the It's relevant to the It's relevant to the
main theme theme of the material theme of the material theme of the material
presented presented and make
it easy to understand
Frequency of usage Often used when Often used when Always used when
changing discussions discussing a different presenting products

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 object or topic and discussion topics

1. Conclusion (10 points)

a. Which video would you like to watch again? Tell the reasons why.
Video number 3, because I am interested in the topic discussed by Elon Mask regarding
Tesla Energy. where he highlighted the current state of energy production and
environmental impacts, especially the increase in CO2 concentrations in the atmosphere.
b. Which video is the most memorable to you? Tell the reasons why.
For me it's video number 3. Maybe in that video Elon Musk was a little bit nervous when
giving a presentation, but his presentation was really interesting. Even though the
presentation was made directly in front of many people, Elon Musk was able to make the
atmosphere interactive. He didn't even hesitate to respond to audience comments. Even
so, he was able to explain his product really well. So I think the presentation is very
informative and enjoyable.
c. Which video is the least appealing/attractive to you? Tell the reasons why.
Video number 1, because the way She delivered the presentation was too stiff and less
interesting compared to videos number 2 and 3. In video number 2, He was delivered the
material with good expression, intonation and pronunciation. Meanwhile, in video
number 3, the presentation is made in front of many people directly, so the interaction
that occurs makes the presentation more real.

B. Speaking (60 points)

Consult with your lecturer about the business cases for your presentation. Make a short
presentation based on the chosen case. Create a video presentation about your ideas in 3 - 5
minutes. The content should cover; an opening, stating the important ideas and give some
examples to support your ideas. Upload the video in YouTube and send the link only as the result
of the speaking assignment
Link : https://youtu.be/3uXAsSp2BfI
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