Cold Emails
Cold Emails
Templates to Boost
01
AIDA: Attention, Interest,
Desire, Action
02
BAB: Before, After Bridge
03
PAS: Problem, Agitate,
Solution
04
SAS: Star, Arch, Success
05
Ask a relevent question
06
You visited our website
07
The recent news email
08 "It's up to you!"
01
AIDA: Attention,
If you're like most [lead's role], you know how hard it can be to
[deal with the problem your company solves], especially when
[recent changes or happenings in the industry.]
Would you like to also have [the benefit of your product]? If yes,
please let me know when you are availble for a call next week.
<name>
02
BAB: Before, After,
Bridge
BAB: Before, After, Bridge
What motivates you? Money, success, maybe even a fear of
failure?
After: Paint a picture of what life will look like after solving
this problem
Bridge: Show how your solution helps them get from before
to after.
Hey Susan,
I notice that your blog/site isn’t optimized for mobile! Due to this, you must
be losing quite a few potential customers. Before
What if I told you there was a plugin which optimizes your blogs/site for handheld
devices? A plugin that can easily optimize blogs/sites to enhance the reading
experience of your readers on phones and tablets.
After
Best,
Calvin
BAB: Template
Hi [First Name],
Would you have some free time next week for a personalized
demo?
<Name>
03
PAS: Problem, Agitate,
Solution
PAS: Problem, Agitate, Solution
Every lead has a problem that you are looking to solve.
It’s a common and frustrating situation with sales emails: your open rates are
high, your response rates abysmally low. What’s going on?
It doesn’t take exact science to figure that out. Normally, It’s because we labor
over our subject lines and wind up neglecting the call to action. Sometimes
there’s no call to action. Other times it’s boring and forgettable like the overused
“Looking forward to hearing from you” line.
One of our jobs as salespeople in the digital age is to write memorable emails that
stand out from competitors’ messages. To do that, you need to end on as strong a
note as you began with.
When these calls to action (CTAs) are well-written, focused, and offer a clear and
valuable incentive, you make it easy for the recipient to want to respond. In essence,
you’ve made the decision for them by offering value.
So take a look at the CTAs you’ve been sending and give them a makeover, using
Solution
Here are three ways to improve your CTAs and make your sales emails more
enticing,
Cheers,
Heather
PS: There are even more tips on CTAs in this short video course I created on email
outreach with Hubspot. (Check it out, since it’s totally free.) There are some pretty
useful worksheets on CTAs inside.
And while this one is a little long (over the 50 to 100-word limit
Hi [First Name],
sentence pitch].
I'd love to show you more. Are you open to a call at [date and
<Name>
04
SAS: Star, Arch,
Success
SAS: Star, Arch, Success
Every great story has a star — and this email format makes the
most of our love of stories. Start by introducing the star — likely
one of your customers, but it could also be your company.
Then, you describe the problem they faced, and then — success!
Reveal how the star was able to win/save the day — using your
product or service, of course.
Hi [First Name],
In the latter half of last year, the future was looking bleak for
[star person/company].
service].
now.
<Name>
05
Ask a relevant question
Ask a relevant question
Asking a question is a great way to pique interest — but generic
questions won't do the trick.
Want to see how you can instantly [benefit from your product]?
I'm the lead [role at your company], and I've got a few
suggestions to help you immediately generate some quick wins
with [area your lead is working on]. Here they are:
● [Tip 1]
● [Tip 2]
You might not have the time, though, and that's where [your
company] can help. Are you available for a quick 15-minute call
next week so I can walk you through the tips and discuss this
further?
<Name>
06
You visited our website
You visited our website
This is a super-simple email technique but effective. If you use a
tool like Leadfeeder, you can see who has visited your website —
including what company they work for in many cases.
[Custom message based on the action — "I hope you found the
ebook interesting," or "I hope the webinar answered all your
questions.", etc. ]
[additional resource 2]
Our company also offers [product/service], which could help
you [achieve this specific result].
Are you free for a call at [date and time] to talk about this? We,
like most people, are working from home, so I am flexible — let
me know if another time works best.
<Name>
07
The recent news email
The recent news email
A recent news email can help break the ice and establish
content specialist:
Hi [name],
I justt came across your company on the 2019 Inc. 5000 list. Congrats!
Usually, when this happens, marketing becomes a priority. So, I thought you
I’m available to chat via phone all next week, so please let me know wha
[your name]
Hi [First Name],
I noticed [insert link or mention site]. It's clear that your business
shout.
<Name>
08
"It's up to you!"
"It's up to you!"
When most people hear the term "salesperson," what do you
think is the first word they think of? Pushy? Annoying? Fake?
● [Tip 1]
● [Tip 2]
Take care.
<Name>
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