Technical English 1 2 Notes
Technical English 1 2 Notes
REPORT DEFINED.
A report is defined as a written account of something based upon the writer’s observation,
investigation or analysis 1. It can also be defined as a story of actions performed by men; an official
presentation of facts of an event especially for publication; a means of setting forth the information
they contained to other individual and agencies 2.
POLICE REPORT
Generally, it is any written matter prepared by the police involving their interaction with the
community members; it is an exact narration of facts discovered during the course of crime
investigation which serves as a permanent written record for future reference (chronological
narration); it is a permanent written records of police activities which communicates facts
concerning people involved in criminal activities 3.
To many people in the law enforcement community, the topic of report writing is of little interest and
is not the most exciting subject to read about or bring up in a discussion. However, just as genius is
described as being one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration, effective
enforcement of the law is estimated to be one percent action and ninety-nine percent paperwork 5.
The last thing on the minds of the average new law enforcement agents is how they will document
what they did in the field. Yet their report is, by far, the most important part of the job. Until events
are recorded, written down for others to read, understand, and comprehend technically nothing has
transpired. Events only become events when they are recorded for posterity, and recording for
posterity makes everything a law enforcement officer does have historical implications. Even
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Whether it is due to the officer’s lack of training, laziness, workload, or not being given enough time
to write a good report, the end result will be a poorly written report. When an officer habitually
writes a poor quality report, it creates many negative effects on the investigation and the officer’s
credibility. For instance, a poorly written report gives defense attorneys an opening to attack the
officer’s abilities in court. This damages the officer’s credibility in court. In fact the Judge may give
less weight to that officer’s testimony in future cases. Another area where it can have a negative
effect on an officer is when that officer tries to advance in rank. Generally speaking, an officer who
writes a poor quality report is usually deficient in other aspects of their job. A poorly written report
will cause a detective or an investigator to expend more time and effort to solve or clear a case
and thus cost taxpayers more money. When that officer later wants to transfer to the Criminal
Investigative Division, he may have a hard time getting that transfer 8.
An officer’s reputation is well known in the local law enforcement community. It will follow an officer
throughout their career. An officer’s skill with report writing will go a long way in building a good
reputation. Attention to detail applies to all aspects of an officer’s job, technical knowledge of the state
and local laws and ordinances, uniform appearance, vehicle appearance, people skills, and most
importantly, report writing9.
2. Better court preparation: A well-written report can prove more efficient in a court of law, speaking
more logically and correctly to lawyers and judges.
3. Possible avoidance of court: A report that leaves little material for questioning could help an
officer avoid having to attend court at all. If the report is written clearly and leaves little room for
questions, counsel may have no reason to call the officer into the court.
4. Respect from superiors and fellow officers: If a report is written well the first time, an officer’s
superior has little revision to make, saving time and energy and earning the officer respect in the
eyes of his/her superior. 10
6 Id
7 Id
8 Blintliff, R. (2009). How to Write Effective Law Enforcement Reports. Englewood Cliffs, NJ: Prentice Hall
9 Miller, D. (2003). How to Write a Police Report. Albany, NY: Delmar Publishers, Inc.
10 Biggs, M. (2011). Just the Facts: Investigative Report Writing (4th Edition) 4th Edition. USA. Pearson
Reports vary according to how they are used and why they are written. Here are some of the different
types of reports:
1. Arrest Report: An arrest report is written whenever a person is arrested. This report must include
the probable cause for the detention, arrest, and disposition of the suspect 12.
2. Clearance Report: A clearance report states the end result to a specific case. It might be the arrest
of a suspect, the recovery of property, or the filing of a complaint. It brings the case to a
conclusion 13.
3. Crime Report: A crime report is written after the investigating officer concludes that a
crime has occurred. A crime report must include all the elements of the crime and should include
all information regarding the crime at the time the report was taken, such as location, the
time and place the crime occurred, loss or injuries, evidence collected, suspect description, etc.
A crime report form tends to be a generic pre-printed form that can be used to document any
criminal occurrence 14.
4. Event or Incident Report: An event or incident report is used to document events not
considered criminal. Such events may be medical aid calls, civil disputes, citizen assists, and
the like. Some agencies call these Service or Miscellaneous reports 15.
5. Evidence Collection Report: An evidence collection report establishes the chain of evidence, such
as who discovered the evidence, when and where it was located, who collected it, and its
disposition16.
7. Narcotic, Drunk Driving, Intoxication Report: A narcotic, drunk driving, or intoxication report is
used to describe the suspect’s condition of being under the influence of a drug or alcohol. Most
often, these are separate reports and written in conjunction with a crime report 18.
8. Officer’s Activity Report or Daily Log: The activity report or daily log is commonly used to provide
an agency with statistical information regarding the activity on an officer’s shift. These reports
include the calls the officers responded to, the disposition of the call, the amount of time spent
11 Id
12 Miller, L. and Whitehead, J. (2011), Report Writing for Criminal Justice Professionals, 4th Ed, Anderson Publishing Co.
13 Id pg. 12- 14, 67- 102
14 Biggs, M. (2011). Just the Facts: Investigative Report Writing (4th Edition) 4th Edition. USA. Pearson
15 Id
16 Id
17
Biggs, M. (2011). Just the Facts: Investigative Report Writing (4th Edition) 4th Edition. USA. Pearson
18 Id
9. Supplemental Report: A supplemental report is typically written by an officer other than the
original reporting officer. For instance, an officer may assist a fellow officer in an investigation by
interviewing people or by recovering property. The assisting officer would write a Supplemental
Report to document his or her actions 20.
10. Traffic Collision Report: A traffic collision report provides information regarding traffic
collisions. Such reports typically include statements of drivers and witnesses, diagrams, and
photographs. Traffic Citations are given when a traffic or parking violation has occurred. They are
pre-printed forms 21.
1. Informal Reports. It is usually a memorandum, or any of one of the many prescribed in day-to-
day police operations. It customarily carries three items besides the text proper (ex: date
submitted, subject, and persons or person to whom submitted). It may however, contain many
items of administrative importance along with the subject matter of the text. 22
2. Formal Reports. It suggests the full-dress treatment, including cover, title page, letter of
transmittal, summary sheet, text, appendices, and perhaps an index and bibliography. a
presentation of facts or ideas which usually contains the following basic parts: introduction,
summary, body, conclusions, and recommendations. Sometimes, the subject matter of the report
may not require a conclusion because the report may just be a fact-finding one. If conclusions are
not asked for, the writer must use his best judgment. All in all, a complete formal report must
consist of the following parts: cover, title page, letter of transmittal, table of contents,
introduction or preface, summary, body of the report, conclusions, recommendations, and
supplemental materials like appendices, etc. 23
2. Internal Reports – relate to the reporting necessary to the management of the police organization
and include financial reports, personnel reports, purchase reports, equipment reports, property
maintenance reports, and general correspondence. 25
19 Patterson, Frank M. and Smith, Patrick D. A Manual of Police Report Writing. Springfield, IL: C. C. Thomas, 1968.
20 Id
21 Biggs, M. (2011). Just the Facts: Investigative Report Writing (4th Edition) 4th Edition. USA. Pearson
22 Id
23 Ross, Alec and Plant, David. Writing Police Reports. Northbrook, IL: Motorola Teleprograms, Inc., 1977.
24
Biggs, M. (2011). Just the Facts: Investigative Report Writing (4th Edition) 4th Edition. USA. Pearson
25 Id.
2. Special Reports – done either because one feels he has some reporting to do, or a lower police
unit or office is obligated based on the directive or an instruction from the higher police offices. 29
3. Progress Reports – can simply be an accomplishment report which may be analytical in nature
and may be comparatively longer. This may be in memorandum form or in radiographic message
form.30
a. AUTHORITY
b. MATTERS INVESTIGATED
c. FACTS OF THE CASE – the facts regarding the case should be presented in the same manner
as the allegations are presented in the section “Matters Investigated”.
d. DISCUSSION – this section should indicate the presumption and inference from all the
circumstances of the case to give the directing officer the clearest possible picture.
e. CONCLUSIONS – this contains the summary of the results of the investigation as supported by
facts. The facts are usually stated in the order suggested by the statement of the allegations
or facts.
f. RECOMMENDATIONS – this contains the practical suggestions for appropriate action to be
taken to suitably dispose of the case. It should follow, as far as practicable, the same sequence
as that used in the presentation of the conclusions.
REMINDERS:
26 Holtz, L. (2014). Effective Law Enforcement Report Writing 5th Edition. USA. Lexis Nexis Publishing Inc.
27 Id
28 Frazee, Barbara and Davis, Joseph N. Painless Police Report Writing. Englewood Cliffs, NJ: Regents/Prentice Hall, 1993.
29 Id
30
Holtz, L. (2014). Effective Law Enforcement Report Writing 5th Edition. USA. Lexis Nexis Publishing Inc.
31 Id
The investigator writes his report in order to achieve the following objectives:
a. RECORD – the report provides a permanent official record of the relevant information
obtained in the courses of the investigation.
b. LEADS – the report provides other investigators with information necessary to further
advance their own investigation.
c. PROSECUTION ACTION – the report is a statement of facts on which designated authorities
may base a criminal corrective or disciplinary action.
5. Beat Inspection or After-Patrol Reports – one of the most common forms of written
communications. It is submitted daily by the duty beat supervisor. As to form, the beat inspection
report and after-patrol report use the memorandum format. 32
6. Situation Reports – similar to the patrol report. Both are submitted every eight hours. However,
while the patrol report is done on a regular basis daily, the SITREP is done on a need-only basis. 33
4. Information Resources for other agencies – police reports provide prosecutors and the courts
with a ready source of information regarding current or past cases. Probation and Parole officers
32 Miller, Dennis S. How to Write a Police Report. Albany, NY: Delmar Publishers, Inc., 1993.
33 Id
34 Miller, Dennis S. (2003) How to Write a Police Report. Albany, NY: Delmar Publishers, Inc.,
a. Type 1: In this type of report the officer records information. He has no participation to the
incident, as he arrived after the incident or such information was made in the premises of the
police station. In such report no action is taken by the police officer in response to the incident,
he merely makes the report. The police officer is dispatched to the scene to gather information
and prepare a report afterwards. For example, entries recorded in the blotter are considered type
1 report. Another example could be a report made a police officer after receiving information
about criminal elements in a certain locality.
Type 1 Reports are
a. simplest to write since it involves mechanical recording of information coming from
other persons;
b. officer records what happened;
c. incident reports or spot reports fall into this category; and
d. report may be useful later if there are further developments. 36
b. Type 2: In this type of report, the officer records information and takes action in response to the
incident. A good example is when a police officer makes an arrest, he prepares report such as
custodial investigation report or booking report. Investigations made by police officer must be
well documented, every action they make are recorded and reduced into writing. Such cases are
examples of type 2 reports. These reports are made after the incident there is no active
participation of the police officers during the incident. 37
Type 2 Reports:
a. officer takes action such as investigation, arrest ;
b. officer is usually dispatched to the scene;
c. officer thoroughly reports results of investigation, even when negative (may be useful
later); and
d. disposition of evidence and suspect are important, therefore they must be
documented, legal rules must be followed in such cases. 38
Note: a negative report is one which is unfavorable to the police when released to the media or
other offices as the investigation may have been botched or errors in the processing of the crime
scene occurred along the way.
35
Reynolds, J. (2012). Criminal Justice Report Writing. Elsevier Publishing Inc. USA
36 Id
37 Id
38 Id
Type 3 Reports:
a. officer becomes part of the scenario, such as pursuing or subduing a suspect; and
b. all other requirements still apply: explain arrival at the scene, results of investigation,
disposition of evidence and suspect. 40
d. Type 4: Officer is the initiator (sees, hears something suspicious and gets involved in the case). In
such cases the police officer must base his actions on probable cause or those reasons which will
engender a well-founded belief that a crime is committed and that he should respond to it to
prevent it from worsening or to subdue the assailants and bring them to justice. Police stops, such
as stop and frisk, chokepoints, routine patrol and the like are usual activities where a type 4 report
arises.
Type 4 Reports:
a. officer initiates action: sees or hears something suspicious and decides to get involved;
b. traffic stops are generally Type 4 reports;
c. probable cause is essential; and
d. all other requirements still apply: explain arrival at the scene, results of investigation,
disposition of evidence and suspect 41
In Types 1, 2, and 3, the officer is usually dispatched to the scene while in Type 4, the officer makes the
decision to become involved after seeing or hearing something suspicious. Probable cause must be
included in Type 4 reports. Knowing these 4 Types is important since it: (a) simplifies report writing; (b)
gives you a template to work with; (c) alerts you about the special requirements for each type of report;
(d) ensures you won’t miss anything important. 42
39 Id
40 Id
41
Id
42 Id
43 Id
44 Reynolds, J. (2012). Criminal Justice Report Writing. Elsevier Publishing Inc. USA
45 Gammage, A (1961). Basic of Police Report Writing. Charles Thomas Publisher Inc. USA
46 Id
47
Id
48 Id
49 Id
50 Gammage, A (1961). Basic of Police Report Writing. Charles Thomas Publisher Inc. USA
51
Id
52 Id
53 Id
54 Gammage, A (1961). Basic of Police Report Writing. Charles Thomas Publisher Inc. USA
Completeness
Completeness is achieved by reporting all the facts discovered during the course of an investigation. When
in doubt, include the information. Information that appears irrelevant to the investigator may be relevant
to the reviewer. In most cases, the only information the reader will have will be the information in the
report. Partially stated facts can be misleading and misinterpreted. Explain why certain information is
lacking or incomplete. Provide a detailed explanation of the possible source of additional information and
undeveloped leads. 57
Conciseness
Avoid unrelated, extraneous, incidental, and nonessential information and detail. Pay attention to
grammar. Avoid adjectives, wit, sarcasm, flowery expressions, and repetition. A report is not a literary or
creative writing exercise. Use singleness of thought and purpose. A good report will give the reader a clear
idea or picture of the investigation. Use headings, paragraphing, sentence structure, indentations,
underlining, and capitalization to emphasize and give weight and/or visibility to information the
investigator deems more important. 58
Impartiality/Objectivity
The investigator is a fact finder. Report the material and evidentiary facts without addition or subtraction.
Do not conceal or withhold information. Do not assume. Do not conclude. Maintain an unbiased and open
mind about the case. Avoid formulating preconceived ideas about the guilt of the accused. Avoid
becoming emotionally involved in the process of seeking information. 59
55 Id
56 Police Magazine, May 1997
57
Gammage, A (1961). Basic of Police Report Writing. Charles Thomas Publisher Inc. USA
58 Patterson, Frank M. and Smith, Patrick D. A Manual of Police Report Writing. Springfield, IL: C. C. Thomas, 1968
59 Id
60 Id
5 Ws AND 1 H
The investigation must seek to establish the six (6) cardinal points of investigation, namely: what
specific offense has been committed; how the offense has been committed; when it was committed;
where it was committed; why it was committed, and who are the involved persons. The following are
further possible questions using the 5 W’s and 1 H 64.
WHO? This pertains to some information regarding the victim, suspect, witness, owner, and property. It
provides details on identity, hence, it focuses on persons.
The report therefore must:
1. Provide a complete and correct name of the suspects, victims, witnesses and other persons of
interest. Wrong names result in failure to locate a witness or apprehend a suspect. The spelling
should be correct; name, including middle initial should be exact. Their age, residence,
employment is necessary to be included after their name has been mentioned in the report. 65
2. Exact home address (be it a residence or a hotel) and telephone numbers.
3. Relative questions under WHO may include the following:
a. Who was present at the crime scene: witness, suspects, victims, etc.
b. Who was apprehended?
c. Who discovered the evidence?
d. Who reported the crime? Who discovered the crime?
e. Who saw how the crime was perpetrated?
f. Who is the victim? Who had any misunderstanding with him?
g. Who is the offender/perpetrator/culprit? Who are the companions, associates, or
accomplices of the perpetrator?
WHAT? The purpose of these types of questions is to find out what happened or what took place before,
during and immediately after the commission of the offense. Some questions are:
1. What happened?
2. What specific actions did the suspect/victim/witness do?
3. What is the nature of the crime?
4. What was/were the weapons/s or tools/s used by the culprit?
5. What are the evidences discovered at the crime scene?
This questions considers the following factors
1. Type of property attacked, e.g., building, residence, alley, vacant lot, etc.
2. Type of property stolen, lost or found. What items related to the crime were found at the scene?
61 Hess. K. & Orthmann, C. (2008). For the Record: Report Writing in Law Enforcement. USA. Innovative Systems Publishers
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64 Swanson, C.R. et. al. (2000). Criminal investigation (7th ed.). Boston: MacGraw Hill.
65 Id
WHERE? - This question is concerned with the geographical location of the crime scene, property,
or evidence. 66
1. Where was the offense committed?
2. Where was the property found?
3. Where was the evidence found?
4. Where was the crime discovered?
5. Where are the victims, witnesses or culprits?
6. Where do the victims/witnesses/culprits live?
7. Where was the suspect when he was apprehended?
8. Where are the weapons or tools used in committing the crime?
9. Where did the investigator secure or obtain the evidences?
WHEN? - This question includes the date and time when the offense was committed; property found;
suspect apprehended. 67
1. When did the police officer arrive?
2. When was the crime discovered?
3. When was the suspect apprehended?
4. When was the crime committed?
5. When was it discovered?
6. When was the police notified?
7. When was the victim last seen?
8. When was the suspect arrested?
HOW? - This question refers to the general manner in which the crime was committed. These are designed
to help the investigator determine how the crime was committed, the means/tools that are employed,
how the crime was discovered, how the culprit enters the building/room. How questions are very
significant in preparing the modus operandi file or report such as: 68
1. How did the suspect get near to his victim?
2. How did he perform the crime?
3. How did the criminal get all the necessary information?
4. How did the criminal get away from the crime scene?
5. How was the crime scene search conducted?
6. How was the crime reported?
7. How were certain tools used?
8. How was the crime committed and discovered?
WHY? - Under this heading is listed the object or reason which was motivated the offense. These are
questions that endeavor to ascertain the motives, causes, antecedents, previous, incidents, related facts,
background occurrences that might help explain the commission of the offense. The why question seeks
to establish motive which can lead investigators to know who may have the reason for committing the
66 Swanson, C.R. et. al. (2000). Criminal investigation (7th ed.). Boston: MacGraw Hill.
67 Id
68 Burstein, H. A. (1987). Criminal investigation. California: Books/Cole Publishing Company.
Isaias Alma Jose in his book “Technical Report Writing” lists down the following as the steps in writing the
report:
1. G - gather the facts, which means that the officer must first gather the facts thru observation,
interview of witnesses or persons of interest. This also includes asking questions from relatives of
the victim, by standers, fellow officers, first responders and the like. The objective of gathering
data is to ensure that preliminary facts are established which means that the five Ws and 1 H is
answered.
2. R - record the facts, means that the data that was gathered. This can be done thru notes taking,
listening, tape recording or videotaping the data gathering process. It is important to ensure that
all facts are gathered so that when it will be finalized the investigator does not have to go back to
his witnesses.
3. O - organize the facts. Background preparation includes gathering and arranging the information
in a logical sequence, thus outlining the report. Arrange notes, evidence and exhibits in the same
order as you intend to present the information in the report. Reports should refer to each other
and are correlated.
4. W - write the report. This perhaps is the most challenging part as an investigator is to write down
the report. Challenging since the task is complicated, time consuming and tedious. The report
must be written in a manner that it is clear, concise, accurate and objective or fair. Rules on format
and style must also be considered.
69 Id
70 Swanson, C.R. et. al. (2000). Criminal investigation (7th ed.). Boston: MacGraw Hill.
71 Swanson, C.R. et. al. (2000). Criminal investigation (7th ed.). Boston: MacGraw Hill.
SUBJECT-TO-LETTER
This is most applicable in police report writing. Commendations, certificates of appreciation or any
other meritorious recognition, basic transmittal, recommendations for promotion and similarly related
requests also adopt the subject-to-letter format. 72
This is prepared intra-organizational, within the organization - meaning, within the PNP, within the
BJMP, within the BFP, or within the Philippine Public Safety College (PPSC). A purely civilian letter is
used when sent outside a bureau. 73
THE HEADING
All of the materials above the first line of the body comprise the heading. These are the office of the
origin and address, file reference, identifying initials, date, subject, channels through which the letter
will pass, and addressee to whom the letter is being sent. 74
Letterhead
Printed stationary is usually used for the first page. If not, available, a typed letterhead may be
substituted. Each headquarters has its own letterhead. 75
In offices where more than one kind of letterhead is used, the nature of the letter will determine which
letterhead is used and which letterhead is proper. 76
File Reference
Otherwise called office symbol, a file reference is placed at the left margin usually two spaces below the
letterhead and the line with the date. This is also used as identifying information on the second and
subsequent pages. 77
Identifying Initials
Some offices place the surname or the initials of their originator and the typist on the letter. The initials
of the individual who dictated the correspondence and those of the typist are placed in the upper extreme
right corner on the first page of all copies or on the file copies only, depending on the instruction issued
by the chief supervisor. 78
72 Jose, IA (1989). Police Report Writing. Lecture Notes for the Philippine College of Criminology. Unpublished; PNP Form and Style Guide
(2001)
73 Hurboda, I (2000). Police, Jail, Fire and Public Safety Correspondence and Issuances. DMAM Publishing Inc. Makati City
74 Jose, IA (1989). Police Report Writing. Lecture Notes for the Philippine College of Criminology. Unpublished; PNP Form and Style Guide
(2001)
75
Id
76 Id
77 Id
78 Id
Subject
The subject line should contain words not exceeding 10. It starts two spaces below the file reference
and two typewriter spaces below to the right of the colon. Title capitalization rules are used. This
means that capital letters for the first word and other important words; small letters for the
unimportant ones. When the subject extends to two lines, the second line is blocked under the first
letter of the first word in the subject. 81
Example:
Channels
Correspondence can be routed “THRU” channnels, through a lower chief or supervisor expected to
exercise control, take action or to be concerned. 82
79
Id
80 Hurboda, I (2000). Police, Jail, Fire and Public Safety Correspondence and Issuances. DMAM Publishing Inc. Makati City
81 Hurboda, I (2000). Police, Jail, Fire and Public Safety Correspondence and Issuances. DMAM Publishing Inc. Makati City
82 Id
Address
The address preceded by “TO” (“FOR”) will be written in block style with open punctuations, and
normally will be placed no the fourth line below the subject or the “THRU” addressee (if used).
Unless the correspondence pertains to an individual personally, the name of the individual will not be
used in the address of the Subject-To-Letter. When it is necessary, however, to address correspondence
to an individual by name, his grade, first name, middle initial (if any) and last name are indicated in that
order. His service number may be shown if it is known and considered necessary for identification. 83
“Multiple” Addressees
When the same letter is intended for several addressees, the entire address of each will be placed on a
single line if possible. 85
“Attention” Addressees
To speed routing, correspondence may be addressed to the attention of an individual or the head of a
subdivision of an agency or office, either by reference to the name of the subdivision or by the use of an
office symbol. 86
The name will be used only when there exists a special reason for calling the letter to the attention of
the individual known to handle the type of correspondence concerned, and when it is known that he will
be at the place addressed. 87
83 Jose, IA (1989). Police Report Writing. Lecture Notes for the Philippine College of Criminology. Unpublished; PNP Form and Style Guide
(2001)
84
Id
85 Id
86 Id
87 Id
Margin Settings. 1-inch margin on the bottom and sides of the page. Letterhead starts on the fourth
line from the top of the page.
Style of Type. The standard letter is left justified. This means that in the text there is no indenting
except for the first line of every subparagraph and every line of long quotations. Size 10-12 point
of a block style font (Arial).
2. THE BODY - The message itself: it is the substance of the typed letter as distinct from the formal
beginning and ending. This part of the letter is single-spaced, except when it is less than nine (9)
lines and no reply is expected, in which case, it may be double-spaced. Double spacing will always
be used between paragraphs. 88
The first line of the body of the letter will begin on the fifth line below the inside address.
Paragraphing
When a letter is consist of only on paragraph, the paragraph will not be numbered, although its sub-
paragraph will be lettered, if there are two or more. When there are two or more paragraphs, they will
be numbered consecutively. The first line of a paragraph will be indented five spaces. The second and
succeeding lines will begin at the left margin. 89
Sub-paragraphs must at least be two. First subdivision will be designated by the letters i.e. a, b, c, and so
on. The first line will be indented so that the designating letter appears directly under the first letter of
88 Jose, IA (1989). Police Report Writing. Lecture Notes for the Philippine College of Criminology. Unpublished; PNP Form and Style Guide
(2001)
89 Id
Second subdivisions of paragraphs will be designated by numbers in parentheses i.e. (1), (2), (3) and so
on. If necessary, additional subdivisions will be designated by numbers underscored. The first line of
these subdivisions will be indented as shown in the example. Second and succeeding lines will begin
at the left margin.
(1) Xxx xxx xxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxx xxxxx xxxxx xxxxx xxxxx xxx.
(2) Xxx xxx xxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxx xxxxx xxxxx xxxxx xxxxx xxx.
(a) Xxx xxx xxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxx xxxxx xxxxx xxxxx xxxxx xxx.
(b) Xxx xxx xxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxx xxxxx xxxxx xxxxx xxxxx xxx.
Abbreviations
A subject-to-letter allows abbreviations which are generally accepted in service. They are usually written
without spacing or periods, except geographical locations which can be written with or without periods.
If the full name is used, the abbreviated rank is permissible (Dir John M. Pangan); if family name only,
the rank is spelled out (Director Pangan). 91
However, good practice tells the writer to use abbreviations sparingly. But definitely, they are not used
in correspondence going outside the bureau. 92
Spacing
In writing communications in the Philippine National Police, the following rules on spacing are
followed:
90 Id
91 Jose, IA (1989). Police Report Writing. Lecture Notes for the Philippine College of Criminology. Unpublished; PNP Form and Style Guide
(2001)
92 Id
References
References to publications must be specific and fully identified. References will not be made to a
publication or document which is not available to the addresses of the correspondence. 93
Page Numbering
The first page should not be numbered. Subsequent pages, including those on which endorsements are
prepared, will be numbered consecutively, beginning with the second page as 2. Page numbers will be
centered 1 inch from the bottom of the page. The number will stand by itself; it will not be set off by
dashes, parentheses, or other punctuations. 94
Dividing a Paragraph
Three or fewer will not be divided between pages. At least two lines of a divided paragraph will appear
on each page. In dividing a sentence between pages, at least two words will appear on each page. A
word will not be divided between two pages. 95
The complimentary ending will not appear alone on a page without a part of a body or text. When the
space below the text is not sufficient for the close, at least two lines of the last paragraph or subparagraph
which in its entirely consists of only one line may be paced on the last page together with the
complimentary ending. 96
On the second and each succeeding pages, the file reference and subject will be typed, beginning at the
left margin one and one-fourth from the top of edge of the page. The date will be paced so that it ends
at the right margin. The text will be continued on the second line below the identification line. 97
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Authority Line
This will be shown when the correspondence is signed for the chief or head of an agency or office by an
individual authorized to do so. This reflects the fact that the communication is an expression of the will
of the chief himself.
(1) If signing for a chief superintendent, director, deputy director general, or a director general, and
addressed to a member or members under him -
NOTE: A staff may sign under the authority line only when authorized to do so.
The signatory portion for communications intended for signature of the Chief, PNP; TDCA; TDCO; and
TCDS should be printed as follows:
SONNY D. DE GUZMAN
Chief Inspector, PNP
Chief, Admin Division
The use of double signature is avoided. Instead of this, a designated individual may sign his own name and
add the word “FOR” in front of the typewritten name and the signature. If an officer signs “FOR”, the
rank of the signing individual may be shown.
EDMOND K. MANALO
Superintendent, PNP
Asst. Regional Director
FOR:
CHARITO P. SOLIS
Chief Inspector, PNP
Chief Admin
Block style and open punctuations are used. Abbreviations of rank or service, and titles may be used also.
By block style, the first letter of the rank and title is placed directly under the first letter of the typewritten
signature, but not necessarily blocking under the last letter of the typewritten signature. 98
Copies Furnished:
The Chief Surgeon
The Chief Nurse
or:
Copies Furnished:
RD-PRO-CAR
COP-BCPO
Intel Section
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If sent by an office of record, one copy will be forwarded with communication to the recipient who is to
take principal action on the communication and the other will be rendered for record. 101
If communication is sent by an office not of record or by an individual, one copy will be forwarded with
the communication to the first office of record receiving the communication. A third copy may be retained
by the writer and may be destroyed later when such copy is deemed no longer necessary. 102
The first office of record which receives a communication from an office not of record or from an individual
will withdraw one copy thereof for its record. No other immediate recipient of a communication will
withdraw a copy. 103
Such record shall show only the minimum requisite information. Except in unusual circumstances, no
copy of the letter itself will be made. Notation for record purpose of secret materials can be such that
content matter or the letter is safeguarded. 104
Assembling
The outgoing letter and relevant papers will be arranged from top to bottom and fastened with paper
clips, as follows:
i. Outgoing letter on top;
ii. Copy of outgoing letter, if any;
iii. Inclosures and copies, if any, in numerical sequence; and
iv. Information copies of outgoing letter, if any, with inclosures, when applicable.
The file copy and relevant papers will be arranged from top to bottom, as follows:
(1) File copy of outgoing letter on top. If consisting of more than one page, last page on top;
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105 Id
MEMORANDUM
Memoranda are often used in inter-office communications while letters are used for other purposes. It is
used for the information of a majority of the members of a unit or agency. Often it is used for issuance of
administrative instructions from executives or for advisory and information in nature from subordinates.
108
In short, it is a note, a reminder, or a statement that one wishes to remember or preserve for future use.
It evolved from a Latin term memorandus which means to be remembered or memorare to remind. Its
various tense forms may be done by shortening memorandum to memo so that conjugation can be done
like memoing, memos and memoed. Memorandum is definitely singular while its plural form may be
memoranda or memorandums. 109
Memoranda are used to communicate throughout law enforcement agencies and with other government
agencies as well as to conduct official business outside the Government with vendors or contractors when
a personal letter is inappropriate. Official memorandums may be addressed to specific officials, single
106
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108 Id
109 Id
4. Use 12 point Arial or Times New Roman font for text. Smaller sizes, no smaller than 10 point,
may be used when required to control page breaks. For example, shrink the font of all text in the
memorandum to prevent a page break between the body and closing elements (signature block).
The signature block is never on a page by itself.111
For most documents, the guidance for the specific elements on the following pages needs no
adjustments; however, for short communications, you may adjust the top margin in order to
balance the content toward the vertical center of the document by moving all elements from the date
to the last line of the closing to achieve visual balance and avoid a top-heavy appearance. 112
Date
Placement and Format: Place the date 1 inch from the right edge, 1.75 inches from the top of the
page. Use the “Day Month Year” or “DD Mmm YY” format for documents addressed to a military
organization. In the “DD Mmm YY” format, the month and year are both abbreviated for consistency.
For civilian addressees, use the “Month Day, Year” format. Finally, unless the date of signature has
legal significance, date the original and all copies of the correspondence at the time of dispatch. 114
Examples:
Official/ Military Addressees–Day Month Year 15 October 2014
Official/ Military Addressees–DD Month YY 15 Oct 14
Civilian Addressees–Month Day, Year October 15, 2014
“MEMORANDUM FOR”
Placement: Place “MEMORANDUM FOR” on the second line below the date. Leave two spaces
between “MEMORANDUM FOR” and the recipient’s organization abbreviation and office symbol
(ORG/SYMBOL). If there are multiple recipients, two or three office symbols may be placed on each
line with the second and following lines aligned under the first recipient. If there are numerous
recipients, use the “DISTRIBUTION” element. 115
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113 Id
114 Id
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• When addressing one office, enter the organization/office symbol in uppercase letters. To
indicate the memorandum is for a specific person, enter the organization/office symbol
followed by the person’s rank and name in parentheses—all in uppercase. Another option
is to use the “ATTENTION” element. 116
• When addressing several offices, align subsequent addressees under the first address. If the
office symbols are fairly short and you have several for the memorandum, you may include
two or three on a single line by aligning each additional line of recipients under the
recipients in the first line in like fashion. Be consistent with your format: write out all
organization names or use all organization/office symbols. 117
• When addressing several offices IN TURN, use the “IN TURN” format to distribute the official
memorandum to several individuals or offices in sequence. The only difference is the format
of the “MEMORANDUM FOR” element, as shown below.
o “IN TURN” Originators: Prepare an “IN TURN” memorandum when the final
addressee or OPR must see the coordination or action of all addressees. Use the
official memorandum format. Type “IN TURN” in uppercase, one line below the last
address of the “MEMORANDUM FOR” element aligned with the addresses.
o “IN TURN” Recipients: When you receive an “IN TURN” memorandum, strike
through your organization abbreviation and office symbol, then type, sign or initial,
and date. Type “Concur,” “Nonconcur,” “Comments attached” or “Comments sent
by separate correspondence to” next to the date. Prepare a separate memorandum
for a lengthy comment. Attach comments to the “IN TURN” memorandum if the
remaining addressees need them; otherwise, forward comments directly to the final
addressee. Forward the “IN TURN” memorandum to the next address and “cc” the
OPR for tracking purposes. 118
• Using a distribution element or list. When the address list is too long to include in the
“MEMORANDUM FOR” element, use the distribution element or list. Simply leave two spaces
after “MEMORANDUM FOR” and add “DISTRIBUTION” in uppercase letters. Include the
addressees in the “DISTRIBUTION” element or on a separate page attached to the
memorandum. 119
“ATTENTION:”
Placement: The attention element is aligned under the address or office symbol in the
“MEMORANDUM FOR” line. The attention element is used when a memorandum is intended for both
an office and the attention of a specific person in that office. The format of the attention element is to
place “ATTENTION:” or “ATTN:” or “THROUGH:” with the abbreviated rank and last name in
uppercase on the line immediately below the “MEMORANDUM FOR” line.120
“FROM:”
116 Id
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118 Id
119 Bly, R. (2003). Webster's New World Letter Writing Handbook 1st Edition. USA. Webster's New World; 1 edition
120 Hurboda, I (2000). Police, Jail, Fire and Public Safety Correspondence and Issuances. DMAM Publishing Inc. Makati City; Jose, IA (1989).
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Placement: Place “FROM:” in uppercase, flush with the left margin, on the second line below the
last line of the MEMORANDUM FOR element (or the ATTENTION element, if used). After the
“FROM:” element, leave two spaces followed by the organization abbreviation and office symbol
(ORG/SYMBOL) of the originator. 121
Contents: If the complete mailing address is printed on the letterhead or if all recipients are located
on the same installation as the originator, then only a single line FROM element consisting of the
organization abbreviation and office symbol is used. 122
If the complete mailing address is not printed on the letterhead or if the recipients are on another
installation, then the FROM element contains the full mailing address of the originator. This enables
recipients to easily prepare and address return correspondence.
• The first line of the FROM element includes the organization abbreviation and office symbol
separated by a virgule and typed in uppercase.
• The second line of the FROM element is the delivery address of the originator in upper and
lower case.
• The third line of the FROM element includes the city, province and ZIP+4 code (without a
comma between the city and province). 123
“SUBJECT:”
Placement: In all uppercase letters place “SUBJECT:”, flush with the left margin, on the second
line below the last line of the FROM element. After “SUBJECT:”, type two spaces followed by the
title; capitalize the first letter of each word except articles, prepositions and conjunctions. Be brief
and clear to focus readers; if you need a second line, align it under the first word of the subject. 124
• When writing about an individual/employee who is not the addressee, include rank/grade and
full name in the subject line. If you refer to the person again in the text of the
memorandum, use only the rank/grade and surname.
• Do not include names in the subject line when writing about two or more individuals.
• When writing about several people, state their full names with rank/grade in the text of
the memorandum the first time the names appear.
• SUSPENSE items: Include the suspense date in the subject line by typing “SUSPENSE:” or
“SUSP:” with the date in parentheses after the title. If additional information for the suspense
is necessary, include it in a separate paragraph—not in the SUBJECT line.125
“References”
Placement: There are two options for placement of the references element—within the subject line
or below the subject line. Cite a single reference to a communication or a directive in parentheses
immediately after the subject title. For two or more references, type “References:” on the second
121 Id
122
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2. Numbering paragraphs. Number and letter each paragraph and subparagraph. A single
paragraph is not numbered.
3. Formatting short subparagraphs. Use a run-in method of listing subparagraphs when the
subparagraphs consist of short sentences or phrases. The run-in method has several
advantages: (a) it’s compact, (b) it highlights ideas, and (c) it saves space.
4. First Line of Text. The first paragraph is never indented; it is numbered and flush left, two
line spaces below the last line of the SUBJECT element (or the References element, if used).
Indent the first line of sub-paragraphs to align the number or letter with the first character of its
parent level paragraph. Each sub-level is likewise indented to align its paragraph number or
letter with the first character of its parent level paragraph.
5. Subsequent lines of text. All second and subsequent lines of text for all paragraphs at all
levels begin flush with the left margin; do not indent.
6. Punctuation. Use conventional rules of English grammar for punctuation in the body.
8. Quotations. When quoting numbered paragraphs from another document, cite the source
and paragraph numbers in your text.
9. Contact information. Place contact names, e-mail addresses, fax numbers, and
telephone numbers in the last paragraph of the memorandum text.
10. Continuation Pages. Use plain bond paper. Begin typing the text of the continuation page
four lines below the page number. Type at least two lines of the text on each page. Avoid
dividing a paragraph of less than four lines between two pages.
11. Page numbering. The first page of a memorandum is never numbered. You may omit page
numbers on a one- or two-page memorandum; however, memorandums longer than two
pages must have page numbers. Number the succeeding pages starting with page 2. Place
page numbers 0.5-inch from the top of the page, flush with the right margin. Number the
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continuation pages of each attachment as a separate sequence.127
Authority Line
Placement and Use: The authority line informs readers that the person who signed the
document acted for the commander, the command section, or the headquarters. If an authority
line is used, add “FOR THE COMMANDER” (or appropriate title) in uppercase on the second line below
the last line of the text and 4.5 inches from the left edge of the page or three spaces to the right of
the page center. 129
Signature Block
Placement: Start the signature block on the fifth line below the last line of text and 4.5 inches from
the left edge of the page or three spaces to the right of page center. If the authority line is used,
type the signature element five lines below the authority line. If dual signatures are required, type
the junior ranking official’s signature block at the left margin; type the senior ranking official’s
signature block 4.5 inches from the left edge of the page or three spaces to the right of page center.
Do not place the signature element on a continuation page by itself. Consider correspondence
received via e-mail, copied, or stamped //SIGNED// as authoritative as long as the signed copy is kept
on file at the originating office. 130
Signature
Placement: Sign correspondence with permanent black ink. Use black typewriter ribbons, black
printer toner, or black ink for rubber stamps or signature facsimile equipment.
Attachment or Attachments
Placement: Place “Attachment:” (for a single attachment) or “# Attachments:” (for two or more
attachments) at the left margin, on the third line below the signature element. When there are
two or more attachments, list each by number and in the order mentioned in the memorandum.
Beneath “Attachment” briefly describe each attachment, but do not use general terms or
abbreviations such as “as stated,” “as described above,” or “a/s.” Cite the office of origin, type of
communication, date, and number of copies (in parentheses) if more than one. Include the subject
of the attachment if the receiver will not get copies of attachments or if the subject is not already
referenced in text. For classified attachments, show the assigned classification symbol in parentheses.
Send a copy of the memorandum when you send the attachment (first example, below). If sending
an attachment separately, type “(sep cover)” after the attachment label (see example, below). Do not
divide attachment listings between two pages. If the listing is too long, type “Attachments: (listed on
next page),” and list the attachments on a separate page.
127
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Distribution Element
Placement: If “MEMORANDUM FOR DISTRIBUTION” is used, place “DISTRIBUTION:” flush with the left
margin, on the second line below the attachment element or the courtesy copy element, if used. If
neither the attachment element nor the courtesy copy elements are used, place “DISTRIBUTION”
on the third line below the signature element. Do not divide distribution lists between two pages.
If the list is too long, type “DISTRIBUTION (listed on next page),” and list the organizations on a
separate page. 132
Attachments
Many times you will need to attach supporting documents to your correspondence and the order of
these documents has meaning for your correspondence. Placing supporting documents in the right
order conveys levels of significance and relationships between documents to convey the context or
background related to the issue in the correspondence. Understanding the context and background can be
key information for decision makers to understand the issue and make good decisions. 133
IMPORTANT TERMS
The following terms are important in the course of the study of investigative report writing taken from
the PNP Field Training Manual for Investigation: 135
3. Report – is a detailed account of an event, situation, etc., usually based on observation or inquiry.
131 Id
132
Id
133 Hess. K. & Orthmann, C. (2008). For the Record: Report Writing in Law Enforcement. USA. Innovative Systems Publishers
134 Id
135 PNP (2016). PNP Field Training Manual for Investigation. DIDM/ DHRDD. Manila Phils.
5. Report Writing – is a communication that lends itself to a useful tool for people in a free society
to express their thoughts and ideas and to obtain what they need or want.
6. Fact – is anything which either through careful observation or investigation, has been proven to
exist as to have happened.
7. Note Taking – is defined as a brief notation concerning specific events that are recorded while
fresh in your mind and used to prepare a report.
8. Chronological Order – is the arrangement of events and/or actions in order by the time of their
occurrence.
9. Investigation – is the collection of facts to accomplish a threefold aim: to identify the suspect; to
locate the suspect; and to provide evidence of his guilt.
10. Investigator/Officer – shall refer to any law enforcement personnel belonging to the duly
mandated Law Enforcement Agencies (LEA) tasked to enforce RA 9208 such as officers,
investigators and agents of the PNP and NBI. 136
Basic Types of Investigation Report The following are the basic types of Investigation Report:
1. Spot Report is an immediate initial investigative or incident report addressed to Higher
Headquarters pertaining to the commission of the crime, occurrence of natural or man-made
disaster or unusual incidents involving loss of lives and damage to properties. 138
2. A Progress Report is an accounting of the actions or series of actions undertaken in relation to an
ongoing investigation of a case. 139
3. After Operation Report is a report that may be rendered after any successful police operation that
leads to the arrest of any member or some members of syndicated crime group. 140
136
PNP (2013). Field Training Program Manual (Module III). Quezon City Phils.
137 Id
138
Jose, IA (1989). Police Report Writing. Lecture Notes for the Philippine College of Criminology. Unpublished; PNP Form and Style Guide
(2001
139 Id
140 Id
The field notes can document the parties contacted with regards to a specific event and record
the parties' involvement with the incident. Thus, the field notes can prevent duplication of
further fact finding efforts by identifying individuals who have already been contacted as well as
pointing out individuals who may make significant contributions to the investigation. 143
An officer's field notes provide greater accuracy in documenting time, events, and statements
than the officer's memory.
b. References
Field notes serve as a handy reference for further investigation. Information contained in field
notes can be used as an initial starting point for further investigative efforts. 144
Field notes can be compared to other subsequent investigative notes for inconsistent patterns
of statements and/or behavior of principal parties involved.
Sketches included in the field notes can be used at a later time to reconstruct the crime scene,
thereby presenting the investigator with a graphic illustration that compliments his written
description of the scene.
c. Evidence
Notes are a permanent record and may be used as evidence. Notes may be used to refresh your
memory when testifying. Accurate and complete field notes can be a valuable aid in ensuring
the admissibility of evidence related to a crime scene.
141 Hess, K. & Orthmann, C. (2008). For The Record: Report Writing In Law Enforcement. USA. Innovative Systems Publishers
142 Id
143 Id
144 Id
Types of notebooks: The notebook should be one that can easil be carried in the officer's hip pocket.
A notebook with dimensions of approximately 42" by 6" is recommended.
a. Looseleaf notebook - This type of notebook has the advantage of page removal
for easy case-by case filing. Its main disadvantage is that persons can imply notebook
alterations took place prior to courtroom testimony.
b. Bound notebook - In a bound notebook the pages cannot be altered easily;
however, under the scrutiny of cross-examination or discovery, notes pertinent to
other investigations contained in the notebook may be compromised. 146
145 Hess, K. & Orthmann, C. (2008). For The Record: Report Writing In Law Enforcement. USA. Innovative Systems Publishers
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6. With What? Include the type of tool(s) or weapon(s) used in the crime and how did the criminal
travel to and from the scene.
7. Why? Include specific and accurate information describing possible motives involved in the
commission of the crime.
8. With Whom? This question pertains to the criminal associates and activities
9. How Much? This question pertains to the amount of money taken and damage caused by the
perpetrator. 147
In the event of errors in notes, the errors should not be erased. A line should be drawn through the
error(s) and initialed by the officer. Abbreviations, if used, should be those commonly used in
correspondence. The use of shorthand notes should be avoided because of the variety of shorthand
systems in use, the errors which may occur in transcribing, and the fact that many people have no
knowledge of shorthand techniques.148
POLICE BLOTTER
A Police Blotter is a record of daily events occurring within the territory/jurisdiction of a given police unit
or command. It contains material details concerning the event for legal and statistical purposes. This police
blotter is an informational record book that is utilized for evidentiary or referral purposes. 149
Report Content
The entry in the Police Blotter should answer the following cardinal elements of a police report: Who,
What, When, Where, Why, How and the disposition of the case. In answering the 5 W‟s and 1H and the
case disposition, all such material details about the event, including the names of the suspects, the victim,
the witnesses, if any, the nature of the action or offense, the possible motive, the place, the date and time
of occurrence and significant circumstances that aggravate or mitigate the event or the crime should be
entered along with the identity of the officer to whom the case is assigned (officer-in-case) and the status
of the case. 151
147 Biggs,M (2011). Just The Facts: Investigative Report Writing (4th edition) 4th edition. USA. Pearson
148
Id
149 Id
150 PNP (2016). PNP Field Training Manual for Investigation. DIDM/ DHRDD. Manila Phils
151 Id
The form is similar to SUBJECT-TO LETTER, except that the text is guided with the following headings:
1. AUTHORITY
2. MATTERS INVESTIGATED
3. FACTS OF THE CASE
4. DISCUSSION
5. CONCLUSIONS
6. RECOMMENDATIONS
If a heading is not important because it is absorbed in another heading, such can be excluded. Headings
are capitalized and followed by a colon. All the paragraphs composing the text of the report are numbered
consecutively. The investigator or the investigating officer signs the report. 154
On top of the letterhead and on the lower fold of the paper, the word CONFIDENTIAL is typed or stamped.
CONFIDENTIAL
(Letterhead)
CODE Dateline
SUBJECT:
(Nature of the Case)
152 Id
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AUTHORITY:
1. This section should contain a brief statement of when, where of when, where and by whom
the investigation was made, citing the authority for making it. If the investigation was made on the basis
of oral orders, this fact should be stated, naming the individual issuing the order and the date thereof.
If it were made pursuant to the document, stating the date and the original authority, whether local or
chief of higher headquarters, is necessary. 155
MATTERS INVESTIGATED:
2. This section of the report represents the mission of the investigator/investigating officer. In
other words, "What is the investigation about?" Most of these reports are written complaints, alleging
that some persons have committed some crimes or unjust treatments. If the allegations are too long to
cite, a synopsis is in order. Appropriate reference may be made to the copy of the papers in the appendix
upon which the investigation was based. 156
DISCUSSION:
4. This section should indicate the presumption and inference from all the circumstances in the
case to give the directing authority the clearest possible picture. It should contain such related factual
matter of argument as may be necessary, in addition to the facts presented, to establish the conclusions
and recommendations based thereon. In simple cases requiring circumstances, this section may be
avoided and indicated or worded. "This case possesses no aspects or conditions requiring special
discussion; and there are no mitigating or extenuating circumstances." Frequently, however, the evidence
is so evenly divided, pro and con or the attending circumstances are so unusual that some explanatory
justifying conclusions reached are necessary. In the event act of irregularity or misconduct are
established in the case of a person whose past record has otherwise been of such excellence, justice
requires that it should be included in the discussion when the only obtainable evidence is that
contained in the testimony of the informant and of the person accused, the facts cannot positively
155 Hurboda, I (2000). Police, Jail, Fire and Public Safety Correspondence and Issuances. DMAM Publishing Inc. Makati City
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Id
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be established. However, the records and character of the accuser may be used to assist in determining
the appropriate action. In such cases the investigating officer’s observations and opinions may
appropriately be presented in this section of the report. Whenever the available evidence is scanty and
conflicting but the investigating officer has strong and well-supported convictions on the matter, the basis
for the conclusions he reaches should be presented in the discussion. 158
CONCLUSION:
5. This section represents a concise summary of the results of investigation directly consequent
from and supported by the facts. These should logically follow the facts of the case as found and set forth
in the report, and should have no item not supported by the facts contained in the preceding parts of the
report. They are usually stated in the order naturally suggested by the statement of the allegations or
facts 159.
6. Conclusions should not be a repetition of the facts, merely worded differently. Since the facts
upon which they are based will have preceded this section, no further statement of facts or repetition is
necessary desirable in the conclusions. They should represent the investigating officer's honest, well-
studied opinion as to the real truth of each of the matters at issue. As such, conclusions should contain
no apology, or qualification, such as "It appears," It is believed," or "It seems probable." 160
RECOMMENDATIONS:
7. This section should contain the practical suggestions as to appropriate action to be taken to
make suitable disposition of all phases of the case. This should follow as far as practicable, the same
sequence as was used in the presentation of the conclusions. Recommendations should be consistent
with and appropriate to the conclusions. They constitute the investigating officer's judgment, as he has
established, as to the action the directing authority should take. They should stipulate the proper action
in the case of a wrong committed or the remedy for an unsatisfactory situation or condition found to exist.
If the facts and conclusions disclose that no wrong was committed nor was there a condition requiring
correction, the recommendation may be that the case be closed 161.
INVESTIGATING OFFICER
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___________________________
MEMORANDUM
FOR :
FROM :
DATE :
I Authority
II Mission
IV Area of Operations
V Participating Elements
VI Chronological Events
a. Background
b. Intelligence Build-up
VII Comments.
VIII Assessment.
______________________________
___________________________
MEMORANDUM
FOR :
FROM :
DATE :
4. Sequence of Events
5. Summary of Action
6. Recommendation/ Conclusion
7. Disposition/findings
_______________________________
___________________________
MEMORANDUM
FOR :
FROM :
DATE :
4. (Other Facts)
_________________________
___________________________
MEMORANDUM
FOR :
FROM :
DATE :
3. (Other Facts)
________________________
Sources of Law
There are two primary sources of the law:
It is in this regard that the collections of law libraries in the Philippines include
United States court reports, West’s national reporter system, court reports of
England and international tribunal, important reference materials such as the
American Jurisprudence, Corpus Juris Secundum, Words and Phrases and different
law dictionaries. Some of these law libraries subscribe to the Westlaw and/or
LexisNexis. The Supreme Court , University of the Philippines, University of Santo
Tomas and a number of prominent law libraries also have a Spanish collection
where a great number of our laws originated.
Classification by Source
It is important for legal research experts to know the source where the materials
were taken from. One has to determine whether they came from primary (official)
sources or secondary (unofficial sources). Primary and secondary sources for the
Primary sources are those published by the issuing agency itself or the official
repository, the Official Gazette. Thus, for Republic Acts and other legislative
enactments or statutes, the primary sources are the Official Gazette published by
the National Printing Office and the Laws and Resolutions published by Congress.
For Supreme Court decisions, the primary sources are the Philippine Reports, the
individually mimeographed Advance Supreme Court decisions (discontinued by
the Supreme Court effective January 2009) and the Official Gazette. Publication
of Supreme Court decisions in the Official Gazette is selective. Complete court
reports for Supreme Court decisions from 1901 to the present can be found in the
Philippine Reports.
The Secondary Sources are the unofficial sources and generally referred to as
those commercially published or those that are not published by government
agencies or instrumentalities.
Some of the Secondary sources of statutes are the Vital Legal Documents,
published by the Central Book Supply, contains a compilation of Presidential
Decrees (1973). The second edition contains Republic Acts. Prof. Sulpicio Guevara
published three books which contain s the full text of legislative enactments or
laws namely: a). Public Laws Annotated (7 vols.) , compilation of all laws from 1901
to 1935, b). Commonwealth Acts Annotated (3vos.). compilation of laws from
1935-1945 c). The Laws of the First Philippine Republic (The Laws of Malolos) 1898-
1899. For the Supreme Court decisions, Supreme Court Reports Annotated (SCRA),
a secondary source, published by the Central Book Supply is more updated and
popular in the legal community than the Philippine Reports, the primary and
official source. Citations in commentaries or books, treatise, writings, journal
articles, pleading and even court decisions show SCRA’s popular acceptance. The
general rule is that in the absence of a primary source, the secondary source may
be cited. This was the primary rationale for the SCRA’s popularity. There was no
primary source for complete compilation of Supreme Court decisions for more
than twenty (20) years. The publication of the Philippine Reports by the National
Printing Office ceased in 1960s. It was only in 1982 when the publication of the
Philippine Reports was revived by then Chief Justice Enrique M. Fernando who
requested then President Ferdinand E. Marcos to take charge of its publication
with special appropriation in the Judiciary’s annual budget.
Legal research for statute law in the Philippines benefited remarkably from the use
of the latest technology due to two major problems: a) no complete and updated
published or printed search tools or law finders for statute law and b) no complete
compilation of statute law from 1901-present were available. Problems of the
publication of compilations of statute law or the existence of the full-text of
Presidential Decrees was even brought to the Supreme Court in the Tanada v.
Tuvera, G.R. No. 63915, April 24, 1985 (220 Phil 422), December 29, 1986 (146
SCRA 446) case. This case which was first decided before the bloodless revolution
popularly known as People Power or the EDSA Revolution was modified in the
December 29, 1986 or after the People Power or the EDSA Revolution.
Still, with regards to Statute Law in the Philippines, the other problem is how to
classify sources published in the newspapers. Since 1987, based on the definition
of primary and secondary source, they may be considered as primary sources
pursuant to Executive Order No. 200, s. 1987 which provides that laws become
effective fifteen (15) days after publication in the Official Gazette or in two
newspapers of general circulation. In case of conflict between the two versions,
the version of the Official Gazette holds.
In finding the law, our ultimate goal is to locate mandatory primary authorities
which have bearing on the legal problem at hand. If these authorities are scarce or
nonexistent, our next alternative is to find any relevant persuasive mandatory
authority. If our search is still negative, the next alternative might be secondary
authorities. There are however instances where the secondary authorities, more
particularly the commentaries made by experts of the field, take precedence over
the persuasive mandatory authorities. With the availability of both, using both
sources is highly recommended.
Foreign Phrases
The following list comprises foreign phrases which are frequently used in official
correspondence and state papers. They should generally be underscored in typewritten
matter.
a fortiori - with stronger reason; much more.
a posteriori - from effect to cause; from what comes after.
a priori - from cause to effect; from what went before.
ad hoc - as to this.
ad infinitum - without limit.
ad interim - in the meantime. (Not underscored in title "Charge d'Affaires ad interim")
ad referendum - for reference; for further consideration.
ad valorem - according to the valuation. (Not italicized in English text)
bona fide - in good faith.
bona fides - good faith.
Latin Abbreviations
Abbrevia Full Latin Term Meaning
A.M. ante meridiem before noon
c. or ca circa about, approximately
e.g. exempli gratia for example, for instance
et al. et allii, et alia and other people/things
etc. et cetera and so on, and other things
ib, ibid. ibidem in the same place
i.e. id est that is to say
loc. cit. loco citato in the place cited/mentioned
op. cit. opere citato in the work cited/mentioned before
P.M. post meridiem after noon
P.S. post scriptum after writing
Pro tem. pro tempore for the time, temporarily
Q.E.D. quod erat demonstrandum which was to be shown
Things to Avoid
• Accusations. Only tell the reader the facts (what you know is true). Let the reader
reach the conclusion. In other words, don’t tell the reader. Show the reader.
o DON’T: He is a horrible parent.
o DO: Our son failed two of his quizzes last month. His father was not aware of this.
• Exaggerations. It’s better to keep your statements neutral and truthful.
o DON’T: He’s always late and drives like a race car driver!
o DO: On March 3, 2015 he dropped the kids off 30 minutes late and drove
through the stop sign without slowing.
• Story-telling. The judge needs to understand the facts and this is done best with
clear concise sentences. Avoid personal narratives that take a long time to get
to the point.
o DON’T: It was one of those hot spring days, so I was outside waiting for him
to drop the children off. He was late. He’s always been running late. When
we went on vacation 5 years ago, we missed our flight because he was
late.
o DO: On March 3, 2015 he dropped the children off half an hour
later than agreed upon.
• Slangs, idioms and acronyms. It makes your writing look unprofessional.
The reader also might not understand the terms you use. Tell the reader in
plain language.
o DON’T: It was raining cats and dogs!
o DO: It was raining heavily.
The term "form" carries many meanings. Webster's New Collegiate Dictionary
gives two definitions that are particularly useful to legal researchers: "a prescribed
order and set of words" and "a printed or typed document with blank spaces for
insertion of required or requested information." Both kinds of forms are available
through the Goodson Law Library, located in resources that provide standard
language as well as resources that contain fill-in-the-blank forms. This research
guide lists resources in print and electronic formats for each type of form.
Law students who are just beginning to draft a document often turn to forms to
identify the language that will accomplish their goals. Experienced attorneys use
forms as checklists, to ensure they have not overlooked any possibilities. In the case
of "boilerplate" contracts (contracts using standardized language), the use of
forms saves the drafter's time. In some areas, such as bankruptcy and patent
practice, the use of certain forms is required by law. Also, many non-lawyers use
form books for help with writing a lease, a will, or a contract.
PARTS OF AN AFFIDAVIT
1. The Header
Usually seen on the upper left of an Affidavit, it
appears like this. Republic of the Philippines)
City of Quezon ) S.S.
2. The Title
The common title of an Affidavit is Affidavit or if there are two or more affiants,
Joint Affidavit. However, there are some Affidavits which has been designated
with a name such as Affidavit of Loss, Affidavit of Quitclaim and Affidavit of One and
the Same Person.
3. The Body
The body is the majority of the affidavit. It can still be divided into two sub-parts.
A. Opening Statement
An opening statement where the affiant states his name, nationality, that he is of
legal age, his residential address and that he has been sworn to in accordance with
law.
Example:
I, Juan dela Cruz, Filipino, of legal age and currently residing at No. 2 Blk 13 Valley
II, Paranaque City, Philippines, after having sworn to in accordance with law
hereby state and depose that:
The last of the paragraphs usually goes like this and it can vary but the meaning
should be the same.
I attest to the truth of the foregoing facts and for whatever legal purpose this
Affidavit may serve.
IN WITNESS WHEREOF, I have set my hand this 13th day of January 2016 in
Makati City, Philippines.
Signed
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5. Jurat
The last part of an Affidavit is a jurat. It is the part of the Affidavit wherein the
notarial officer indicates that the affiant has subscribed and sworn to in his
presence and that the latter has shown a proof of his/her identity to the former.
Furthermore, this part is where the notarial officer affixes his seal and signature,
notarial information and the record details of the Affidavit. It usually goes like this.
Document No. 2
Page No. 3
Book No. 4
Series of 2015
JURATS
A jurat is used when the signer is swearing to the content of the document. The
notary must administer an oath or affirmation to the signer in order to complete
the jurat. A jurat also requires that the signer signs in the presence of the notary.
It is possible to glean this information from the jurat certificate its self. The
wording states “Subscribed and sworn to before me…” – subscribed meaning
“signed” and sworn meaning that an oral oath or affirmation was given. “Before
me” means that both were done in the presence of the notary public.
THE JURAT
SUBSCRIBED and sworn to before me, in the city/municipality of
, this day of , 20
by
with Residence Certificate No. issued at
on , 20 .
ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
An acknowledgement is used to verify the identity of the signer and to confirm
that they signed the document. They are not swearing to the truthfulness or
validity of the document, they are simply acknowledging that they signed the
document. For an acknowledgement, a signer is not required to sign the
document in the presence of the notary public, but they are required to personally
appear in front of the notary to confirm their signature.
While it is important for a notary to understand the difference between the two,
notaries public are not allowed to determine which type of certificate a signer
uses. To do so would be considered practicing law without a license. A Notary can
only ask the signer which form they prefer; if they don't know, the notary will refer
them to the originator of the document for an answer.
Many reports have various formats to follow, it is very crucial for a student of report
writing to be familiar with such formats and be acquainted on their respective
uses. The sample reports on the succeeding pages of this book will illustrate the
parts, form and appearance of the report. Format is crucial in legal transactions.
Legal Forms
a. Sample of Affidavit of Arresting Officers
b. Sample of Affidavit of Complaint
c. Sample of Affidavit of Witness
d. Sample of Application for Search Warrant
e. Sample of Complaint
f. Sample of Deposition of Witness
g. Sample of Memo for Preliminary Investigation
h. Sample of Motion for Reconsideration
i. Sample of Notice of Appeal
Investigation Formats
a. Sample Format of Advance Information
b. Sample Format of After Case Hearing Report (During Promulgation)
c. Sample Format of After Case Hearing Report (During Trial)
d. Sample Format of Alarm Sheet (Carnapping Incident)
e. Sample Format of Alarm Sheet (Missing Person)
f. Sample Format of Booking and Arrest Report
g. Sample Format of Case Folder
h. Sample Format of Case Referral
i. Sample Format of Certification of Legally, Peacefully and Orderly
Execution of Search Warrant
j. Sample Format of Complaint Sheet (Carnapping Incident)
k. Sample Format of Complaint Sheet (Other Crimes)
l. Sample Format of ComplianceReturn of Search Warrant
m. Sample Format of Coordination Report
n. Sample Format of Crime Report
o. Sample Format of CSI Form 1 First Responder’s Form
p. Sample Format of CSI Form 2 Request for the Conduct of SOCO
q. Sample Format of Detainees Report
, ;
04. Upon receipt of their said complaint, our office planned out
an entrapment operation against the suspect. At about of
,the undersigned together with the complainant proceeded at
the pre-arranged pay off
located along ,
to give the money being asked by the respondent;
a.) Marked Money, (state the denomination and serial numbers); b.) (Name of
documents promised);
c.) (type of CP and SIM Card); and d.) Other
evidence confiscated;
Affiant Affiant
at
. I HEREBY CERTIFY that I have personally examined the herein affiants and I am
satisfied that they voluntarily executed and understood their given affidavit.
Administering Officer
, this day of ,.
Offended Party
at
. I HEREBY CERTIFY that I have personally examined the herein offended party and
I am satisfied that they voluntarily executed and understood their given affidavit.
Judge
WITNESSES:
02. (State other circumstances and the relation either to the victim
or accused or both);
03. (State the details of the acts committed by the accused against the victim.
04. (State the acts done by the witness and the reason thereof);
Affiant
SUBSCRIBED AND SWORN to before me this day of
at
. I HEREBY CERTIFY that I have personally examined the herein affiants and I am
satisfied that they voluntarily executed and understood their given affidavit.
Notary Public
That on the said occasions, SUBJECT OF S.W, disclosed that they are
(illegal activities). (See photos & sketch and See Attached Calling Card, List of
Requirements, Studio Romano Job Order Form & MTC Job Information as
Annexes “B” - “C”)
(modus operandi).
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That on the said investigation and surveillance operation the undersigned
confirmed and believes that SUBJECT OF SW and/or any of its Officer, Agents,
employees
of , is indeed
engaged in
despite the fact that the said office is
and is not licensed to
.
The properties, articles, objects and items which are used and/or
intended to be used in the commission of the afore-stated offense in the
possession of the SUBJECT OF
S.W includes the following:
a. Leads
b. ....
The undersigned has personally verified the report thru surveillance and
investigation activities together with and , to
ascertain the veracity thereof and found the same to be true and correct;
PRAYER
WHEREFORE, the Undersigned respectfully prays:
a. that the Honorable Court include in the Search Warrant and express
authority to conduct the raid of the above-mentioned premises at
any time of the day or night including SATURDAYS and SUNDAYS
considering that these are the days when the customer traffic are at
its peak and to break open the premises to be searched should the
owner thereof refuse entry in the premises or is absent therein.
(Date), (Place).
Applicant
Presiding Judge
Applicant
Date:
A
ccus
ed x x
COMPLAINT
The undersigned, Chief of Police of ,
accuses
In the municipality of ,
province of
,Philippines, the said accused did then and
there, willfully,
unlawfully, and feloniously, with malice and
aforethought, attacked
with , wounding the latter in the
, producing wounds which are necessarily fatal,
thereby causing the immediate death of said
.
Contrary to law.
, , 20 .
Chief of Police of
JUDGE
Republic of
the
Philippines
REGIONAL
TRIAL COURT
-versus- For
R
espondent x x
DEPOSITION OF WITNESSES
Q. How did you know that the said properties are kept in
his/her premises which are subject of the offense?
Affiant Affiant
Judge
Republic of the
Philippines
OFFICE OF THE
CITY
PROSECUTOR
Manila
MEMO OF PRELIMINARY
INVESTIGATION
Address: Address:
2. 2.
3. 3.
CHARGE: 4.
Place of Commission 5.
NOTE:1. Has a similar complaint been filed before any other office? (YES OR NO)
2. Is this complaint in the manner of a counter-affidavit? (YES OR
NO)
3. Are all the above information true and correct (YES OR
NO)
Investigation Prosecutor
IMPORTANT!
Accused.
x x
(Address)
(Prosecutor on Case)
EXPLANATION
(Proof of Service)
(Address)
A
ccused-
Appellee, x x
NOTICE OF APPEAL
COMES NOW the complain by the undersigned attorney and within the
reglementary period prescribed by the Rules of Court hereby files this notice of
appeal from the judgement of dismissal rendered by of
, , .
(Address)
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