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    Writing An Essay Fce - Vegetarianism

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    While many believe eating meat is natural since animals eat other animals, others argue that humans can have healthy diets without meat as vegetarians. Some key points in the debate include that meat provides important nutrients for health, but a balanced vegetarian diet can also meet nutritional needs through other foods and supplements. Additionally, some vegetarians believe avoiding meat is healthier and that we should not cause animals harm if possible by what we eat or wear. In the end, there are reasonable perspectives on both sides of this complex issue around diet and morality.

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    While many believe eating meat is natural since animals eat other animals, others argue that humans can have healthy diets without meat as vegetarians. Some key points in the debate include that meat provides important nutrients for health, but a balanced vegetarian diet can also meet nutritional needs through other foods and supplements. Additionally, some vegetarians believe avoiding meat is healthier and that we should not cause animals harm if possible by what we eat or wear. In the end, there are reasonable perspectives on both sides of this complex issue around diet and morality.

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    While many believe eating meat is natural since animals eat other animals, others argue that humans can have healthy diets without meat as vegetarians. Some key points in the debate include that meat provides important nutrients for health, but a balanced vegetarian diet can also meet nutritional needs through other foods and supplements. Additionally, some vegetarians believe avoiding meat is healthier and that we should not cause animals harm if possible by what we eat or wear. In the end, there are reasonable perspectives on both sides of this complex issue around diet and morality.

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    Writing An Essay Fce - Vegetarianism

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    While many believe eating meat is natural since animals eat other animals, others argue that humans can have healthy diets without meat as vegetarians. Some key points in the debate include that meat provides important nutrients for health, but a balanced vegetarian diet can also meet nutritional needs through other foods and supplements. Additionally, some vegetarians believe avoiding meat is healthier and that we should not cause animals harm if possible by what we eat or wear. In the end, there are reasonable perspectives on both sides of this complex issue around diet and morality.

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    Write about:

    – meat as a main ingredient of our diet


    – vegetarians
    – ……………… (your own idea)

    Sample answer:
    Most people think, myself included, that since animals eat other animals, it is natural for humans to eat meat.
    However, some disagree, and a growing number of people are choosing to become vegetarians. So, what
    rationalism stays behind these two beliefs.
    You start with
    Paragraph 1- Introduction
    Here you include:
    A general statement/rhetorical question (it’s already given on the topic; your task is to paraphrase it- use different
    words or grammar structures). In the sample answer we’ve used ‘most’ instead of ‘some’, ‘believe’ was changed to
    ‘think’ etc.
    Qualify the argument
    Explain further and maybe try to show several sides of the issue, consider it from different angles, thinking, “This
    part is right if… This is true, except when… This might work if… The reason this happens is because… The
    underlying issues are…”
    First of all, I would like to say that humans have always hunted and eaten animals. Maybe it is our natural
    instinct inherited by ancestors that forces us to seek this type of food, however, it is undeniable, that meat is
    rich in vitamins and protein, which help to build muscles and bones.
    Paragraph 2:
    Introduction = topic sentence – which states the general idea discussed in this paragraph

    Advantage 1 —– Reason Advantage 1 ——- Specific example 1

    Your Advantage 1- is the point mentioned in the task. In our sample answer includes the point about meat being the
    main source of energy

    Make sure you use the following phrases when writing paragraph 2:

    Introducing the topic


    First of all I would like to say that …
    Introducing the topic
    First of all I would like to say that …
    The first point I would like to make is …
    I would like to begin by …
    Many people think that …
    Some people say/claim …
    Why do some people believe ?
    However, if that is the case, then why ?
    Advantages
    In the first place …
    The main advantage is that you are free to …
    There is no one else to …
    Then there is …
    What’s more …
    Another advantage is that …

    Another point worth mentioning is the fact it is difficult to have a balanced diet without this crucial
    ingredient. In order to avoid some health problems such as lack of energy or splitting nails we should make
    lean meat a part of our meal.
    Paragraph 3:
    Introduction = topic sentence – which states the general idea discussed in this paragraph
    Advantage 2 —– Reason Advantage 2 ——- Specific example 2

    Your Advantage 2- is actually the point that hasn’t been given in the task. However, it’s the last point- your own
    idea. and because I believe that meat is good for you, I included this point just after the 2nd paragraph- which is also
    in favour of eating meat.

    Make sure you use the following phrases when writing paragraph 3:

    Introducing the topic


    Second of all I would like to say that …
    The next point I would like to make is …
    I would like to add …
    Many people think that …
    Some people say/claim …
    Why do some people believe ?
    However, if that is the case, then why ?
    Advantages
    In the second place …
    The other advantage is that you are free to …
    There is no one else to …
    Then there is …
    What’s more …
    Another advantage is that …
    On the other hand, many vegetarians believe that eating meat is not only unnecessary but also unhealthy. We
    can easily grow plants that give us all we need in our diet, moreover there are numerous shops which provide
    supplements that substitute meat.
    Paragraph 4:
    Introduction -use topic sentence

    Disadvantage 1 —– Reason Disadvantage 1 ——- Specific example 1

    Make sure you include the other point mentioned in the topic and add your own idea + the following phrases when
    writing paragraph 3:

    Disadvantages
    On the other hand …
    Secondly, …
    Another disadvantage is …
    Last but not least, . .
    [WpProQuiz 2]
    In my view, there are strong health reasons for not eating meat. However, if we become vegetarians for moral
    reasons, I think we should also not wear fur or leather.
    Paragraph 5- Conclusion
    Summarise your view using different words from the introduction. You might want to add some further comment.

    Summarising phrases you have to use:


    In conclusion (I believe that)…
    To sum up, there are arguments …

    However, in my view … .

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