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WELCOME.
If you’re considering writing a screenplay, or perhaps you’ve written a few
screenplays but are still unsure as to exactly what they are supposed to look like,
or even if you’ve written a whole big pile of screenplays and think you know
everything -- you’ve come to the right place.
But as you sit down to write one yourself, that’s when the headache begins.
Where exactly does the dialogue go? Is it centered? Am I supposed to tell the
camera what to do? (Hint: the word “CAMERA” should never, ever appear in your
screenplay.) What words get CAPITALIZED? How do I tell the audience that this
line is supposed to be sarcastic and said with a wink? And on and on.
Well, fear not! We’re here to help you master screenplay format. And we’re going
to do it in a breezy, accessible style, because learning this stuff should be fun,
not an exercise in tedium. Relieved? We certainly hope so.
One more thing: while there are rules and industry standards to be sure, there is
no one true and correct way to format a screenplay, as you will see. Plenty of
writers do things differently. All well and good. The main thing is: just tell the
story.
Just remember, we at CI are here to help. Feel free to e-mail us with any
question at [email protected].
Onward!
Jim Cirile
Founder, CoverageInk.com
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INDEX
p. 5 GETTING STARTED
The part we all dread! As Douglas Adams once said, “I don’t enjoy writing nearly as
much as having written.” This section will cover:
p. 29 WRITE IT!
The meat in this two-fisted burrito. Ready to get writin’? Wait—don’t you have to
procrastinate a little longer first—check your e-mail for the 90th time, scrub out the toilet?
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p. 63 Scene Headings: Bold or Not?
p. 63 Length
p. 65 TV Format
p. 65 Cold Open/Teaser
p. 67 Act Breaks
p. 68 Half-Hours
p. 68 TV Length
Just kidding. But here are a tips and techniques you can employ to make sure your
script rocks the proverbial house.
p. 92 EXERCISES
Once you have your sea legs, we’re going to let you take a couple practice runs. We’ll
give you some text. Your job will be to put that text in proper screenplay format.
p. 94 Resources
p. 97 Sample Screenplay Opening
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Ready to take the plunge and learn all about screenplay format and style?
Fasten your seatbelts, strap yourselves in, hold on tight (and any other
hyperbolic clichés you might want to use here -- just DON’T USE ‘EM in your
script) and let’s go.
Again: none of this is absolute. People break these ‘rules’ all the time. Ultimately
it’s all about, what’s the best way to get your story across? If you ever get stuck
or can’t figure out how to write something, don’t be afraid to shoot an e-mail over
to [email protected] and ask us anything! We’ve been empowering writers
since 2002 and we are here to help.
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GETTING STARTED
Oh, so you think this is a trick question, huh? The answer is yes… and no.
It’s all about who you are and what you bring to the table. There are writers out
there who have careers precisely because they eschewed all the rules of
screenplay format. Take Larry Ferguson (The Presidio, The Hunt for Red
October) for example:
“If I don’t want to write this INT./EXT, can I invent my own form?,” Ferguson
recalls thinking. “Because I thought that when I read the INT./EXT., PULL BACK
TO REVEAL, etc., I thought that was telling me a lot more about the writer’s
familiarity with the medium than it was about the story. I want to just close my
eyes and say, ‘What do you see on the screen?’ So I started writing that way. I
didn’t put locations into my shots. I just jumped from one visual image to another.
There weren’t a lot of people writing that way, and I was doing myself a service
without knowing it.”
So Ferguson pioneered his own style, and his career took off like a rocket. Of
course, he had terrific storytelling skills to boot, and the chutzpah to barge into
top literary agent Ben Benjamin’s office and demand Benjamin read his
screenplay. “Two and a half weeks later, he called me and told me he liked my
work,” laughs Ferguson. “He wasn’t sure if he liked me very much, and his actual
words were that I had ‘balls that clank.’”
But now let’s look at you and me and reality. For most of us the answer is YES,
you do need to know how to format your screenplay. Because even if you’re the
most amazing storyteller on the planet, if your script doesn’t look like a script,
overworked creative execs will open your script and groan, “Amateur hour.” And
just like that, you’re dead in the water. For every 25 people who might read your
screenplay, there might be one who is an intrepid, forest-for-the-trees type who
won’t simply scoff at your improperly formatted script and then line his cat box
with it. Maybe. Creative execs, managers, agents, etc., are all crazy-busy, and
they are looking for any excuse to STOP reading. Don’t give them one.
So bear in mind the next time you read a script by a big-shot writer and you
notice things like, “Jeez, this thing has 12 typos on page one,” or “This guy never
used ANY punctuation in the entire script--it’s all just one big run-on sentence!”
(and believe me, those guys are out there, and they’re making big bucks.) Sure,
that’s them, but YOU, you should probably adhere to all of these persnickety
guidelines we’re about to lay on you. It will be up to you to decide how much, if at
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all, you want to push the envelope. But know this well: no one ever passed on a
script because it was well-formatted. Just like this amazing example:
INT.
BARNEY:
Mik: WELLL Barnee that cheese Wiz IS five dollar and as for
Sporkl well I don’t have ANY CHIMP NAMED SPORKLE BUT I do
have this lovely bushel of rootabagas
BARENY:
Dood that was sick YOU CAN HAVE IT FOR FREE Barney does a
nice dance and bows like a dancer who have FINISHED his
danse and the audience applauds.
CUT TWO:
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WHERE TO FIND SCRIPTS
(AND WHY YOU SHOULD READ THEM)
So you’ve got an idea you think would make a cool movie or TV pilot. That’s
great! Now how do you actually get it down on the page? And what do movie and
TV scripts even look like?
Now stop, go back and reread that last sentence again. Got it? Bueno.
You wouldn’t try to design an airliner without ever having flown in one, right?
Same thing with a movie script. You can’t learn screenplay format without ever
having seen a screenplay. And yet some writers do exactly that. They assume
that because they wrote a great thesis or got an “A” in creative writing in college
that they know how to write a script.
Nope.
There are plenty of places to get scripts. One good place you should look is
Drew’s Script-O-Rama (www.script-o-rama.com.) This site offers a bajillion
scripts FREE to download. Now you can’t beat that deal. Most of these are in
their original formats. Chances are good they have your favorite movie scripts
there—and often multiple drafts! Read them and pay careful attention to how
they look, how they flow on the page. However, do bear in mind many of these
are SHOOTING SCRIPTS (we’ll talk about this in a moment) and thus they have
scene numbers. Your scripts should not.
However, their TV script selection is not so great, and many of them are
transcripts, not scripts, which you should avoid as they are useless for formatting
purposes.
Otherwise, just use your favorite search engine and look around. Obviously,
beware of spam downloads or anyone selling you anything.
There are other websites that offer scripts for download, but since they are not
free, we are not going to plug them here.
If you live in Los Angeles, you will find tons of scripts available at the WGA and
MPAA libraries and reading rooms. Additionally, most colleges with film or
screenwriting programs have scripts. The UCLA library is excellent.
One place you do not want to look for scripts, however, is your local bookstore.
Screenplay format usually gets butchered when a script is published in book
form. If you try emulating the screenplay format from, say, your “Four
Screenplays by Woody Allen” paperback, you’ll be shooting yourself in the foot.
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Lastly, if you have any industry friends, chances are good they’ll be able to get
you scripts. These do not have to be scripts from produced movies—any
screenplay written by a writer currently working in the business should be a
worthwhile read.
Once you’ve read a few of these, you’ll start to get the feel of it. What do they all
have in common? And what do they do differently? In the world of screenplay
format, there is no one standard paradigm—a Quentin Tarantino script looks
completely different from a Susannah Grant script. Yet they all (more or less)
follow the same basic rules.
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PAPER IS DEAD
(AKA: PLAGIARISM AND YOU)
Spec screenplays are seldom printed out these days. They are sent around
mostly as PDFs via e-mail. If the writer is working on the script with producers or
other writers, then the document might be sent in its native form -- generally Final
Draft or MovieMagic Screenwriter. But otherwise, it’s always PDFs. If you don’t
know what a PDF is, read this:
http://www.adobe.com/products/acrobat/adobepdf.html
The only time screenplays get printed out anymore is for table reads or
production. If you even offer to send a hard copy to someone, they are going to
assume you’re (gasp!) old. Don’t do that! Whichever screenwriting software you
use, make sure you can output as a PDF. And if you *must* use MS Word (and
you really shouldn’t… we’ll cover that shortly,) there are even free Word to PDF
online converters (such as pdfonline.com.)
In the early days of e-mail, some writers refused to submit files electronically,
fearing the scripts could easily be ripped off. But with the advent of PDF, those
security concerns are not quite as concerning. Since a PDF is a snapshot of
each page, the data on it cannot easily be manipulated or cut and pasted into
another script file. Well, that’s the theory, at least. Problem is the plethora of free
PDF to Word converters you can find in a quick web search. These converters
can transform your PDF into an imperfectly formatted Word document that can
be input into any screenwriting software. It’s a bear to reformat, but it’s easier
than retyping the whole thing. Slightly.
So what this means is: you are going to have to get used to the idea of putting
your neck out there a little bit when you send out a script. Yes, the chance of
plagiarism is real. But it’s also actually kinda small. Pretty much every real
producer knows it’s a lot more economical to option a script (or more likely, to
convince you to develop it with them for free) than to rip it off and have to worry
about an eventual lawsuit. In other words: you need to be okay with sending your
script out electronically, via PDF.
Here’s what you really need to know about plagiarism: sure, it happens, but not
in the way you may think. Here’s how it really happens: you send your script
along to a prodco, and it’s read by some reader there (who of course passes.) At
some point down the line, maybe they’re developing a new script, and an idea
from your script pops into the reader or exec’s head as the perfect solution to a
problem. So now your idea(s) or character(s) wind up in that movie. Or say you
have a pitch meeting for a writing assignment. That exec is meeting with a bunch
of writers, and ultimately hires Not You. But now this exec has a head full of
ideas from all the pitches he’s heard. And again, somewhere down the line, a
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situation pops up where an idea is called for, and the exec thinks of something
brilliant. Except it was YOUR idea. The exec thinks he thought of it. He’d likely
never even remember where the idea came from. This exact scenario has
happened to me a half dozen times over the years.
One last comment on the subject of plagiarism: did you know that there are
plagiarism lawsuits filed against just about every successful movie? This is
mainly because there are only so many ideas, and at any given time, with
approximately 250,000 emerging screenwriters in Los Angeles alone, there are
bound to be a couple dozen scripts floating around with your exact same
“unique” idea. Imagine my shock when, two decades ago, I discovered that my
thriller about cloning Jesus from the blood stains on the Shroud of Turin was one
of several to hit the market that year (and there have probably been hundreds
since then.) So the studios are used to the folks who come out of the woodwork
when X movie hits it big. These cases, meritorious or not, are generally settled
out of court with “go-away” money.
If you do ever feel you’ve been ripped off for real, consider carefully whether or
not to file a lawsuit. Because it could have serious, deleterious effects on your
writing career. I chose to let something go some years ago, and I probably had a
pretty good case. I had a firm copyright and submission record, and the exec
whom I submitted it to was the executive in charge of the movie that came out
two years later that used several of my script’s very specific ideas. But since
yeah, I do want to actually work in this town again, suing that particular studio
was clearly not the move. It wasn’t easy, but I let it go… and even took my kid to
the movie, and we both enjoyed it. Grumble.
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SCREENPLAY FORMAT TERMINOLOGY
This is the part where many newbies find themselves lost. There are a lot of
terms in screenplays that many folks will be unfamiliar with. So we are going to
break ‘em down for you right here.
Short for INTERIOR and EXTERIOR. Used in location slug lines. (See Slug
Lines, below.) This tells the reader whether the scene takes place inside or
outside. Example:
Now some locations are not so obvious. Suppose you’re in a moving car? We’re
inside the car -- but the car is outside, right? Or maybe you’re underwater -- but
you’re IN the ocean. Yikes! Sometimes (and you’ll find this sort of thing coming
up from time to time in screenwriting) you’re just going to have to do what feels
logical. In this case, well, the car is an INT.; underwater is an EXT.
Sometimes location slugs are bolded, especially (but not always) in TV scripts.
There’s no real reason to do this, nor any real or no perceived benefit. So we say
skip ‘em -- unless you’re writing a spec for a TV show that uses this technique.
Sometimes you’ll have action that moves into and out of a location, such as a
car. In that case, you could do:
Otherwise, you could just identify the location as INT. BONGO’S MERCEDES
and then when Bongo exits the vehicle, EXT. BONGO’S MERCEDES. Save the
INT./EXT. for times when characters are moving back and forth quickly, for
example, unloading a moving van.
Used at the beginning and the end of the screenplay (often regardless of whether
or not there really is a fade in or fade out.) It’s sort of a shorthand to tell people
the script is beginning (duh) and the script is now over (duh again.) Can also be
used in the body of the script for emotional moments or to show a passage of
time. I also like to use it for act breaks.
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Word of warning: don’t NOT use these simply because you do not think you need
them, or you don’t see your movie starting with a fade in. That’s one of those
idiotic things you get snap-judged on. So unless it’s very important that you start
on a certain image or over black, make sure to use FADE IN: at the beginning of
your screenplay and FADE OUT at the end. Because, that’s why!
RED ALERT
Never, ever use shot calls, camera calls or music calls.
These things are the director’s purview—not yours.
A shot call, or camera call, is when someone tells the camera, or the director,
what to do in the script, such as:
In virtually ALL cases, these are to be avoided like the plague. Why? Because it
is not the writer’s job to tell the director where to place the camera. Directors
consider this an insult, and worse, if you use camera calls in your script, industry
types who read it will think—you guessed it—“amateur.”
In most cases, you can simply write the action without the camera calls, and the
director will somehow figure out how to shoot it properly:
PETER
Much more about slug lines below. For now, know this: they are your friend.
Now there are a few camera directions that are okay to use if employed
sparingly: CLOSE ON (or TIGHT ON,) WIDE and PULL BACK TO REVEAL.
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CLOSE ON PETER, nervously picking his fingernails and
bouncing on his toes.
…We can use a slug line to do the same thing, like so:
PETER
And none other than William Goldman loves his PULL BACK TO REVEALS,
because they are in fact a very effective way of telling the reader we weren’t
seeing the whole picture at first, but now we are, and ha!, there’s a surprise
there you didn’t expect. Feel free to use this, even though technically it is a
camera direction. It’s a fun little trick.
MUSIC CALLS are much the same animal as camera calls -- to be avoided like
the proverbial plague. The industry expects you to know to not include them in
spec scripts (unless you’re already a successful writer. Then you can do
whatever you want.)
Fine, but have you thought about the film’s BUDGET? What if Van Halen wants
$1 million just to use a 10-second clip of “Jump” in the movie? Music licensing is
notoriously expensive, particularly from well-known artists. There’s a reason
“Stairway to Heaven” was not used in “Almost Famous.”
So don’t even think about putting Sinatra, Led Zeppelin, Green Day, whatever,
on the radio in your script. Instead, refer to a Sinatra song like this:
And let the music supervisor worry about plugging in the songs later. If the script
gets produced, you can always tell the director, “Hey, I always envisioned Pink
Floyd’s “Careful With That Axe, Eugene” would be playing throughout the murder
scene. Any chance we can license it?”
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O.S. VERSUS V.O. (and O.C.)
O.S. stands for OFF SCREEN. V.O. stands for VOICEOVER. O.C. stands for
OFF-CAMERA and means the same as O.S.
When a character speaks, but we can’t see him in the shot, he is considered off-
screen, or O.S. So you would indicate that like this:
BILL (O.S.)
Three-quarters dead, that dog just
kept right on goin’.
Note that the O.S. (as well as V.O.) goes in parenthesis to the RIGHT of the
speaker’s name (Bill.) It does not go UNDER the person’s name like this:
(WRONG)
BILL
(O.S.)
Three quarters dead, that dog just
kept right on goin’.
The space under the speaker’s name is reserved for parentheticals, a.k.a. line-
reading direction (see below.)
DECKARD (V.O.)
Boy, that replicant was a hottie! But
I can’t let myself be distracted from
my, uh, mission... whatever that was.
V.O. can also be used when a character is narrating a scene that he or she is in
and commenting on it, such as in Dexter. To summarize: VO is only for voice-
overs. OS is for anything you hear where the speaker is off-screen but NOT
doing a voice-over.
PARENTHETICALS
“Parentheticals” means the line-reading cues which are placed under the
speaker’s name and above the dialogue. It should be used to indicate to whom a
character is speaking, if it’s not already obvious, OR occasionally to add a new
dimension to the line reading not clear from the line itself. Example:
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LEON
(to reporters)
I tried to make him fight my fight;
but he made me fight his fight.
Note the placement. The speaker’s name is indented the most—just about center
of the page (or five tabs over if, Odin forbid, you are still using MS Word.)
The parenthetical is indented from the dialogue, but not as far over as the
speaker. And then the dialogue margin is left of that. The SCENE DESCRIPTION
(“Leon abruptly keels over,”) AKA “action description,” goes far left.
Now that all may sound confusing, but seriously, don’t worry about it -- that’s why
we use software like MovieMagic Screenwriter or Final Draft to handle this stuff
for us.
Parens can also be used mid-dialogue to indicate a pause (beat) or to clarify who
the character is now addressing, e.g.:
FREUD
But, Ms. Finglebloon, I didn’t
drink your spinach water!
(beat)
I have green all around my mouth,
don’t I?
Don’t forget to indent and to ‘hard return’ (move to the next line) before and
after using parentheticals! The parenthetical should be on its own line, nothing
else on it. For example, this is incorrect:
MILDRED
But, Ma, all the kids in first
grade have iPhones. (to Dad) First
graders without iPhones suck!
…because the parenthetical is on the same line as the dialogue. It’s messy and
hard to read. Put that parenthetical on its own line, and voila:
MILDRED
But, Ma, all the kids in first
grade have iPhones.
(to Dad)
First graders without iPhones suck!
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