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The document is an online lesson about improving IELTS speaking scores. It provides a transcript of Shao Ling's first attempt at the IELTS speaking test where she answers questions about her birthday and music preferences. Students are asked to review her performance based on the public band descriptors and identify areas for her to focus on improving, such as pronunciation, grammar, fluency, or developing longer answers. Other students comment that she was able to answer the questions but made some grammatical mistakes and lacked cohesiveness and fluency at times.

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Shao Lings First Attempt

The document is an online lesson about improving IELTS speaking scores. It provides a transcript of Shao Ling's first attempt at the IELTS speaking test where she answers questions about her birthday and music preferences. Students are asked to review her performance based on the public band descriptors and identify areas for her to focus on improving, such as pronunciation, grammar, fluency, or developing longer answers. Other students comment that she was able to answer the questions but made some grammatical mistakes and lacked cohesiveness and fluency at times.

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Welcome to IELTS Online Speaking


Shao Ling's First
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Welcome to IELTS Online Speaking


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Which area(s) do you think that Shao Ling needs


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June 6, 2023

IELTS SPEAKING TEST Shao Ling did a good job. For the
first part of the interview with
IELTS Speaking Test 3 Topics birthdays as its topic, I feel she
struggled with coming up with
long enough answers however her
lexical resource was
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2 where music was the topic of
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conversation, she lacked in
cohesiveness and fluency. Overall,
she needs to work on her
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pronunciation and her grammar as
she lacked both of those in the 2
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muhilan-s1
June 6, 2023

WELCOME She is able to answer the


questions but there are some
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