RAWS
RAWS
Text Evidence
“She was fragrant like a morning
when papayas are in bloom, her What is the character doing?
teeth are very white, her eyes were
so full of laughter, and there was Maria was being introduced by Leon Text Evidence:
the small dimple high up on her to his family, Maria wasn’t frightened
right cheek”; “her voice flowed or scared of Labang. She even went
into his like a gentle stream to touch Labang’s forehead, and was
meeting a stronger one”. scratching his forehead.
Text Evidence:
“She looked up to my brother with a smile, and her forehead was on a level with his mouth.”
“she came and touched Labang's forehead with her long fingers “
“she was scratching his forehead very daintily”
Assessment 1:
If we compare our individual and civic traits with those that adorned our forefathers, we will find, I fear, that Filipinos
of today, have lost much of the moral strength and power for the growth of our ancestors.
b. The excerpt stated that "The Filipino of today is soft, easy-going. His tendency is towards parasitism. He is
uninclined to the sustained strenuous effort! He lacks earnestness. Face-saving is the dominant note in the confused
symphony of his existence. His sense of righteousness is often dulled by the desire for personal gain."
My evaluation: The evidence provided in the text supports the claim that Filipinos of today have lost much of the
moral strength and power compared to their ancestors. The text highlights the qualities that have become dormant in
recent years and emphasizes the softness, easy-going nature, and lack of earnestness in the Filipino of today.
My sample evidence: "His tendency is towards parasitism. He is uninclined to the sustained strenuous effort! He
lacks earnestness. Face-saving is the dominant note in the confused symphony of his existence."
Reason: This excerpt specifically mentions the tendency towards parasitism, lack of earnestness, and face-saving
behavior, which reinforces the claim that Filipinos of today are soft and easy-going. It provides specific traits and
behaviors that illustrate the loss of moral strength and power compared to the ancestors.
My evaluation: The evidence provided in the text supports the claim that Filipinos of today are soft and easy-going. It
describes their tendency towards parasitism, lack of sustained effort, lack of earnestness, and the dominance of face-
saving behavior.
My sample evidence: "His tendency is towards parasitism. He is uninclined to the sustained strenuous effort! He
lacks earnestness. Face-saving is the dominant note in the confused symphony of his existence."
Reason: This excerpt clearly highlights the soft and easy-going nature of Filipinos today by mentioning their tendency
towards parasitism, lack of sustained effort, and lack of earnestness. It emphasizes the contrast between their
characteristics and the qualities necessary for growth and development.