Final Essay 2 Draft 3 2023
Final Essay 2 Draft 3 2023
Final Essay 2 Draft 3 2023
Jose Torres
Judith McCann
English 1302
3 March 2023
Animals play a fundamental role in the ecosystem as a whole. They are the ones that
balance out the earth and provide us with the nutrients that humans need to survive. It is no
stretch to say that without animals, there is no mankind. This is why it is important to protect
these animals’ ecosystems, in order to ensure our safety. Through efforts of animal conservation
and sustainable manufacturing of goods, mankind can ensure a safe environment for years to
come. This idea though is not met eye to eye especially when it comes to greedy corporations
and businesses. Poachers, fishers, big businesses, and pollution are all threats to the fragile
ecosystem of animals. Although the future may seem dark there are still many journalists who
are fighting every day to protect this fragile ecosystem. These ecosystems are protected by
animal rehabilitation facilities, and the data they provide ensures the safety of other animals in
the future to come. Animals in the wild aren’t the only ones that should be protected. Through
the help of animal rights activists, animal products can become safer to consume and they can
produce less pollution. Although many animal rights activists are scrutinized and many laws are
passed to prohibit their work, they still play a fundamental role in protecting animals. By
analyzing multiple studies from around the world anyone can get a deeper understanding of how
much these individuals do. Similarly researching these topics can show the hardships that one
must endure to save the life of animals. Through the efforts of animal rehabilitation centers and
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animal rights activists, the world can become a more safe and more environmentally friendly
place.
Animal rehabilitation centers play a major role in protecting animals who are at risk of
extinction. They help with a variety of animals which are crucial to the balance of our ecosystem.
Not only that but these animals represent the state of the ecosystem itself. And as stated by
Montesdeoca, “Seabird population changes are good indicators of long-term and large-scale
changes in marine ecosystems…”, these changes are not only just felt within one species, it is
felt through many of them. (Montesdeoca, et al.) The status of one species of animal serves as a
great indicator of how the other species as a whole are feeling. That is because the environment
the species is in is what truly affects it. The text further emphasizes this by analyzing more than
11 types of seabird species. (Montesdeoca, et al.) On the beaches of Gran Canaria Island, they
were subjected to things like light pollution, crude oil, fishing gear interactions, and poisoning
just to name a few. (Montesdeoca, et al.) Montesdeoca is not the only journalist that connects the
well-being of animals to the environment itself. A study on the 4 R’s of conservation, states,
“Data collected during encounters provide information on population biology, behavior, and
other aspects of a species’ biology.”( Pyke, et al.) Animal rehabilitation is not only about saving
animals, it is about collecting information on how to save even more animals. This type of
information can be applied to many different types of species and can be used for future cases. A
strong example of this is in the article titled, “Outcomes of 4819 Cases of Marine Animals
Presented to a Wildlife Rehabilitation Center in New Jersey, USA '' in which they talk about the
vast amount of animal cases that are taken care of by one animal rehabilitation center. (Gallini, et
al.) The list of animals that they have studied consists of many types of phocids, cetaceans, and
chelonians.(Gallini, et al.) While these names seem like very little, they are actually a
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classification of a group of seals, whales, and sea turtles that belong to the same family of
animals. This sort of classification is very versatile when it comes to rehabilitating animals from
similar family groups. While they might not be the same species they do have similar genetic
characteristics that researchers can take note of for future reference. This can further improve the
way conservation efforts are made and can pave the way for newer discoveries.
Animal rights activists practically work on par with animal conservationists They both
believe that all life especially wildlife should be cherished. The only difference that they have is
that animal rights activists care about the life of wild stock as well. They work hard to ensure
that animals are not mishandled, abused, or poorly slaughtered. Furthermore, they also work hard
to combat the effects of the animal industry as a whole. Pollution and poaching are one of the
products of these industries. In an article on the fur industry, it states, “ factory breeding requires
twice the amount of energy needed for that of artificial fur…”. ( Choi, et al.) In that same article,
it also states the condition that the animals are in as well. “Alligators, whose skin is used for
handbag manufacturing, are bred in a single tank, locked, and slaughtered at the age of three by
being shot…” is just one of the descriptions provided by the same article. ( Choi, et al.) The
fashion industry is not the only culprit when it comes to animal abuse, the animal product
industry is just as guilty. In a journal on the dark secrets of the factory farms, the horrors that
journalists had to go through were described. The journal states that “Calves were lifted by their
tails, violently pulled by their ears, kicked, thrown, and flipped into transport trailers...”. (
Fiber-Ostrow, et al.) In that same article, it also names instances where the calves that were
thrown landed on their necks and were left to die. ( Fiber-Ostrow, et al) These are just the many
things that animal rights activists have to deal with but on top of that more laws are being passed
to restrict their work. The United Nations Committee on World Food Security stated that all
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products should follow the 5 freedoms. ( Budzik, et al.) These freedoms are ensured by animal
rights activists but not by the states or big industries. More and more laws are being passed that
limit the work that animal rights activists do. From the 1970s all the way through the 2010s laws
known as Ag-Gag laws would limit journalists when it comes to investigating businesses. ( Shea,
et al.) From Kansas all the way to North Dakota, many lawmakers are starting to enforce such
laws. ( Shea, et al.) These laws obstruct the truth of what is really happening in the factory farm
industry. It is the job of these industries to ensure that their food is coming from a sanitary
environment but instead of showing the truth they close their veils. That is why animal rights
activists sneak into facilities to expose the truth. Unfortunately, some laws that were passed
require animal rights activists to fork over any evidence to the police. ( Shea, et al.) Sadly, if
more and more of these laws pass the curtains will never be open.
It takes a lot of hard work in order to balance out the environment. Animal
conservationists and animal rights activists aren’t the only ones that can help. Everyone can
make a change and everyone can be conscious of the environment. By understanding the effects
of pollutants and the effects of the animal factory industry the human race can work to become
more enlightened. Only through compassion and empathy can change happen and not just for
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