Entrance Ticket: Unit 3, Lesson 1: (Example For Teacher Reference)
Entrance Ticket: Unit 3, Lesson 1: (Example For Teacher Reference)
Directions: As you enter class, read the learning targets. Next, read the Model Argument Essay:
“Dorothy” and look at the Model Argument Evidence: Dorothy note-catcher. Compare and
contrast the connections you see between the two documents.
Similarities Differences
• Both address the same prompt. • Essay is written in sentences and
paragraphs and in a formal tone.
• Both include her accomplishments,
why they were remarkable, and • Note-catcher uses bullets.
evidence to support those ideas. • Note-catcher is organized by
• Both quote directly from the anchor accomplishment.
text. • Essay includes an introduction and
• Both state a claim and reasons why conclusion.
Dorothy’s accomplishments were • Essay is organized by two reasons for
remarkable (but on the note-catcher why her accomplishments are
this is at the end, and in the essay, this remarkable.
is at the beginning in the introduction).
• Essay does not include everything
gathered in the Model Argument
Evidence: Dorothy note-catcher.
• Essay uses transition words to connect
ideas.
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Directions: As you enter class, read the learning targets. Next, read the Model Argument Essay:
“Dorothy” and look at the Model Argument Evidence: Dorothy note-catcher. Compare and
contrast the connections you see between the two documents.
Similarities Differences
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Name: Date:
Directions: As you enter class, read the learning targets. Next, read the Model Argument Essay:
“Dorothy” and look at the Model Argument Evidence: Dorothy note-catcher. Compare and
contrast the connections you see between the two documents.
Similarities Differences
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Source: Shetterly, Margot Lee. Hidden Figures (Young Readers’ Edition). HarperCollins, 2016.
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Vaughan applied for the computer job Vaughan helped prove that women were
even though she already had what was better at computing than the male
considered one of the best jobs a black engineers. Women could aspire to any job
woman could get (24). they wanted.
• Only two percent of black women
earned college degrees. Sixty percent
of black female graduates became
teachers (41).
• The few women able to find math jobs
outside of teaching were not
considered “mathematicians.” Instead
they were labeled “sub-professionals”
and were paid less (13).
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Vaughan was the first black woman to be Gender discrimination at the time was
promoted to a management position at common, limiting, and oppressive.
NASA. • At the time “it was unthinkable for a
• She was the first black woman to ever man to report to a woman” (74).
have a supervisor role at the
laboratory (74).
• Her work was accurate, she did not
complain, and she made an excellent
leader. Vaughan was consistently given
excellent reviews by her bosses (68).
1. Review your notes in the second column. What are two possible reasons/points you could
use to support a claim about why Dorothy Vaughan’s accomplishments are remarkable?
Remember, you might have to look across the explanations in the second column for
trends or ways to generalize from the specifics to find the wording for your reasons.
Responses will vary, but may include: major advancements in air travel; overcame major
obstacles to success.
Responses will vary, but may include: Dorothy Vaughan’s accomplishments are
remarkable because they led to major advancements in air travel and because they took
place despite tremendous obstacles.
Source: Shetterly, Margot Lee. Hidden Figures (Young Readers’ Edition). HarperCollins, 2016.
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Directions: As you read about Dorothy Vaughan, keep track of her distinct accomplishments by
adding each to the first column. Explain why this particular accomplishment is remarkable in
the second column. Gather and cite specific evidence from the text as appropriate for both
columns. You will be revising and adding to this note-catcher throughout Unit 3 to help you
eventually be able to make a claim in response to the focus question.
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1. Review your notes in the second column. What are two possible reasons/points you could
use to support a claim about why Dorothy Vaughan’s accomplishments are remarkable?
Remember, you might have to look across the explanations in the second column for trends
or ways to generalize from the specifics to find the wording for your reasons.
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Note to Teacher: Make copies and cut the model essay introduction into four sections.
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When recalling America’s race to put an astronaut on the moon, history often overlooks
Dorothy Vaughan. She, along with the other women of the segregated West Area Computing
Unit, worked on projects that made airplanes faster and more stable, which helped the United
States during World War II. Then she was promoted to supervisor of the West Computers. She
led the women whose work would make space travel possible. As a brilliant mathematician and
one of the first black women to work for NASA as a “computer,” Dorothy’s accomplishments
deserve to be remembered. Her accomplishments were remarkable because they led to major
advancements in air travel and because they took place despite tremendous obstacles.
Dorothy’s skills and hard work were very important in helping change the face of air travel.
When Dorothy first started working at Langley, the laboratory was doing extensive research in
aerodynamics. Langley was trying to help the United States military by developing airplanes
that were stronger, faster, and more stable than any planes in other countries (52). Dorothy
was inspired by this work. She took an engineering physics course, participated in training, and
did much independent studying and homework (51). She thought all day about what made
planes fly (51). Her calculations and data were sent directly to engineers, “who used them to
improve airplane designs” (56). Dorothy’s mathematical brain and her commitment to learning
were outstanding, and her work had a direct impact on the future of airplanes and aeronautics.
Dorothy achieved all this despite major obstacles, which makes her accomplishments even
more remarkable. In the early 1940s, when Dorothy began her work at Langley, black women
were horribly discriminated against. They were given fewer educational and professional
opportunities. In 1940, only two percent of black women earned college degrees, and sixty
percent of those graduates became teachers (41). Teaching was one of the few professions
available to women of any color. The few women able to find math jobs outside of teaching
were not considered “mathematicians.” Instead they were labeled “sub-professionals” and
were paid less than men who did the same work (13). At this time in history, “it was
unthinkable for a man to report to a woman” (74). Black women like Dorothy were not even
allowed to eat in the same cafeteria as the white women with the same job (42). Nonetheless,
in 1949, Dorothy was promoted to supervisor of the West Area computing pool. She was the
first black woman to ever have a supervisor role at the laboratory (74). To get a leadership
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Sentence
Her accomplishments were remarkable because they led to major advancements in air travel
and because they took place despite tremendous obstacles. (from the introduction of the
Model Argument Essay: “Dorothy”)
Lesson 1 Placement
Lead this Mini Language Dive after students analyze the model argument essay in Work Time A.
Rationale
Guiding Question and Focus Standards: The sentence helps students respond to the guiding
question (What were the accomplishments of the “hidden figures” at NACA, and why
were they remarkable?) and address W.6.1a by presenting two reasons to support the claim
that Dorothy Vaughan’s accomplishments were remarkable. This sentence also helps students
address W.6.1c by featuring conjunctions (because) to clarify the relationship between the
model essay’s main claim and its reasons. Supporting standards: RI.6.1, SL.6.1.
Language Structure: This sentence is compelling because it features multiple clauses and
because it uses conjunctions and prepositions (despite).
Transfer: Students can use the Practice frame to develop the focus statements for their
collaborative essays about the hidden figures and for their independent essays about their
focus figures.
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Deconstruct
Display and read aloud the sentence: Her accomplishments were remarkable because they
led to major advancements in air travel and because they took place despite tremendous
obstacles.
Ask:
“What is this sentence about?” (Responses will vary. Encourage and acknowledge all
responses.)
Read aloud the focus structure: because they led to major advancements in air travel and
because they took place despite tremendous obstacles.
Ask:
“What do you notice about this chunk?” (Responses will vary, but may include: this chunk
presents two reasons to support the main claims; the word because is used twice; there are
two dependent clauses separated by and.)
Underline the two uses of the word because in the sentence, and invite students to do the
same on their note-catchers.
“What does the word because tell us about what comes next?” (The word because tells us
that what comes next is a reason or an explanation.)
“Can you figure out why the word because would likely be found in an argument essay
like this one?” (Argument essays feature a main claim, and claims require reasons to
prove that the claims are true. The word because signals that a reason is going to be given,
so it follows that because would be used to introduce reasons in an argument essay.)
“What do you notice about the structures that follow the word because in this sentence?”
(Responses will vary, but look for students to notice that complete sentences, or
independent clauses, follow each use of the word because. As needed, remind students that
independent clauses can stand alone and contain a subject [e.g., they] and a verb [e.g., led
to; took place].)
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Reconstruct
Read aloud the entire sentence on display: Her accomplishments were remarkable because
they led to major advancements in air travel and because they took place despite
tremendous obstacles.
Ask:
“What adjectives do you see in this sentence? Underline them on your note-catcher.”
(remarkable, major, tremendous)
“How do these adjectives add to the idea that Dorothy’s accomplishments were
remarkable?” (These adjectives show how big and important Dorothy’s work was. Her
accomplishments were remarkable because they were challenging and had an impact.
These adjectives make it clear that Dorothy’s work was important and remarkable.)
“How can you use meaningful adjectives in your own focus statements to highlight how
remarkable Mary or Katherine’s accomplishments were?” (Responses will vary.)
“Now what do you think is the meaning of this sentence?” (Responses will vary.)
“How does the Language Dive add to your understanding of the guiding question:
What were the accomplishments of the ‘hidden figures’ at NACA, and why were they
remarkable?” (Responses will vary, but may include: This sentence includes specific
reasons that explain why the accomplishments were remarkable. In Dorothy’s case, her
accomplishments were remarkable because of their impact on airplanes and because of
their context.)
“How can you use a similar structure in your own argument essays?” (Responses will
vary, but may include that in our own argument essays, we can use the word because to
introduce the two reasons that we will use to support our main claims.)
Practice
Display the sentence frame:
__________________’s accomplishments were remarkable because _________________
hidden figure’s name independent clause
and _____________________.
independent clause
Say:
“Use this frame to talk about the remarkable accomplishments of either Mary Jackson or
Katherine Johnson. Use your own words and work with your collaborative writing
partners.”
Responses will vary, but may include:
Katherine’s accomplishments are remarkable because they required profound courage
and because they led to huge advancements in the world of flight.
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Lesson 1
Sentence
Her accomplishments were remarkable because they led to major advancements in air travel
and because they took place despite tremendous obstacles. (from the introduction of the
Model Argument Essay: “Dorothy”)
Practice
_______________________________________’s accomplishments were remarkable because
hidden figure’s name
______________________________________________________________________________
independent clause
and __________________________________________________________________________
independent clause
_____________________________________________________________________________.
Lesson 3
Sentence
Dorothy’s skills and hard work were very important in helping change the face of air travel.
(from Proof Paragraph 1 of the Model Argument Essay: “Dorothy”)
Practice
____________________________________’s ________________________________________
hidden figure’s name noun phrase(s)
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