First Draft Jeffin Mathew
First Draft Jeffin Mathew
Oru building nte terrace.Terrace nte attathayi Libin (27) adi kitti nettiyil ninnu mukhathiloode chora
ozhuki pedich virach nillkunnu.Avante munnilayi kandal gunda ennu thonnikkuna Suni (36)
nilkkunnu.Suniyude valathum edathumaayi 2 pereyum kanam.Suniyum matt rand perum Libin nte
adutheykk vannukond erikkunu.Libin pedich purakot poyi side cheriya mathilil thatti nilkkunu.libin
purakott nokkumbol thazhe koode line kambi pokunnathum thazhe road um kanunnu.
SUNI
LIBIN
SUNI
(purakil nikkunna aalde nere kai neettunnu.ayal suni kk oru irumb vadi kai marunnu vadi vangi kond)
SUNI
(dheshyathil) Parayeda
LIBIN
Enik Ariyilla
Suni dheshyathil kambi kond Libine adikkunu.Libin terrace il ninnu thazhe line kambiyileykk veezhunnu.
Veetileykk ulla vazhiyiloot vegathil scooterum aayi verunna Nisha.Tholil oru camera bag um
kanam.Vegathil veedinte munnileyk scooter nirthi dhirthiyil stand ett key eduth veetileykk
pokunnu.stand sherikkum veezhanjathinal scooter marinj veezhunnu avl ath sredhikkunilla.
Aval roomil oot kayarumbol thanne background aayi Thankal vilikana subscrib.. Phone il ninnu
kelkkam.Nisha thidukkathil door thuran akath kayarunnu.avl phone il LIbin enna contact leykk vilikkunu
pakshe switch off kanikunnu veendum vendum sremikkunu.Vilikkunnathinte edayil aval bike nte key
Avalde achanteyum ammayudeyum photo de adiyile aaniyil thooki edunnu.Aval petten Whatsapp eduth
Libin enna chat il “ne evada nthina phn off akiye enik pedi akunnund onnu va phn on akkumbo enne
vilikanm” ennu msg edunnu chat nte wallpaper LIbinum Nishayum koodi ulla oru selfie aanu.aval room
ile bedil tension adich erikkukayaanu.avalude kayyil oru camera erippund.Aval enthokeyo onnu
alojichathinu shesham phone eduth “Hari Sir Editor” enna contact leykk vilikkunnu.avalde samsaram
valare tensionum pediyum niranjanu.
Nisha
Sire njanum libinum koodi innu avade poyi.Sambhavam real aanu sire.MLA de karyavum confirm
aanu.llathintem photosum videosum ond.Sire njan..
Hari
Ede Ninnod njan eth vidan paranjathalle.Ethinte seriousness ninakk ariyathond aanu.....Nishe eth
ningale mathram bhadhikana karyam alla njanum managerum sponserum illam pedum.Ne avanu phn
koduthe..
Nisha
Sire avan eth vare ethittila avaru pidikkan vannapo appathe tension il njngal rand vazhiya poye. (onnu
shwasam eduthitt) Sire pala sthalathun miss aaya 20 oolam pilleru ipo Aluva aduth oru private property
il und.innu night oo nale morning oo news vittillel avare Goa il ooto U.P lotto maatum.
Hari
Aviduthe karyam nokkanum miss aaya pillere annuveshikanum ivade police ond.ne ipo paranja MLA de
party aan ipo bharikkunen marakkenda.Namukkokke korach limitations ond. Ne poyi valla road polinja
case oo avihithavo oke kond va ini ethum paranj vilikkan nikkenda.(Hari call cut akkunnu.)
(room ile light petten blink aavunnu.aval purakile light leykk nokkunnu.light veendum blink aavunnu.aval
veendum thirinj kayyile camera il nokkunnu.petten avalde phone ileykk oru unknown numberil ninnu
call verunnu aval pedich aa call edukkunu.)
Suni
Nisha
Athe
Suni
Ah..Njan suni cheriya cottation peripadi okkeya.Njane nammade MLA Sebastian sir paranjit vilikkuva,sir
paranj molde kayyil entho photo oo video oo okke onden.ath molde kayyil erunna sir nu paniya athond
ente korach piller ipo verum ath avarde kayyil kodutheru.Njane evade korach thirakkila
Nisha
Ellenkilo
Suni
Mole ee verunnavan maarko eniko velya bhodham onnum illa.Choriyan ninna angu pothappikum.ne
aaroda keri kalichennu ariyavo.ne innu eth thannalum illelum ninte karyam pokka.10 min nte ullil avan
maaru verum kayyil ollath okke angu kodutheru illel njn angu veru ketta.
(light edak edak blink aavanund.aval tension adich camera il nokkikond erikkumbol petten aval stuck
aayi right side le tabe il erikkunna lap leykk nokkunu.aval petten ezhunett lap on aaki charger connect
cheyunnu petten charging off um on um aayi kond erikkunu switch board il ninnu entho soundum
kelkkunu avl boardinitt oru adi kodukkumbol ok avunnu.
camera lap il connect cheyth ellam copy cheyunnu.shesham gmail open aaki [email protected]
[email protected] [email protected] [email protected]
[email protected] [email protected] enna mail ileykk files ellam attach cheyth mail sent
kodukkunnu.sending nu kanikkunu.estimated time 6 minutes aayath kond aval lap eduth bed nte
adiyileykk vekkunu.bed nte adiyil ninnu aval ezhunett bedileykk nokkumbol avalde puthapp
kidakkunnath kaanunnu.aval athileykk nokki stuck aayi nilkunnu.petten light blink aakunu.aval puthapp
eduth suicide cheyanaayi puthappinte attath kett edunnu.(light nallapole glich aavan thodangunnu)
table ilnte side le kasera valich fan nte keezhe kaserayil oru kaal eduth vekkumbol light vegann 2 vattam
glich aayi light off aakunnu.
(veliyil ninnu engo vannu veezhutha oru cheriya neela velicham mathrame room il ollu.aval puthap
nilath ett pocket il ninnu phone eduth flash on akkunnu.Shesham kasera eduth kond light nte thazhe
kond ett kaserayude mukalil kayari left kayyil flash adichukond right hand kond bulb oori holderileykk
nokkunnu holder il ചിതൽ പുറ്റ് erikkunnath kanunnu aval chair ettathinte right sideil chernnirikkuna
table il ninnu oru pencil eduth holderile പുറ്റ് eduth kalayan sremikkunu pakshe athinte edayil kayyil
ninnu pencil thazhe veezhunu. Phonil nokkumbo samayam poyikond erikuvanenu manasilakki aval kai
viralukond ath eduth kalayan theerumanikkunu. Aval pathiye chithalil thott ath neekan sremikkumbol
kai holder nte ullil thatti avalk shock aett therich roominte sideil chennu veezhunnu.)
(Veezhunna vazhiyil kayyil undayirunna phone um bulb um therich nilathu veezhunnu.aval pathiye side il
ulla table il pidich ezhunekkunnu. Ezhunekkunna vazhiyil table il ninnu kai eduth korach appurath
pidikkan sremikkumbol oru boxy digital alarm thil aanu pidikkunnath. Appol thanne glitch vannu clock
off akunnu. Pakshe aval ath kaanunilla. Phone nilath on aayi kidakkunath kand aval chenn phone
edukkunu, phone eduth kayyil pidikkumbol phone full glitch vann off akunnu.aval phone on akkan
veendum sremikkunu pakshe on aakavilla. Aval lap erunna table lekshyam vech nadakkumbol therich
nilath veena Led bulb il kaalu thattunnu.aval nilath kidanna bulb edukkunnu. Pakshe aval edukana vazhi
aa bulb glich vann bulb kathunnu.Aval petten pedich bulb table il edunnu. Aval pediyode pathiye bulb
onnode edukkan nokkunu edukumbol veendum bulb kathunnu, pedich aval veendum ath table il
edunnu.aval akamshayodeyum athishayathodeyum pathiye bulb onnde edukkunu veendum
kathunnu.Bulb le velicham avalude mukhath niranju nilkkunu. Petten bike verunna sound kekkunnu.
Aval janalinte adutheykk poyi nokkumbol oru bike il 2 per verunnath kanunnu.
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Bike il vanna 2 per dooril kottunu. 2 vattam kottiya shesham avar door thaniye thurakkunu.Door
thurakkumbol avar kanunnath bulb thirich holderil edan chair nte molil keri nikkuna nishaye aan.
Aji
(Aji moshamaaya reethiyil nishaye nokkikond erikkunu.Nisha bulb ettit chair il ninnu erangunnu.)
Subin
Nisha
Subin
Aji
( Nisha dheshyathil )
Nisha
ninakonnum paranja manasilavule verthe kidan bahalam vekkan erangi pokan nokk. Avante okke oru
suni myru.
(Aji dheshyathil “De” nnu vilichukond Nishayude adutheykk vannu avalde vayattil chavuttunnu.aval
therich bhithiyil edich nilkkunu. Aji avale nokki chirikkunu. Aval nere നിന്ന് kayyil power undenna
vishvasathil adikkanayi kai ready aaki dhairyathodeyum dheshyathodeyum nilkkunu)
Nisha
Vada
Subin
( subin nishayude mukhath adikanayi verunnu. Aval avalde kai eduth full power koduth avan adikan
verumbol avnte kayyil keri pidikkunnu. Pakshe avanu onnum pattiyilla avl kai eduth onnode full
poweroode pidikkunu ennit avanu onnum pattanilla. Subin matte kai kond avale adikkunu. Aval table il
thala adich kidakunu. Subin avalde thalayil njekki pidichu kond)
Subin
Aji
(Subin parayadennu paranj kond avale valich nilatheykk valichidunnu. Aval table nte side chennu
veezhunnu. Aval avade kidannu avare nokkunnu ellam blur aayi mangi aanu kaanunath. Subin veendum
adutheykk verunnath kanda aval kai kond aduth enthelum adikkan kidapundo nnu kai kond thappi
nokkunu. Petten avalde kayyil oru kambi thattunu.Aval pathiye kambi eduthukond ath nilath kuthi
pathiye ezhunelkkunu.Ath kand aji avalde adutheykk vann avalde tholil pidikkan thudangumbol aval aa
kambi kond pathiye avante kai thatti maatunnu. Kambi thattumbole aji therich bhithiyil edich
veezhunnu.aval pettan athishayathode vadiyileykk nokkunu.Ath kand subin njettalode “de” nu vilichu
kond avale adikan verunnu aval kambi kond avane adikkunu avan therich table il edich veezhunu. Aji
veendum ezhunnet avale thallan pokumbol avalde adiyett avan veendum therich veezhunu. Subin
petten phone eduth Suniye vilikkun.
Subin
Suni
Subin
chetta sathanam kittiyilla. Evalk entho kozhapam ond chettan petten ingot va
Suni
(background il phone nte voice aayi) eh ne enth myran ee parayane ee peera pinnte kayyin oru photo
medichond veran alle paranjol
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(Nisha veendinte muttath kambi pidich nilkkunnu. Main road il ninnu nishayude veetileyk ulla straight
road leykk 3 bike kayari verunnu. Munnil oru bike um athinte rand side laayi rand bike um. Center le
bike il suni erikkunu.Veetilott ulla road nte valathe side il koodi pokunna current kambiyil ninnum
current glich aavunna sound kelkkunund. Suni pathiye line kambiyileykk nokkunnu.suni nishaye
nokkumbol mukhath chora ozhuki dheshyathode kayyil oru kambi balathode pidich nilkkunnath
kaanunnu. Suniyude bike avalde aduth ethumbol bike le warm light avalde face pathiye kayaran
thudangunnu. Bike avalde thott munnil verumbol (Nisha close shot) avalde face full warm aakunu light
glitch aayi light off akunnu.)
Black screen nte background aayi vadi kond suniye adikkunna sound
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