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The document describes three potential parts of a story: 1. The first part follows a police officer as he delivers a death notification to the daughter of a woman who was killed by a drunk driver. He finds the daughter alone on her mother's birthday. 2. The second part is about a former police officer seeking vengeance against those who killed his wife. 3. The third part would focus on a police officer's daily life and the boredom he experiences while not dealing with crimes. It would make heavy use of dialogue.

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Police Story

The document describes three potential parts of a story: 1. The first part follows a police officer as he delivers a death notification to the daughter of a woman who was killed by a drunk driver. He finds the daughter alone on her mother's birthday. 2. The second part is about a former police officer seeking vengeance against those who killed his wife. 3. The third part would focus on a police officer's daily life and the boredom he experiences while not dealing with crimes. It would make heavy use of dialogue.

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Part 1: Slower paced mundane life(Delivery of a death


notification)
We follow a happy, honorable, truthful man, a police officer.
(He has a pregnant wife (This is to create sympathy with the
audience because who doest like a pregnant wife)). we began
in In-front of a door and the doorbell is neon red.(I cut
away and to the beginning). We began with his morning
routine......then we witness his first death notification.
the victim was struct my a drunk driver driving 100 miles per
hour the wrong way on a country road. the car hit her in such
an angle that the car climbed on top hot her and decapitated
her. She was 78. the police man arrived at the family home to
speak to her 50 year old daughter but she wasn't home. the
police man went around asking for her information and where
she would be home. He found out that her father died a year
ago and this was also her mother's birthday a horrible
coincidence...(Finding out more about the daughter, she's had
a pretty rough life). the lady was staying with her mom
because she has no support. After finding out enough the
police man either sits in her car for a nap, or went back to
the precinct to file the paperworks. His plan was to drop
back/wait a few hours to confront the daughter, and so he
did. Arriving at the daughters house a few hours later he
rang the bell. The daughter must of thought it was her mother
and wanted to surprise her. She didn't open the door but
instead walked from the back door while singing happy
birthday with a small cake in hand.(Shit...) Anywho it was
her mother but a police man. she thought it was for the bills
that was unpaid(idk if thats how it works), and told the
police man the difficult time she was having and pleaded him
for a break as it's her mothers birthday. The wailing after
the police man told her that her mother had died was heart
breaking. She crumbled on the ground and screamed for her
mom, She said that she couldn't do this without her......the
police man sat with the lady as she waited for her sister to
arrive and the silence was deafening and painful and just
fucked up. An hour later the sister arrived and the police
left. The police man dived away while looking back at the
sisters. That was the story of his first delivery of a death
notification

Part 2: Fast pace neon splash


A former police man now missing a ear, and PTSD pumped, goes
through the world seeking for vengeance against the people
that killed his wife. It's getting later so I'll write this
tomorrow but yeah. This one will be more action filled, guns
to balls action, injected with testosterone...Idk maybe
2.

Part 3: Dialogue intense filled with boredom


A Policeman who just can’t happen to bumping anything
particularly crimey. Thus he fills his life with the
imaginary, magical, and boredom of everyday life.

Full framed Black and whit 16:9 and a black and white 1.19:1
ratio
Color 2.39:1 or 16:9
Black Screen
*A constant heart beat in the background* 60 to 100 BPM. Deep
breath in, deep breath out, A door made of white palm wood
appears on screen, on its right a ruby red door bell, the
surrounding is pitch black. As a slow zoom is placed on the
door a classical begins to play (The climax of Adagio Per
Archi E Organo in sol Minor) This melancholy piece will
signify to the ones watching not what is happening but the
impending doom of the story they are about to witness. As the
piece plays red blood starts to drip from the top of the door
down (similar to the shining elevator scene but slow and
thick blood). This shot lasts until the zoom goes into the
Peephole where Part 1 is displayed.
Part 1: Mother, O Mother

1 INT. ROOM. - MORNING - COLOR 16:9 1

A silhouette of Alexander's bedroom. His Bed lengths from the


left wall to the center alined with the head lamps, almost
splitting the room into two. Behind the bed theres is a large
window shining pure white(a silhouette). On the right there
is an wardrobe, on top is Alexanders police uniform and a
flowerpot. In the far right corner is a exercise bike which
he barely uses but keeps. Next to his bed a red blinking
alarm clock catches the eye. 7:59......8:00. As the alarm
strikes 8, Alexander sits up from his bed, he yawns, and
looks out the window sitting in peace, he proceeds to sit up
and walk to the wardrobe to wear his uniform, then He turns
to look at his little exercise bike and decided today is not
the day. (The camera pans left as he walks to the bathroom)

Now in the bathroom, Alexander upper torst with white


bathroom tiles on the side, reflecting behind him is a hight
meter, he stands at a whopping 6foot3. He began to brush his
3.

teeth while multiple hands comes in from out of the frame to


help his get tidy as he focuses on brushing his teeth. After
he winces his mouth a voice over of Alexander starts to play.
ALEXANDER
Not lookin too bad for a new
recruit. My name is Alexander Meeks,
I'm now a cop - No. 2258 (While this
is being said he puts on a name tag)

He trows some pushes in front of the mirror. He think he


knows karate.
As he turns around we cut back to the silhouette bed room. He
walks out the across the room and out. Hold on this shot for
around 2 second and...cut.

2 EXT. HIGHWAY. NOON 2

A montage of Alexander on the highway: He sits on the side of


the highway as he eats his strawberry frosted donuts, He
plays with the speed gun, smokes, all while his partner
sleeps in the passenger seat.
A close shot of his face while he looks off into the
distance. (Bear with me now) He looks to his left on the left
side of the Highway, you're suppose to look right. A car is
coming at 100 miles per hour and theres nothing he can do but
stair at this invincible comet speeding down the road. He
looks to his right A look of desperation appears on his face.
(Sound is very important on in this shot as the the low base
of a speeding car and the inevitable crash will all be
incepted trough sound) PS:this shot will be in slow motion.

As Alexander stair into the slight he witnessed he almost


began to tear up, Cut...
A family portraits of Judy Johnson and different snapshots of
her life as she increase ages.
Judy Johnson Born on April 28 1943,
she grew up to be a brilliant
teacher who taught for 18 year.
Married on 1967, mother of two.

...Cut back to present day Judy is now decapitated. The


senior officer wakes up from all the noice and comes out to
see whats going on.

SENIOR OFFICER/PARTNER
(Flat)
It's...not your fault.

ALEXANDER
4.

(quiet)
Alright

the police man arrived at the family home to speak to her 50


year old daughter but she wasn't home. the police man went
around asking for her information and where she would be
home. He found out that her father died a year ago and this
was also her mother's birthday a horrible coincidence...
(Finding out more about the daughter, she's had a pretty
rough life). the lady was staying with her mom because she
has no support. After finding out enough the police man
either sits in her car for a nap, or went back to the
precinct to file the paperworks. His plan was to drop
back/wait a few hours to confront the daughter, and so he
did. Arriving at the daughters house a few hours later he
rang the bell.
(The section above is in
progress)

3 EXT. ANJELICA FRONT DOOR - TWILIGHT 3

Alexander has now arrived at Angelicas front door made of


white palm wood, on its right a ruby red door bell. Alexander
takes a small hesitant pause on this blue twilight evening
and then he placed his finger on the doorbell and pressed it.
RINGGGG* RINGGGG* RINGGGG*
No one opens the door immediately, but through the door
Alexander hears the foots steps of rush and excitement. He
rings the doorbell once more. A soft joyful voice comes
penetrating the door. Cross cutting between the inside and
the outside, The realization that once the song ends and she
arrives at the door things won't be the same. That the person
standing on the other side is not her mother. She's dead
ANJELICA
Happy birthday to you,
Happy birthday to you,
Happy birthday dear mommy,
Happy birthday to......you

ALEXANDER
(Flat)
Hi

ANJELICA
(Hesitant)
Hey, how can I help

ALEXANDER
My name is alexander, I'm a police
officer on duty at National Route.
5.

ANJELICA
Cool, Well my name is Angelica.
Anjelica Johnson. Sir, There must a
mistake here, you see I'm a nurse.

ALEXANDER
No Ms. Anjelica there's no mistake
here, I apologise for what i'm about
to say. Today at round 2:27pm, Your
mother got in an car accident.

Random things in part 3:

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