The Outline
The Outline
The Outline
THE OUTLINE
After you have chosen a topic for an expository essay, the next task is to determine what you
are going to write in the paper and in what order. For shorter pieces of writing—up to two
paragraphs—the order can easily be handled in your head, and even in some longer papers,
especially narrative and descriptive, you can usually follow the order without the aid of an
outline. An effective expository or persuasive paper, though, is difficult to write well without a
plan for its order. This is what an outline does for you. After creating the thesis, the next
step is to outline the supporting material.
WHY OUTLINE?
1. To help develop your own writing:
a. Clarify or determine the purpose of the proposed writing.
b. Test organization.
c. Aid to communicate and clarify to both the student and the professor what will
be examined in the paper and how.
2. To help understand a required reading:
a. Enables the student to carefully watch what the author is doing and how he or
she is doing it.
b. Provides the student a concise review for future study.
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MODEL OUTLINE
The outline below is one of the outline styles from the List Library in Microsoft Word. The
top level is represented by Roman numerals (I, II, III, IV, etc.); the next level is marked by
lower case letters (a, b, c, etc.) Further levels are indicated by lowercase Roman numerals (i,
ii, iii, etc.), then numbers again. This follows a progressive system of indention so that the
relation and relative importance of topics may be seen at a glance.
Title
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The type of support you use to develop your paper—example and illustration, comparison
and contrast, definition, or classification—will determine its structure. The order in which you
place the information will then be one of the following:
• Most important to least important; or least important to most important
• Lesser known to greater-known fact; or greater known to lesser-known fact
• The particular to general (inductive); or the general to particular (deductive)
• Question and answer
• Causes and effects
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Westerns
Proposed thesis: Most American westerns are characterized by monotonous plots,
stereotyped characters, and oversimplified themes.
1. Monotonous plots—always standard situation, gunfights, chases, hero wrongly
accused, spends most of the plot clearing his good name.
2. Stereotyped characters—hero, epitome of good guy, dresses and speaks well; villain,
paragon of evil, dresses and speaks poorly; barmaid, “heart of gold,” immoral, but not
really; sidekick for hero.
3. Simplified themes—clichés such as “cattle rustling doesn’t pay,” “good always wins out
over evil,” etc. Often, a great deal of violence is the solution to problems; violence is
related to themes.
Spacing
Center the title on the outline page. Double-space the thesis from the title, with the words
Thesis Sentence (justified left). Double-space the first heading from the thesis sentence.
Either single-space or double-space the body of the outline.
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If you are using a self-built outline, number and letter the outline consistently. Set the main
heads flush with the left-hand margin and indent the subheads to fall directly under the first
word of the preceding head.
Capitalizing
In a topic outline, capitalize only the first word of an individual entry; however, follow general
capitalization rules for names of people, names of places, titles of publications, etc. In a
sentence outline, capitalize the first word of the sentence and then follow the general rules
for capitalizing.
Punctuating
In all formal outlines, place a period after each heading and sub-heading. In the topic
outline, do not punctuate the entries, unless the punctuation is intrinsic to the entry. In the
sentence outline, punctuate all sentences as any complete sentence would be, with a period,
question mark, or exclamation point.
Westerns
Thesis sentence: Nearly all westerns are characterized by monotonous plots, stereotyped
characters, and simplified themes.
I. Monotonous plots
a. Stock situation points to the theme
i. Hero accused of crime
ii. Hero clears name
iii. Hero captures villain, wins girl, rides into the sunset
b. Obvious physical action
i. Chase
ii. Fist fight
iii. Gun fight
II. Stereotyped characters
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a. Hero
i. Speaks good English
ii. Well-dressed
iii. Paragon of virtue
b. Villain
i. Speaks rough, ungrammatical English
ii. Poorly dressed
iii. Epitome of evil
c. Barmaid
i. Immoral by occupation
ii. Heart of Gold
iii. Helps the hero
d. Hero’s sidekick
III. Older than hero
i. Secondary in prowess
ii. Available for dirty work
iii. Provides “humor”
IV. Simplified themes
a. Themes expressed by clichés
i. “Cattle rustling doesn’t pay”
ii. “Good always triumphs over evil”
iii. “Arrogance leads to downfall; humility leads to victory”
b. Themes emphasize violence in solving problems
i. Villain understands only a physical beating
ii. Hero can overcome villain because of God and Right
Westerns
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I. The monotonous plots of the western almost always involve the same
sequences.
a. A stock situation is introduced.
i. The hero is wrongly accused of a crime.
ii. He clears his good name.
iii. He captures the villain, wins the girl, and rides into the sunset.
b. The plot is built around obvious physical action.
i. The hero is involved in chases.
ii. The hero is involved in fistfights.
iii. The hero is involved in gunfights.
iv. The hero wins them all.
II. Secondly, stereotyped characters are characteristic of the western.
a. First is the hero.
i. He speaks good English.
ii. He is well dressed.
iii. He is a paragon of virtue.
b. On the other hand is the villain.
i. He speaks rough, ungrammatical English.
ii. He dresses in dark, drab, wrinkled clothes.
iii. He is the epitome of general wickedness.
c. A minor stereotype is the barmaid.
i. She is immoral by occupation.
ii. She has a heart of gold.
iii. She risks her own safety for the hero.
d. Another minor stereotype is the hero’s sidekick.
i. He is older than the hero.
ii. He is secondary to the hero in prowess.
iii. He is available for the dirty work.
iv. He provides “humor.”
III. Finally, simplified themes are characteristic of most westerns.
a. The themes are often expressed by clichés.
i. One common theme is “Cattle rustling doesn’t pay.”
ii. Another common theme is “Good always triumphs over evil.”
iii. A third common theme is “Arrogance leads to downfall; humility leads to
victory.”
b. Many of the themes tend to emphasize violence in the solution of problems.
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Westerns