In many cities the use of video cameras in public

places is being increased in order to reduce

crime, but some people believe that these
measures restrict our individual freedom.
Do the benefits of increased security outweigh
the drawbacks?

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 In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people
believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.
Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
It is true that video surveillance has become commonplace in many cities in recent years. While I understand that critics
may see this as an invasion of privacy, I believe that the benefits do outweigh the drawbacks.
There are two main reasons why people might disapprove of the use of video cameras in public places. The first
objection is that these cameras invade our privacy, in the sense that we are constantly being watched by the authorities
or by private security firms. Many people find this intrusive and feel that the recording of their movements is a form of
state control that curtails their individual freedom. The second argument against the proliferation of CCTV cameras is
that they are being used as an alternative to police officers patrolling the streets. If this is indeed happening, then it is
unlikely that members of the public will feel safer.
In spite of the drawbacks mentioned above, I believe that the use of video cameras to monitor public areas is a positive
measure. The key objective of video surveillance is to deter criminals and to prevent crime. For example, petty criminals
like shoplifters and pickpockets are less likely to operate in parts of cities where they know that they are being watched.
At the same time, when crimes are committed, the police can use video evidence to catch and prosecute offenders.
Therefore, in my view, video cameras offer valuable support to police officers, and they make cities safer for inhabitants,
workers and visitors alike.
In conclusion, it seems to me that we gain more than we lose from the enhanced security that CCTV cameras bring to
our cities.
275 words, band 9 – written by Simon
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 Understand
the task
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 An ideal body

• 2 ideas
• 2 bodies -> 4 ideas
• Intro + conclusion

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 Techniques for logically developing ideas

1. Why

• It is because
• The reason is that
• The (key) r_ti_nale
rationale is that

• It could be explained by the fact that

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2. Example
• For example,
• For _nst_nce,
instance,
• By way of /ˌɪləˈstreɪʃn/,
Illustration,
• To illustrate,
• A good/telling example is that ... Take A as an
example.
• Take A for example
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3. Consequences
result
• As a ……………../As consequence
a ………………….,
• Consequently,
• ..., which can result in something
= ..., which can lead to something
• This can result in something = This can
lead to something

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4. If not/Compare

In By contrast,
• ……/......
On the other hand,
• ……..
• However,

Note: Không dùng “On the contrary”

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 “Music can certainly reach across cultural and national boundaries and bring people
together. Perhaps the best example of this would be the Live Aid concerts that took
Example
place back in the 1980s, and which were broadcast to a global audience.”

Why cultures, music also has the ability to connect people from
“Just as it transcends
different generations. The key rationale is that, regardless of age, we can all enjoy a
memorable melody, a strong rhythm or a beautiful singing voice, and the best songs
seem to have the same magical effect on all of us. This results in televised music
competitions, such as ‘The X Factor’ or ‘The Voice’, being such popular prime-time
shows.”
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Consequence
 “However, music can sometimes be a distraction. There have been cases in which
music fans shows excitement beyond control, overreacting about their idols, causing
disturbing behaviours. Furthermore, some of these fans If
arenot…
still students, and they
can be distracted from their studying.”

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Các idea đơn giản 1 trong 4 câu hỏi

Trả lời ………..

Các idea phức tạp Kết hợp trả lời ………..

2 câu hỏi

Câu hỏi ………..

WHY Sử dụng thường xuyên nhất

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 Introduction
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 I. How to write an introduction
In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is
being increased in order to reduce crime, but some
people believe that these measures restrict our individual
freedom. Do the benefits of increased security outweigh
the drawbacks?
-> It is true that video surveillance has become
/ˈkɑːmənpleɪs/ in many cities in recent years. While I
commonplace
understand that critics may see this as an invasion of
privacy, I believe that the benefits do outweigh the
drawbacks.
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 A good IELTS Writing introduction

It is true that video surveillance

has become commonplace in Introduce the topic
many cities in recent years.
While I understand that critics
may see this as an invasion of
Give a short, general
privacy, I believe that the
answer to the
benefits do outweigh the
question
drawbacks.
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 Useful structures

Giving opinions

• I think that
• I believe that
• I would argue that
• I am of the opinion that
• I /ˈfɜːrmli/
firmly hold the view that
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 Introduction structures

• positive
In my opinion, this trend could have both……………………..and
/ˈpɒz.ə.tɪv/ /ˈneɡ.ə.tɪv/
negative
………………….
consequences in equal measure.
• A (far) outweigh
/ˌaʊtˈweɪ/ B = A is more significant than B = there are more upside
than downside
• While I accept that / I understand that A may have some drawbacks, I
………………
strongly believe that its benefits are greater.

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 Introduction structures

• Although this trend has some benefits, I would argue that

there are more drawbacks.
• In spite of several benefits that this trend provides, it seems
significant
to me that its problems are more………………..
• I firmly hold the view that the drawbacks…………..…in
/peɪl/
pale
comparison with the benefits that this trend provides.

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 Practice – Writing Intro (s)
Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a
useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos
games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them.
In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the
benefits?

Many people, and children in particular, enjoy playing computer games.

While I accept that these games can sometimes have a positive effect on
the user, I believe that they are more likely to have a harmful impact.

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 Body
paragraphs
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 Body 1

In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased
in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures
restrict our individual freedom.
Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?

There are two main reasons why people might disapprove of the use of
video cameras in public places. The first objection is that these cameras 1st STATEMENT
invade our privacy, in the sense that we are constantly being watched by the
authorities or by private security firms. Many people find this intrusive and
feel that the recording of their movements is a form of state control that SUPPORTING
curtails their individual freedom. The second argument against the IDEAS
proliferation of CCTV cameras is that they are being used as an alternative
to police officers patrolling the streets. If this is indeed happening, then it is
unlikely that members of the public will feel safer.

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 Body 2

In spite of the drawbacks mentioned above, I believe that the use of video
cameras to monitor public areas is a positive measure. The key objective of 2nd STATEMENT
video surveillance is to deter criminals and to prevent crime. For example,
petty criminals like shoplifters and pickpockets are less likely to operate in
parts of cities where they know that they are being watched. At the same
time, when crimes are committed, the police can use video evidence to
catch and prosecute offenders. Therefore, in my view, video cameras offer SUPPORTING
valuable support to police officers, and they make cities safer for IDEAS
inhabitants, workers and visitors alike.
In conclusion, it seems to me that we gain more than we lose from the
enhanced security that CCTV cameras bring to our cities.

– written by Simon –

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 Useful structures

1st statement sentence 2nd statement sentence

• On the one hand, there are a • On the other hand, I would argue
variety of disadvantages of/to A
v_riety
…………………. that A is outweighed by B
• To begin with, A is problematic for a
………………………, • However, I strongly believe that A
number of reasons. offers more benefits.
• A can be seen as positive for a number of
reasons.

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 Useful structures
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• advantages = benefits (n)

• advantageous beneficial (adj)
....................>…= ……………………
• disadvantages = drawbacks = problems (n)
• disadvantageous problematic (adj)
…………………………... = ……………………..

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 Useful structures
Giving ideas

• Firstly, ... | Secondly, ...

• The main problem of A is that ...
• Another /ˈmeɪdʒər/
major disadvantage of A is that ...
• Moreover, ... is also a great/clear/key advantage.
• Furthermore, A also exerts a negative/positive influence on
B.

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 Practice – Writing Body part
Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful
educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an
adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the
drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

On the one hand video games can be both entertaining and educational.
………………………………..,
Users, or gamers, are transported into virtual worlds which are often more
exciting and engaging than real-life pastime. From an educational perspective,
these games encourage imagination and creativity, as well as concentration,
logical thinking and problem solving, all of which are useful skills outside the
Furthermore it has been shown that computer simulation
gaming context. ……………………….,
games can improve users’ motor skills and help to prepare them for real-world
tasks, such as flying a plane.
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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational
tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on
the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games
outweigh the benefits?

However, …………………………….
I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks.
Gaming can be highly addictive because users are constantly given scores, new
targets and frequent rewards to keep them playing. Many children now spend hours
each day trying to progress through the levels of a game or to get a higher score than
their friends. This type of addiction can have effects ranging from lack of sleep to
problems at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more hours on the
computer or console. The rise in obesity in recent years has also been linked in part
to the …………………….
sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise that often accompany gaming
addiction.
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 Conclusion

In conclusion, it seems to me that we gain more than we

lose from the enhanced security that CCTV cameras
bring to our cities.

☞ Tip
In conclusion, I would argue that the benefits of
….. (topic) outweigh the drawbacks.

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 Practice – Writing conclusion

Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful

educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having
an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the
drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are

more significant than the possible benefits.

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 Template (6.5 – 7.0+)
Introduction
(Câu background information). While there are a number of benefits of
__________, I am of the opinion that the drawbacks are greater.
Body 1
On the one hand, ______________________________________
can be highly beneficial for many reasons. One of the key
advantages_____________________________________________
Another significant benefit is _______________________________

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Body 2
On the other hand, I would argue that the advantages of
______________ pale in comparison with the disadvantages.
Firstly,__________________________________________________
The second drawback that should be taken into cons_der_tion is
________________________________________________________
Conclusion
In conclusion, despite several benefits that ____________ has, it seems
to me that they are far outweighed by the potential problems.
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 A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income.
Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed
correctly.
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do
you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

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 A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income.
Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed
correctly.
Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do
you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

INTRO
Nowadays tourism generates a significant portion of national income for many
countries, but it has certain drawbacks too. This essay will examine the
advantages and disadvantages of tourism and provide a logical conclusion.
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BODY 1
The two main advantages of developed tourism industry are boost in country’s economy and a large number of new job
openings for the local people.
ADVANTAGE 1: Thứ nhất, khách du lịch chi tiền cho nhiều loại dịch vụ, bao gồm khách sạn, khu vui chơi, vận chuyển, ăn
uống và dịch vụ y tế. Bằng cách này, du lịch mang lại một nguồn thu nhập bổ sung, hỗ trợ rất nhiều cho nền kinh tế của đất
nước.
Firstly, tourists spend money on a wide range of services, including hotels, amusements, transportation, food and
medical services. This way, tourism yields an additional income, greatly supporting the country’s economy.

ADVANTAGE 2: Thứ hai, du lịch mở rộng cơ hội việc làm bằng cách mang lại nhiều công việc mới. Ví dụ, du lịch thúc đẩy nhu
cầu lớn hơn đối với dịch vụ nhà hàng, hướng dẫn viên du lịch, khách sạn và các dịch vụ bán lẻ, khuyến khích các chủ doanh
nghiệp thuê thêm người cho những vị trí này.
Secondly, tourism increases the level of employment by bringing new jobs. For instance, the influx of tourists results in a
larger demand in restaurant workers, tour guides, hotel staff and employees of retail services, exhorting business owners
to hire more people for these positions.
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BODY 2
But tourism also has some major disadvantages like destruction of popular tourist destinations and development of illegal
economic activities. Ancient buildings, temples and monuments struggle to cope with a vast amount of visitor’s traffic and
get damaged. Also, the large number of tourists can cause environmental problems. For instance , when places of interest
are overcrowded, natural resources often become overexploited. What’s more , the presence of a considerable number of
tourists with a lot of money to spend, and often carrying valuables such as cameras and jewelry, increases the attraction for
criminals and brings with it activities like robbery and drug dealing. However , proper hospitality management and correct
usage of tourism revenue by the local government can eliminate these disadvantages.
CONCLUSION
Để kết luận, mặc dù du lịch có thể có những tác động tiêu cực như phá hoại môi trường và gia tăng tỷ lệ tội phạm, nó có
ảnh hưởng tích cực đến nền kinh tế và cung cấp một số lượng lớn việc làm mới cho người dân địa phương. Tôi tin rằng
những lợi ích này của du lịch lớn hơn những mặt hạn chế của nó.
To conclude, although tourism can have certain negative effects like destructive impact and growth of crime rate, it has
an extremely positive influence on country’s economy and provides a large number of new jobs for the local people. I
believe that these benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks.
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Nowadays tourism generates a significant portion of national income for many countries, but it has certain
drawbacks too. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and provide a logical
conclusion.
The two main advantages of developed tourism industry are boost in country’s economy and a large
number of new job openings for the local people. Firstly, tourists spend money on a wide range of services,
including hotels, amusements, transportation, food and medical services. This way, tourism yields an
additional income, greatly supporting the country’s economy. Secondly, tourism increases the level of
employment by bringing new jobs. For instance, the influx of tourists results in a larger demand in
restaurant workers, tour guides, hotel staff and employees of retail services, exhorting business owners to
hire more people for these positions.

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But tourism also has some major disadvantages like destruction of popular tourist destinations and
development of illegal economic activities. Ancient buildings, temples and monuments struggle to cope with
a vast amount of visitor’s traffic and get damaged. Also, the large number of tourists can cause
environmental problems. For instance, when places of interest are overcrowded, natural resources often
become overexploited. What’s more, the presence of a considerable number of tourists with a lot of money
to spend, and often carrying valuables such as cameras and jewelry, increases the attraction for criminals
and brings with it activities like robbery and drug dealing. However, proper hospitality management and
correct usage of tourism revenue by the local government can eliminate these disadvantages.
To conclude, although tourism can have certain negative effects like destructive impact and growth of crime
rate, it has an extremely positive influence on country’s economy and provides a large number of new jobs
for the local people. I believe that these benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks.
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