Verbal Notes - RON
Verbal Notes - RON
– if there's a modifier, you should be able to explain exactly what it modifies, and exactly why that
modification makes sense.
– if there's a pronoun, you should be able to explain exactly what it stands for, and exactly why that makes
sense.
– if there's a verb, you should be able to find its subject. you should also be able to justify the tense in which
the verb is used, and/or the tense sequence of multiple verbs.
– you should be able to explain the exact meaning of the sentence.
– if there are parallel structures, you should be able to explain (a) the grammatical parallelism AND (b) the
parallelism in meaning.
In SC, you should be able to go through the CORRECT answers, and JUSTIFY EVERYTHING in the correct answer. i.e.,
if there is an underline, substitute in the correct answer to make a complete sentence, and then make sure that
you understand everything in that correct sentence. the good thing about this sort of strategy is that you can
figure out most things by yourself. for instance, even if you've never seen a particular type of modifier before, you
know that it's used correctly -- so you can just deduce its proper use from the context. etc.
1. Myth of "One of.."
– You make comparisons with LIKE when you compare nouns, or noun phrases (i.e., anything that doesn't
have a VERB).
EXCEPTION:
Prepositional phrases take "As".
Note that there may be modifiers attached to these nouns. If there are, don't care. Modifiers are disposable.
You make comparisons with AS when you compare clauses (things that have real VERBS), or prepositional
phrases.
NOTE: When you're deciding whether something is a clause or just a noun phrase, remember that -ING FORMS
DO NOT COUNT AS VERBS (unless there's a helping verb attached to them).
Examples:
"Those babies are cute, like little pandas sliding down rainbows" -- CORRECT!
Note that:
* "sliding" is NOT a verb.
* "sliding down rainbows" is a modifier, and thus doesn't have to be considered in the grammar of the sentence.
"Those babies are cute, as are little pandas that slide down rainbows" -- CORRECT!
* "are" is a verb, so this is a clause.
* "that slide..." DOES NOT count, since it's part of a modifier.
"Those babies are cute, like little pandas that slide down rainbows" -- CORRECT!
* "little pandas" is a noun.
* "that slide..." DOES NOT count, since it's part of a modifier.
"Our family lives on a farm now, as in the 19th century." -- CORRECT! Prepositional phrases take "as"
4. Compared to/with for STATISTICS:
If you say "compared with/to" for statistics, you should cite BOTH statistics in the comparison.
The expression "compared to/with" does NOT imply any sort of direction to the comparison; i.e., it gives no hint as
to greater/less/like/unlike. Therefore, you need to give both of the relevant statistics, or else the statement won't
make any sense.
Examples:
"The unemployment rate in Esteria last month was 5.3%, compared to the rate in Burdistan." --
INCORRECT! This makes no sense. We have absolutely no idea what is going on with the rate in Burdistan.
"The unemployment rate in Esteria last month was 5.3%, compared to a rate of 7% in Burdistan." --
CORRECT! Both statistics are cited.
5."In contrast to":
If you say "in contrast to", then you don't HAVE to mention both statistics... Although you still can mention.
Examples:
"In contrast to the corresponding rate in Esteria, the unemployment rate in Burdistan fell last month." --
CORRECT! In this case, the "in contrast to" construction implies that the Esterian rate went up. We don't actually
have to say this explicitly.
But, if you want, you can mention both statistics:
"In contrast to the corresponding rate in Esteria, which rose by 0.5%, the unemployment rate in Burdistan
fell by 0.3% last month." -- ALSO CORRECT!
6. "By Time":
In clauses modified with "by TIME", you should use:
(i) Past Perfect (had VERBed) if the time marker is in the past.
(ii) Present Perfect (has/have VERBed) if the time marker is "by now"/current.
(iii) Future Perfect (will have VERBed) if the time marker is in the future.
7. Usage of "COULD":
"Could" is a modal expressing past (potential) ability.
If something is assumed in the PAST, then the usage of "Could" is appropriate. In other words, it is used to refer to
the "Future in the PAST". If it is "ongoing", then "Could" CANNOT be used.
8. "Estimate .. ":
"Estimate NJ deer population to have grown" is UNIDIOMATIC. In general,
"Estimate X to have VERB'ed" is WRONG.
"Estimate that X has VERB'ed" is RIGHT.
9. "Rather than" Vs "Instead of":
– The short answer to this question: basically, "being" is ok when there are no acceptable alternative
formulations that DON'T use it.
– From what we've seen, "being" can be ok as long as at least one of the following 2 conditions obtains:
(1) It is part of a PASSIVE-VOICE construction (note that such constructions require a form of "to be", so, if the
passive voice is in the -ing form, that form will manifest as "being");
or
(2) It is used as a GERUND (i.e., the action of "being something" is treated as a NOUN in the sentence). Most, but
not all, of these gerunds will be the gerund form of a construction in the passive voice.
Examples: (the first one I made up; the other three are correct answers to official problems)
i. Being followed by paparazzi 24 hours a day has caused many celebrities to become extremely hostile to
strangers. (note that this is both --> it's a passive-voice gerund!)
ii. During the 1950s, as part of their therapy, young polio victims learning to live with their disabilities were
helped to practice falling, so that they could learn to fall without being hurt.
iii. According to one expert, the cause of genetic irregularities in many breeds of dog is not so much that
dogs are being bred for looks or to meet other narrow criteria as that the breeds have relatively few
founding members.
iv. Being heavily committed to a course of action, especially one that has worked well in the past, is likely to
make an executive miss signs of incipient trouble or misinterpret them when they do appear.
25. Usage of certain words:
Here is a brief summary. I'm going to avoid using grammatical terms (mostly because I can't remember them); I'll
just give examples instead.
a) Because
"Because" connects two complete sentences (clauses). The sentence coming after "because" should actually be
the cause of what is described in the other one. Must be independent, complete, sentences before and after
comma. Without because, the sentence would be a run on sentence even with the comma.
e.g.
Because the bridge was closed, the morning rush hour lasted two extra hours.
The morning rush hour lasted two extra hours because the bridge was closed.
b) Since
One usage of "since" is basically identical to "because" (described above).
"Since" can also be used with a noun that represents a starting time: Barack Obama has been president since
2009.
c) Due to
Should be followed by a noun. Also, this must DESCRIBE a noun. It is commonly used in speech to describe entire
clauses/sentences/ideas, but that usage is wrong in the written language. Should be able to be replaced with
“caused by”, a noun is caused by whatever XYZ, preferably XYZ is also a noun.
e.g.
Unemployment due to offshoring is rising in factory towns. <-- here, "due to..." describes "unemployment" much
of the unemployment in factory towns is due to offshoring.
BUT
*James was late due to the traffic <-- this is incorrect; you can't use "due to..." to describe an entire
sentence/clause (such as "James was late").
d) Because of… (noun)
Should be followed by a noun. But, can describe a full clause. Opposite from “due to”.
James was late because of the traffic.
e) For - (as per its usage in OG12 #59)
This usage of "for" is a lot like "because", except in the sense that it suggests a slightly less direct causation. Here's
an example: lots of people get sick in the winter. But that's not direct causation -- i.e., the winter weather doesn't
directly cause people to become sick. Instead, because it's cold outside, people tend to cluster together indoors,
thus allowing increased transmission of germs.
For this sort of indirect causation, it's more appropriate to say: Many people are sick around here, for it is winter.
Nobody will ever say this out loud, though -- it's strictly written language -- so you probably won't be familiar with
it unless you read a fair amount of (decently formal) written English.
f) In that - (OG12 says that 'in that' means 'in as much as' - #59)
X is Z because Y --> this must actually mean that there is a literal cause-and-effect relationship. In other words, this
sentence claims that "Y" is actually the reason why "X" is "Z".
X is Z in that Y --> this is a qualifier; it implies that "Y" is the only certain way in which X is Z.
Two examples:
My brother and I are like each other in that we both have quirky senses of humor --> CORRECT
This sentence means that my brother and I share the same quirky sense of humor, but that we may (or may not)
differ in any other aspect of our personalities.
My brother and I are like each other because we both have quirky senses of humor --> UNREASONABLE MEANING
This sentence implies that our similar senses of humor have CAUSED our personalities to become alike. That's
nonsense.
Such As vs. Like
In last week's edition, we saw that "different from" is correct and "different than" is incorrect. This is not the only
instance when GMAT English diverges from what one hears or, increasingly, reads in daily American life
Another such instance is the difference between "like" and "such as": in GMAT Sentence Correction, such as is
used to introduce examples, while "like" indicates only similarity and cannot be used for examples at all. Let's take
a look at the following sentences:
In the first sentence, we know that football and baseball are specific examples of sports the author enjoys. In the
second sentence, however, all we can glean is that the author enjoys sports that are similar to football and
baseball (rugby and cricket perhaps?). Whether either sentence is correct depends on the context. If football and
baseball are meant as specific examples, sentence 2 is incorrect because "like" does not introduce examples.
This rule is becoming increasingly obsolete in modern American English, but it still must be followed in GMAT
Sentence Correction problems.
In fact, these days this rule is so nitpicky that even the GMAT writers themselves sometimes abandon it in other
GMAT question types!
Notes from various discussion points mentioned by Ron in Manhattan GMAT forum
Please pay attention - a LOT of sentence correction pointers / grammar rules offered by Ron conflicted what he
had previously posted throughout the years. So please study with caution, and always pay attention to meaning
of the sentence first before picking at the grammar rules
1. “What” they had not thought of…
– Construction using “what” implies exclusivity and uniqueness. Not general.
– If the meaning of the sentence is implying very general examples, “such as” is a better way to illustrate.
2. “Such as” -
– Construction using “better control of the other infections such as…”
– The inclusion of “the” implies uniqueness, if referring to general examples after “such as”, then “the” is
not appropriate in this sentence structure.
– “Like” compares nouns, to give examples of similarities, general, and “such as” gives examples of things in
a list that are specific in comparison to “what” for example.
3. “Like” –
– Compares two nouns, to give example of similarities.
– “Similar” can be used to do the same (to show similarities) of clauses. Eg. Similar to the way many people
cook chicken.
4. “Rather than” – idiom
– Example “rather than olfactory ones…”
– Always describe a noun, and mostly followed by a noun, but can be followed by a clause. However, it can
NOT describe a clause.
5. “Which, whom, where, of where, of which, of whom”
– Absolutely only modifies noun immediately preceding the comma (before the list of words above)
6. “From… to…”
– Must be in a parallel sentence structure. “From… and to…” is incorrect, unidiomatic.
7. “Verb-ing”
– If used without a comma in the sentence construction, it modifies the noun right before itself.
– If used with a comma in the sentence construction, it modifies the entire clause before the comma, much
more flexible usage in most sentence structures.
8. Demonstrative pronouns “this, that, those, these”
– Can act as adjectives and need to be attached to a noun.
– “I like those shoes”
– Exception – that, those – can act as a noun if they are acting as a copy of another noun so that they do not
technically need to touch!
– Eg. I love my shoes, but I hate those of my neighbors.
9. “Although”
– If sentence structure begins with “although”, it must be followed by an independent clause after the
comma in the second part of the sentence structure.
– Need subject and verb to be present to follow the lead-in.
– Same exact requirement for “because”.
10. “Among” vs “between
– Among – for 3 or more things
– Between – for 2 things. “Between A and B” - idiom
11. “As” usages:
– Duration as: AS I strolled to the store, I smelled the air. (= while, during)
– Causation as: I will not tell you, AS you already know. (= since, because)
– Comparison as: You should walk AS she wants you to walk. (= in the same way)
– Function As: AS your leader, I am in charge. (= in the role of)
– Equation As: I think of you AS my friend. (= you are my friend)
– Stage As: AS a child, I thought I could fly. (= when I was)
12. “Instead of” vs “rather than”
– It looks like “instead of” is used more for nouns, also has a “preference” feel to it.
– “Rather than” used more for verbs.
13. Dependent initial modifier clause: if the first clause is a dependent clause missing its own subject and verb, it
must modify the immediately following noun after the comma – pay attention for meaning purposes.
14. “Nor”
– A coordinating conjunction, and always should connect two independent clauses with its own subject and
verb, or, it can be used to connect two nouns.
– Eg. I can eat neither bread nor pasta.
15. “Should” – always means morally obligated in GMAT, pay attention to circumstances in the meaning of the
sentence to determine whether “should” can be used.
16. “A shift” – needs to take place, or happen. So always add “takes place” or “happens” after it because to say “a
shift from X to Y” does not make any sense.
– Instead, use “A shift from X to Y is taking place because…”
17. “Would” vs “will”
– If the sentence has circumstances happening in the PAST, use “would”, or else, use “will”.
18. Subjunctive mood:
– Verb form used to express a wish, a suggestion, a command, or a condition that is contrary to fact.
– The form of a verb in the subjection mood may differ from the form with the same subject, which is not in
the subjunctive mood.
– Eg. “Require” implies subjunctive mood so it must be followed by “that” – because many Indian food
recipes require that one cook without interruption. It is a command therefore “that” is needed.
19. Project x to do y – wrong.
– Project that X will do Y.
20. “Consider” use as follows:
– Consider A to be B
– Consider A as B
– Consider that A is B
– Consider A should be B
– INCORRECT: consider as…
21. “It… adjective… to do…” can only be used when the situation described is UNIVERSALLY true, for everyone.
– Eg. When interest rates go up, it becomes more expensive for everyone to purchase on credit.
22. “Increase in” vs “increase of”
– Increase in previous year – indicates that “previous year” grew, makes no sense.
– Increase of previous year – indicates time period
23. “Subject, clause, + BY verb-ing”
– The clause after verb-ing must explain how the main clause occurred.
- Eg. I prepared for the test by reviewing notes from other students.
24. “Subject, clause, + IN verb-ing”
– The main clause and its subject before verb-ing must be a part of the action of the verb-ing in the second
part of the sentence structure.
- Eg. I solved all the problems in OG12 in preparing for the test.
25. “And also…” – allowed, but not allowed if combined with “both…and also”, this is redundant.
26. “Verb-ing” vs present tense
– Sentence structure of verb-ing (which modifies the entire clause before it if there is a comma, and the
noun before it without a comma) indicates things that happen in the same timeframe as the main
sentence. So the timing is restricted.
– Sentence structure of a present tense verb illustrates generalization, no time frame restrictions.
27. “Noun (human or animal)” apostrophe S – possessive
– Of anything with life (animals, human, etc) typically not okay on the GMAT
- Eg. Sam’s pen, that cat’s tail.
28. Redundant words:
– Sufficient enough
– Reply back
– Added bonus
– Determined as a result
29. “Enough”
– Enough for, enough to… both correct
– Enough that… incorrect.
30. Colon (:)
– The colon provides further explanation for what comes before it.
- What comes before the colon must be able to stand alone as a sentence.
- What comes after the colon does not have to be able to stand alone.
31. Dash (-)
– The dash (—) is a flexible punctuation mark that the GMAT occasionally employs.
– You can use a dash as an emphatic comma, semicolon, or colon.
32. Semicolon (;)
– You can also connect two independent clauses using a semicolon.
– The semicolon (;) connects two closely related statements.
– Each statement must be able to stand alone as an independent sentence.
33. “Because of” vs “due to” vs “for”
– Because of – modifies clause before it
– Due to – modifies noun
– For - is a lot like "because", except in the sense that it suggests a slightly less direct causation. Here's an
example: lots of people get sick in the winter. But that's not direct causation.