Lesson 5 Creative Writing
Lesson 5 Creative Writing
(One-week lesson)
Introduction
Welcome to another week! Lesson for this week will focus on the figurative division of language.
Figurative language is used in literature and creative writing which uses words not only in their literal
meaning but with certain emotional coloring adding effectiveness to your speech and giving clearness,
force, and beauty to your ideas and expression. Thus, let us be figurative this time…
Objectives
After the lesson, you should be able to acquire knowledge and analyze the importance of the
use of figurative language. You should be able to do the following:
Try this!
Have you observed how poets and other writers use figurative language in their works? Look at this
poem and answer the questions.
Metaphor QUESTIONS:
Morning is
Think Ahead!
Metaphor as you might have known, is one of the figures of speech commonly used by writers.
Writers use figures of speech or figurative language to give color and imagination to ordinary words.
These are literary devices used by writers to paint word pictures.
Figures of Speech is any use of words or phrases in a sense different from their literal definition for the
purpose of producing clearness, force, and beauty of expression. Figures of speech rely on implied or
suggested meaning, rather than a dictionary definition. We express and develop them through hundred
of different rhetorical techniques.
1. SIMILE is a stated comparison between unlike things that have one quality in common on
which the comparison is based. This comparison is usually indicated by like or as.
Examples: Shaking his cold damp hand was like grasping a lake trout.
The internet is like a window to the world--- you can learn about everything online.
My dog is like a tornado; she dashes through the house, destroying everything she
touches.
2. METAPHOR is an implied comparison between things essentially different but having one
quality in common on which the comparison is built; is like a simile but does not
use as or like
Examples: the peak of her career
(represents the idea of arriving at the highest point of one’s career)
His bedroom is a museum of things old, decrepit, and worthless.
After the fight, his fists were throbbing weights dragging at the end of his wrists.
3. IMPLIED METAPHOR is when a metaphor isn’t directly stated. The comparison is clear,
but more subtly stated.
Examples: The rabid sergeant barked his orders.
(sergeant = dog)
When she removed her hat, her golden hair cascaded over her shoulders.
(her hair = waterfall)
5. APOSTROPHE is a figure of speech in which the dead are addressed as if they are living;
the
absent as if present, and inanimate objects and abstract ideas as if they are persons
Example: Rizal! See the fair hope of the Fatherland.
Sing, Heavenly Muse!
Courage, my Soul!
Example: “What a pity that youth must be wasted on the young.” --- George Bernard Shaw
Truth is honey which is bitter.
This is the beginning of the end.
“I can resist anything but temptation.”--- Oscar Wilde
“All animals are equal, but some are more equal than others.”
(Animal Farm, George Orwell)
It points out a political truth, that the government claims the everyone is equal,
but
it has never treated everyone equally.
Situational Irony - when a situation in life or story is incongruent; the difference between
what is expected to happen and what actually happens; when the truth contradicts an expected
outcome.
(The unexpected twist in the story, when Harry found out that he was the
seventh Horcrux, comes with the ironic realization that for Voldemort to
Dramatic Irony occurs when readers are informed of significant information that key
characters are unaware of--- basically, where we know what will happen before they do.
(when Bilbo happens upon the ring while lost on a mountain. He puts it in
his pocket and soon afterward encounters Gollum. Gollum does not yet realize
he has lost the ring, and Bilbo doesn’t know who the ring belongs to.)
6. ANTICLIMAX is a figure of speech in which the climactic order is revered--- i.e. the
arrangement is in the order of decreasing importance. This figure of speech is
often used in humorous writings.
Example: He lost his wife, his household goods, and his dog in one full swoop.
- O Henry
8. ASSONANCE refers to the recurrence, in words close together, of the same vowel sound.
Example: I was leaving home when my folks were growing old.
1. Idiom is a common phrase with a figurative meaning. Idioms are different from other figures
of speech in that their figurative meanings are mostly known within a articular language,
culture, or group of people.
Example: It’s raining cats and dogs. (It is raining hard)
Example: Don’t cry over spilt milk. (the proverb about milk isn’t literally about milk)
I think you’re going to sell all of those cookies, but don’t count your chickens
(to emphasize the situation, the proverb means that you shouldn’t act like something
3. Pun is a manipulating word that has more than one meaning or that sounds like other words.
It is usually used in a humorous way.
Example: I’m reading a book about mazes; I got lost in it.
(the play on words here is the use of the word ‘lost’.
The purpose of figures of speech is to lend texture and color to your writing. For example,
metaphors allow you to add key details that make the writing livelier and more relatable. Slang and
verbal irony make the writing much more informal and youthful. Idioms and proverbs allow a writer to
draw on a rich cultural tradition and express complex ideas in a short space.
The effective use of figures of speech brings to life what could have been mere words, phrases
and sentences. It brings beauty, emphasis and clarity to what could have been just a mundane and
impoverished rendition.
Figures of speech allows us to assess, interpret and critically analyze not only the writer’s
attempt, but also his or her purpose.
Figures of speech are the palette from which the author works, and he or she might choose to
enhance his or her creation by applying the appropriate ‘color’ as it were, in his or her writing. Its use
adds flavor to writing and makes the experience of reading so much more enjoyable.
Figures of Speech in Literature
Example 1
Shakespeare uses extended metaphor to persuade the audience of the similarities between the
stage and real life. Rather than making his play seem more like life, he suggests that life is more like a
play. His metaphor calls attention to the performative, creative, and fictional aspects of human life.
Example 2
“Our words are but crumbs that fall down from the feast of the mind.”
Gibran’s use of the metaphor is timeless. It is a highly original double metaphor. The crumbs and
the feast are two parts of the same image, but they work together rather than being mixed.
Example 3
“If you chase two rabbits, you will lose them both.
(Russian Proverb)
This example draws on a simple metaphor of chasing rabbits. The rabbits can stand in for all
sorts of objectives, from jobs to relationships, but the coded message is quite clear--- focus your energy
on a single objective, or you will likely fail.
Example 1
The chorus of Sean Kingston’s song, Fire burning contains a couple of figures of speech:
Shorty used as a slang term for a young woman--- could be taken as belittling or
derogatory
Example 2
Years of talks between Washington and Havana resulted in Obama’s historic visit to Cuba
on March 21st.
(Patreon 2016)
A common form of metonym in foreign policy and news media. The capital city of a country is
used as a metonym for the national government which represents leaders and government officials of
the two countries (US and Cuba).
In writing, be careful not to fall into the habit of repeating dry and dusty old figures of speech
that have become cliché. All clichés were creative and original at one time but have lost their zing
through overuse. Do the hard work of coming up with your own fresh figures of speech.
1. He’ll never go skydiving. He is too scared. He said he would do it when pigs fly.
Type of Figures of Speech: _________________________________
Interpretation: ______________________________________________________
2. The sky was in a temper. He picked up the outdoor furniture and hurled it across the yard.
He ripped trees from the ground, slammed doors, and broke windows.
Type of Figures of Speech: _________________________________
Interpretation: ______________________________________________________
3. The boat was lighter than air as it glided along the water.
Type of Figures of Speech: _________________________________
Interpretation: ______________________________________________________
4. The little girl gazed at the ice cream sundae like an adventurer sizing up the Matterhorn.
Interpretation: ______________________________________________________
5. The man was tough as nails when he chose to skip the painkiller before getting stitches.
Type of Figures of Speech: _________________________________
Interpretation: ______________________________________________________
II. Read each line of poetry. Figure out which technique is used: idiom, simile,
metaphor, hyperbole, or personification. Write your answer on the space provided.
1. _________ Like burnt-out torches by a sick man’s bed
2. _________ Drip---hiss---drip---fall the raindrops
On the oaken log which burns, and steams, and smokes the ceiling beams.
Drip---hiss---the rain never stops.
4. _________ A. The best advice I have for you is don’t listen to advice.
B. The rains came.
C. Parting is such a sweet sorrow.
D. She cared for him all his life.
5. _________ A. The dress cost a million dollars.
B. I’d rather be lucky than smart.
C. It’s twelve minutes until midnight.
D. She stood in the empty room.
B. Match one word from column 1 and one from column 2 to form an oxymoron. Write
the phrase in the blank. Then, choose five phrases to write meaningful sentences on
your own.
Column 1 Column 2
Your sentences:
1. _________________________________________________________
2. _________________________________________________________
3. _________________________________________________________
4. _________________________________________________________
5. _________________________________________________________
1. _________ They hear the dull roar of the river rapids up ahead.
Explanation:
2. _________ Less is more.
Explanation:
3. _________ The coach was made of genuine imitation leather.
Explanation:
4. _________ I know that I know nothing.
Explanation
5. _________ She gave her unbiased opinion about the project.
Explanation
6. _________ Her brother took the larger half of the apple.
Explanation:
7. _________ Call me if you find my phone.
Explanation:
8. _________ Everything I say is a lie.
Explanation:
9. _________ James became a one-man band to raise money for the school project.
Explanation:
10. _________ The toy company faced a friendly takeover by the bicycle manufacturer.
Explanation:
V. Using the given picture, write a descriptive paragraph applying five types of figures
of speech.
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