A favorite place to relax
topic sentence: There are two kinds of
places that can make me relaxed.
supporting points: one of the places are a
places with lots of green plants.
second beach because the atmosphere is
quite.
conclude: Nature is the essential element in
the places that make me relaxed.
paragraph
There are two kinds of places that can make
me relaxed. this is very important for calm
your self. one of the places are a places with
lots of green plants. the reason is because i
felt calm when entering a places with full of
plants. but not only that the winds are cold
and make me felt sleepy we can have lunch
too.
Second beach because the atmosphere is
quite. maybe there are crowded beach but if
you goes to beach with quite atmosphere
trust me your , stress, depression, problem
will fly away with the winds. also for thosesupporting points: one of the places area
places with lots of green plants.
second beach because the atmosphere is
quite.
conclude: Nature is the essential element in
the places that make me relaxed.
paragraph
There are two kinds of places that can make
me relaxed. this is very important for calm
your self. one of the places are a places with
lots of green plants. the reason is because i
felt calm when entering a places with full of
plants. but not only that the winds are cold
and make me felt sleepy we can have lunch
too.
Second beach because the atmosphere is
quite. maybe there are crowded beach but if
you goes to beach with quite atmosphere
trust me your , stress, depression, problem
will fly away with the winds. also for those
who loves to heard wave sounds like me
beach are the perfect places for relaxing.
So in conclusion Nature is the essential
element in the places that make me relaxed.